Amanda!
Amanda!
Robin Klein
Hunch- raise shoulders and bend the
upper portion of body in forward position
Robin Klein is an Australian author celebrated for her writings for children.
She was born on 28th February 1936 in New South Wales and now resides
near Melbourne. She had her first short story published at the age of sixteen.
Several of her books have been listed for CBCA Children’s Book of the Year
Award. Robin Klein has now had more than forty books published. Many have
been shortlisted for the Australian Children’s Book of the Year Award,
including People Might Hear You (1984), Seeing Things (1984), Hating Alison
Ashley (1985), Halfway Across the Galaxy and Turn Left (1986). In 1991 Robin
Klein was awarded the Dromkeen Medal for her significant contribution to the
appreciation and development of children’s literature in Australia.
Theme
The theme of Robin Klein’s poem “Amanda!” is childhood innocence and the
challenges of maturing. The poem tells the story of a little girl named Amanda
as she faces the difficulties of growing up when her mother expects her to
behave responsibly and she desires to escape from the restrictions put on her.
Amanda, who is constantly pointed out by her mother for making mistakes
wishes to be free like a bird. She represents all teenagers who go through this.
Summary
The poem ‘Amanda!’ describes the life of a teenage girl named Amanda whose
mother is always nagging her for her mistakes. She is pointed out for biting
her nails, not sitting in the right posture, being lazy, eating chocolates, not
cleaning her room and shoes, and also not doing her homework, not listening
to her mother, sitting in a lazy manner, not looking at her and being moody.
The mother asks her to stop being moody because she doesn’t want anyone
to blame her for harassing her own daughter. All this while, there is no
reaction from Amanda’s side.
Read the stanza given below and choose the correct option.
Amanda!
The listener seems to be oblivious to her surroundings. This shows that she
is a ………………. and suffers from ……………… .
(b) What is the tone of the speaker when they talk to Amanda?
(c) Complete the statement: The listener is biting her nails because
………………………. which shows her ………………… personality.
Read the stanza given below and choose the correct option.
(b) Read the statements A and B given below, and choose the option that
correctly evaluates these statements.
Statement A – The figure ‘I’ imagines a less than realistic view of being an
orphan.
(iv) A is true and can be inferred from the poem, B is true too.
(d) The rhyme scheme ‘aaa’ in the above extract is followed in all other stanzas
of the poem that are written in parenthesis, i.e. (). Why?
Read the reasons given below, and choose the option that lists the most
accurate reasoning:
1. It shows the simplicity of the child’s thoughts.
(e) Pick the option that lists the usage of the word ‘pattern’, as in the extract
above.
Based on the given definition of ‘transferred epithet’, choose the option that
lists an example of transferred epithet.
(e) (iv) She patterned her hair after her favourite celebrity.
Read the stanza given below and choose the correct option.
(a) Fill the blank with suitable words as you deem fit.
(b) Amanda longs for tranquillity and a break from this constant scolding by
imagining herself in a distant tower all alone like Rapunzel.
(d) The poet uses parenthesis to give us additional details about Amanda’s
reaction to constant nagging. She compares herself to Rapunzel (allusion);
assonance in ‘please look at me when I’m speaking,’ consonance in ‘life in a
tower is tranquil’ and repetition of ‘Amanda’ make the language highly
impassioned and effective.
Read the stanza given below and choose the correct option.
Amanda!
(a) Is the accusation that Amanda is a moody girl right? Give a reason to
support your answer.
(b) What is the significance of the use of poetic devices in the given lines from
the poem? Does the punctuation
(d) Identify the type of rhyme scheme used in the given lines of the poem.
Ans. (a) No, for Amanda, daydreaming is an escape route from the constant
nagging by her parent.
(b) The poet has made good use of poetic devices to show the parent’s guilt for
constantly harassing Amanda: alliteration in ‘Stop that sulking,’ and
repetition (the word ‘Amanda’ has been repeated). The use of exclamation
marks is to emphasize the frustration that the parent vents out on her child.
1. How old do you think Amanda is? How do you know this?
Ans. I think Amanda is a teenager, that is, around 12 or 13. She has acne on
her face. Usually, boys or girls at this age have them on their faces.
Ans. Stanzas 2, 4 and 6 are given in parenthesis because they are not spoken
by the speaker. Hence, there is a change in narration. These stanzas reflect
the thoughts of a day- dreaming girl, that is, Amanda.
Ans. If Amanda were a mermaid, she could move about in the green sea
blissfully.
Ans. Rapunzel is a character taken from a fairy story. She is a beautiful girl
with long hair, who is imprisoned in a tall tower by a witch. In the story, a
handsome prince comes and is able to climb to the top of the tower to meet
her. He calls out to her. "Rapunzel. Rapunzel, let down your long hair.”
