Writing Practice: Adjective Clauses
Writing Practice: Adjective Clauses
WRITING LEVEL 3
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CHAPTER 1: WRITING SENTENCES
LESSON 1: ADJECTIVE CLAUSES 1
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The woman who lives next door is a doctor.
3. The envelop which lies on the table has no stamp on it.
The envelop which lies on the table has no stamp on it.
4. The student don’t know how to do exercise which were given by the teacher yesterday.
The student don’t know how to do exercise which were given by the teacher yesterday.
5. Words in English which begin with the consonants th are often difficult for foreigners to
pronounce.
Words in English which begin with the consonants th are often difficult for foreigners to
pronounce.
a-Give some words which may be used to describe pictures 1-3. Compare with your friends
b-Complete the following about pictures 1-3 with the suitable words
Picture 1
1. The people
who are
talking are
shaking
hards with
receptionist.
2. The man who
stand behind
the counter is serving coffee.
Picture 2
Picture 1
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are/ the/ holding/ who is.
Some people are listening to the man
who is holding a pen.
[Link]/ the left/ a cup of coffee/ man/ on/
is/ holding.
The man who is on the left is holding a
cup of coffee.
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Picture 3
[Link]/ playing/ boy/ sits/ toys / mother/ his/ in front
of/with
The boy sits playing with toys in front of his
mother.
[Link]/ mother/behind /with/ playing/ boy/ is/ the/ who/ is/ toys
The mother who is behind the boy is playing with toys.
3.2.2. Make sentences about the pictures with the suggested words
1. who/ present/manager 3. modern/ locate/ river
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The manager who is presenting a project is The building which is located by the river
wearing a black shirt. is modern.
The man who is presenting a project is a
manager.
2. want/ wait/ line
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The people who are waiting to buy are lining up in a line.
IV. TEST PRACTICE
In this part of the test, you will write ONE sentence that is based on a picture. With each
picture, you will be given two words or phrases that you must use in your sentence. You can
change the forms of the words and you can use the words in any order.
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hat/ look child/ gardening
3. The hats which are on the table are the same. 4. There is a child who is playing in the
gardening.
woman/ hold
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LESSON 2: ADJECTIVE CLAUSES 2
II. LANGUAGE PRACTICE
2.1. Combine the two sentences. Add commas if necessary
1. The movie was interesting. We went to it.
The movie to which we went to it was interesting.
2. I met the people. You told me about them.
I met the people about whom you told me.
3. I couldn’t understand the woman. I talked to her on the phone.
I couldn't understand the woman that I talked to on the phone.
4. I want to tell you about the party. I went to it last night.
I want to tell you about the party that I went to last night.
5. The music was gentle. We listened to it last night.
The music that we listened to last night was gentle.
6. Alice likes the foreign family. She is living with them.
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Alice is living with the foreign family that she likes.
7. The market has refresh vegetables. I usually go to it.
I usually go to the market where the vegetables are fresh.
8. The man is over there. I told you about him.
The man that I told you about is over there
9. The film is fantastic. They are talking about it.
The film that they are talking about is fantastic.
10. She’s the nurse. We gave the flowers to her.
She's the nurse to whom we gave the flowers.
11. Lung cancer is very dangerous. Millions of people died of it.
Lung cancer, of which millions of people died, is very dangerous.
2.2. Identify Adjective Clause in the following sentences
1. She is the most beautiful woman that I have ever met.
She is the most beautiful woman that I have ever met.
2. I like standing at the window from which I can see the park.
I like standing at the window from which I can see the park.
3. The man whom we are speaking to was our new history teacher.
The man whom we are speaking to was our new history teacher.
4. The teacher who we studied with last year is Mr. Pike.
The teacher who we studied with last year is Mr. Pike.
5. The problem which we are very interested in has been discussed in class.
The problem which we are very interested in has been discussed in class.
III. PRACTICE IN TOEIC
3.1. Building language
Picture 1
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1. The kid is trying to reach the cookie jar
which his mother has put on the shef.
Picture 2
2. The cookie jar that the boy is trying to reach looks delicious.
3. They are talking about the food that they are having for dinner.
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3.2. Tactic
Practice
Picture 1
1. dishes/ she/ The/ unwashed/ which/ left/
1. Reorder the words to complete sentences
sink/ in/ the/ are
The dishes which she left in the sink are
unwashed.
