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Benefits of Remote Work for Employers

The document discusses the advantages of working from home for both employees and employers, arguing that it reduces stress and operational costs. It also highlights the potential misuse of financial aid in unstable governments and the importance of community service in high school programs. Overall, the document presents various perspectives on work, education, and financial assistance.

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Benefits of Remote Work for Employers

The document discusses the advantages of working from home for both employees and employers, arguing that it reduces stress and operational costs. It also highlights the potential misuse of financial aid in unstable governments and the importance of community service in high school programs. Overall, the document presents various perspectives on work, education, and financial assistance.

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Some people believe that working from home is more beneficial for

employees and employers than working in an office.


To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that remote work is more advantageous for employees


and employers than working from office. I strongly agree that remote work is
better because employees do not have to travel to the office and employers
do not need to rent office space.

One major advantage is that employees do not need to travel to the office.
This means that they save tons of time which can be used either for work or
relaxation. Furthermore, going to office is stressful because one must
prepare themselves unlike working from home. For example, an employee
must think about traffic, dress, food and time when they are travelling to the
office. Thus, working from home is advantageous as it reduces stress.

Second reason is that the employer saves a lot of money because they do
not have to rent the office space. Based on office location, they can save at
least 100,000 dollars every year. This money can be used to compensate
hardworking employees and retain talented employees. In addition, it is
difficult for employers to select office space because it has to be in a central
location accessible to everyone.

In conclusion, employees are less stressful, and employers can save huge
amount of money, if they work from home. Although some argue that going
to the office few days a week helps to grow a bond with colleagues, the
advantages of working from home outweighs the advantage of working from
office.

It is often argued that working from home offers greater advantages for
both employees and employers compared to working in a traditional office
environment. I strongly agree with this view because remote work improves
productivity and reduces costs for organizations, while also enhancing
employees’ work–life balance.
One of the main reasons I agree with this opinion is that working from
home can significantly increase employee productivity. When people work
remotely, they are not required to spend time commuting, which often
causes stress and fatigue before the workday even begins. In addition,
employees working from home experience fewer interruptions from
colleagues, allowing them to concentrate more effectively on their tasks. For
example, many international technology companies have reported higher
performance levels after introducing remote or hybrid work policies. As a
result, employees are able to complete their responsibilities more efficiently
and with greater job satisfaction.

Another important benefit of working from home is the reduction in


operational costs for employers. Companies that do not rely heavily on
office-based work can save substantial amounts of money on rent,
electricity, office supplies, and maintenance. Moreover, employers gain
access to a wider talent pool, as they can recruit skilled professionals from
different regions without requiring relocation. This flexibility can improve
workforce quality while keeping expenses under control. Consequently,
businesses become more competitive and financially sustainable.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that working from home is more beneficial


than working in an office. This is because it enhances employee productivity,
improves work–life balance, and allows employers to reduce costs and
access a broader range of talent.

We can see financial aid being misused in many countries like

Financial help is not properly utilized

Country with

Punish corruption ----no strong laws

Areas where political leaders are from---improved / developed to


max….others slum

Donation- infrastructure development-helps country--development

Countries with unstable government cannot utilized financial help properly.

Discussion: Many people debate what should be done about----. Some


people think that it is best_. However, other people think that_. This
is complex question to answer but in this essay we will look at this
issue.

Many people argue that countries should help each other. Some people think
it is best to provide financial support. However, other people think it is bad to
provide financial aid as money is misused by the government. This is not an
easy question to answer but, in this essay, we will look at his issue.

Financial help is not utilized properly in countries where government is


unstable. Large sum of aid money is corrupted by government officials as
they weak rules and regulations. For example, Haiti received large sum of
money every year to help improve housing and eradicate starvation;
however, they never used to uplift the living standard of citizen.
Furthermore, people in high-ranking position spend money in their
hometowns, while other areas continue to lack development.

Financial assistance is beneficial for countries in need. Helping countries


during natural crises act not only as moral obligations, but also true
friendship between two countries. For instance, different countries like USA,
Ukraine, India, China provided financial and manpower support to Nepal
during 2015 earthquake. Affected people received tents, foods and water.
Similarly, they rescued people from the collapsed building quickly. Moreover,
donations help countries to develop its infrastructure like road, health,
education and communication. Thirteen million dollars was donated to Nepal
by China for developing a highway that surrounds Kathmandu city.

