Writing lesson 5 draft 2
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat from
1979 to 2004
The line chart compares the consumption of fish, lamb, beef and chicken per head
weekly over 25 years between 1979 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen that these
types of protein became less favorable among people except for chicken over the
period under study. Another striking feature is that fish was always consumed the
lowest.
To be more specific, at the beginning of the period, in 1979, the amount of fish
consumed per person a week started at around 50 grams, which was a third of the
figure for lamb or chicken. Meanwhile in 1979, The consumption of beef per head
took the leading position of about 220 grams on a weekly basis. In the next 15
years, the figure for weekly lamb and beef intake saw a significant fluctuation with
a downward trend, while the figure for chicken went up sharply to about 180 grams
in 1994.
From this time onwards, Beef and lamb consumption fell to barely 100g and 60g
per person per week, respectively. Additionally, weekly fish intake per head was
relatively constant at 50g while individuals tended to consume more chicken, as
seen by the intake of about 250g in 2004.
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The line chart compares the percentage of households with three electrical
appliances in one nation, namely washing machines, refrigerators, vacuum cleaners
over 99 years from 1920 to 2019. Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of
families with three devices witnessed an upward trend over the period under study.
Another striking feature is that the figure for refrigerator has the biggest change as
it started with the lowest point but ended up at the highest.
To be more specific, at the beginning of the period, At this time, almost no family
owned refrigerators, while the proportion of families that had vacuum cleaners or
washing machines were around 30% and 40% respectively. In the next 40 years
from 1920, washing machines and vacuum cleaner rates saw a steady increase
before reaching 60% in 1960. It is also noticeable that the rates of households
having refrigerators went up significantly from roughly 0% to 90% over the same
period.
Between 1960 and 1980, the percentage of families using washing machines
declined marginally from 70% to around 60% before growing steadily and ending
at 75% in 2019. On the Contrary, over the same period, there was a dramatic go up
in the rates of households having refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. From 2000
onwards, all households in this nation had vacuum cleaners and refrigerators.
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Lesson 7 Draft 1
The table compares the number of automobiles produced in Argentina, Australia
and Thailand over 6 years from 2003 to 2009. Overall, it can be seen that countries
produced more cars except Australia over the period under the study. Another
striking feature is that Thailand was always made the highest.
In detail, at the beginning of the period, in 2003, Thailand manufactured 735,852
cars in total, which was considerably higher than the number of cars made in
Argentina, at 253,088. Three years later, car production in Argentina and Thailand
surged to 352,759 and 1,162,356. In 2009 there was a dramatic increase in the
figure for cars manufactured in Argentina, which nearly doubled the beginning of
the period, while that of their Thailand went down slightly to 999,936.
In contrast, Australia's automobile production statistics for 2003 began lower, in
second place with 452,163 cars manufactured. After that, at the end of the period,
the number gradually decreased over time, reaching a low of 245,624 in 2009.
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