French Stylistics: Key Lessons and Exercises
French Stylistics: Key Lessons and Exercises
Lessons in Stylistics
French
By
Mohamed Nabil Nahas Homsi
Doctor of State
September 2005
Language and Stylistics: Lessons in French Stylistics
summary
Foreword 3
- Introduction: what is Stylistics? 4
Lesson 1: Grammatical Words and Lexical Words 6
Lesson 2: The Functions of Language 10
Exercises 13
Lesson 3: Statement enunciation 16
- Exercises 19
Lesson 4: Types of Texts 22
Exercises 25
Lesson 5: Speech Acts 29
Exercises 32
Lesson 6: Language Registers 34
Exercises 39
- Leçon 7 : Péjoratifs et mélioratifs 45
Exercises 51
Lesson 8: Literal and Figurative Meaning 49
Exercises 51
Lesson 9: Figures of speech 58
Exercises 78
Lesson 10: Rhetoric of Literary Genres 82
Exercises 91
Lesson 11: Reported Speech 95
Exercises 98
- Lesson 12: Logic of Discourse: Elements of Argumentation Analysis 103
Exercises 109
Lesson 13: Sounds 112
Lessons 14: Measure and Rhythm 116
Bibliography 119
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Preface
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Introduction
What is stylistics?
The term style (from the Latin stilus = a tool used for writing) is borrowed
in ancient instrument used to mark the wax of tablets. This word,
who designated since classical Latin the manner of writing of an individual,
of a writer, of a school or of a genre, applies today to
many fields (one can just as easily talk about the style of an armchair,
of a behavior, of a life rather than of the style of a literary work.
For the old rhetoric, style is beautiful style, a matter
of ornaments, of figures, thus of teaching. This orientation persists
dominant in France until the end of the 17th century; it was defined as
the era as 'a certain something'. Starting from the 18th century, there is a tendency
increasingly attributing style to personal genius. With the
romanticism, it becomes the mark of the individual, the group or the genre
in the use of common language. One must wait for the beginning of the 20th century.
century for this notion of style, a mark of the individuality of the subject
in the discourse, it should be refined through a scientific discipline that
give the name stylistics and is mainly interested in objects
linguistics.
What is stylistics? It is the scientific study of the use of
for expressive or aesthetic purposes, special resources of a
language: it aims to study the specific way in which a writer
use syntactic constructions or relationships of meaning or form
existing between the words. Style is defined by reference to a standard
like a gap:
a. deviation from the code.
b. deviation from an unmarked level of speech, a kind of usage
simple means.
c. deviation from the style of the genre to which the work belongs, and which
constitutes a sort of language established beforehand (one can study the
Balzac's style, for example, within the style of the novel.
In any case, it is a matter of studying stylistic effects against the background of language,
this being the sum of the means of expression at our disposal
to format the statement, while the style would be like the appearance and
the quality that results from the choice between these means of expression. Thus, by
for example, if the man on the street says 'I remember', which is a
banal expression; the cultured man chooses 'I remember it' expressing
the same thing with a pedantic expression. To these two expressions, the
the poet prefers the poetic expression 'I remember it.'
The realm of style is limitless, as all elements and processes
of expression, regardless of the grammatical category to which they belong,
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can be the subject of choice. Thus, stylistics covers the entire field
the language and the study of linguistic expressiveness must be carried out in
function of the traditional divisions of grammar: phonetics,
morphology, lexicography, syntax, structure of the statement. Let it be the sentence
next :
I can assure you that this is true; but it might be better
that it not be.
Such a person, in such a circumstance, will pronounce: exa-c-t; such another,
or the same in other circumstances, it will say; the tone and the appearance of
The statement will be modified, and the listener will take away an impression.
different.
Yes, instead of saying I can, you can say I may, the quality of the statement will differ: I
it falls under the common and familiar register while I can emphasize
in the sense of distinction. There is thus a stylistics of forms.
One can choose between this and that; the first will be more literary, the second
very familiar; this time it's the vocabulary that is at stake.
Do we vary the construction by using, instead of the present subjunctive
let it be, which represents a tolerance of use, the imperfect was, which is
correct and learned; the quality of style becomes a function of syntax.
Finally, the word order is also an element of style, as it appears
following what I say, trivially: it might be better, or, with a
elegant inversion: perhaps it would be better.
This course aims to be an introduction to the linguistic approach to
texts or more precisely like a reading guide. Its ambition is
to develop in students a form of attention to the language of
texts often neglected or deemed a matter for technicians.
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Lesson 1
It is very useful to present the distinction between words from the beginning.
grammatical and lexical words. This distinction allows us to
Indeed, to classify words in French into two large sets that have
very different characteristics.
I. Grammatical words
Grammatical words are determiners (articles and adjectives not
qualifiers), prepositions and coordinating conjunctions and
subordination
A young man was reading a science fiction novel in his corner.
The: definite article, determiner of a young man;
a: indefinite article, determiner
of: preposition;
in: preposition;
his: possessive adjective, determinative.
What are their essential characteristics?
B1. Grammatical words are limited in number.
The child was approaching the house.
This sentence contains three grammatical words: the definite article.
the preposition 'l' and the definite article 'la'. One can replace each.
of them in other words:
It can be replaced by some, its, one, something, etc.
can be replaced by the same words in their feminine form:
["this","her","a","some","etc."]
can be replaced by, towards...
In each case, the words that can replace each of the three words
Grammatical ones are limited in number.
B2. New grammatical words are very rarely created.
The list of grammatical words is short and is difficult to extend.
When we create a new name or a new verb when the
the need is felt. Grammatical words therefore make up a stock
of words that cannot be easily increased.
B3. Grammatical words are frequent and have a vague meaning.
The grammatical words being few in number, the same grammatical word
can be used very frequently in a text, or even in a
phrase :
One day in the afternoon on the platform behind a bus.
I see a character in line 5 who is very tall.
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a felt portrait surrounded by a braided ribbon in place of a ribbon.
(Raymond Queneau, Exercises in Style)
In this text, it is noted that:
The only words that are used more than once are words.
grammaticaux :un(six fois),de(quatre fois),la(deux fois).
The meaning of these grammatical words is very broad:
it can mean
one unit (one and not two)
The non-precision (any), etc.
is a preposition that can indicate:
the possession (Pierre's hat),
the material (a wooden table),
the origin (he comes from the kitchen), etc.
Note: These grammatical words are short, they rarely exceed.
a syllable. They are both frequent, imprecise and short. It is
interesting to note that the more frequent a word is, the more its meaning is
large and somewhat inaccurate. This is due to the fact that it is used in a large
number of different phrases in which the other words him
give a special meaning. Similarly, it can be noted that the more a word is
frequent and its variable meaning, the shorter it is. This is explained by the fact
that the one who speaks refuses to make an effort (to use a word that is too long) if
this word does not provide precise information.
B4 Grammatical words are distributed into two groups
1. Those who determine the name: articles, non-qualifying adjectives;
2. Those that serve to connect words in a sentence: the
prepositions.
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The essential characteristics of lexical words?
They are in very large numbers
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Don't you find this child silly?
Yes, he is really too much.
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Lesson 2
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I would like you to pay close attention to what I am going to tell you.
Come on! Move along!
You need to tell us everything!
b. When the statement has the essential role of attracting attention
the interlocutor, or better yet, to trigger a reaction in him,
a given behavior, to encourage them to act in a certain way, we say
what is an impressively statement.
The expressive language uses interjections, apostrophes, the imperative.
the formulas of address or indignation, figurative language, etc.
Hey! Taxi!
Boy, the bill, please!
Attention, let's not move anymore!
Congratulations, my dear friend!
3- What we are talking about (the subject, or the theme, or the situation, or the referent)
The referential function of language.
When the speaker refers to another person other than themselves -
even if its interlocutor, or when it refers to an object, it
use a noun or a noun group, or a pronoun: he, she, this, that
etc.
I heard from Ibrahim. He is now working in a
bank.
I took my television to the repairman because it is damaged.
Many types of statements are often spoken or written.
in the third person: news articles, essays, technical works,
reportages, history, tale, short story, novel, etc.
These statements serve to tell events or to describe
Aspects of the world are referential denouncements.
4- The metalinguistic function of language: It happens that the exchange
focuses on the language itself, for example to ask a question or
give a clarification on the meaning of a word, ask or give a
definition. It then engages the metalinguistic function or of
metalanguage. It is the use of language to talk about language itself.
The most characteristic type of statement in this regard is the article of
dictionary.
5- The contact or phatic function: before communicating, one
use processes to create contact; during the exchange, we try
to maintain the attention of the interlocutor. This is the contact function.
Let's also think, from this perspective, about polite expressions (Hello),
to comments about the weather or about health (How are you?)
["expressions that serve to fill silences (Say, tell me, huh, hold on, you"]
So, well, then) or to draw attention (Isn't it? If you want,
Hold on.
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6- The poetic function: finally, the message can aim for style, that is to say
to a beauty effect, artistic research: use of verses in
poetry, rare words, comparisons and metaphors, sentences
rhythmed in prose, refined turns of phrase, sonorities and cadences,
etc.
There are as many different styles as there are great writers; each
a writer is recognized by an absolutely unique writing style. But among all
the poetic function is exercised.
Attention!
There are one-way communications, or at least some
deferred exchanges, in which the interlocutor cannot respond
immediately (for example: the press, radio, television).
Each exchange involves several functions of language. The
language can also express other functions than those that
have just been analyzed. The expressive function, for example,
could be divided based on emotional affection (feelings, sensations), and in
ideological function (ideas, beliefs).
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Exercises
/I/ Identify, in the following sentences, the elements that convey a reaction
affective, emotive, of the author. Indicate, for each of them, its particular value.
To which linguistic function do you attach each of the following sentences? From
What type of text is it extracted from?
1. Accused, rise!
I was happy to learn that you will come to see us during the
next vacation.
The curve of your eyes circles around my heart.
4. What we call the speaker is the person who speaks.
I visited the Holy Mosque this morning: What a splendor!
6. With shampoo X, change your way of life.
Subway, work, sleep.
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/VI/ Text
For over 30 years we have been perfecting an industrial technique
of construction that allowed us to improve our products while
reducing costs.
Today we are building nearly 15,000 houses per year, we
have become the largest builder of individual homes.
If we are proud of it, it is because we are aware of
play a real social role. Indeed, the majority of our sales concern
our cheapest model.
This is proof that we allow those who thought they would never
to be able to afford a house, to realize their dream.
Advertising slogan
/VIII/ Texts
This winter the sun is waiting for you in the United States. It will accompany you.
while you drive along the Californian Coast, from horse to
Texas and Arizona, skiing in Yellowstone Park or in the
Rockies.
This winter in Florida, the sun will also invite you to go to the beach.
Sailing, water skiing, scuba diving, sea fishing, windsurfing,
it's up to you to choose.
This winter, the United States will give you the best welcome and not
just because they offer you the sun, you will find there a
easy and inexpensive life. Some examples: car rental for 7
days, unlimited mileage, 405 F _ the flight from New York to San Francisco,
600 F for the meal, 30 F.
B. To make life easier for its clients, Crédit Agricole now has a
international payment card: Eurocard. When you are about to pay your
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purchases, a hotel bill, a restaurant bill, you hand it over, you sign, and we
you return it with a smile. You are even.
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Lesson 3
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novels in the third person, report, essay, scientific text,
etc.).
Either it appears itself in the statement, through various signs:
The personal pronoun and the possessives of the 1st person (I, my).
The use of certain moods, for example the imperative, which expresses a
Disappear!
The use of interjections and apostrophes: Ouch; Oh! Hey!