In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages of providing financial


aid, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, I strongly
support the idea that countries should help each other.

Problem-solution: What problems does this cause and what solutions can be
suggested?

Stock pattern: Nowadays, X has become a serious issue in many parts


of the world. This situation leads to several problems that
negatively affect individuals and society. This essay will discuss the
main problems associated with X and propose possible solutions.

In many cities, public transport systems are inadequate and road congestion
is increasing. What are the causes of these problems and what measures
could be taken to solve them?"
Nowadays, lack of public vehicle and increased traffic congestion has
become a serious issue in many parts of the world. This situation
leads to several problems that negatively affect individuals and
society. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with
public transport system and road congestion and propose possible
solutions.

Many people argue that the public transport system does not meet the
demands of people. Some residents think that widening road and, starting
offices and schools in different time will help reduce traffic jam, while others
believe this can be solved by implementing strong rules to punish those who
does not follow rules. I am going to explain the causes and solutions of these
problems.

People cannot reach their destination on time due to traffic jam. If a person
spends 10 minutes in road congestion a day, it will be around 3 days per
year. When people reach their workplace late, they are stressed and cannot
work properly. For instance, a person frequently reaching their office late,
might feel guilty and inadequate. He might feel pressured from his boss.
Furthermore, traffic congestion burns extra fuel which is expensive and leads
to pollution.

Expanding the width of the road and starting schools, offices in different
time, will be a long term and a short-term solution respectively for this
problem. Wide roads with specific lanes divided for public and private
transport will reduce road congestion drastically. Similarly, having a good
traffic control system help in diverting and managing traffic. Moreover, for
the short-term fix, government should implement different starting time for
schools and offices. By doing so, the traffic is reduced to half. For example, if
the school starts at 8 AM, then school traffic will be before that time, so that,
when the office starts at 9 AM, there will be less traffic.

In conclusion, traffic congestion leads people unable to reach their


destination on time, and is expensive as more fuel is wasted. Consequently,
the solution to this problem is constructing wide roads and starting schools
and offices in different time.

1. Using synonyms :

For example : It can be difficult to choose a suitable course for students


straight after school .

Paraphrase :
Difficult = hard = challenging

Choose = select = pick up

Suitable course = appropriate course = available course

2. Changing word forms:

Difficult to choose = difficult choice = hard choice

Be responsible = hold/take responsibility for

3. Using “It is”:

[Link] is one of the best online studying IELTS recently

–> It is said that [Link] is one of the best online studying


IELTS recently

1. Opinion essay:

Stock paragraph: (topic + opposing view/ + your opinion)

Many people believe that X, while this view is widely supported,


other argue that Y. In my opinion, although both perspective have
merits, I strongly agree/ disagree that..

Many people believe that criminal activity can be minimized by holding


prisoners for longer time, while this view is widely supported, other argue
that crime can be controlled by other means. I strongly

Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison
sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of
reducing crime. What is your opinion on this?

3. Discussion: Many people debate what should be done about X----.


Some people think that it is best X_. However, other people think
that not X_. This is complex question to answer but in this essay we
will look at this issue.

2. Agree and disagree Essay (general statement/topic + opposing view +


your opinion)
Stock paragraph:
Many people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory
part of high school program; however, other argue it should not be. In my
opinion, although both perspective have merits, I strongly agree that unpaid
community service should be a compulsory part of

Many people believe X, (1) however; others argue Y. In my opinion,


(2) I agree/disagree that Z.

Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school


programs." To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

4. Problem-solution: What problems does this cause and what solutions can
be suggested? Problem-effect-this essay will

Stock pattern: Nowadays, X has become a serious issue in many parts


of the world. This situation leads to several problems that
negatively affect individuals and society. This essay will discuss the
main problems associated with X and propose possible solutions.

In many cities, public transport systems are inadequate and road congestion
is increasing. What are the causes of these problems and what measures
could be taken to solve them?"

Nowadays, lack of public vehicle and increased traffic congestion has


become a serious issue in many parts of the world. This situation
leads to several problems that negatively affect individuals and
society. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with
public transport system and road congestion and propose possible
solutions.