Amanda wants to be up in the tower like Rapunzel because she wants to live
in peace. She wants to enjoy tranquillity by being all alone. Unlike Rapunzel,
she has no intentions of letting down her hair or letting anyone up to join her
in the tower.
8. What does the girl yearn for? What does this poem tell you about
Amanda?
Ans. The girl yearns for freedom. She wants to lead her life the way she likes.
Perhaps, she does not get freedom in her house. That is why, in her day-
dreams, she imagines her to be free and charming.
1. What message does the poet want to give through the poem ‘Amanda’?
Ans. The poet wants to convey that parents in their endeavour to make their
children well-behaved, mannerly having good habits, give them too many
instructions or nag (always finding fault) them. They should adopt positive
measures, acceptable to children. Otherwise, they will stop listening to them
and indulge in daydreaming as Amanda did.
2. How was Amanda behaving when the poem starts? What did the
speaker ask her not to do?
Ans. When the poem beings, we found that Amanda was biting her nails. She
was hunching her shoulders. She was sitting in a slouching posture. That is
why the speaker asked her to behave normally. He asked her not to bite her
nails and hunch her shoulders. She should sit up straight.
Ans. No, Amanda sulks and becomes moody when her mother gives her too
many instructions.
She does not listen to her mother and does not care to follow them, but she
can't dare to ignore them either, so she sulks. Parents in their endeavour to
make their children well-behaved, give them too many instructions.
Ans. Amanda wants to be Rapunzel because she wants to live a peaceful life
in a tower, where no one gives any instruction, and she doesn't have to do any
work. But she doesn't want to escape with a prince like Rapunzel. She never
wants to escape and leave such a peaceful atmosphere, with no instructions
and no work to do.
5. What message does the poet want to give through the poem, 'Amanda'?
Ans. The poet wants to convey that parents in their endeavour to make their
children well- behaved, and well-mannered give them too many instructions
or nag (always finding fault) them. They should adopt a more appealing
approach to 'reform' their children. Otherwise, they will stop listening to them
and indulge in day-dreaming as Amanda did.
6. Who was Amanda? What idea do you form of her through the poem?
Ans. Amanda was a little school-going girl. She seems to love fairy tales,
stories like Rapunzel and mermaids. She does not like too many instructions
or nagging which makes her sulk and become moody. This makes her slip
into a world of fantasy where life seems to be more pleasant.
Ans. She thinks orphans lead a care-free life. There is no one to pester them
with instructions. They can wander in a street and make patterns in the soft
dust with their bare feet. They don't have to clean the shoes or room or do the
homework.
8. How is Amanda seen behaving when the poem starts? What does the
speaker ask her not to do?
Ans. When the poem begins, we find that Amanda is biting her nails. She is
hunching her shoulders. She is sitting in a slouching posture. That is why,
the speaker asks her to behave normally. He asks her not to bite her nails
and hunch her shoulders. She should sit up straight.
9. What does Amanda say, "I am Rapunzel"? What does she promise not
to do?
Ans. Rapunzel was a beautiful girl with long hair. She was locked up in a
tower by a witch. In her imagination, Amanda thinks herself to be like
Rapunzel who led a peaceful life. She promises never to let down her bright
hair.
Ans. The central idea of the poem is that children love freedom. They do not
want any restrictions on their activities. Secondly, they have a dream world
of their own. They like to spend most of their time in that dream world. But
the elders are always destroying that dream world by ordering them around.
11. How would you characterise the speaker in the poem 'Amanda!"? List
any two qualities, supporting the reason of your choice, with evidence
from the poem.
(Competency-based Question) (CBSE Question Bank)
Ans. The speaker is a perfectionist and a nagging mother. She wants her child
to learn social etiquettes and present herself in a socially acceptable manner.
At the same time, she is afraid of how society would react to know that the
mother is constantly nagging her child.
12. 'Amanda is alone but not lonely in the world she envisions.' Justify
the statement with reference to any one image she pictures in her mind.
(CBSE Question Bank)
Ans. Amanda wants to live alone and away from her parents' dos and don'ts.
She imagines herself as a mermaid who is drifting happily in the sea. She
envisions herself enjoying her solitude, whereas a lonely person feels sad and
upset. That's why, it is said that she wants to live alone and not lonely.
13. What is the role of punctuation in language? Why has the poet used
the exclamation mark after Amanda? Comment on the title of the poem.
(Competency-based Question)
14. Why is Amanda forbidden to eat chocolate? How does Amanda behave
when she is addressed by the speaker?
Ans. Amanda already suffers from acne, a skin disease. If she eats chocolate,
it will I aggravate her problem further. That is why, she is asked not to eat
chocolate. When the speaker is addressing Amanda, all she does is to listen
without raising her face to look up. Her expression and her behaviour is like
a typical teenager.