The use of words that express a particular attitude, a
appreciation, a judgment of the speaker on the very content of
the utterance: for example, the phrases expressing doubt,
uncertainty, probability, will, necessity, power (with the
adverbs and the so-called verbs like perhaps, undoubtedly, certainly,
necessarily / must, to have to, to want, to be able to, etc.
The combination of all these traits gives rise to statements.
strongly imprinted by the personality and subjectivity of the one who
the pronouncements (theater dialogue, speeches, controversies, lyrical poetry,
etc.). Conversely, in some apparently objective texts, one can
discover much more discreet and subtle brands of the
presence of the speaker, of their sensitivity and their ideas.
b. The recipient of the statement.
He is also more or less present in the utterance.
In an order, in a letter, in a political speech, in the
theater, the recipient is explicitly designated in the second person
person (pronouns and possessives of the 2nd person).
In other types of statements (science, history, novel), it can
remain completely implicit.
It can be referred to in the third person: administrative texts,
announcements, notices.
c. The identification of place and time
The place
There are unlocalized statements that do not contain any markers.
allowing to identify the place where the speaker produced them: this is the case
many novels, history, scientific texts.
Other statements, on the contrary, provide indications about the place.
of broadcast, for example with the help of adverbs like here, elsewhere, over there
(which take as a reference point the location of the speaker)
demonstrative adjectives, presentation terms (here is) and even
place names (in the correspondence: Riyadh the...)
The moment
Verb tenses (present, past, future), adverbs of time (yesterday,
now, once, tomorrow, in a little while, etc.), and even the dates
explicit (Bordeaux, September 5), allow to indicate the moment
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of the enunciation and to situate in relation to it the events that it reports
the statement.
All kinds of degrees are possible between statements that are dated and
they detail their content precisely, and the statements are totally timeless.
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Exercises
Are all the following sentences acceptable? If not, explain why.
I am proud to be a boy.
If I were you, I wouldn’t act that way.
Tomorrow, we are going to the cinema.
We will be here in an hour.
My father has no children.
The next day we took a nice walk.
Next year, we visited England.
8. Mohamed will not come: she has too much work.
In this beginning of the article, what are the elements that depend on the moment of
the statement, which would require additional information to be clear
understood?
"After the death of two cash transporters on Wednesday, the murder of "
two peacekeepers the following night, and that of a shopkeeper yesterday
This morning, Mr. Christian Bonnet immediately summoned the high
responsible for the police.
Ask yourself the same question about these other phrases, borrowed from them.
also to various press articles?
4. Since then, "the Canaries" had never surpassed the round of 32.
Thus, in the face of Atletico Madrid, two years ago, in the Club Cup
Champions. Thus, against Benfica last year in the Round of 32 of the Cup.
of the U.E.F.A. This season, finally, the players from Loire-Atlantique have
secured their ticket to the quarter-finals of the Cup Winners' Cup.
IV. Identify and highlight in the following sentences the words that indicate the moment.
and the place of enunciation:
Today, mom died, or maybe yesterday, I don't know.
Camus
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2. Who are you? What are you doing here? I don't know you. And
Yet it seems to me that I know you.
3. Bear, she said, this is where our father died. Let us pray for his soul,
my brother !(P.Mérimée)
4. Knights, let me climb this high rock, to see once
still my beautiful castle.
/V/ Text
To Madame de Grignan
At Malcorne, Saturday, May 23, 1671
I arrive here, where I find a letter from you, so much I knew how to give a good
order to our business; I wrote to you on Monday while leaving Paris. Since
this, my child, I have only drifted away from you with a sadness and
a memory of you so pressing that in truth the darkness of my thoughts
made me unbearable at times. I left with your portrait.
in my pocket. I look at it very often. It would be difficult to take it away from me.
stealing at the moment without my noticing; he is perfectly
kind. I have your idea in mind; I have in the middle of my heart a
infinite tenderness for you. Here is my crew, and here is what I
goes three hundred leagues away from you.
We were greatly inconvenienced by the heat. One of my fine horses
staying in Palaiseau; the other six have held on until now. We are leaving.
from two o'clock in the morning to avoid extreme heat. Again
Today, we alerted dawn in these woods to see Sylvie.
that is to say Malcorne, where I will rest tomorrow.
Letters
1. Expliquez les mots : commerce-prévenir : faites pour chacun d’eux une phrase où
they will have their current meaning.
2. Identify, in this text, all the elements that refer to the subject of the enunciation,
to the recipient of the statement, at the place and at the time of the statement.
VI Text
On the train Paris - Rome
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current ones are descending, because it is impossible for all to continue until then.
Which of them six will still be at that moment in this
compartment presumably lit only by the blue nightlight,
through this small spherical and dark bulb that you can see at
the inside of the streetlight, nestled between the two other transparent ones and
piriformes. In the countryside, the lights of the houses will be turned off.
You will see the headlights of a few trucks, the lanterns of
stations; you will be cold... You will get up, you will go out, you will go
all the way down the hallway to give you some fresh water on the
eyes. ([Link], The Modification)
Which character is referred to by the pronoun you?
2. Identify in this text the words that refer to another person.
3. Récrivez le texte à la 1re, puis à la 3e personne.
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Lesson 4
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3. The explanatory text:
He seeks to inform and clarify a topic for the reader or
the interlocutor is supposed to be ignored. It has an educational function.
Characteristics: the present indicative; terms of articulation of
speech to mark the steps of the explanation (first, then...).
Example:
Gold: under this brief noun rush countless evocations where
Legend disputes reality. Nothing that pertains to gold leaves
indifferent. Over the centuries, a framework has built around this word.
prodigious building whose shining façade announces the splendors but
hide the miseries.
Jules Lepidi,L’Or, « Que sais-je ? », no 776, 1958, PUF.
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Scapin - Let's try a little to get you accustomed. Let's repeat a bit of your
role and let's see if you'll do well, Come on...
Octave.- So?
Scapin. - Good. Imagine that I am your father who is arriving, and answer me.
firmly, as if it were to himself.
Molière, The Tricks of Scapin
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Exercises
Upon arriving in Salerno, he slowed his horse to a walk. His anxiety returned.
Maybe it was like a fever, like a spell that one can succumb to.
undoing it by passing it to others, and had he unknowingly communicated it to his
mother.
He had a hard time finding the doctor's house. Finally, near the port, in
a dead end, they showed him a house of poor appearance; a calf to
half detached was banging. At her knock, a woman appeared in
gesticulating; she asked the knight what brought him; he had to
to explain in detail, shouting to be heard; other women
they loudly lamented the unknown illness.
(Marguerite Yourcenar, Anna, Sorror…, 1931.)
/II/ Observe the following excerpt and indicate for each passage the type of text it is.
it concerns. Justify your answer by referring to the characteristics of the narrative and of
description.
Although devastated by the approaches of winter, the imperial garden does not
did not lack a certain melancholic charm. The long avenue
extended far away its red arches, vaguely hinting at
at its end, a horizon of hills already drowned in the vapors
bluish and the evening fog; beyond, the view extended over the Prater and
the Danube; it was a walk made to order for a poet.
A young man was walking down this alley with visible signs.
impatience; his costume, with a somewhat theatrical elegance, consisted of
a black velvet frock coat with gold buttons trimmed with fur, a
gray knit pants, soft boots with tassels rising to mid-
legs. He could be twenty-seven to twenty-eight years old.
The very short space in which he circumscribed his walk.
showed that he was waiting for someone, because the Imperial Garden
Vienna in November is hardly favorable for meetings.
of business.
Indeed, a young girl soon appeared at the end of the path:
a black silk headdress covered her rich blonde hair, of which
the evening humidity had slightly frizzed the long curls; her complexion,
ordinarily of a virgin wax whiteness, had taken under the bites
of the cold shades of Bengal roses.
(Théophile Gautier, two actors for a role, 1841.)
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The two following excerpts are argumentative texts. How does the
Does the second text contradict the first? Answer in the form of a
table
Text 1 Text 2
Thesis defended
Arguments
Examples
text 1
Despite the experience of centuries that has proven that women, without
exception, is incapable of any truly artistic or scientific work,
We are being forced to accept the female doctor or the female politician.
The attempt is useless since we do not have the woman yet.
painter or the woman musician, despite the relentless efforts of everyone
daughters of concierges and all the girls to marry in general who study
the piano and even composition with a perseverance worthy of a
best success, or those that ruin oil color and color to
the water without managing to paint anything other than fans, flowers,
backgrounds or mediocre portraits.
(Guy de Maupassant, Preface to Manon Lescaut, 1888.)
text 2
The author addresses the students of a high school. Identify all the signs that
indicate the presence of the argument in the text. What is the thesis developed by
Can the author captivate a young audience?
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It is now up to you, dear young people, to approach existence,
and soon the business. The work is not lacking. In the arts, in the
letters, in the sciences, in practical matters, in politics
Finally, you can, you must consider that everything needs to be rethought and
take back. You will have to rely on yourself much more
that we others did not have to do it. Therefore, you must arm your minds; what
does not mean that it is enough to educate oneself. It is nothing but possessing
what one doesn’t even think to use, to attach to one’s thought. It is about
knowledge like words. A limited vocabulary, but one that we
it is better to be able to form many combinations than thirty thousand
words that only embarrass the acts of the mind. I am not going to
to offer you some advice. One should only give it to very
aged, and youth often takes care of it.
(Paul Valéry, Speech on History, 1932.)
The following text is explanatory in nature. What details indicate that the will to
The author's role is not to describe but to make a functioning understood?
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[come] to die in the right eye, forming a big seam everywhere
prominent.
Honoré de Balzac,Le Colonel Chabert, 1832.
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/VII/ The descriptive text places the described object in space. Identify the spatial references.
the following text.
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Lesson 5
Speech acts
How to classify speech acts and the statements that correspond to them
correspondent?
It is necessary to distinguish:
1. The objective of communication (e.g.: getting someone to do something)
someone or let something be done by someone.
2. The act of language (to advise, to invite, to order, to constrain, to suggest,
etc.);
3. Possible statements for the same act.
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Objectives Acts Possible statements
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The express. Response to the previous request.
At 3:50 PM, Sir. Provision of the requested information.
Thank you. Acknowledgments.
You're welcome. Encoded response to the thank you.
Goodbye, Sir. End of dialogue greeting.
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Exercises
III. Identify the different speech acts performed in the following conversation.
The scene takes place on a construction site.
Hello, sir.
Hi, my guy.
Is there hiring around here?
- Why? Are you looking for a job?
Yes, do you have something?
Ah! No, my old friend. The team is complete.
What a pity!
What can you do?
I have my plastering CAP.
Listen, I have nothing to offer you at the moment. But come back later.
So in about a week, you never know.
Well, thank you. See you next week then.
Yes, hello, and good luck!
/IV/ Imagine a dialogue that will succeed the following speech acts:
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Response to the previous request.
Provision of the requested information.
Acknowledgments.
Coded response to the thank you.
End of dialogue greeting.
Sometimes it happens that one wants to convey the opposite of what one seems.
to say: it is the mechanism of irony. How would you signify, ironically:
That's clever!
2. Quel vilain temps !
3. Here’s a missed shot.
This neighborhood is noisy.
What you are saying is not very spiritual.
What beauty!
What elegance!
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Lesson 6
Language registers
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3- The familiar register
The familiar register is that of spontaneous speech. It is the one of the
family conversation, among friends, in everyday life, about
the stadium, in the street, at the office, etc. It is a rather oral model that
often contains mistakes in terms of correct usage. It contains him
several degrees, the use of which is related to the situation of
3.1 The popular register.
a. Vocabulary: many interjections, terms, and phrases
slang, figurative expressions (hyperbole, redundancies, etc.), of
jokes, expressive intonations.
b. Grammar: deletion within negative constructions, use
give the place to us, give the place to him, you (informal), numerous
repetitions, frequent use of the segmented phrase (So I said, so I
told me, etc.), linking of sentences by juxtaposition or by
coordination.
