THE POWER
SYNTA OF
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How to Craft Compelling
Sentences
English Language Arts
Grade 11 and 12
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
01 02 03
Identify some of the Apply your Use various styles of
different ways that understanding of syntax syntax in writing to
syntax can be varied for to explain how different create various effects
effect including styles of sentences including conveying
considering the create particular effects. particular moods and
function, structure, meaning.
length and arrangement
of sentences.
CONTENTS
1 Introduction
2 Sentence Types by Function
3 Sentence Types by Structure
4 Sentence Length
5 Arrangement of Ideas
6 Conclusion
INTRODUCTION
Have you ever read a sentence that was so beautifully crafted, it left
you in awe? Or perhaps you've come across a paragraph that was so
confusing, you had to read it multiple times to understand its
meaning? In both cases, the power of syntax was at play.
Syntax refers to the ordering or arrangement of words to create well-
formed and interesting sentences in a language. It includes the
structure of sentences, their lengths, and various arrangements of
these through repetition and patterning.
Syntax is an essential tool for writers, and understanding it can
greatly enhance your appreciation and comprehension of literature.
In this presentation, we'll explore the importance of learning about
syntax and how it can help us become more effective readers and
writers.
SENTENCE
TYPES
One way we can categorise sentence types is by their function. There are
four types of sentence functions in English. These are:
DECLARATIVE A sentence used to make a E.g. This city is
statement. boring.
INTERROGATIV A sentence used to ask a E.g. Is this city
E question. boring?
EXCLAMATORY A sentence used to make E.g. What a boring
an exclamation. city!
IMPERATIVE A sentence used to give a E.g. Get me out of this
command. boring city!
Now, read the excerpt below and identify
and label at least one example of each of
the four main types of sentences -
declarative, interrogative, exclamatory and
imperative.
I walk through the school gates with my head down, trying not to
make eye contact with anyone. I hope that no one notices. I am
invisible, I repeat to myself over and over again. I cross the quad
and start to head to the safety of the library. So far so good. As I
pass the large oak tree, I hear a snicker and I risk a side glance at a
bunch of girls . They are all staring right at me, eyes bulging as they
whisper to each other, covering their mouths with their hands. What
are you looking at? Haven't you ever seen a scar before? I quickly
turn back but it's too late. A bunch of them burst into laughter. Stop
it! Stop staring at me! Stop laughing! I quicken my pace as I burst
through the library doors. I hate this school! I can't wait to get out of
here!
To demonstrate your understanding of sentence types by
function, choose a creative writing topic from the list below and
write your own examples of each of the four types of sentences
- declarative, interrogative, exclamatory and imperative.
Writing Topics: Practice:
• the circus
• camping DECLARATIVE sentence
• grandparents
• a secret
• a tropical vacation INTERROGATIVE sentence
• the classroom
• a music festival
• a bad mood EXCLAMATORY sentence
• a war zone
• snorkelling
• a traffic jam IMPERATIVE sentence
SENTENCE
TYPES
Another way we can categorise different types of sentences is by structure.
There are four main types of sentence structure in English. These are:
SIMPLE One independent clause. No commas E.g. Anna eats lollies.
seperate two compound elements.
COMPOUND Two independent clauses joined by a E.g. Anna eats lollies
coordinating conjunction, a conjunctive but Jamie eats fruit.
adverb or a semicolon.
COMPLEX One dependent clause (headed by a E.g. Although Anna
subordinating conjunction or a relative eats lollies, Jamie eats
pronoun) joined to an independent fruit.
clause.
COMPOUND- Two independent clauses joined to one E.g. While Anna eats
or more dependent clauses. lollies, Jamie eats fruit,
COMPLEX
but Matt only eats
bread.
Now, read the excerpt below and identify
and label at least one example of each of
the four main types of sentence structures -
simple, compound, complex and compound-
complex. Consider their various effects.
The forest is a beautiful place. With its towering trees and lush
undergrowth, is a place where nature flourishes in all its beauty.
Birds chirp and fly from branch to branch, while squirrels scurry
along the ground gathering nuts. The air is fresh and crisp and the
scent of pine and earth fills my nostrils. The tall trees, with their
gnarled trunks and outstretched branches, form canopies that shield
the forest floor from the blazing sun. As I walk deeper into the
forest, the undergrowth becomes denser and the terrain more
challenging to traverse. However, the rewards of witnessing the
diverse flora and fauna that call the forest their home makes the
journey worthwhile. It's a peaceful and serene environment.
To demonstrate your understanding of sentence types by
structure, choose a creative writing topic from the list below and
write your own examples of each of the four types of sentences -
simple, compound, complex and compound-complex.
Writing Topics: Practice:
• the circus
• camping SIMPLE sentence
• grandparents
• a secret
• a tropical vacation COMPOUND sentence
• the classroom
• a music festival
• a bad mood COMPLEX sentence
• a war zone
• snorkelling
• a traffic jam COMPOUND-COMPLEX
sentence
SENTENCE
LENGTH
Sentence length can affect the mood and meaning we make from a text.
With a partner, discuss what you think the effect might be of using each of
the following sentence lengths. Be prepared to share your answers!
TELEGRAPHI 5 words or less E.g. Stop. Now. Don't move an inch. Don't
C even breathe.
SHORT 5-10 words E.g. I walk to the road alone. I carefully check
each way. `
MEDIUM 15-20 words E.g. The winding road, surrounded by tall
trees, stretched out before us, beckoning us
on a journey of adventure.
LONG 30+ words E.g. The winding road snaked through the
dense forest, its asphalt surface glistening
under the bright sun, as it led travellers to the
quaint little town nestled at the foot of the
mountain.
Now, read the excerpt below and
consider how different sentence lengths
have been used for varying effects.