Ans. It is justified as Rapunzel lived with a witch who was always vigilant on
her and had several rules to be followed. Amanda too, feels caged by the
impositions. She desires peace in isolation like Rapunzel had in her tower;
clarifying she will not let her hair down for anyone.
16. Comment on the tone of the speaker when he says, 'Will you please
look at me, I'm speaking to you, Amanda!'. (CBSE Sample Paper, 2022;
Term 2)
Ans. The tone of the speaker in the given line is irritated, frustrated, annoyed
and exasperated. Throughout the poem, the speaker's attitude towards
Amanda is very nagging. The speaker is one of the parents who is teaching
her how to be presentable and acceptable in the society. But in doing so, the
speaker is taking away the freedom and imagination of the child.
Ans. The phrase "languid, emerald sea" evokes an image of a calm, slow-
moving, and tranquil sea with a vibrant greenish-blue colour, suggesting a
peaceful and serene atmosphere.
18. List the things which Amanda’s mother doesn’t want her to do.
Ans. Amanda’s mother doesn’t want her to hunch her shoulders and bend
her body down. She stops her from eating chocolates as it would not be good
for her acne. She wants her to stop sulking as others would think that she is
being nagged by her mother
[Link] reader sympathises with the speaker in the poem. Support this
opinion with a reason. [QB 2020-21]
Ans. The readers of the poem might sympathize with the speaker as she is
the mother of a school going girl named Amanda and a mother can never scold
her daughter for wrong reasons. Amanda has bad habits, so her mother wants
to correct her as an elder.
21What does the line “never let down my bright hair” tell us about
Amanda? [QB 2020-21]
Ans. The line “never let down my bright hair” tells us that Amanda longed for
freedom and privacy so much so that imagining herself as Rapunzel, she
wouldn’t let her hair down because she didn’t want anybody to come and
invade her privacy and freedom.
22. What three things does the speaker ask Amanda to do which she has
not done?
Ans:Amanda imagines that the life of an orphan is full of freedom and peace.
She thinks that an orphan has no one to control or pester them with endless
instructions. In her fantasy, she pictures herself roaming freely on the
streets, making patterns in the soft dust with her bare feet, and enjoying
the silence around her. For her, the silence is “golden” and the freedom is
“sweet.” These expressions clearly highlight her yearning for a carefree
existence, away from responsibilities and constant criticism. Through this
imagination, Amanda expresses her deep desire to escape from restrictions
and to live life on her own terms
1. ‘Living with one’s head in the air’ is what Amanda epitomizes. Justify
with examples from the poem.
Ans. Instead of paying attention to the diktat of not biting her nails and sitting
upright, Amanda daydreams about an emerald sea where she is the sole
mermaid. Pensively, Amanda imagines herself a neglected urchin-cum-
orphan, patterning soft dust with unshod feet. Instead of hearing the
warnings about not eating the chocolate as it will bring on the acne, and listen
attentively, Amanda imagines she is Rapunzel, with long tresses. Amanda
imagines that like the fairy-story character, she will dwell in the tower quietly
and take care not to let down her hair lest the witch climbs up with its help.
Ultimately, Amanda is given an ultimatum to stop being moody and sulking,
whereas Amanda is simply daydreaming.
2. Escapism is one way to run away from harsh realities. Discuss in the
context of the poem 'Amanda'.
Ans. It is true that escapism is one way to run away from harsh realities. By
going through the whole poem, we come to know that Amanda's mother keeps
instructing her all the time. Amanda's mother's intention may be to discipline
the little girl and make her a mature person. But, children need love and a
caring attitude in their elders. Advice in the form of nagging leaves a very
harmful impression in the child's mind. The reality becomes harsh for them
and they try to escape these realities by indulging in their own fantasy world.
[Link] does Amanda tackle the nagging nature of her mother? Explain
with examples the poem.
Ans. In the poem, 'Amanda', the little girl named Amanda often escapes into
her own world. Her world of dreams give her the freedom and peace that she
seeks in reality where she is constantly nagged by her elders. Her mother
continuously instruct and scold her for her ill-manners and laziness. She is
asked not to bite her nails, not to eat chocolates, to clean her room and so on.
As Amanda's mother is giving her instructions, she is lost in her daydreams.
The persistence of Amanda's mother leave a harmful impression in her mind.
Her retreat, then, is her way of tackling her mother. It is her shield and
defence against the harsh realities that she goes through. In her reality, her
freedom is restricted,
Her need for freedom and peace, finds expression in her dreams where she
imagines a carefree and happy life as an orphan, mermaid and Rapunzel,
without her mother. Amanda may seem moody and upset, 1 her mother, but
is not really so. The nagging nature of her mother makes her escape into a
world away from the realities of her life.
[Link] the key points in the poem Amanda. What do you learn from it?