[Link] vulgar register: same characteristics as the register
popular, with more coarse jokes, even expressions
trash cans.
3.3. The slang register: use of coded, unknown vocabulary or
little known to the general public (specific to crooks, to “loubards”, etc.)
These indications seem convenient at first glance, but are in reality questionable,
because they involve a social and moral judgment about the ways of that person
who speaks. Theater and the novel often strive to reproduce the
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various registers of familiar or popular usage, out of concern for authenticity
et d’expressivité. dans la représentation des types psychologiques et
social and various forms of communication in society
modern.
Employment in the texts
Language registers can be considered in two ways:
The normative viewpoint classifies registers into correct and incorrect.
From this perspective, there are therefore registers that we must avoid using.
as far as possible.
2. The descriptive point of view analyzes them as resources of the
language. Mastering one's language means being able to use the different
registers according to communication situations.
In the texts, one can encounter the influence of two points of view:
The author adheres to the norm and refrains from using registers.
incorrects or low registers.
The author plays on the full range of registers, depending on their
characters and the situations they find themselves in. This therefore leads him to
often playing on the marked registers, those that can be distinguished: the
familiar register and formal register. Indeed, language allows itself
only to socially situate the character and even to characterize him
psychologically. The reader must identify the passages where these registers
are employed, to assess how they fit the situations of
communication.
How to access refined language
1. Substitution of words with others of the same kind (common synonymy)
Eviction of a vulgar or common word in favor of a more
"reprimand". The verb "to yell at", for example, frequently used,
evokes the animal (the jaws being the mouth of certain animals). Not
would it not be suitable, therefore, to replace it with another verb that is less
animalistic?
Examples :
to scold familiar
rebuke current
to take back current
to reprimand current
to lecture current
housekeeper current
to admonish well-groomed
- tancer : well-groomed
chaptering well-groomed
Replacement of a verb with a verbal phrase
Examples:
to face to face
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to help to come to help, to lend a hand
to embarrass to put in an awkward position
to harm bring harm
to resist to stand up to
satisfy donner satisfaction à
to get discouraged to give up
send send
2. Substitution of groups of words with others of the same function.
Examples to indicate a point of view:
economy question: colloquial language
economically speaking: colloquial language
at the economic level: everyday language
- from an economic point of view: everyday language
Regarding the economy: everyday language
- on the economic side: refined language
- in economic terms: polished language
Regarding the economy: formal language.
3. Noun formation based on adjectives
His reactions are quick; he avoided danger because of that. He avoided
the danger thanks to the speed of its reactions.
The exercise was simple, it surprised the students. The simplicity of
The exercise surprised the students.
Fruits are abundant in summer, it is nice. The abundance of
fruits in summer are a pleasure.
These two merchants are competitors, which benefits the
consumers. The competition between these two merchants benefits
to consumers.
He was seriously ill, he could not take his exam. The
the severity of his illness had prevented him from attending the exam.
He has a frank look. The frankness of his gaze...
His speech was brief. The brevity of his speech...
4. Adjectivation of adverbs:
Examples:
He was very tired. His fatigue was extreme.
He seemed to speak easily. His words seemed easy to us.
He often makes mistakes. His errors are frequent.
5. Verb-based nominalization
Verbs + adverb Noun phrase + adjective
We had decided to send back
definitely the workers. the final dismissal of the workers
Conjunction + subordinate clause Preposition + nominal complement
circumstantial Upon their arrival...
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When they arrived... Thanks to his dedication...
Because he was devoted...
Complex phrase Simple phrase
And as he kept making mistakes, his incessant (repeated) errors have
was quickly dismissed. obviously trained his dismissal.
Declarative verbs + conjunctions A more expressive verb
He says that this house belongs to him. He claims ownership of this.
house.
They say he has a certain talent. He is credited with a certain talent.
He says that this accident is due to my He blames this accident on me.
imprudence. imprudence.
(complex phrases) (simple phrases)
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Exercises
/I/ Same theme, three different languages: can you identify in the three texts
what are the common elements and the differences in style?
Text 1
Ah! What hard blows we have endured, my dear. Finally, it's here.
Heaven, up there, we are getting justice... It's about time... It's the big
upheaval in Aragon. The Aragonese are fighting almost all for
us. The dictatorship is over! And we will take back what those bastards of
the putschists have stolen from us. What a shame, this regime! And the injustices at the
"Pelle! Terminus they said, the Aragonese... And they restored the law."
Ours. They recognize their queens, the Aragonese.
Text 2
After so many misfortunes, my daughter, God finally shows favor: He has
resolved to bring us justice. The Aragonese, in their almost majority,
are revolted in our favor. They take back from our tyrants what they have taken from us.
They have taken. They break our chains, put an end to injustice and shame.
Aragon restores our laws, Aragon recognizes its queens.
Text 3
After so many troubles, finally the favorable sky
He has resolved, my daughter, to do us justice;
Our Aragon, for us almost entirely rebellious,
Take away from our tyrants what they have taken from us,
Break the shameful iron of their unjust chains,
Submits to our laws and acknowledges its queens.
Corneille, Don Sanche of Aragon, 1650.
Once, at Saint-Lazare, you know, people get off, and then you have to go
turn in place, so, you know, a bus doesn't turn like a
car... A taxi, it comes, it was going to park over there. It stops just at the edge
from me, like that.
Nadine and her mother are preparing the meal in the kitchen; dad is coming.
to arrive; he is sitting in an armchair reading the newspaper while smoking his pipe.
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3. The moon at its decline outlined its silhouette on the edge of the horizon.
sickle in the midst of these endless sowings of shining grains thrown to
handle in space.
A gun went silent, then another. Roman came out, a bit broken, the
left hand on the belly, a Colt at the end of the right arm. The rain that
fell to him, delayed the raisin on his face. It seemed to be pissing from
skull with big bumps.
I am sixty-nine years old and I cultivate one hundred and seventy hectares.
Every morning, I wake up at six o'clock. My companions come
eat and I heat the coffee. The boss gets up after, all
slowly. While my workers have lunch, I only take some
coffee and we talk about yesterday's work, where we are, what we're going to do
to do. When they know their work for the day, I will clean my two
cows.
If I still have two cows, it's because I don't want to be a farmer and
go get milk from the neighbor. I can't tell him: 'I have no more cows'
because it doesn't benefit me. Why would he sell me milk,
so?
Treating the cows gets me going. The boss comes to pull a few.
liters of milk for the house and then, I let the calves drink. All while
While doing my work, I hear the tractors starting up.
/IV/ Observe this text by Guy de Maupassant, chosen for its colloquial style:
Here’s the thing. I was hiding at the Eperon when something happened to us.
Go through the first bush on the left, at the end of the wall. Mailloche there.
let go of a hit, it falls. And we take off, considering the guards. I can't tell you that.
What is it, since I don't know... - Is it not a deer? - It might very well be,
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That or something else? A deer?... yes... Is it maybe bigger? Like
who would say a doe. Oh! I'm not saying it's a doe, since
I ignore it, but it can happen!
/V/ The synonyms below, grouped by series, belong either to the register
current (C), whether in familiar register (F), or in slang register (A), or in
sustained register (S). Classify them by placing a (X) in the relevant column.
C A F S
deteriorate
to damage
to break
farmer
farmer
simpleton
lover
lovers
flirt
dude
gigolo
to give birth
to give birth
to depot
praise
panegyric
dithyramb
apology
fear
fright
scare
chocolates
terror
duplicate
victim
turkey
gogo
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/VII/ Here is a list of words and expressions from the informal register. By helping you with a
dictionary, look for the maximum number of synonyms in everyday and formal registers
sustained. What do you notice? Which terms, which expressions seem to you the
richer in meaning?
to laugh, to mess up, to joke, to get lost, to do stupid things, to mess around, there is
{"a marre":"fed up","en avoir marre de":"to be fed up with","être branché":"to be cool/in the know","gagner sa croûte":"to earn a living","un pieu":"a stake"}
potassium
/VIII/ Here is a list of words and expressions from the formal and literary register. In
using a dictionary, find the maximum number of synonyms in the register
current. What do you observe? Which terms, which expressions seem to you the
richer in meaning?
Text 1
Nature unleashed itself once again yesterday in the north of
Philippines around Mount Pinatubo, which erupted seven days ago
after six centuries of inactivity. A tropical storm triggered some
torrential rains causing flows of mud and ashes, while
the volcano was intensifying its activity. The enormous mass of gray-black clouds,
covered in volcanic ash, cast an artificial night in the middle
afternoon until Maille, located 80 kilometers south. The traffic
air traffic was even interrupted due to potential breakdowns that
could cause the ash infiltrated in the aircraft engines.
(South-West Sunday, June 16, 2001)
Text 2
Finally we left, all piled together in unison; this year to make sure that everything
world benefits from the car and realizes that the father had one,
No one had been sent to the colony, to hell with greed.
Dad was driving like a pig; all the other drivers on the road
pointed it out to him, and I was scared every time he tried to
overtake a car; it was an old traction that we had, he said
that it was supposed to double everything.
Every time one of those excited people stuck their dirty face out of their hardware store.
To call him an asshole, his elder flushed; he was ashamed of his father;
and from the beginning he was furious because he had never been allowed
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touch the precious mechanism; it was a point on which the father did not
didn't give in.
Every twenty-five miles, Patrick asked to be allowed to take the wheel,
just a little, and the father replied firmly that no.
Damn, I would do at least as well as you, said Patrick, humiliated once.
Moreover, because the father had just been run over by a fifteen-ton truck.
(C. Rochefort, The Little Children of the Century)
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Familiar, popular, and slang words and expressions
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Bastard: dishonest.
Savate (a): someone who is soft, without personality.
Sucking strawberries: being old.
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Lesson 7
A pejorative term (from the Latin pejor = worse) is a word (or a...
expression) that contains a nuance of meaning that depreciates the person, the
choose or the designated action.
Conversely, an unméliorative (from the Latin melior = better) values what it
designates.
Pejoratives and melioratives are thus distinguished by their evaluative value.
"House" is a word of neutral value. The following correspond to this word:
pejorative words like: dilapidated house, shack, hovel;
- and uplifting words like: home, residence, palace.
Pejoratives and melioratives are therefore means of expression.
indispensable: they are used to make value judgments.
When someone says a singer is screeching, there is no need to add anymore.
of comment on his talent...The word itself is sufficient
pejorative.
Conversely, it is often enough, in the advertising field for example,
to qualify a product as new or natural, or already used, so that it
achieved success. These three words now have a significantly
improving.
It is clear that the choice of words is essential as it conveys our
judgment, our thoughts, our tastes, our feelings.
The formation of pejoratives and melioratives
[Link] words are most often derived from words of
neutral value to which a pejorative suffix is added. The main ones
pejorative suffixes are:
-ard: A laggard, a braggart, a reckless driver.
-asse: fadasse, tiédasse, rêvasser.
thin, scrawny
-âtre: greenish, pretty, stepmother.
2. It can also be the word that, by itself, gives a pejorative nuance.
or improving:
{"festin":"a feast is a sumptuous meal","cancre":"a dunce is a bad student"}
3. In some cases, a term can be a pejorative doublet:
Ex. 'Hommassepour' to characterize a woman; 'femmelette' to qualify
a man.
Many pejoratives are finally obtained by borrowing.
familiar or slang vocabulary. The change of language register
suffices to discredit the object or person designated.
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a car ["a Jew's harp","a hand drill","a car","a rattletrap"]
an old and bad car; a naive man a gogo (man)
gullible and naive, easy to deceive.
