Writing task 2 strategy
1Opinion and discussion
Intro
Background
Thesis** > 2 reasons why You DISAGREE, briefly
[ planning - 4 or 5 key words ] + ( grammar patterns - same meaning )
To begin with, body 1 = 1st reason why you strongly disagree. Gender discrimination
> To put it
simply, Explain _ what? WHy it is bad? + For e.g., example
Furthermore, body 2 = 2nd reason why you strongly disagree
2 Disadvantages and advantages
A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income.
Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-
managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?
Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
t Although there are some advantages like earning foreign currencies
and solving inflation, the disadvantages such as ….. . should not be
ignored. I think the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.
Body 1 = advantages , benefits, bright sides, pros x 2
main idea x 2 , each main idea > reason + example x 2
Due to these points, pros outweighs cons
Body 2 = disadvantages , drawbacks, down sides, cons
main idea x 2 , each main idea > reason + example x 2
Body 3 = pros outweighs cons > why ??
Conclusion
3.. Discussion Essay
There will be a statement with two sides or points of view for the same
issues, which are opposite, and you are required to
write for both sides.
*** Some people believe/claim that ………. while others ….. ***
•Discuss both sides.
•Discuss both sides of the view.
•Discuss both sides of the view and offer your opinion**.
Some people believe that the role of women is to stay at home and look
after the family, while others believe that women
have the same capabilities as men. Discuss both sides and offer your
opinion.
Intro **
1st version
It has been believed by some people that women should stay at home
and take care of family whereas others claim that
they can also work as well as men. This is because some people are
influenced regarding gender discrimination, while
others value performance regardless of genders.
It has been argued whether women should just be caretakers at homes
or not. This is because some people are influenced
by conventional patriarchy, while others value performance regardless of
genders.
Body 1 - some people - believe - reason - influenced by conventional
patriarchy,
conventional patriarchy = ?? explain that
examples
Body 2 - others reason - value performance regardless of genders.
value performance - give a reason for this
how? example .
Body 3 - offer your opinion. In my opinion, I agree with the Former (or)
latter view - because . . . . YOUR REASON HERE
4 problem and solution easssy
Intro :
Background - Done
Thesis - ( key vocabs as main ideas in thesis )
problems = accommodation shortage > limited space but more
people = higher demand &
solutions = high-end infrastructures > minimum space +
maximum accommodation &
This can cause / bring about accommodation shortages and . . .
. .However, these problems can be sloved / tackled /
mitigated by high-end infrastructures and . . ..
In many countries, urban areas are facing a rapid increase in
population as more people migrate from the countryside. This
can cause accommodation shortages and high unemployment,
but these problems can be sloved by high-end infrastructures
and more job opportunities.
On the one hand, Problems x 2 > [ each main idea > reason >
example ]
1 accommodation shortages > limited space but more people =
higher demand > example ??
Moreover,
2 high unemployment > ???????? > ???????????
On the other hand , solutions x 2 >
high-end infrastructures > minimum space + maximum
accommodation > example ??
Furthermore,
more job opportunities > reason > example ??
A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income.
Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-
managed.
What are