5. Advantages-disadvantages

Stock paragraph (Topic introduction + advantages and disadvantages + this


essay will)

In recent years, X___ has become increasingly common. While this


trend offers several benefits, it also brings certain drawbacks. This
essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of X

Studying overseas has many benefits for students. However, there are also
some disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give
your own opinion."
6. Direct questions
stock paragraph
Nowadays, many people are concerned about [topic]. This issue raises
several important questions, such as [paraphrase Q1] and [paraphrase
Q2]. This essay will address both questions in detail.

A growing number of people are living alone in many major cities. What are
the reasons for this? Why do they choose to live alone?

Stock conclusion templates (by essay type)

1️⃣ Opinion (Agree / Disagree)

In conclusion, I believe that [your opinion] because [main reason 1] and


[main reason 2].

✔ Example

In conclusion, I believe that learning a foreign language should be taught in


schools because it enhances cognitive skills and improves future career
opportunities.

2️⃣ Discussion + Opinion

In conclusion, although there are arguments on both sides, I believe that


[your opinion] as [main reason].

✔ Example

In conclusion, although some people consider learning a foreign language


unnecessary, I believe it should be compulsory in schools due to its long-
term benefits.

3️⃣ Advantages & Disadvantages


In conclusion, while [disadvantage], the advantages of [topic] outweigh
the drawbacks.

✔ Example

In conclusion, while learning a new language requires time and effort, its
benefits clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

4️⃣ Direct Question (Two Questions)

In conclusion, [answer to question 1], and [answer to question 2].

✔ Example

In conclusion, traditional performances help preserve culture, and they also


play an important role in educating younger generations.

5️⃣ Problem & Solution

In conclusion, [main problem] can be addressed by [main solution].

✔ Example

In conclusion, poor communication skills can be improved through better


education and increased use of face-to-face interaction.

6️⃣ Cause & Effect

In conclusion, [main cause] has led to [main effect], making this a


significant issue in modern society.

"Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school


programs." To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people think that it should be mandatory to include volunteering


community service as a part of high school programs, while other people
believe volunteering work should be optional part of high school programs. In
my opinion, although both perspectives are correct, I strongly agree that
students should provide free service to the community.

Working to gain skill is much more important than money. Working for free
will make students think about importance of learning skills than money.
Students will learn new skills in volunteering which could help them to get
another job. Making unpaid service compulsory is a best way to tell students
that you should value skills rather than fully focusing on money. For example,
student can think why I am not getting paid for the service I am providing
and come to conclusion that the theme of this program is to make students
focused on skills.

In addition, students learn important skill and behaviour helping them to


excel in future careers. They will learn to become responsible. For example,
they learn to deal with work responsibility. Furthermore, they are engaged in
group work and communicate with team members which improves their
speaking skills. Similarly, they will learn that we should approach other
people in warm manner.

In conclusion, high school should make unpaid community service mandatory


because student will learn important skills, behaviour, and perspective on
money and skills. Although some people argue that the volunteering should
be optional, I strongly believe that it should be mandatory because of its
benefits.
Sample prompt: "Studying overseas has many benefits for students.
However, there are also some disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages and give your own opinion."

Nowadays, going abroad for pursuing higher education is very common.


Although leaving home country to get education from other country offers
several benefits, it also brings certain drawback. This essay will discuss
about advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad for student.

People can gain quality education in top universities abroad. With practical
education and latest technology, students can excel in their field of work.
Consequently, with expertise people can earn money and send it back home
to support their family. Moreover, some students return home after getting
experience in abroad and start their own startup. This will help a country by
creating job opportunities.

On other hand, students must be far away from their family for many years.
Some suffer from home sickness, as a result, they cannot focus on their
study. Similarly, when they cannot graduate from universities, they must
repeat the semester costing more money. Universities charge international
students up to three times more than domestic students. Moreover, many
countries values experience gained in their country rather than abroad. For
example, there is a saying that Canadian companies mostly hire employees
with Canadian experience leaving other people with less hope.

In conclusion, studying abroad allows students to work with latest technology


and earn good salary, however; there are risk like home sickness and unable
to graduate university on time. In my opinion, although there are some risks,
the benefits outweighs the drawbacks and students should go abroad for
higher education.