Conversely, the use of the formal register allows to highlight what
we name.
a drink a nectar; a group of buildings a residence
The degrees of appreciation
The melioratives express a positive value; the pejoratives express
a negative value.
Outstanding! Null!
But this opposition is not always so clear-cut. There are
numerous intermediate nuances. The difference in degree in value
Pejorative or ameliorative can depend:
of the person who expresses their judgment or feeling.
For example, a teacher may describe a paper as 'mediocre' and signify by
there that the duty is "average" (that is the etymological meaning). But, for a
Otherwise, the qualifier will take on the negative meaning of 'bad'.
b. of the time at which this judgment or sentiment is expressed
Until the 19th century, the word 'miserable' did not have the value
pejorative it has today; it designated one who is in misery, the
unlucky (like in the novel by Victor Hugo: Les Misérables).
It is therefore important to be precise in expressing pejorative nuances.
improving, and cautious in the interpretation of the various degrees of the
depreciation and valuation.
III The importance of context
It is sometimes difficult to know to what extent a word depreciates or
value an object or a person.
Indeed, the word can be neutral in itself, but take on a nuance.
pejorative or meliorative depending on its context.
For example, the words ambition or artist have, depending on the context of use,
a more or less positive value. The sentences: "He is a young man
full of ambition" or "He's an artist!" do not say whether the person who
the pronouncement is favorable or not to ambition, whether it despises or esteems
the artists. Only the context allows one to guess it.
This context can be:
1. the knowledge we have of the person who is speaking;
2. similar statements he has already made;
3. a comment that sheds light on his point of view, etc.
A l’oral, la nuance péjorative ou méliorative est plus facile à percevoir :
contempt or admiration will be expressed by intonation or the
mimics.
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Exercises
/I/ In this list, which words are clearly pejorative? Which ones are not?
do they become pejorative only in a certain context? Provide two sentences for each.
which highlight their dual value.
From the following words, what pejorative words can we form by suffixation?
These pejorative words have been formed by suffixation. By helping yourself with a
dictionary, investigate their origin and the word from which they have transformed.
["rascal","infantry","gum-chewer","libertine","drizzle","scoundrel"]
/V/ In the following text, replace the words in parentheses with the pejoratives that
agree
Our time judges the words on this list negatively. What euphemisms
Do we replace these words today? (A euphemism is a word that softens this)
that a reality is shocking.)
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["vulgar","mediocre","poor","simpleton","wicked","a gossip."]
These words, of neutral meaning when used out of any context, can
to be used as pejoratives. What do they then refer to.
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Lesson 8
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quickly forgotten and the word only entered the language in its meaning
figured.
In most cases, literal and figurative meanings coexist, each
applying to a specific field.
Frost: meteorological phenomenon;
the arms freeze: the halt of the arms race.
Generally, we are no longer aware of the shift from literal meaning.
in a figurative sense; we use the word sometimes in the literal sense, sometimes
in a figurative sense, depending on the context, as if there were two meanings altogether
makes different.
For example, this meat is tender; this mom is very tender with her children.
The existence of a literal meaning and a figurative meaning is a particular case of
the polysemy of a word.
The passage from literal meaning to figurative meaning
The most common cases of transition from literal to figurative meaning are:
the transition from concrete reality to abstract notion.
e.g. to don a coat = to put it on one's back, to wear it
to assume responsibility = to take it upon oneself, to bear it.
the transfer by analogy or resemblance.
Ex. teeth a) primary meaning: those of the jaw;
b) figurative meaning: those of the comb, the rake, etc.
the transfer by analogy between two sensations.
A tasty show, a dry tone.
At the origin of these figurative jobs, there is most often a metaphor,
that is to say an image that connects two realities together by
implicitly comparing.
In most cases, the figurative meaning is a metaphor that has passed into
the use and which is no longer perceived as an original creation.
However, the figurative meaning can sometimes be 'revived':
There are fresh perfumes like the flesh of children,
Sweet as the oboes, green as the prairies[...] (Baudelaire)
These verses suggest 'correspondences' between the different
sensations and give the adjectives that we have italicized a
great semantic wealth (that is to say a great wealth of
signification).
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Exercises
Give the current meaning of these figurative expressions and specify the fields they belong to.
were borrowed originally:
{"Crever l’abcès":"Break the boil","être aux abois":"be at bay","revenir à la charge":"come back to the charge","être dans le pétrin":"be in a bind"}
["to be at the end of one's rope","to bite the dust","to be faced with","to beat one's"]
full
In the strict sense and in the figurative sense, a word does not always belong to the same
level of language. Study this difference for the following verbs:
These words are used in the literal sense in scientific vocabulary and
["technique. Use them in a sentence where they have this meaning. Then in another."]
where they will take on a figurative meaning:
une aberration - une réaction - un cliché - une faille - les ressorts- une
entorse - une éclipse - caustique - obtus.
{"un éventail de":"a range of","un tissu de":"a fabric of","le fruit de":"the fruit of","la soif de":"the thirst for","la racine":"the root"}
["of ... - the climb of ... - a well of ... - the flower of ... - the field of ..."]
Ripe - light - erased - the heart - a gift - the radiance - the depth -
frapper - échouer
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VIII/ Provide as a complement to the verbs below
a name that will keep their true meaning;
a name that will give them a figurative meaning.
["insipid","biting","thorny","flowered","brilliant","boiling","dark"]
spicy
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/XI/ Identify in the following text all the figurative words and expressions:
At the doctor's
(Personnages : Marie-Jeanne - Le docteur)
Marie-Jeanne: Hello, doctor.
The doctor: Hello, miss. What are you complaining about?
Marie-Jeanne: You're welcome. I, on the other hand, am optimistic. I am also a journalist.
I come to conduct a survey. My newspaper asks me to ask you
What are the most common diseases that you treat? It's for
a statistic.
The doctor: It's very varied. Among so many patients who come to see me,
there are some with heavy hearts, others with empty bellies, others
their legs to their neck. Others burst or explode. Others
torn. There are some who are folded in four. There are others to whom we have
broken feet. Others have an enlarged spleen. Some no longer have a heart;
they are disgusted. Others have blood that no longer circulates; from the
mustard that has gone up their nose; to others, they have been turned around.
Many see red, or everything in black. Many are those who have a grim face.
of wood...or a headache; they need to be cut into four. There are the
maniacs who stretch everything to extremes. Many are on their knees.
when they are not heartbroken. others are still rotten and
corrupted. I can do nothing for those who are dead. There are the
puffed up without counting the untouchables. There are those who get out of bed with their foot
left, those who have an English foot, the feet in the dish, the feet of
Nose. I have patients who have a nose, others who do not have one. I take care of
people who are lazy or have their own agenda
head, or who lose it, who do not have their eyes in front of the holes. I have some
mental patients who have the giggles, vicious ones who lick boots,
who are overwhelmed, or who become upset, when they don't break
not their pipe. There are those who are cold-eyed and those who are all fire.
all flame. I also receive monsters, false brothers, people
who shed crocodile tears, or who have a wooden head, a heart of
ice, a heart of stone, eyes bigger than the belly, the heart on the
main, a language of the viper.
Marie-Jeanne: Are you also a veterinarian?
The doctor: Very little. One cannot cure donkeys and camels.
However, I care for the little rats of the Opera and the white geese.
Marie-Jeanne: Do you treat people with gout?
The doctor: It's their fault; they drink a drop every morning. I tell them
give drops.
Marie-Jeanne: And those who can't see a thing?
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The doctor: I give them transfusions because they don't have a drop of
sang in the veins; I give them cold blood, warm blood, it is
according to.
Marie-Jeanne: And what if there are no blood donors?
The doctor: We give them turnip blood.
Marie-Jeanne: Do transfusions become expensive for your patients?
The doctor: It only costs them an arm and a leg.
Eugène Ionesco, Exercises in French Conversation and Diction for American Students
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Heart
Against one's will: against one's desire, one's wish.
Heart friend: a friend chosen for emotional reasons and not for interest.
Learn, recite by heart: from memory.
To have the heart at work: to be enthusiastic about a job.
To have a heavy heart: to be sad.
To have the heart on the lips: to be completely sincere.
To have a heart on one's hand: to be sincere in actions.
Having one's heart in the throat: to be anxious.
To have heart trouble: to feel nauseous.
To have something on one's heart: to have resentment.
To your kind heart: a phrase used to ask for an act of generosity.
Heartbreaker: seducer.
Heart of marble, of stone: hard, insensitive character.
Golden heart: sweet, generous character; generous person.
To know someone by heart: to know them perfectly well.
From the heart: willingly, without being forced.
Tear the heart, pierce the heart: to make suffer.
Dinner (eat, supper) by heart: do not have dinner.
To be wholeheartedly with someone: to share one's emotions.
Lift the heart, raise the heart: to disgust, to sicken.
Open your heart: confide.
Heartless: hard, insensitive.
To tighten the heart: to make sad and anxious.
If your heart desires it: if you feel like it.
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Open your eyes: be very attentive.
Nose
At a glance: at first estimate, approximately.
To have a nose: to be perceptive, to be foresighted.
To have someone up one's nose: to hate them, to not be able to stand them.
It shows like a nose in the middle of the face: it's very
apparent.
Close the door in someone's face: to dismiss them.
Sticking one's nose everywhere: being curious.
Lead someone by the nose: Lead them as you wish.
Put your nose outside: go out.
Stick your nose, poke your nose into others' business.
Not to see further than the end of one's nose: to be narrow-minded.
To slip through someone's fingers: to escape from someone after seeming to be within their reach.
Nodding off: dropping one's head forward (while falling asleep).
To break one's nose at someone's door: to find a closed door, and fig. to experience a
failure.
To eat oneself, to bite one's nose (slang): to fight, to argue violently.
To bump into someone: to meet them suddenly;
Pulling the worms out of the nose: making someone talk, skillfully questioning.
Bras
To have a long arm: to have credit, influence.
Having a strong influence: having great authority, an inflexible will.
To have one foot in the pit, the grave: to be very old, moribund.
Give up: abandon the struggle, renounce action.
Cut off someone's arms and legs: take away their means of action, paralyze them.
of astonishment.
To be someone's right-hand man: to be his main execution agent
I'm flabbergasted: I am astonished.
Raise your arms: surrender.
To live only by one's arms: only from manual labor.
To receive someone with open arms: to welcome them eagerly.
Crossing your arms, staying with your arms crossed: doing nothing.
To fall asleep in the arms of the Lord: to die.
Extend the arm towards someone: implore their help.
To tender, to open one's arms to someone: to help them, to forgive them.
A big guy: a sturdy man.
Foot
Having one's hands tied: being reduced to powerlessness.
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Having a foot in the pit, the grave: to be very old or moribund.
It will teach you a lesson: it will be a good lesson for you, it will teach you.
to live.
To be on one's feet: to be standing, to be awake. "He is up by 5 o'clock" or "The
The sick person will be on their feet in a few days = he will be recovered.
To move heaven and earth: to do the impossible, to use all means.
He is as stupid as his feet: very stupid.
To step on someone's toes: to be disrespectful to them.
To put your foot in it: to address a delicate issue with frankness.
Establish a business, a company: set up, start an activity.
Not knowing which foot to dance on: being in indecision.
Land on one's feet: to pull oneself out of a difficult situation to one's advantage,
address or by chance.
Getting up on the left foot: to be in a bad mood.
Sang
To have a hot blood: to be irascible, impetuous.
To have blood in one's veins: to be courageous, resolute.
To have turnip blood: to be without vigor, cowardly.
To have blood on one's hands: to have caused blood to flow.
To have something in one's blood: to have it innately, by nature, by birth.
Blood cannot lie (proverb): Blood does not degenerate, the qualities of
parents (or ironically, the flaws) are found in children.
Beings of flesh and blood: very real, alive.
The voice of the blood: family instinct.
