bigbootyjudy@googlemail.
com
#1
Use a
professional
email address.
#2 I would like to
Select a talk to you
professional about my bad
font. grade.
Subject: homework due?
#3
Include a clear,
direct subject
line.
Hey, what’s up teach?
#4
Begin with a
professional
salutation.
Dear Mr. Andruws,
#5
Spell your
teacher’s name
correctly.
I heard from a friend that our
#6 homework is due tomorrow!!!
I thought you said we had two
Avoid days to complete it???
exclamation
points.
I NEED TODAY’S HOMEWORK. I
#7 WAS ABSENT. IT’S NOT ONLINE.
Avoid using ALL
CAPS.
You’ll have our essays graded
#8 by Monday, right? ;) After all,
Avoid sarcasm it’s been three whole days
since we turned them in. How
and emojis. long can it possibly take?
I just saw you posted our exam
#9 grades. Do you mind explaining
Don’t email to me how I got a F? I’m
grounded all weekend because
when angry. of your class!
In the future, I’d really
appreciate it if you’d post the
#10 homework on our class
Avoid blaming website earlier. I didn’t see it
and excuses. until ten p.m., and now my
mom is making me go to bed.
Take Can I get an extension? I think
responsibility. I should.
Dear Mrs. English,
#11
I don't understand the project.
Be clear and I need help.
mention
specifics. Thanks, Isla
Yesterday, I went to my brother's
#12 baseball game. It was long and
Be concise. hot. I didn't do my homework
because I was tired. Then we had
to eat dinner. I hate meatloaf. It's
nasty. What should I do?
Can you change my grade? I
#13 think it’s really unfair that you
Avoid the word put my last assignment in as
late when I was actually sick
“you.” on the day it was assigned. You
said I had extra time to
complete it.
My grade is really bad right now.
#14 I don’t even know if there is any
way I can get it up to passing,
Don’t email but my parents are going to kill
asking for extra me if I don’t. Can I get some
credit. extra credit?
#15 Dear Mr. Krause,
Include your I’m bringing you apple pie
tomorrow because you’re my
first and last favorite. Save room!
name in the Sincerely,
signature block / Noah
closing.
Is their any way we could talk in
#16 the morning? I need to think over
some options for collage and I
Proofread. need your haelp it’s really
confusing me plus I need a letter
of reccommendation. Sound
good?
#17 Mrs. Lane,
Can you help me study for
Include a tomorrow’s test if I come in early?
compliment and Your lesson today was really
confusing to me.
/ or a note of Thanks,
thankfulness. Johnny
Yeah...so I emailed you a couple
#18 hours ago, and you haven’t
Allow at least 24 responded. Are you ignoring me?
I’m going to have my mom call
hours for your boss. I need an answer now.
response time.
That lesson today was tight!
#19 Thanks so much for making
learning the bomb. I can only
Be aware of remember one lesson that was a
high and low flop. I have sooooooooo many
register. good memories from your class!
ROFL.
Tomorrow, I would love to get the
#20 study guide for the test. I also
Use bullets to need our class notes. Do you still
have a copy of the parent letter?
organize Thank you for your time in helping
information. me catch up.
What is email etiquette?
Why does it matter? What are the “PERC”s of practicing
proper email etiquette?
Why should you consider your audience when writing an
email?
If you have to write something that’s on the negative side – a
complaint or a request, what should you do?
Ultimately, the way you email someone…
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mymomanddad@[Link]
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1st Hour; Study Guide Question
Dear Mr. Shore,
Thank you so much for helping us to prepare for the test today during class. The
review session was so helpful. I’m sorry to bother you at home, but I’m a little
worried.
I just got home from basketball practice, and I’m working on the study guide. I
know the test isn’t until next week, but I have a few questions about the review
questions. Specifically, numbers 3, 18, and 27 are troubling me.
Will we have time to discuss my questions during class this week? If not, can I
schedule a time before or after school to come speak with you? Thank you for
helping me learn.
Respectfully,
Dylan
(also called the signature
block)