People can gain quality education in top universities abroad. Students will
not be able to excel in their field of work without access to latest technology,
which lacked back home. Similarly, with expertise people can earn a lot of
money and send it back home to support their parents or start a new
business. Moreover, students return home after getting few years of
experience in abroad. They utilize knowledge gained from different countries
to build a startup or start a business.

Some people believe that it is essential to learn a foreign language


in school, while others believe that it is not necessary. Discuss both
views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that it is important to learn a foreign language in


school. Some people think that is it essential; however, other people believe
that it is worthless. This is complex question to answer, but this essay will
discuss about it.

Learning new language helps in brain development. It is easier for kids to


learn second language than for adults, so it should be included in their
curriculum. Similarly, learning a new language activates a part of brain that
helps in strengthening memory and thinking capacity. When students have
sharp mind, they can learn quickly. It is one of the most important skills in
21st century. Moreover, if students wish to visit different country, it will be
helpful. For instance, my friend learned Japanese in school, and it helped him
relocating to Japan.

Learning new language might be useless, if someone does not need it.
Learning new language requires time and persistence. If a person does not
have plans to go abroad, then the foreign language is worthless. A language
not used regularly is soon forgotten. Since learning new language requires a
lot of time, a student can utilize that time to work on himself. For example, if
he is interested in sports, he can use that time to become better in sports
rather than spending time in learning foreign language that he will never
need.

In conclusion, learning foreign language helps to sharpen a brain. Although it


needs time and patience to learn a new language, it should be taught in
school because it helps students in their career and intellectual growth. The
advantage of learning new language outweighs the drawbacks.
"A growing number of people are living alone in many major cities. What are
the reasons for this? Why do they choose to live alone?

Nowadays, many people are living by themselves in big cities. This issue has
raised several questions such are the explanation for living alone and reason
for it. This essay will discuss these queries in detail.

Many people are disinterested in a relationship. People living in cities have


different lifestyle as compared to village. They often go for one night stand
rather than having deep serious relationships. Similarly, they work so much
that they rarely have time to make genuine connections with other people.
As a result, they live single and go for paid date or paid sex. Moreover,
people are distracted by the internet. People are so much hooked into social
medias like Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and Threads that they do not realize
they have to find a partner.

Some people are introverted and do not want to engage with other people.
Going out and making new friends is a difficult task for introverts. They
prefer living alone and working on themselves. In addition, some people
don’t want to fall in love after their first heart break. For example, I have a
colleague who is around 45 years old, he said he do not want to be in a
relationship after his first break-up. Similarly, some people prefer to be single
as they are divorced and stuck in the past.

In conclusion, many people in cities live single life because they are so busy
that they do not have time make deep connections with others, while they
can get physical intimacy easily unlike in past times. Similarly, some people
are introverted or are stuck in a past relationship and prefer to live alone.

Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison
sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of
reducing crime. What is your opinion on this?

Many people around the world believe that keeping criminals in prison for
longer time minimizes crime. Although this is widely accepted, others argue
strong punishment like capital punishment should be introduced. In my
opinion, introducing strong punishment is required to control crime.
Implementing stronger punishment for heinous crimes like murder, rape,
corruption and terrorism will deter criminals from committing crime. People
commit crime for money, power and fame. If the outcome of crime is very
little as compared to the punishment that they will receive, they are not
motivated for committing crime. For example, Hongkong have implemented
death penalty for drug trafficking and corruption. Consequently, Hongkong is
developed and one of the powerful countries in the world. Recent reports
show that Hongkong’s strong punishment for corruption was the key factor
for its development.

Providing awareness to young people about consequences of illegal activities


will help minimize a crime. When people are aware of consequences of illegal
activity, they think twice before taking any action. In addition, young people
should be busy with their life. A lot of political unrest is happening in different
parts of the world because of unemployed youth. When they do not have
anything to do with, they start thinking about negativity and have higher
chances of committing crime. For example, recent Gen-Z protest in Nepal
was the result of unemployment where 94 students died.

In conclusion, while many people think longer prison sentences help to


reduce crime, in my opinion, introducing stronger punishment, public
awareness about good and bad and keeping people busy in their life helps to
minimize crime.

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