The blood tax: military service.
Set fire and blood: to ravage, to sack by burning, by massacring.
To make oneself bad blood: to worry, to be tormented while waiting.
Blood, sweat, and water: to make great efforts, to put in a lot of hard work.
To shed one's blood for the homeland: to give one's life.
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Lesson 9
Figures of style
1. The Allegory:
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a first denotative meaning, that is to say the direct and neutral meaning of the story
narrated, from the evoked scene;
- a second meaning, connoted, that is to say suggested by the first, but
mandatory because codified.
Example: if one knows that La Fontaine writes for the education of the Dauphin,
We will decode The Crow and the Fox:
Examples:
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Memory is represented as a ship that has traveled a lot on the
mers.
2. The Antiphrase :
Examples:
Alexandre Vialatte believes that society is functioning poorly. Money does not reward.
talent, just like honors, does not reward merit nor do positions
responsibility is not assigned to competent individuals.
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Beaumarchais criticizes censorship of religious origin and censorship of origin
politics. He criticizes the lack of press freedom, denounces the impossibility
to address certain topics or to talk about certain high-ranking individuals in the
social hierarchy
- To an ugly woman, a wicked one will cry: "Oh admirable Venus, the
"The pockets of your eyes attract my gaze."
3. The Antithesis:
We make two terms of opposite meaning coexist within the same context.
statement. The antithesis highlights a conflict that may be at the center of
the work. The opposition between two realities, two characters, two ideas,
two feelings are thus highlighted.
The antithesis can systematically oppose, two by two, the words, the
propositions, the sentences of a paragraph or a text.
The antithetical structure is inherent to the tale and melodramas.
(psychology of characters). It is common in presentations.
didactic, argumentative texts, the dissertation. In poetry, it renders
account of the great oppositions of the cosmos and human nature:
["life/death","summer/winter","day/night","youth/old age","etc."]
The language offers us several normative possibilities.
to express oppositions:
1. Antonyms. These pairs of opposites (allow/forbid,
known/unknown) express the opposition.
2. Circumstantial complements of opposition. Introduced by a
preposition, they are of an antithetical nature: Despite his fatigue, he is
distributed.
3. The circumstantial subordinate clauses of opposition.
conjunctions or phrases that introduce them are already bearing
of opposition: Even if it were true, I wouldn't believe it.
4. Opposition by coordination or juxtaposition. One chooses
segments or phrases with opposite meanings:
He speaks, but says nothing.
He is rich, eats sparingly, he is stingy.
Examples:
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Young man, you are cursed, we adore you, old man. (Hugo)
It is noteworthy that in these last two lines, each of the two phrases occupies a
they oppose term by term, in the same place
I adored him while he was alive and I mourn him now that he is dead. (P. Corneille)
Opposition between two states: life and death, and between two feelings: love and
sadness.
Opposition between two realities: presence and absence, and between two situations: the
leak and the meeting.
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all things, fool earthworm; depositor of the truth, cesspool
of uncertainty and error; glory and refuse of the universe. (Pascal, Thoughts)
In this text by Pascal, we observe the presence of antitheses by opposition.
["exclamations: what a monster, what.../what a marvel; some antonyms:"]
depository/sewer; glory/refuse. These antitheses highlight the condition
humane: man is a being and a place of contradiction.
One does not come into the world by being born (antithesis and paradox). One is born some
years later, when we become aware of being. I was born around
at the age of five, (antithesis and paradox) if I remember correctly. And to be born in
this age is being born too late, because at this age one already has a past (antithesis and
paradox), the soul has form. No sooner is a butterfly born than it tries its
wings.[…]
Alas! I was not a butterfly. I was a buffalo.
(R. Ducharme, The Swallower of Swallowed, Gallimard, 1966)
4. The Euphemism:
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Examples:
The servant with the big heart that you were jealous of.
And who sleeps his sleep under a humble lawn.
5. The grading:
Examples:
Here we exult; we burst forth; we intoxicate ourselves with all the senses. (Gide.)
Pierre was walking among these people, more lost, more separated from them,
more isolated, more drowned, in his tormenting thought, than if he had been thrown into the
the sea from a ship, a hundred leagues offshore. It brushed past them, hearing
without listening, a few phrases; and he saw, without looking, the men
talking to women and women smiling at men.
(Guy De Maupassant, Pierre and Jean, 1888.)
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Maupassant uses a progression of increasing intensity: separated/isolated/drowned.
expresses thus the immense solitude of the character cut off from others, whom he brushes by without
touch, that he hears without listening and sees without looking. Pierre does not enter into
communication with no one.
Diphile starts with a bird and ends with a thousand: its house is not one.
not brightened, but polluted. The courtyard, the room, the stairway, the vestibule, the
rooms, the cabinet, everything is an aviary; it is no longer a chirping, it is a
wake me up.[...] He finds his birds in his sleep: he himself is
bird. It is crested, it chirps, it perches; it dreams at night that it molts or
that he broods over it. (La Bruyère, The Characters)
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Besson tried to swallow the tomatoes and cut the chicken. But the
the food was hostile, it slipped on the plate, refusing to be chewed
you swallowed. The water flowed from the glass onto the chin, as if a prankster
had made a hole in the container.
The egg was slipping into the mayonnaise, and the chicken was moving. Everything was
repulsive, undercooked corpse, dead roots, taste of earth, and perhaps
even already of excrement. (J.M.G. Le Clézio, The Deluge, Gallimard, 1966.)
6. The Hyperbole:
Examples:
Strong as an ox.
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Never such a spiritual, touching face, never such freshness,
never so much grace nor more spirit, never so much cheerfulness and
of amusement, never a more seductive creature.
II)
7. Irony:
Examples:
To a shameless person who occupies a huge space, we will say: 'I do not you
Don't disturb too much?
In this famous text by Voltaire, the effects are indignation in the face of the...
war stupidity and the indifference of those in charge towards the massacred soldiers,
Irony is easily decoded, word for word: you must understand the antonym each time.
For example, beauty leads to ugliness, harmony to chaos, the best of worlds to the worst.
worlds, mischievous brave people. Agile, bright, orderly are the indicators
tragic events of the revolt of Voltaire.
8. The Litote :
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Examples:
Colin owed the day to a brave plowman who, after paying all his
taxes, did not find himself powerfully rich at the end of the year.
What was least admirable about him was being the most ...
better done and the most beautiful.
This boy is not foolish, and I do not like the maid who will have him.
Marivaux
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9. Metonymy:
Types of metonymy:
2. The sign for the signified thing (signifier/signified): the throne for
the royalty the king; the crown for royal power; the minaret for
the mosque
All the crowned heads of Europe were there.
A thousand white flags are suddenly raised, which attest not
of a surrender but of a victory.
3. The cause for the effect: reading Balzac {Balzac = the cause}for the novel
= the effect}
There is not a single shadow on this hill {shadow = the effect for the cause}
= tree}.
to live off the results of one's work {the money earned through working}.
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7. The body for the morale: It's someone who has a good nose.
The intuition). It's a man who has no heart (of kindness).
Examples:
I am the perfume
Living and deceased
In the wind that has come.
Examples:
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In the first two lines of Corneille, we have an opposition between
circumstantial of opposition and the main. Duty imposes itself against love, from where
these antitheses and this paradox of verses 3 and 4.
One does not come into being by being born (antithesis and paradox). One is born a few
years later, when one becomes aware of being. I was born around
the age of five, (antithesis and paradox) if I remember correctly. And to be born at
this age is being born too late, because at this age one already has a past (antithesis and
paradox), the soul has shape. As soon as a butterfly is born, it tries its
wings.[…]
Alas! I was not a butterfly. I was a buffalo.
(R. Ducharme, The Swallowing of Swallows, Gallimard, 1966)
Examples:
From the remains of our woods, autumn had strewn the earth.
The City of Light (Paris), the Eternal City (Rome), the Holy City
(Jerusalem), the Venice of the North (Amsterdam).
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The messenger of spring (the swallow).
13. Personification:
Examples:
In these verses, the storm is personified with the words rushes, big boots, tramples,
march. The storm becomes a kind of giant that tramples everything with purple boots.
What are lightning.
The poet's thoughts become women who go to the ball. The words indicate
this personification: dreamers, barefoot, go to a party.
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included in the felt set. Effect of recoil, distancing,
generalization.
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It's someone who is talked about in the newspapers. (in the media)
The meat of this animal is not tender.
A. The comparison:
resemblance to resemble similar to, like, as well as In, of, 'a nose
similarity to seem, similar to, More than, less than, on trumpet
in the form of, to seem, telephone as well as
sort of it looks like... analogous to
Examples:
The sky that had turned from blue to white had now turned from white to gray.
would have said a large slate.
- I loved the whole countryside, dotted with small woods and crossed by
streams that ran through the ground like veins, carrying blood
to the earth.
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The only somewhat warm testimony was the table in front of the window,
the narrow plateau, like a schoolboy's desk, was stained with spots
of ink and graffiti engraved by the tip of the pen.
(Didier Decoin, The Chambermaid of the Titanic, 1991, Ed. Du Seuil.)
Guy De Maupassant
This excerpt from Labiche contains an evaluative comparison that creates an effect
comic devaluation of the characters.
B. The metaphor:
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I bathed in the Poem of the sea (Arthur Rimbaud)
What is common between the poem and the sea is the bath,
the immensity, the dream, the journey.
Examples:
- The sky leans over the earth and does not recognize it. (Superville)
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surprising gap. Thus a second universe develops, often
wonderful or fantastic. These comparisons and metaphors
intervene in novelistic descriptions and poetry.
The evaluative function. Present in the strategy.
argumentative, they are means of valorization and
devaluation likely to provoke emotional reactions such as:
1. Amusement through caricature, notably zoomorphism
(man=animal);
2. Admiration through idealization (choice of a positive comparator);
3. Disparagement by exaggeration or mitigation (choice of a
negative comparison). These comparisons and metaphors occur
in advertising, political speeches, novel dialogues or
of theater.
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Exercises
In the following examples, distinguish between comparison and metaphor. In which cases
Can we talk about personification, allegory?
In each of the examples from exercise /I/, distinguish the compared and the
comparing. Indicate what effects their rapprochement produces.
III/ Explain the meaning of the following metaphors that have entered the language
current
{"un rat d’hôtel":"a hotel rat","une tête de turc":"a punching bag","un appétit d’oiseau":"a bird's appetite","un bouc émissaire":"a scapegoat"}
/IV/ In the following examples, distinguish between metonymy and synecdoche, and explain.
What logical link exists between the term used and the term replaced.
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In the following examples, distinguish between antitheses and paradoxes and study them.
the.
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Ah! Oh! I am hurt, I am punctured, I am perforated, I am administered,
I am buried.
/IX/ Exercise: Rewrite the following statements in the form of polite litotes:
/X/ Classez d’un côté les phrases qui comportent une comparaison, de l’autre celles
which contain a metaphor. Then develop the metaphors to transform them
in comparison:
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Listen to your clock, and tell yourself that there is every second two
mouths to feed.
Every second, 500 airplanes take off in the world.
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Lesson 10
The study of a text assumes knowledge of the literary genre to which it belongs.
belongs. It is clear that one cannot analyze in the same way a
page of a novel, an excerpt from a play or a poem. Each text refers
to a set of rules characteristic of a genre, even if sometimes it
deviates from these rules. Beyond the traditional major divisions between
novel, theater and poetry, one can go into detail and distinguish
different registers more or less codified to which the works
refer to: the comic, the pathetic, the tragic, the epic, etc. These
registers are not characteristic of the novel, theater, or poetry.
There are novels, tragic or comedic poems just as there are
tragedies or comedies in theater. The boundaries between genres
and the boundaries between the registers are therefore not insurmountable. On the contrary,
the blending of genres and the reference of a work to texts of
different traditions are common. However, it is essential to
master the vocabulary of this rhetoric of literary genres.
