Basic Essay Rules
Writing Excellent Essays
Rule Two
Rule One
Do not use The
to begin more than
one sentence per
paragraph.
No two paragraphs
may begin with the
same word.
Rule Four
Rule Three
No two sentences
may begin with the
same word in the
same paragraph.
DO NOT USE the
words:
thing
like
very
great
a lot
*The only exception is
if you are quoting.
Rule Six
Rule Five
Words such as big,
small, huge, etc.,
should ONLY be used
in regards to
concrete objects, not
ideas.
Instead for ideas use
words like:
significant
unimportant
essential
Do not use
contractions or
other shortened
word forms or
symbols:
Examples:
cant
&
lil
Rule
Seven
Do NOT begin
sentences with
conjunctions:
after, although,
because, since,
even though,
whenever, while
Rule Eight
Do not refer to the
writing process of
your essays:
Dont say:
In conclusion
As mentioned
earlier
Rule Ten
Rule Nine
Vary your sentence
structure.
Do not repeat your
own key
words/phrases.
Do not repeat key
words or phrases
from the prompt.
Essay
A piece of writing that gives your
thoughts (commentary) about a subject.
All essays you will write in this unit will
have at least 4 paragraphs: an
introduction, 2 body paragraphs, and a
concluding paragraph.
Introduction
The first paragraph in an essay. It includes
the thesis, most often at the end.
Body Paragraph
A middle paragraph in an essay. It
develops a point you want to make that
supports your thesis.
Concluding Paragraph
The last paragraph in your essay. It may
sum up your ideas, reflect on what you
said in your essay, say more commentary
about your subject, or give a personal
statement about the subject
Thesis
A sentence with a subject and opinion
(also called commentary). This comes
somewhere in your introductory
paragraph and most often at the end.
Pre-writing
The process of getting your concrete
details down on paper before you
organize your essay into paragraphs. You
can use any or all of the following: bubble
clusters, spider diagrams, outlines, line
clustering, or columns.
Concrete Details
Specific details that form the backbone
or core of your body paragraphs.
Synonyms for concrete detail include
facts, specifics, examples, descriptions,
illustrations, support, proof, evidence,
quotations, paraphrasing, or plot
references
Commentary
Your opinion or comment about
something; not concrete detail. Synonyms
include opinion, insight, analysis,
interpretation, inference, personal
response, feelings, evaluation,
explication, and reflection.
Topic Sentence
The first sentence in a body paragraph.
This must have a subject and opinion
(commentary) for the paragraph. It does
the same thing for a body paragraph
that the thesis does for the whole essay.
Concluding Sentence
The last sentence in a body paragraph. It
is all commentary, does not repeat key
words, and gives a finished feeling to the
paragraph.
Shaping the Essay
The step that is done after prewriting
and before the first draft of an essay; it is
an outline of your thesis, topic
sentences, concrete details, and
commentary ideas.
First Draft
The first version of
your essay (also
called the rough
draft).
Final Draft
The final version of
your essay.
Peer Response
Written responses
and reactions to a
partners paper.
Chunk
One sentence of concrete detail and 2
sentences of commentary. It is the smallest
unified group of thoughts that you can
write.
Weaving
Blending concrete details and
commentary in a body paragraph. You
can do this after you master the format.
Ratio
The ratio of 1 part concrete detail to 2+
parts commentary.