1.
Choose a Clear, Specific Purpose
The speaker clearly stated the topic: chili peppers. They talked about the history, uses, and
benefits of chili peppers, which helped the audience know what to expect. However, the speaker
could have explained why this topic matters. For example, they could mention how learning
about chili peppers can improve the audience's cooking or health.
2. Relate the Subject to the Audience
The speaker related chili peppers to the audience by mentioning their use in common dishes
like Mexican and Thai food. They also shared their personal love for spicy food, which helped
the audience relate better. To strengthen this connection, the speaker could ask the audience
questions about how often they use chili peppers in their meals.
3. Make the Message Clear and Understandable
The speaker did not explain everything clearly. For instance, they struggled with the term
"capsaicin" and didn’t explain what it does or why it matters. When mentioning the "veins and
seeds" of the chili pepper, it was also unclear. The speaker could have practiced these terms
and explained them better. Using pictures or diagrams would have made things easier to
understand.
4. Use Supporting Materials
The speaker used a few supporting materials, like a map and a chili pepper, to make the topic
interesting. However, more examples or facts would have helped. Talking about different types
of chili peppers or sharing fun facts would have made the speech more informative and kept the
audience engaged.
5. Be Organized
The speaker organized the speech by discussing the history, chemistry, and uses of chili
peppers. However, they jumped from one topic to another without clear connections. For
example, they went from the science of chili peppers to pepper spray without a smooth
transition. The speech could have been better organized by clearly separating each point and
explaining one topic before moving on to the next.
6. Deliver the Speech Well
The speaker showed enthusiasm but appeared unsure at times. They hesitated with complex
words, making it harder to understand. While showing the chili pepper, it wasn't clear what the
audience could see. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking clearly and confidently.
They should also make sure that visual aids are easy for the audience to see and understand.