A. The narrator
To help the reader easily follow the plot, it's necessary to set the story in
the author/character system and choose a type of point of view (we
tell and describe from a certain point of view.
The one who tells the story is the narrator. According to the reports that he
interview with the author and the characters, four narrative situations
are possible:
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Situation 3 * Prevalence of the most general case:
The narrator is the author she. Lejepeut intervenes novels, tales,
for the reflections news, stories of
(= explicit narrator or personal experiences of the narrator. press.
present)
We distinguish:
1. The 'external' or 'objective' point of view
The narrator is external to the plot. He recounts and objectively describes this.
that he is supposed to see and hear, it is a mere eyewitness, who
does not interpret events and does not know the thoughts of
characters.
Example: A man burst out of Saint-Antoine street running, crossed the square,
toured the large enclosure of the July column, and slipped between the fences until
under the belly of the elephant. ([Link])
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to not be preferred. This jealousy, which came only from his vanity, made him think that he
loved Sémire passionately. (Voltaire)
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2- The historical narrative
The narrator wants to revive a more or less distant time and a
or several historical figures from that era. It must therefore evoke
faithfully the locations, the time, the costumes, the actions of the characters.
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When the description is attached to two different moments, at the same
space or the same character, it allows one to measure the evolution.
3-when the object or being described is seen through the gaze of a
character, the latter often gives the description a character
subjective: the description then translates the feelings or judgments of
this character. In such a case, we speak of expressive description,
especially since the descriptor uses figures of speech (comparisons,
metaphors...) that express his state of mind.
The description finally allows for the dissemination of knowledge or information.
that the novelist acquired during field investigations or readings.
It is the informative function.
The aspect
The eyes The hair The mouth physical The character
general
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globular, frizzy, curly sewn weak coward
prominent, who twilight, rare sassy skinny, hypocrite, cunning
coming out of the head, sparse, incredulous... whiny, mean
haggard, burning, silky, fine lips filiform mischievous,
flamboyant, soft, woolly earrings, skeleton, no honest, upright
mobiles vigorous fines, minces, only having faithful, loyal,
mischievous, abundant thick, the skin on the sincere, upright,
sly, thick, dense, fleshy, os, fuselage, proud, modest
directs, rounds, flat, smooth, gourmands slender, generous legs
laughing, frank, dishes, tousled... endless proud,
fleeing, muscular arms pretentious
sad... ... vain...
Simple past and narrative present Imperfect for actions that last
who better restores life. Or do they repeat themselves for the descriptions?
Text
Comment
A moment, the shells of the Prussians, It is always possible to report to the
better led, caused confusion. presents past events. That's what we
It stumbles over two boxes that call the historical present. It is a means of
burst, killed, injured make the event closer and therefore more
many people. The drivers of striking. The process is particularly remarkable
chariots hastily pulling away from when he intervenes abruptly, like in the
the explosion, a few battalions text below, in a narrative in the past. Here, the
seemed to begin to become troubled. The presents see, shape and make are presents
misfortune wanted it again at that moment event for life, shape, fit.
a bullet killed the horse The imperfect presents facts as spreading out.
from Kellermann and throw it on the ground. Heof a duration more or less long on the axis of
remount another one with a lot time. It often marks the duration or the
with calmness, strengthen the lines repetition: "some battalions seemed
floating. start to become troubled.
It was time. The Prussians, leaving The simple past presents the facts outside of any
the cavalry in battle to support consideration of duration. Two privileged moments
the infantry formed it into three of an action calling for the simple past: the moment
columns, that marched towards the plateau where something begins to be and the moment
from Valmy (around eleven o'clock). where something leads "the shells fell from the
Kellermann forces movement, shape confusion. Ilstombèrentsur deux caissons qui
also three columns opposite and tell burst, killed, injured many of
across the board: 'Do not pull, but world
wait, and receive them with the bayonet.
He wants a moment of silence.
(Michelet)
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The dramatic genre
The dramatic genre (from Greek: drama = action) brings together all the
forms of writing and theatrical representation. The text of the play
consists of two distinct parts:
Stage directions: a set of theatrical indications concerning the
sets, the era, the costumes, the objects, the gestures of the actor, the
intonations of his voice and sometimes the lighting and sound illustration;
The text that the actors must pronounce.
In this text, the line, that is to say each element of the dialogue
that an actor must say, perhaps more or less long.
When a reply is long, we talk about a tirade.
A monologue is a line that a character says to themselves and that only the
the spectator is supposed to hear.
A monologue is a line by a character alone on stage.
addresses himself (or addresses the public).
In the sequence of lines, the interruption marks
the incompleteness of a replica (the interruption can be deliberate or
Subie).
In the overall structure of a play, one will distinguish:
the action: a set of events and acts that lead to the
achievement of one or more objectives;
the plot: a set of incidents and combinations
imagined by the characters, who advance the action or sometimes the
retardant
the situation: state of relations between the characters (or the forces)
acting) of the play, at a certain moment of the action;
the misunderstanding: a situation that results from a mistake (which can relate to
the identity of a character
the twist: brutal reversal of the situation;
the dramatic knot: the set of relationships between the characters and
circumstances that lead the action to its climax;
l’exposition: présentation (souvent au premier acte) du nœud dramatique,
of the main characters and events that prepared the action;
the outcome: completion and resolution of the action.
Note: The action is generally divided into acts, into scenes (one changes)
scene when a character enters or exits) or tables (we switch to
tableau by changing scenery, what machines constantly
improved have made it easier.
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/III/ The registers
1- The comic
A vision of reality expressed through laughter, comedy has forms.
varied.
Irony consists in mocking by implying the opposite of what one intends.
it.
Humor reveals the comedic aspects of situations or characters.
serious.
parody resides in an imitation that evokes laughter.
the caricature consists of exaggerating beings, things, and situations in
the aim is to make laugh.
In the theatrical field more specifically, we distinguish:
the comedy of situations, for example, when an actor finds himself
locked in a closet;
the comic of characters, for example, the jovial comedy of the
characters of Gaouar Al Tocheh and Hosni Al Borazan in the
comedies by Doureid Laham.
the comic gestures, for example, the gestures of a clown;
verbal comedy (wordplay), for example, puns,
puns, frequent curses in the comedies of Adel Imam.
2- The pathetic and the tragic
The pathetic expresses feelings carried to the highest degree of
passion in order to move the reader or the viewer. One can say that the
The spectacle of suffering is pathetic.
The tragic is the feeling of man who becomes aware of forces
social, moral, and political factors that dominate and often crush him.
Thus, the consciousness of the death row inmate is a tragic consciousness.
3- Lyricism
Lyricism is, originally, the song that the poet accompanies with his
lyre (musical instrument among the Greeks).
Today, we call lyricism the expression of personal feelings.
The Epic
The term epic comes from the Greek word 'epos', in the primary sense 'words celebrating'
the exploits (often military) of a hero.
The epic style is essentially characterized by:
amplification, that is to say the enlargement of beings and things, the
recourse to the marvelous, to the supernatural.
simplification, that is to say the organization of the narrative around symbols
which represent the collective values of a society.
5- Didactics
We are talking about didactic discourse when its purpose is to instruct.
didactic genre, initially moral and practical, is now focused on
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domain of science or everyday life. For example, the notice or
the user manual of an electrical device is written in a style
didactic
The didactic style makes use of specialized vocabulary, with an organization of
the sentence, an overall composition marked by logical rigor,
the use of phrases expressing advice, an order.
6- Oratory eloquence
Rhetorical eloquence characterizes the speech whose purpose is to
convince through speech. It is the politician's discourse to the
tribune of an assembly, the speech of the lawyer defending his client.
Speech that addresses both reason and heart, and which, by
consequently, implements the means to strike its audience
frequent use of apostrophe, metaphor, and hyperbole,
rhythmic amplification of the phrase in 'oratory period', etc.
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Exercises
Of what kind of stories are the following sentences extracted:
It was six eighteen when the fire broke out.
We went out to dinner last night at a lovely place.
3. The passion for glory, for war, and for revenge,
prevented him from being a good politician.
4. After 1,000 years and more of war, the wolves made peace with the
ewe.
5. The emperor's son was getting married and there were festivities.
general.
Two roosters lived in peace: a hen came
And there you have the war ignited.
The characters in the following fable are animals: determine their role.
A fox slipped among the sheep and took one of the lambs.
dodus, but seeing a dog coming, he pretended to pet
the lamb.
What are you doing here with that lamb? Asked the dog.
I cuddle him, and I play with him, replied the other.
Let it go right now, and leave, or I will give you dog cuddles.
To the attention of the clumsy deceivers! (Aesop, The Fox and the Dog)
coming back from running errands, two little girls, Delphine and Marinette,
they meet a blind dog and decide to take him with them.
As they all three got up, the little ones saw, on the road, a
bandit from the area, who made a living by watching out for children in
commission to take their baskets from them.
It's him, says Marinette, it's the man who takes the commissions.
Don't be afraid, said the dog, I am going to make a face that will take away his...
the desire to come look in your basket.
The man was walking quickly and was already rubbing his hands, thinking.
to the provisions that inflated the basket of the small ones, but when he saw the
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the dog's head, and when he heard it growl, he stopped rubbing his hands. He
he crossed to the other side of the path and greeted by lifting his hat. The
the little ones had a hard time not laughing in his face.
You see, said the dog when the man had disappeared, I may be
Blind, I can still be useful.
The Tales of the Perched Cat
Are they strange, these memories that haunt you without one being able to
undo them?
That one is so old, so old that I can't understand how he is
remained so vivid and so tenacious in my mind. I have seen so many things since then.
disasters, moving or terrible, that I am surprised to be unable, a single
day, without the figure of Mother Tinkerbell being traced before my
eyes, as I knew her, a long time ago, when I was
ten or twelve years.
There was an old seamstress who came once a week, every
mardis, raccommoder le linge chez mes parents. (Maupassant, Tinkerbell)
Then a beauty appeared in the living room, which caught the eyes of everyone.
world, and one must believe that it was a perfect beauty, since it
a woman of admiration in a place where we were so accustomed to seeing
beautiful people. She was from the same household as Madame de Chartres
and one of the greatest heiresses of France. Her father had died young, and
had left her under the guidance of Madame de Chartres, his wife, whose
Well, virtue and merit were extraordinary.
Mrs. de La Fayette, The Princess of Clèves
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Julien turned sharply, and struck by the gaze so filled with grace of
Madame de Rênal, he forgot part of his shyness. Soon, surprised by
In her beauty, he forgot everything, even what he had come to do.
The Red and the Black
3. We were in the Study when the Principal entered, followed by a new one.
dressed in bourgeois style and a schoolboy who carried a large desk.
Those who were sleeping awoke, and each rose as if surprised in
his work...
Staying in the corner, behind the door, so that we could barely see him, the
He was a country guy, about fifteen years old,
and taller than any of us. He had short hair
right on the front, like a village chanter, with a reasonable and strong air
embarrassed. Although he was not broad-shouldered, his jacket coat of
green coat with black buttons must have bothered him at the seams...
Gustave Flaubert, Madame Bovary
/VII/ Texts
Christophe's uncle
He is small, thin, frail, and a bit hunched. One does not know his exact age. He does not
should not have passed forty; but he seems to be fifty years old and
more.
He has a small wrinkled figure, rosy, with nice very pale eyes like
slightly wilted myosotis.
When he takes off his cap, he shows a little bare skull, pink and
conical shape, which brings joy to Christophe and his brothers.
He is a small street vendor; he goes from village to village, carrying on his
you have a big ballot, where there is everything...
