Paraphrase

people suggest = it is widely(universally) suggested

sponsor = cover = finance = waive = subsidize
schooling fees = tuition fee
citizen
for the sake of
the bedrock of + smth: nền tảng của
spark a controversy: gây tranh cãi
becoming the backbone: trở thành sương sống
to get on the bandwagon to do something: tham gia vào xu hướng
gained prevalence/popularity: phổ biến + among + N
accessible and available
many students = large swathes of = a sizable proportion of = a large number of
tend to = have an inclination towards = have a penchant for + V-ing = opt for = choose
study overseas = study abroad = study in many other countries
outweigh = overshadow = eclipse
counterproductive effects: hiệu quả ngược
financial strain = financial burden
parenthood: việc làm bố mẹ
invest money = allocate money to = plough money into
development of = proliferation of
dire state: tình trạng thảm khốc
to be entitled to: có quyền
gain wide access: tiếp cận rộng tãi
down the road: trong tương lai
perchant: khuynh hướng
a strain: gánh nặng (a strain on government budget = government budget strains)
reduce = alleviates: giảm nhẹ

Mantra
Given the .. state of ...
Many people say that = it is said that = the question of whether
Something has gained popularity/gained prevalent
Something has received a great deal of public attention
Something has ignited/sparked a controversy
Something has been a topic of interest

Agree or not:
disagree with = vehemently/diametrically oppose = will challenge the validity of this trend

(totally) agree with this point of view = concur this point of view = subscribe to/ champion this pov = my
stance aligns with this pov
Discuss both views:
This essay is going to discuss both views and give my opinion later

Both views will be discussed in this essay and i support the first/the second view

Both views will be meticulously scrutinized/examined and my stance aligns in the former/the latter

Pros and cons:

The disadvantages will be overshadowed by the advantages

I believe the disadvantages will pale into insignificance when compared/juxtaposed with the advantages

This essay will discuss both views and I subscribe the ...

VD:

Nowadays, financial burdens are becoming a critical problem among young couples. In consequence, a
large number of couples tend to delay their parenthood.

Education has invariably been the bedrock of social progress . It is universally suggested that the
governments should sponsor tuition fees for their citizens for the sake of a sustainable society. In my
opinion, the advantages overshadow the disadvantages

Education has invariably been the bedrock of social progress, specially it becoming the backbone of
industrialized countries. It is universally suggested that many leaners get on the bandwagon to study
abroad. In my opinion, the advantages overshadow the disadvantages

Nowadays, carbon dioxide released by burning fuel is the main culprit of pollution in many countries.
The question of whether the governments should raise the cost of fuels to resolve environmental issues
has gained a great deal of public attentions. This essay will discuss both view and I subscribe the former

Sentence 1:
Khẳng định chắc chắn: can/ result in/ unquestionably result/ ineluctably result in/ lead to
Khẳng định có thể: would/ could/ probably lead to/ perhaps/ might/ would protentially

take a gap year / take a sabbatical year / take a year off

many = an increasing number of = a sizeable proportion

tend = have a ten

relocating smth to smwhere

reduce smth overloading/overcrowding

VD:

Many student have a penchant for taking a gap year to work which allow them to earn money.

Many people might argue that relocating factories to countryside could be a potential solution to reduce
city overloading

space exploration will inevitably lead to the pollution of t

Section 2:
juvenile delinquency = teenage crime

dazzling advantages

enthusiastically engaging

highly transferable: có khả năng chuyển giao (skills are highly transferable)

eloquent people: người nói chuyện lưu loát

{juvenile deliquency}bullying/ being abandoned/ physical violence -> mental disorders -> social
resistance -> vent anger -> crime

{traffic jams}

{abolish college tuition fees}->budget deficits -> other fields

{work from home} -> depression

{have baby late = delay parenthood = give birth late = postpone giving birth} -> (career prospects/
financial preparation/ freedom) -> save money - child rearing(expensive) -> -> release financial stress ->
benefit their child

{less participate in outdoor activities} -> many young adults are getting addicted to their phone -> no
motivation for outdoor activites -> spent a big chunk of their time on social apps, online networks ->
virtually spend their free time on tiktok - an entertaining app - constantly offer short attractive content,
amusing videos that make them binge-watch without being aware of mindlessly scrolling though their
phone.-> drain their time for other activities, including outdoor sports

-> limiting their social skils and healthiers activities

Cấu trúc: Main idea (1) -> explain (with example) -> example -> result

main idea: by +V-ing

explain: this means/Indeed/ this manifests in the form that

example: for example

result: In consequence/In the long run

which could possibly help them become ...