2. The/ needs/ dishes/ wash/ that/ he/ to/ sink/ are/
in/ the
The dished that he needs to wash are in the
sink.
Picture 2
3. The man/ is/ bicycle/ fixing/ often/ the/ that /he/
uses.
The man fixing the bicycle that he often
uses.
4. The bicycle/ yesterday/ fixing/ that/ broke
down/ they/ are.
The bicycle that they are fixing yesterday broke
down.
Picture 3
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5. The car/ is waiting/ that/ driving/
the
traffic/ the woman/ is/ for.
The woman that is driving the car is waiting for the
traffic.
[Link]/ looks/ bored/ woman/ traffic/ at/ has to/ the/
that/ she/ wait.
The woman that has to wait the traffic looks
bored.
The gloves that he's wearing are warm. The meal which the chef is preparing is
tasty.
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They are joining the christmas party that
they are very happy.
There is the street which workers are repairing. There is the painting which he is creating.
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There are two people who are decorating the tree. There is a woman who is wearing
expensive dresses.
[Link]/ food 6. modern/ building
There are many volunteer who are giving delicious There is the building which is morden.
food.
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6. I tried on six pairs of shoes. I liked none of them.
---> I tried on six pairs of shoes, none of which I liked.
7. I apologized to the woman. I spilled her coffee.
---> I apologized to the woman whose coffee I spilled.
7. The village has around 200 people. The majority of them are farmers.
---> The village has around 200 people, the majority of whom are farmers.
8. That company currently has five employees. All of them are computer experts.
---> That company currently has five employees, all of whom are computer experts.
9. After the riot, over one hundred people were taken to the hospital. Many of
them had been innocent bystanders.
---> After the riot, over one hundred people were taken to the hospital, many of whom had been
innocent bystanders
10. The man called the police. His wallet was stolen.
---> The man whose wallet was stolen called the police.
2.2. Identify Adjective clause in the following sentences
1. I met the woman whose husband is the president of the corporation.
---> I met the woman whose husband is the president of the corporation.
2. The village has around 200 people, the majority of whom are farmers.
---> The village has around 200 people, the majority of whom are farmers.
3. The professor whose course I am taking is excellent.
---> The professor whose course I am taking is excellent.
4. Mr. North teaches a class for students whose native language is not English.
---> Mr. North teaches a class for students whose native language is not English.
5. The people whose house we visited were nice.
---> The people whose house we visited were nice.
Picture 1
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2. The woman whose baby is crying has a flat tire.
Picture 2 Picture 3
4. The man is waiting by the car whose 6. The teacher is explaining to the boy color is
red. whose book is very new.
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1. The/ whose backpack/ to lift/girl/ filled/ is/ with/ is
struggling/ it/ books.
The girl whose backpack is filled with books is struggling to
lift it.
2. There/ is/ a/ whose /quite/ heavy/ backpack/ girl/ appears.
There is a girl whose backpack is quite heavy.
Picture 2
Picture 3
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3.2.2. Make sentences about the pictures with the suggested words
The boy whose mother is reading to him The man is shaking hands with the
looks interested. businessman whose secretary is standing
nearby.
2. books/ both/ fascinating
The two books, both of which are fascinating, are on the bed.
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IV. TEST PRACTICE
1. women/ dance 4. grandmother/ lucky money
The women are dancing happily in the garden The grandmother is giving lucky money to
her grandchildren.
2.
Themove/
car issurface
moving slowly on the rough 5. ties/
All the all are wearing ties as part of their
students
surface. uniform.
Many students are attending the lecture The woman is walking on the street with
attentively. her suitcase.
3. attend/ lecture 6. woman/ street
1. He knows how to play the guitar. 3. The girl knows that she has to finish
the exam.
2. That he can play guitar is obvius. 4. She doesn’t know what the next
question is.
Picture 3
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5. The chef is preparing what he
has just cooked.
[Link] is obvious that the chef can cook
very well.
Picture 1
Picture 2
3. They/ the/ tree/ know/ decorate/ how/ to.
They know how to decorate the tree.
4. It/ is/ spring/ apparent/ coming/ that/ the/ is.
It is apparent that the spring is coming.
Picture 3
5. The/ fix/ workers/ are/ they/ doing/ what/ road/
can/ to/ the
The workers are doing what they can to fix the
road.