Several times, attempts were made to fix him somewhere, to buy him a little
funds, a bazaar, a haberdashery. But he cannot do it: one night he
Get up, put the key under the door and leave with his bundle.
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We go months without seeing him. Then he reappears: one evening, we hear scratching.
at the entrance; the door creaks open, and the small bald head, politely
discovery shows itself with its good eyes and shy smile.
He says: "Good evening to all the company," takes care to wipe his shoes.
before entering, greet everyone, starting with the eldest, and go
sit in the most modest corner of the room. There, he lights his pipe
and he lowers his back...
Christophe loves his uncle because there is always something good.
to expect from him: a treat, an image, a fun invention.
The return of the little man is a joy for the children, as he brings them
always some surprise. However poor he may be, he finds a way to bring
a memento for everyone; and he does not forget anyone's celebration in the family...
(Jean Christophe, Mrs. Hélier-Mallaurie)
Questions
Distinguish the point of view adopted in the narrative.
2. Identify the details that allow for a physical depiction of the uncle.
3. What was the uncle's profession and how did he move around?
4. Among these adjectives, which ones can describe the uncle:
["good","severe","tall","shy","kind","rude","unpredictable","modest","generous"]
What is the value of the present indicative used throughout the text?
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Lesson 11
Reported speech
b. Time transformations:
In a narrative in the past tense, the tenses of direct speech are subject to the
transformations from direct speech to indirect speech:
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Past participle Past perfect
Simple past Simple past or past perfect
Future Present conditional
Future perfect Past conditional
Conditional Conditional
Imperative Infinitive or verb
of obligation + infinitive/subjunctive
The adverbs that indicate time and, to a lesser degree, those that
indicating that the place also changes, from direct speech to reported speech
indirect
"We will come back here in a few years," he said.
He said they would return to the same place a few years later.
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I am forced to take it badly, that he take medication.
medications. had a headache
morning and that he was obliged
to take some
medications.
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Exercises
/I/ Transpose the following sentences from direct speech to indirect speech:
A.
The teacher tells the students: 'the exam will take place on May 25.'
The employee replies to the traveler: "I can reserve a seat for you on
the flight on Saturday.
3. The two tourists explain to the police officer: 'We...'
we took the wrong direction and we don't know how to get back to
the hotel.
B.
The child kept saying, 'I don't want to go to school.'
I dialed the wrong number. A recorded voice said: "There is}
No subscriber at the number you are requesting.
6. The Dumas replied to us: 'We thank you for your
invitation and we are pleased to accept to come for dinner on Saturday evening.
My brother told me on the phone: 'I will come to pick you up at the airport.'
The expert stated: "This painting is a fake."
/II/ Transpose the following sentences from direct speech to reported speech.
Model:
Today, the weather is nice, we went to Versailles.
That day, the weather was nice, we went to Versailles.
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C.1. It was nice today, but will it be nice tomorrow?
This year has been excellent; will next year be as well?
This month, I haven't worked much: next month, it will
need to make up for lost time.
We already had dinner at this restaurant last week.
Last year, I traveled a lot.
I wrote to my parents last Thursday.
/III/ Transform the following sentences from direct speech to indirect speech:
Model:
The teacher tells the students: "Get out!"
The teacher tells the students to go out.
The seller told the customer: "Read the instructions before you use it.
of the instrument.
The police officer ordered the driver: 'Do not park your '
car here!
My father recommended me well: "Don't drive too fast and
Call me as soon as you arrive!
4. The park keeper told the children: "Don't play ball on the
lawn!
5. The librarian asked the student: "Don't forget to return
the books next Wednesday!
/IV/ Put these sentences into indirect speech by varying the situations and the verbs.
introducers (these verbs will be in the past):
Model:
Take the bus instead!
The Parisian advised the tourist to take the bus instead.
/V/ In the following text, distinguish between the speech (dialogue) and the narrative (passages)
narrative or descriptive). Study the verb tenses in the speech and in the narrative.
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Sitting on the terrace, Jacques and Julien were reading the newspaper in silence.
the day was beginning to decline. On the path, at the bottom of the valley, a
man was walking slowly, with a steady and heavy step.
Anne brought glasses, bottles of syrup, and ice cubes. Julien
fill the three glasses.
Tomorrow morning, he declared, we will have to leave very early.
What time, she asked.
By five o'clock at the latest.
Hello!
Is it too early for you?
She burst out laughing:
But no! It will be wonderful to see the sunrise!
On the path, the man continued to walk at his steady pace.
Anne looks at him for a moment.
It looks like he's coming this way, she said.
I don't think so, replied Julien.
One day, during the holidays, my mother went on strike. She had told us...
already said several times: "One day, I will go on strike!", but that day she
declared "I won't touch a rag, not a pot anymore!" and she
he explained to us: "since you do not know what the division means
work, you will manage on your own: you will go grocery shopping,
will organize the menus, prepare the meals, do the housework, etc.; she
we announced at the same time: "this afternoon, I am going out with a friend, I
I will probably come back after dinner.
"Is she really going to do it?" my father asked, concerned about her.
new responsibilities.
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He asks me: "Did Ahmed arrive late?"
3. He asks me: 'Will Ahmed come tomorrow?'
He asks me: "Is Ahmed coming tonight?"
He asks me: "Did Ahmed just leave?"
He asks me: 'Is Ahmed studying his lessons?'
/XII/ The following sentences are written in free indirect speech. Transform them to
indirect speech by adding an introductory verb (SAY - SCREAM - ASK -
ASK - EXPLAIN - ADD.
1. When he was told that he was going to spend his vacation by the
the child jumped for joy: he was going to see the sea!
The days went by, empty and monotonous, without the slightest
distraction; was he going to live like this, without purpose and without hope?
He apologized for not accompanying his friends to the restaurant: he was at the
diet and could not afford any excess.
He refused to leave: we had plenty of time, it was only ten o'clock.
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She didn't feel like going out: what need did he have to spend the nights
Outside? With a good book, we felt at home!
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Lesson 12
Logic of Discourse
Elements of argumentation analysis
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the introduction where the thesis that will be developed appears,
problems it poses, the directions the demonstration will take;
the conclusion that brings together the arguments by summarizing them and makes it
update on the developed reflection.
Between these two poles (starting point and finishing point), take
the development where the arguments are exposed. It is the place of
the discussion, of the progression of thought.
In the course of development, the transition allows for moving from a
argument to the other, to go through the stages of the demonstration. She
restate the idea already presented and introduce the next one.
In general, the layout of a text in paragraphs highlights its
composition.
/III/ The logical links
A. Grammatical Marks
In an argumentation, ideas are connected to one another by
logical relationships expressed through grammatical tools
like:
["adverbs or adverbial phrases: then, however, by"]
consequently...
- the coordinating conjunctions: but, or, therefore...
- les conjonctions de subordination :bien que, comme si, pour que, de
provided that, since, while, although, on the condition that, unless...
B.A written, punctuation - the comma, the semicolon, the period, the
two points, parentheses, quotation marks, dashes, periods of
suspension, the question mark, the exclamation mark - assures, she
also, the articulation of a text, by strengthening the logical links between the
phrases, propositions and groups of words.
The comma can be used to separate different elements of the
she pauses without lowering her voice.
The comma allows, within a group, not to repeat the
coordinating conjunction. The latter only appears with the last
coordinated word:
The father, the mother, and the child had disappeared.
Subject group
He ate the candies, the cakes, and the chocolates.
COD group
Inside a sentence, the comma allows for the insertion, particularly between
the subject and the verb, elements that provide information about the
subject. It then indicates that the verb will appear as soon as the explanation
regarding the subject will be completed:
The man, tired from his long walk, finally sat down.
subject information on the subject verb
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The comma allows separating clauses by indicating that the
events that they evoke occur one after another (in
chronological succession) or at the same time:
I see him, I run, he turns around and recognizes me.
chronological
I was arriving, they were leaving. (at the same time)
The comma can indicate that the two clauses are linked by a
logical relation (cause, condition, etc.):
I scold him, he starts to cry (= he cries because I scold him).
If you hit me, I will tell my father.
father).
In the case of highlighting by displacement of an element of the
, the comma indicates the detachment of this element:
The child was calling his father from the other side of the street.
At the other end of the street, the child was calling his father.
This is also the case when a pronoun is emphasized:
I would never have accepted such a thing.
The semicolon separates two propositions. It indicates that one
take a pause a little longer than with a comma, without for
as much as the voice completely fades between the two separated elements.
Most often, the two statements have a relationship with each other.
logic:
He worked incredibly hard; he absolutely wanted to succeed in his exam.
(he worked extremely hard because he wanted to pass his exam).
The period indicates the end of a sentence. It marks a descent.
complete the voice and an important pause before the voice rises again
for another sentence:
- Marc sat on the café terrace. People were passing by on the boulevard.
without rushing. In the sky, the first stars began to shine.
Most often we use a period when expressing a new idea.
which does not have a close relation to that expressed in the sentence
previous.
When, in a text, one really wants to indicate that one is changing
theme, we put a period and go to the next line. We start a new
paragraph.
The period is also placed after every word written in abbreviation: P.T.T. (Post Offices,
Telegraphs, Telephones.
Colon allows:
1. to indicate what elements make up a set: The cities the
The most important cities in France are: Paris, Marseille, Lyon, etc.
to quote or to report someone's words: He turned around and said:
Did you call me?
3. to express an explanation:
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Sometimes we heard strange noises: it was the wind that
was lifting the tiles.
the parenthesis integrates an additional detail to the argument:
He stepped forward and said (and besides, everyone suspected it) that he was going to
leave permanently.
- But what is this? (it was her favorite expression),
he repeated it non-stop.
Quotation marks enclose a sentence or a group of words that
do not belong to the one who writes but are borrowed from someone
other.
He turned to me: 'Do you have something to say?'
Notes: When quoting one or more sentences from an author at
with the help of quotation marks, we must ensure to faithfully respect what
the author wrote. If one removes a part of the quoted sentence, one
it will indicate it with ellipses enclosed in brackets: [...] If
when a word or a group of words is highlighted, it will be noted at the bottom of the page.
by the formula: highlighted by our care.
When one uses a word in a sense that is not its usual meaning,
when we want to give a word a particular nuance, we put it
in quotation marks. This is also the case when using a foreign word.
Dashes enclose a phrase or a segment of a phrase, they play
a role similar to parentheses:
He looks at me, hesitates - cruel dilemma - and turns away without a word.
In a dialogue, the dash is used to indicate a change of speaker:
Are you coming?
Yes, I will arrive in five minutes.
But what do you still have to do?
Ellipses occur in a list that
one does not want to extend. They then have a meaning similar to etc.:
Of course, the whole family was there: the father, the mother, the brothers, the
sisters...
They also intervene when the one who speaks or writes wants to imply.
a continuation, a comment, a conclusion, etc. understandable for
the one who listens to it or reads it:
Don't worry, he understood very well...
We went to Paris: it rained a lot...
The question mark is placed at the end of a sentence.
interrogative. It is only used with direct questioning:
Did you tell him to come have dinner with us? (direct question.)
Do you know your lesson? (direct question)
I wonder if he has gone.
I didn't know if I should believe him.
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The exclamation mark is placed at the end of a sentence in which
the one who speaks or writes expresses an order, a wish, surprise,
exasperation, admiration, etc.
Come here now!
Enough lies and flattery!
So it was you!
- What! You would weep for me dying for my country! (Corneille)
C. The main logical relations in argumentation
.The concession expressed by: although, no doubt, certainly, even though,
although, etc. The author notes that there are facts or arguments that
oppose his thesis, but he maintains his opinion and continues his
reasoning.
We live in the countryside. Obviously, it’s tiring for my
Mary who has to make the drive every day to go to her
work, but the children are so happy here!