Ưu tiên đưa ra ví dụ thực tế hơn ví dụ cá nhân

VD:
There have been dazzling advantages of this trend. By delaying parenthood, many couples might be able
to make a thorough financial preparation. This means they could have ample time to save money over a
long period of time to adequately prepare for escalating costs associated with raising children. For
example, many surveys have suggested that expenses for diapers, vaccines, education, nutrition and
healthcare for a child could exceed an average salary of an individual. As result, such a preparation could
potentially release financial stress among young couples in this regard, thereby ensuring a holistic
nurturing for a child.

save money = accumulate money

/Scientific/ Empirical evidence undergirding this argument has suggested that

have ample time to ...

no orientation about jobs: không có định hướng nghề nghiệp

There have been dazzling advantages of this trend. By delaying their study, students might be able to
make a thorough college preparation. This means they could have ample time to do extra jobs which
would allow them saving money over to adequately prepare for many necessary fees. For example,
empirical evidence undergirding this argument suggested that expenses for tuition, accomodation, study
materials for a student could not be affordable for some families. As result, such a preparation could
potentially release financial stress among low-income families.

Education has invariably been the bedrock of social progress, specially it becoming the backbone of
industrialized countries. It is universally suggested that many leaners get on the bandwagon to study
abroad. In my opinion, the advantages overshadow the disadvantages

Nowadays, carbon dioxide released by burning fuel is the main culprit of pollution in many countries.
The question of whether the governments should raise the cost of fuels to resolve environmental issues
has gained a great deal of public attentions. This essay will discuss both view and I subscribe the former

section 1

shoukd = ought to = had better

It is highly advisable for someone to do smth < It is highly imperative for someone to do smth < it is a
wise course of action for someone to do smth

Cut down on smth

to = so as to = in order to

avoid = eschew + V-ing/ nouns = prevent = stay away = steer clear away

a sedentary/stationary lifestyle

glueing eyes to the screen all the time

engaged in social activities ...

The young ought to cut down on the screen time in order to eschew a sedentary lifestyle

Gỉai thích ý chính:

There are some reasons why

There are some underlying reason/ rationales/ legitimate reasons why

One of the reasons is that

One chief reason is that

On main reason

Since/ by

1. In order

In order to v, s+v -> for example, s+v, as a result, ... thereby ...

In order to v, s+v -> for example, s+v, which

For example = take smth as an example. = take smth as a striking exemplification where

Free education has brought a multitude of benefits for poor students, as evidenced by some countries,
such as Vietnam,

In order to fight against climate change, people should be encouraged to plant trees.

VD:

Free education: Nordic countries like norway, neitherland.

High crime rate: Mexico, Brazil, America

mass shooting: America

First, in order to dismantle the problem of climate change, it is highly advisable for countries to harness
green energies on a wide scale. Take Finland and other nordic countries as a striking exemplification
where renewable energies such as solar, wind and hydro have been more favored than fossil fuels,
which has countered the increasing amounts of CO2 over many decades and improve the quality of the
air. In the long term, green environment will benefical for social well-being.

{public transport}->convenient->London-connect all points in city -> carry more people.

{city overloading}->neighboring areas/ get rich-> full amenities/ infrastructues/ companies->solved ... ->
productivity/ better emotion
2. IF

if (sv) (sv)

For example/ this means/ plenty of evidence/ plenty of research/ many studies have shown that/ many
articles and reports have shown/ has suggested that s+v, which (or as a result)

As a result

In the long run

If vertical cities are more favored than horizontal cities, the housing shortage in big cities will be solved.
For example, in Singaport, Hongkong the governments have mainly prioritized building high-rise
buildings and skyscrapers for their residents as well as companies and enterprises, which has resolved
the housing shortages in these countries

Inversion:

If the government sponsored education for everyone, the rate of poverty would be reduced.

L1: Were someone to do smth

->Were the government to sponsor education for everyone, the rate of poverty would be reduced.