[Link]/ don’t/ finish/ know/ when/ work/ they/
can/ their
They don’t know when they can finish their work.
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3.2.2 Make sentences about the pictures with the suggested words
1. heavy/ lift/ athletic 2. look/ what/ man
The athletic man can lift something The man is looking at what she is
very heavy. showing him.
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She is thinking about whether to accept They are looking at the paper and saying
the job offer. something.
He
is
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LESSON 5: PASSIVE VOICE
Picture 1 Picture 2
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1. He is being awarded a certificate for his performance. 3. The dishes are stacked in the sink.
2. A certificate is awarded to the top performer. 4. A lot of dishes needs to be washed.
Picture 3
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Picture 1
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1.
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1.
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The/ needs/ man/ bicycle/ to be/ has/ a/ which/
repaired.
The man has a bicycle which needs to be repaired.
Picture 2
Picture 3
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5. The/ Christmas/ribbons and
tinsels/being/ with/ decorated/ tree/ is
The Christmas tree is being decorated with ribbons and tinsels.
6. Ribbons and tinsels/ decoration/
Christmas tree/ are/ hung/ on/ the/ for.
Ribbons and tinsels are hung on the Christmas tree for decoration.
3.2.2. Make sentences about the pictures with the suggested words
She stacks and organizes the books on her desk Tables are being set by the staff for the
before leaving. lunch.
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IV. TEST PRACTICE
In this part of the test, you will write ONE sentence that is based on a picture. With each
picture, you will be given two words or phrases that you must use in your sentence. You can
change the forms of the words and you can use the words in any order.
He is having his car repaired Money was withdrawn from the ATM
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5. grow/ hill 6. house/ storm
Tea is grown on the hill The house was damaged by the storm .
LESSON 6: REVIEW
II. PRACTICE IN TOEIC
Mini-test 1
Question 1 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
Question 2 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
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a lot of/ road
Question 3 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
bird/ chirp
Question 4 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
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interest/ computer games
Question 5 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
study/ desk
Mini-test 2
Question 1 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
sit/ portrait
Question 2 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
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award/ on
Question 3 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
mechanic/ teach
Question 4 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
Question 5 of 5
Directions: Write ONE sentence based on the picture using the TWO words or phrases under it.
You may change the forms of the words and you may use them in any order.
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sing/ star
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CHAPTER 2: RESPONDING TO AN E-MAIL REQUEST
LETTER
LESSON 7: GIVING “HOW TO” INSTRUCTIONS (1)
II. PRACTICE
2.1. Exercise 1
How to make an English Breakfast
Put each of the following verbs in the correct space in the constructions below.
1. ............... the table (with the table-cloth, knives, forks, spoons, plates, glasses, napkins
etc.)
2. To make tea, first ............... the water in a kettle.
3. Put a tea-bag in a cup and .................. the boiling water on it. (This is quicker than using a
teapot.)
4. .............. milk (from a jug) and sugar (from a bowl), and ............. with a spoon.
5. Make some toast, using the toaster, and ............... butter on it.
6. ............. eggs and bacon in a frying-pan.
7. Put it on a plate with the toast, and eat it with a little salt and pepper.
8. When you”ve finished your breafast, ................ all the breafast things.
2.2. Exercise 2
Sentence matching
List A and List B explain how to use a payphone in London. But List A is not in the correct
order. Match List A and List B. Then write the sentences as one paragraph.
List A List B
a. First of all ... 1. pick up the receiver
b. Now, finally you ... 2. dial the number and wait for the person
c. When the person answers, ... to answer
[Link] you hear the dialing tone, .... 3. put in the money
4. speak
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2.3. Exercise 3
Arranging sentences
These pictures show how to make a papier-mâché pot. The sentences explain the pictures. Put
the sentences in the correct order and write them as one paragraph.
a) When the paper on the jar is dry, rub it with glass-paper. This makes it smooth.
b) After this, paste on about eight layers of small pieces of paper.
c) Now finally paint the pot with bright colours.
d) Because it is smoother, use tissue paper for the last two layers.
e) You can make a lovely pot with a simple jar.
f) First of all, tear some old paper into small pieces.
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2.4. Exercise 4
Guided writing
This is a recipe for Spiced Oranges. Recipes usually have incomplete sentences. Use the
information in the recipe: (i) to write sentences like those in Exercise 2; (ii) to write a paragraph
with those sentences. Use these words if necessary: First of all; After this; Then; Now; the; some;
for; a; them. Add articles before the nouns when necessary.