[CBSE2016]
Answer:Every child is special, and it requires a great deal of patience and love
to make them understand this. Parents should give proper space to children,
as they learn through experiences as well. Children do tend to learn certain
bad habits, to undo that requires great level of understanding and right
approach. One cannot teach their child everything in one day and expect them
to behave properly henceforth. It is natural for a childlike Amanda to seek
freedom at her place, to curb that freedom means to make her angry and
moody. Growing up of child should not be about dos and don’ts only. To have
nagging parents judging every action of child would do more harm than good.
Robin Klein points to the fact that Amanda is forbidden to do anything without
seeking permission. Everything she does it is corrected by her mother all the
time, she cannot perform a single thing according to her will. She can’t sit
lazily around; she can’t eat chocolate for that could cause acne. Life of
Amanda is very suffocating and limited. She yearns for freedom and choice.
Her mother doesn’t understand the fact that Amanda is innocent and naive,
she is too small to understand the benefits of advice. Only thing that matters
to Amanda’s mother is what society will make of Amanda. We witness the
miserable failure of parents when Amanda wishes to be an orphan so that she
could be free.
[Link] would you characterize the speaker in the poem ‘Amanda!’? List
any two qualities, supporting the reason of your choice, with evidence
from the poem.
Ans. The speaker in the poem "Amanda!" can be characterized as critical and
demanding.
Ans:
Bringing up children, especially teenagers, is indeed both a challenge and a
source of joy. Teenagers are at a stage where they yearn for freedom and
individuality but still require guidance and discipline. In the poem Amanda,
we see this conflict very clearly. Amanda’s parent constantly reminds her to
do her homework, tidy her room, and maintain good posture. These repeated
instructions reflect the parent’s concern for her well-being and development.
At the same time, they become a challenge because Amanda perceives them
as restrictions and nagging.
AMANDA
Ans. Amanda's tendency to escape into her imaginative worlds in the poem
suggests that she might resonate with the sentiment expressed by Calvin: "It's
not denial, I am just very selective about the reality I accept." This is because
Amanda uses her daydreams as a coping mechanism to deal with the constant
criticism and demands placed upon her by the speaker. She selectively
embraces the imaginative reality she creates to find solace and freedom from
the real world's pressures and negativity.
[Link] at the given image of a book cover. If the author, Jason Kotecki
were to ask a grown-up Amanda to help with his book by writing one of
the 8 secrets based on her experiences, what might she share? Elaborate
based on your understanding of the poem.
Ans. If Jason Kotecki were to ask a grown-up Amanda for her input on his
book "ESCAPE ADULTHOOD: 8 Secrets from childhood for the stressed-out
grown-up," she might share a secret related to the power of imagination and
the importance of retaining a childlike sense of wonder.
In essence, Amanda's secret might revolve around the idea that retaining a
connection to one's childhood imagination can be a powerful tool for reducing
stress and finding moments of joy and relief in the midst of adult life's
challenges.
Literary devices:
Anaphora: Repeated use of a word at start of two or more lines (don’t bite…
don’t hunch)
Assonance: use of vowel sound ‘o’ (don’t hunch your shoulders)
Metaphor: use of word emerald sea for green colour of sea being similar to
the colour of emerald
Repetition: use of word ‘Amanda’
Imagery: drifting blissfully
Alliteration: ‘Stop that slouching and sit up straight’ – ‘s’ sound is being
repeated at the start of closely placed words.
Allusion: ‘mermaid’ is a well-known imaginary creature.
Literary devices:
Anaphora: Repeated use of a word at start of two or more lines (did you
finish….did you tidy)
Assonance: use of vowel sound ‘o’ (Thought, told, you, your, shoes)
Repetition: use of word ‘Amanda’
Metaphor: silence is golden – silence is said to be glorious like golden colour
freedom is sweet – freedom is said to be sweet in taste.
Literary devices:
Allusion: use of famous fairy tale character Rapunzel
Assonance: use of vowel sound ‘e’ and ‘o’ (Will you please look at me when
I’m speaking to you
Consonance: use of sound ‘r’ (I am Rapunzel; I have not a care …..Bright
hair)
Repetition: use of word ‘Amanda’
Literary Devices:
Alliteration: ‘Stop that sulking’ – ‘s’ sound is repeated at the start of closely
placed words
Repetition: use of word ‘Amanda’
Repetition
• Other repeated words by the adult speaker are ‘don’t’, ‘stop’ and ‘did’
which further emphasise the theme of control.
Allusion
Alliteration
Metaphor
Anaphora
• The words ‘don’t bite’ ‘don’t hunch’, ‘did you finish’ and ‘did you tidy’
are examples of anaphora in the poem.
• They further emphasise the nagging and controlling nature of the
adult speaker.
Transferred Epithet