The ocean is a vast expanse of blue, stretching as far as the eye can
see. It is a place of mystery, full of creatures both great and small.
When you stand on the shore and look out at the ocean, you can't
help but feel a sense of awe and wonder at the sheer vastness of it
all, the way the waves crash against the shore and the tides rise
and fall, creating a rhythm that has been followed for eons, and the
way that life thrives in this watery world, from the tiniest plankton
to the largest whales, all of it interconnected in ways we are only
beginning to understand. The waves crash. The tides rise. Life
thrives.
To demonstrate your understanding of sentence lengths, choose
a creative writing topic from the list below and write your own
examples of each of the four sentence lengths - telegraphic,
short, medium and long.
Writing Topics: Practice:
• the circus
• camping TELEGRAPHIC sentence
• grandparents
• a secret
• a tropical vacation SHORT sentence
• the classroom
• a music festival
• a bad mood MEDIUM sentence
• a war zone
• snorkelling
• a traffic jam LONG sentence
ARRANGEMEN
T
We can also analyse syntax in terms of how the ideas or parts of the
sentence are arranged. Parallel structure or parallelism consists of two or
more clauses that have the same grammatical structure. It can be used to
create rhythm, draw attention or create contrast. We might start by
considering if there are any patterns in terms of how sentences begin or
end. For example:
ANAPHORA EPIPHORA
The repetition of words or phrases at The repetition of words or phrases at
the beginning of successive clauses. the end of successive clauses.
E.g. We're sorry for being messy, E.g. He pets the dog, he feeds the
we're sorry for being moody and dog, he walks the dog and
we're sorry for not listening to your everything else in his life centres
advice. around the dog.
We also might look at how sentences can be split into three or four parallel
words, phrases or clauses. Two particular techniques are called tricolon and
tetracolon.
TRICOLON TETRACOLON
A tri-colon is a three-part sentence. Tetracolons are four-part sentences
They are effective because the human and these are more rare. They often
brain seems to more readily process create a sense of drama and of
ideas presented in groups of three. building to a climax.
E.g. He launched at the ball, leapt
E.g. The culling of kangaroos is cruel,
high into the air, caught it tightly
wasteful and a disgrace to our
with both his hands and held it to his
national emblem.
chest as he tumbled to the ground.
Another thing to consider is the order of information presented. Some
unusual types of syntax might invert the order of words or information. For
example:
ANTITHESIS INVERTED ORDER
These sentences position opposite These types of sentences switch the
ideas using a parallel grammatical placement of the verb before the
structure to create contrast. subject as if in a question.
E.g. Keep your friends close but E.g. Not only is he smart, but he is
keep your enemies closer. also funny.
E.g. Get busy living or get busy E.g. Never have I understood less
dying. about women.
E.g. If you fail to prepare then E.g. Rarely have I eaten tastier food.
prepare to fail.
Lastly, we might consider how conjunctions and punctuation (or a lack thereof)
can affect the structure and meaning we make from sentences. Two common
examples are:
POLYSYNDETON ASYNDETON
When conjunctions like 'and', 'or' and The opposite of polysyndeton where
'but' are used repeatedly in rapid conjunctions are left out deliberately to
succession. It can emphasise items on a create a more dramatic effect, speed up
list, add rhythm, build pace, mirror a the rhythm or pace or emphasise the
child-like voice or create a stream-of- gravity of a situation.
consciousness style.
E.g. The sun rose and the birds sang and E.g. The sun was shining, the birds were
the flowers bloomed and the world came singing, the flowers were blooming.
to life. E.g. She sang, danced, laughed, cried
E.g. We could go to the park or the mall with joy.
or the movies or the beach.
Now, read the excerpt below and see if you
can spot and label some different syntactic
devices.
On the outskirts of town, nestled between rolling hills and sprawling
fields,
.... lay a farm unlike any other. Its pastures were lush, its crops
plentiful, its animals content and its farmers happy. But beneath the
idyllic exterior lay a story of struggle, of perseverance, and of triumph.
The owners, a family of three, toiled day and night to make ends meet,
often sacrificing their own needs for the sake of their land and
livestock. They were determined, resilient, and unwavering in their
commitment to their farm. From the crack of dawn to the setting of the
sun, they tended to their fields, tended to their animals, and tended to
each other. They weathered storms, droughts, and hardships, never
once faltering in their resolve. But despite their tireless efforts, the
farm faced a constant barrage of challenges. Pests, predators, and
disease threatened to decimate their crops and livestock, while market
fluctuations and the whims of nature threatened their very livelihood.
Yet through it all, they persisted.
To practice some of the different styles of syntax based on their
arrangement, choose a creative writing topic and practice
writing at least three different styles of sentences from the list
below.
Writing Topics: Practice:
• the circus
• camping ANAPHORA or EPIPHORA
• grandparents
• a secret
• a tropical vacation TRICOLON or TETRACOLON
• the classroom
• a music festival
• a bad mood ANTITHESIS or INVERTED
• a war zone ORDER
• snorkelling
• a traffic jam POLYSYNDETON or
ASYNDETON
CONCLUSION
Analyzing syntax in literature can provide us with valuable insights
into the writer's intentions and style and the overall tone and mood
of the text. Through the use of various syntactic devices, authors
can create complex and nuanced meanings that go beyond the
surface level of the words. Careful attention to syntax can also
reveal patterns and themes that might not be immediately apparent,
and can enhance our understanding and appreciation of the text.
By using a variety of sentence structures and syntactic devices in
our own writing, we can keep the reader engaged, add depth and
complexity to meaning, create emphasis and highlight key points,
while avoiding monotony and repetition. Ultimately, using varied
syntax can make your writing more interesting, engaging, and
effective, and can help you to convey your message with clarity and
precision!