The opposition expressed by: but, on the contrary, on the other hand,
while, whereas, nevertheless, yet, however, etc. It allows for
confront two facts or two arguments by highlighting their differences.
Maupassant often had lunch at the Eiffel Tower restaurant, which
yet he did not like it: it is, he said, the only place in Paris where I do not
you don't see. Indeed, in Paris, you have to take infinite precautions to not
not seeing the tower; regardless of the season, through the mists, the half-
days, the clouds, the rain, in the sun, wherever you may be,
whatever the landscape of roofs, domes, or foliage that you
separate from her, the Tower is there.
(Roland Barthes)
.The cause expressed by: because, indeed, given that, thus, because
that, on the pretext that, since, given that, etc. The author presents the origin
of a phenomenon, the explanation that is generally given or that it
give himself to the questions asked.
He feels isolated because he doesn't speak the language well enough.
of the country.
We cannot predict anything since we do not know the dates of the holidays.
.The consequence expressed by: therefore, that is why, consequently, of
["there","from","in such a way that","so that","etc."]
The work was becoming too burdensome for him. Thus he was forced to
retire early.
The financial situation of the company has become catastrophic. Hence
the set of measures taken by management to save her.
The addition or the gradation expressed by: and, furthermore, in addition,
above all, first, then, finally, besides that, etc. A new argument is
added to the previous one(s).
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A breath, a shadow, nothing, everything gave her fever.
fountain
D. The implicit links
It happens that the logical connections of thought are not
expressed by grammatical tools.
The logical link is then implied. It is up to the listener or the reader to
to suplly for this absence, which can be easy in some cases:
because the succession of sentences or paragraphs assumes
necessarily such a relationship between them;
because the author's point of view, expressed earlier,
logically leads to such deductions;
because the knowledge that we have of the theses addressed,
the author who defends them, of the school of thought he represents, establishes
an intellectual complicity between the speaker and the listener.
Education is not limited to childhood and adolescence.
Education is not limited to school. [...] Throughout life, our environment
is our educator, an educator who is both strict and dangerous. (P. Valéry)
/IV/ The vocabulary: substitutes
To avoid repeating the same expressions from one sentence to another,
when we revisit the previous theme or statements, we can use:
a. Personal or demonstrative pronouns (he, it, this one) or
possessive determiners (his, her).
b. Synonyms: either absolute (city and town), or adding a nuance
different (house and residence).
c. General meaning substitutes: they include the term that one does not want
do not repeat. Ex.:
England = this nation / the rose = this flower / the words England and
rose consists of subsets of the words nation and flower.
d. Periphrases:
they are neutral: they are simply a synonym for the first term.
The French = the citizens in France.
They are descriptive: they add certain information to reality.
designated.
France = the hexagon.
* be appreciative: they express the judgment of the speaker on the
designated reality.
Ex. Victor Hugo = the great writer.
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Exercises
/I/ Logical links can be expressed either by syntax (subordination,
coordination or juxtaposition of two sentences) either by vocabulary (this fact
Identify in the following sentences the terms that highlight relationships.
logics between facts, and explain the nature of the link:
Bad harvest and unsold goods had the same effect: purchasing power
the masses were decreasing.
2. However urgent it may be, this measure can wait two days.
If you give alms so that you can be seen and praised, your
charity is vain.
The matter of our future is too serious for us to take it lightly.
light.
Our mother loves us so much that she would sacrifice her happiness for us.
ours.
You will achieve success, provided that you work hard and that you
you were persevering.
If poverty is the mother of crimes, the lack of spirit is the father.
8. A storm having broken out, we had to delay our departure.
9. Since we plead and we die, and we become ill,
Doctors are needed, lawyers are needed. (La Fontaine)
10. Flee from bad companions: they would lead you to evil.
11. Let wealth be seductive: it is nonetheless powerless to
make us happy.
He is a student who lives in an unstable family environment, which
explain his poor results.
13. Our teacher never raises his voice, yet he is obeyed.
14. It's better not to use this word: it is vulgar.
15. This information contradicts itself; it is utterly incomprehensible.
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one of all the TVs and all the newspapers in the world, and
will impress more than a serious study on violence.
(Jean Fourastié, Economy and Society)
Reflecting on the usefulness of machines for human beings, Lanza del Vasto
Critique several arguments of proponents of mechanization. The 1st list presents the
arguments of his opponents, the 2nd list presents the objections of Lanza del Vasto.
You will associate each argument with the appropriate refutation.
2nd list: 1. It should not be surprising that the said peoples experience it.
each other an unprecedented irritation. It is enough that I am
to come into contact with someone against my will or against his so that I start to hate
this certain one, and him me. Perhaps it is regrettable, but it is human.
2. How is it that in countries where machines
reign, we only meet hurried people who never have the time
. While in those where man does everything by hand, he finds the
time to do everything and time moreover, as much as he wants, to do nothing
to do.
How is it that where they reign, there also reigns,
in such a well-hidden neighborhood, the most atrocious and strange misery?
(...) Overproduction and unemployment have logically accompanied the
progress of machines as long as we haven't gone to war or found a hole
to throw in the excess.
4. Why is everyone so busy where they are?
reign, tied to thankless, fragmented tasks, hastened by the
movement of machines to tasks that wear out man, constrain him,
they frighten and bore them? (according to Lanza del Vasto, The Pilgrimage to the Sources)
IV. Observe these texts. Identify the thesis and summarize it. Provide the number and study it.
the value of arguments. Highlight the place and role of examples.
Let's first try to understand why the child feels the need
to waste. First reason: simply because he is a child;
that is to say curious about everything, having a need to multiply attempts and
experiences to know 'how it is made'; because, like everyone
the children, he is scatterbrained; because he lets himself be carried away by his
impulsions.
Another reason: the example of the adult. We know the bitter remarks of
the garbage collector: "If you only knew what I find in the trash!"
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people throw away what burdens them or what they no longer like, and which
could still be useful. (E. Grigny, Weekly Life, 1978)
You know it, but you may not have meditated enough on how
Is the modern era speaking? Our cities are covered with
gigantic writings. The night itself is filled with words of fire. From the
In the morning, countless printed sheets are in the hands of passersby,
travelers on trains and lazy people in their beds. It is enough to
turn a knob in his room to hear the voices of the world.
As for books, they have never been published in such quantities. They have never been read so much.
or rather so traveled! Paul Valéry
3. Look at the busy people running in the streets. They do not look at
neither right nor left, looking concerned, eyes fixed on the ground, like some
dogs. They rush straight ahead, but always without looking in front of them, because
They make the route, known in advance, mechanically.
Dans toutes les grandes villes du monde, c’est pareil. L’homme moderne,
universal, it is the hurried man, he has no time, he is a prisoner of the
necessity, he does not understand that something may not be useful; he does not
doesn't understand either that, in the end, it is the useful that can be a
unnecessary, overwhelming weight. Eugène Ionesco
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Leçon 13
The sounds
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b. Alliteration is the repetition of the same sound - consonant,
example, t and d or from the same group of consonants. Let's identify
alliteration in v in this stanza by G. Apollinaire:
My beautiful ship, oh my memory
Have we sailed enough
In a bad wave to drink
Have we navigated enough
From the beautiful dawn to the sad evening.
and in m in this stanza by P. Verlaine:
I often have this strange and penetrating dream
From an unknown woman, whom I love, and who loves me.
And who is not, each time, quite the same
Neither completely another, and loves me and understands me.
The study of sounds in a text in verse or prose can follow the steps
following:
[Link] the text carefully to identify the assonances and the
main alliterations.
[Link] the words with the same phonemes.
c. Study the semantic relationships that exist between these words. The words thus
Sounds that are related sometimes belong to the same lexical field.
For example, the words: sail, ship, vessel, all contain three
the phoneme [v] belongs to the lexical field of navigation.
But, often, the words that normally have no relation in meaning,
can be grouped by the phonemes they have in common.
Ex. :
And the sea and love have bitterness to share,
And the sea is bitter, and love is bitter,
One can drown in love just as in the sea,
To love and to be in love are not without storms. (Marbeuf)
To study, if necessary, the suggestive value of certain phonemes.
Ex. :
I had fallen asleep at night near the shore.
A cold wind woke me, I came out of my dream,
I opened my eyes, I saw the morning star. (V. Hugo)
In these three verses, the alliteration in v and f evokes the breath of the wind
who awakens the poet.
The study of rhymes
Rhyme is a particular case of sound echo. It is one of the
characteristic elements of regular poetry, but it is also
often present in free verse.
Assonance et rime
Assonance: identity of the stressed final vowel, that is to say strongly
pronounced, but not the phonemes that follow it.
Ex. : fille / ami- rude / brut.
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Rhyme: phonetic identity of the stressed final vowel and the
phonemes that may possibly follow it.
shore/ storm - love/ always.
Quality of the rhyme
A hierarchy can be established based on the number of common phonemes.
which are in the final of the two considered verses.
Studying rhymes means observing their arrangement but also analyzing the
the relationship of meaning that exists between rhyming words. Sometimes this relationship is
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simple (the rhyming words are neighbors in meaning or on the contrary
they oppose each other), but it can be more complex.
Ex. : Jealous moments, can it be that these moments of drunkenness,
Where love pours happiness on us in long streams,
They fly away from us at the same speed
What about the days of misfortune? (Lamartine)
In this example, the words 'intoxication' and 'speed' are associated by the
rhyme and by sense. On the other hand, the words "happiness" and "misfortune"
associated by rhyme, are opposite in meaning.
We talk about internal rhyme when a word is placed inside a verse
rhymes with the words placed at the end of the line.
The stanza is a set of verses corresponding to a type of rhyme.
complete: aabb, abbaouabab.
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Lesson 14
Rules of accentuation
When a word ends with a syllable that has a silent 'e',
the stress is placed on the penultimate syllable. These words are called
words with feminine endings.
storm, tempest
In other cases, the tonic accent falls on the last syllable.
Words are called masculine ending words.
["garden","house"]
The rhythm is the return of the tonic accents that create the rhythm: we them
stress on the last syllable of a word or a group of words that forms
a grammatical unit.
Just heaven! All my blood freezes in my veins.
This verse by Racine has 4 accents, hence 4 rhythmic groups or
measures delimited by cuts.
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The measure or syllabic count
a. The digital verse
The measure is the main characteristic of the digital verse. Measuring the
rhythm, it is to calculate the number of syllables contained in each
measure.
Note: When the last syllable is unstressed and therefore separated from the rest of the word by
the cut, we count it with the measurement following this cut.
Hare is poisonous but pretty in autumn (Apollinaire)
2 4 3 3
I will love you / cry out to you // like a wounded bird (L. Aragon)
3 3 6
Note: Certain syllables may be counted as two in the case of the diaeresis.
(ex.: o-di-eux, instead of o-dieux).
The binary rhythm. The verse or the two halves of a verse are divided into
two equal measures.
Ex.: His gaze / is like // the gaze / of statues. (P. Verlaine)
3 3 3 3
The ternary rhythm. The verse is divided into three equal measures.
Ex. I will walk / my eyes fixed / on my thoughts. (V. Hugo)
4 4 4
In this example, the return of the accent suggests the regular movement of
the walk or a feeling that lasts (e.g.: boredom)
The increasing rhythm. The measures of the verse are getting longer and longer.
Ex. : Thus / little by little // grew the Roman Empire
2 4 6
This rhythm often evokes a movement or a feeling that is amplifying.
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The cumulative rhythm. The number of tonic accents is greater than the
average (above 4 for an alexandrine).
The milk falls / goodbye, / calf, / go / cow, pig, / brood. (J. de La Fontaine)
3 2 1 1 3 2
This rhythm often reflects accumulation, succession, a movement.
disordered, or the intensity of a feeling.
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