L2: Were somthing to be + v3

Were schooling fees to be removed/ dispensed with, this would create high-quality workforce

Counter-argumentative essay

Introduction

(1) Rewrite the topic

(2) I disagree with this idea/ I will challenge this idea/ its validity/ both view

Body 1.

(1) It is understandable/ fathomable why someone extols the idea that....

(2) They might argue that/ This could be based/ prediacted on the assumption that....

(3) However, this line of thinking/ perspective is unsound/ flawed/ ineffective/ not encompassing/ short-
sighted because...

(4)..................................

Body 2.

(5) To reinforce my point of view, I believe that

(6) First, since.....

(7) This means....., which.....

(8) Second, by

(9) For example....., which.....

Conslusion

(10) Rewrite your topic

(11) Rewrite your opinion. (This idea is short-lived/unsound/blemished/flawed. I believe that.....)

1. developments of internet

Body 1:

Understandable: online/ internet/ free knowledge/ websites/ youtube/ -> money-saving, time-saving

Phản biện: junk knowledge -> hard to find verified knowledge + parents (dont have pedagogical skill) =>
confused => poor academic study

Body 2:

(1) postures/ eyes/ physical health

(2) computers => no control => games, advertisement =>

2.

Body1:

Understandable: unsuitable for woman since woman are physically weak- can not do heavy duties
(weapons/ fighting) => unadvanced position.

Phản biện: This line of thinking is unsound => many women are physically strong (be trained).
Body2:

positions/ suitable for women => nursing

good negotiation skill -> political

{have baby late}

Body1:

Understandable: kinh tế vững vàng - escalating costs of living - the best conditions for a baby

Phản biện: many countries sponsor for cost of child raising

Body2:

(1) Risks (mothers and babies) fertility rate < lower < miscarriage / higher

(2) Generation gaps: misunderstanding

Ngược lại

Body1:

Underestandable:women - physical health - down syndrome

Phản biện: công nghệ

Body 2:

(1) Kinh tế - x maternity leave - contribute - society - taxes - reinvested

(2) Freedom - human right - social conflicts

Physical health - technology/medical/overcome

Shortage/workforce/

However, this thinking is unsound since a majority of people find it difficult to look for reliable
information and know-hows due to huge amount of floating on the internet. Not to mention, many
parents fall short of necessary pedagogical skills to filter out specialized knowledge to teach their off
spring. As a result, this potentially lead to poor academic performances of their child.

a majority of people find it challenging to do smth

look for/ seek (smth)

reliable/ verified information and know-hows

junk information/ floating on the internet

allowing workers to work at home is beneficial for employers. Agree or not?

=>Disagree

Body 1:

Understandable: no office/ utility fees/ operating costs/ reduced:

Phản biện: tiết kiện tiền được quá nhỏ so với mất mát: productivity (decrease) - low profits- stagnant

Body 2:

Lý do 1:lost Collaboration

Lý do 2:...

[Link] should not be allowed to carry guns.. Discuss both views

Allow - self-defense - have gun - think twice (personal motives, induced demand)

Allow - hunting

....->solving: increase security, help

Don't allow - crime/ violence - a mass shooting/ personal attack - social chaos

Don't allow - self-harm - children could be hurted

2. Government should prioritized in healthcare than other important areas, education. Agree or disagree

Agree- Healthcare/ save lives/ cure disease

Disagree :
Education/ qualified citizens/ jobs/ taxes => reinvested in other areas (healthcare)

Economy/ more tax => reinvested

-> disagree better

3. Government should make education free, agree or not

Agree:

Study - qualified employees - contribute to the country - taxes

Social stability - reduce crimes/ unemployment rate

Disadvantages:

Delay study - take it for granted ->not focus on studying - prioritize to earn money/ stay longer -
unqualified - burden (counter-effective) - burnout national budgets

economy - limit private schools - limit competition - limit other school quality

punishment help children learn the difference between wrong at an early age. Agree of disagree

agree:

Punishment - (spanking/ slapping/ hitting) - tell a lie/ lazy (Study)/ play truant-hitting/ cry (fear) - do not
repeat

Disagree:

Teaching children core values - understanding

Be a model

=> bring greater benefits

career prospects