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Ingredients:
4 large oranges
4-5dl ( ¾ pint) water
½ teaspoon ground cinnamon
½ teaspoon ground nutmeg sugar
• Peel oranges and remove all white parts.
• Cut into slices.
• Put water, cinnamon and nutmeg into saucepan.
• When water is boiling, add orange slices.
• Add sugar.
• Simmer gently 3-4 minutes.
• Put in refrigerator several hours.
• Eat cold.
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LESSON 8: GIVING “HOW TO” INSTRUCTIONS (2)
I. FOCUS
For each of the following situations, write a sentence telling someone how to avoid a common
mistake.
Making rice
Setting the TV to show DVD
Sewing a shirt
Training a dog
Turing an office alarm system off
For example,
Now as you answer the next three e-mails, be sure to use the signpost words in all how-to
instructions. Also include instructions for how to avoid common mistakes in at least one
response.
Making rice
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II. PRACTICE
2.1. Practice 1
Hi, Carr,
Thanks so much for making sure Ruth gets a birthday cake tomorrow. I understand she
wants a chocolate icing. I basically know how to make a cake, but wondered if you
could tell me exactly how to make the cake Ruth likes.
Thanks in advance!
Directions: Respond to the email as if you are Ruth’s boyfriend, Carr. In your email, tell Alyssa
how to make Ruth’s favourite birthday cake. You intructions should include at least THREE
steps.
To : Alyssa Lee
Subject: Re:Ruth’s birthday
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Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
2.2. Practice 2
I’m really excited to babysit for you and April tomorrow. I’m a tiny bit worried about
getting Bony to sleep, though. You had said there was a magic way to get him to go to
sleep. Could you tell me again what it is? Otherwise, I can’t wait to spend time with
baby Bony!
Thanks!
Directions: Respond to the email as if you are Bony’s father, David. In your email, tell Rachel
how to get the baby to go to sleep . You intructions should include at least THREE steps.
To : Rachel Jones
Subject: Re:Babysitting
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Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
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Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
2.3. Practice 3
From: My Nguyen
To: Kate Peace
Subject: Sending a fax Sent:
April 30, 8:24 a.m.
Hi, Kate.
I’m sorry to bother you, but I need to send a fax for the first time since I’ve been
working here, and I realized I don’t know how to do it! I’m using the fax machine in the
administration office. It’s a long-distance fax. Could you tell me how to do it?
Directions: Respond to the email as if you are Kate Peace. In your email, tell My how to send a
fax. You intructions should include at least THREE steps.
To : My Nguyen
Subject: Re:Sending a fax
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Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
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To: Michael Kose
Subject: Plans
Sent: September 10, 11:18 a.m.
Hi, Michael.
I wanted to let you know that my flight arrives on Friday at 2:30. I have a rental car all
lined up. So all I need is how to get to your house . I’ll be coming in on Route 1 headed
North, so I just need to know how to get to your place from here. Thanks a bunch, and I
can’t wait to see you.
To : Dan Jack
Subject: Re:Plans
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Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
2.2. Practice 2
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Hi, Michael.
I am ready to send the mailing out. I have everything in envelopes and ready to go. The
only thing is, the post office told me they won’t pick up a mass mailing, so I’ll need to
take them to the post office myself. Could you tell me where the nearest post office is? I
would really appreciate it.
Thank you!
Directions: Respond to the email as if you areThomas Hardy. In your email, tell Chesson how to
get to the post office. You intructions should include at least THREE steps.
To : Chesson Shaw
Subject: Re:Post office
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Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
2.1. Practice 1
Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
2.1. Practice 1
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From: Link Travel
To: Rowanna Robinson
Subject: Link Travel special offer
Sent: June 6, 9:38 p.m.
We’re offering all our loyal customers a fantastic opportunity to travel this summer.
For a limited time only, we’re offering discounts on trips to selected destinations.
Email us or visit your local Link Travel branch for more details.
Directions: Respond to the email as if you are R. Robinson . In your email, ask TWO questions
(about the expiry of the offer, what the selected destinations are, ....................,
...............................).
To : Jane Moore
Subject: Re: Link Travel special offer
Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
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Practice 3.
I am attaching an application form for the position. Please let me know if you have any
questions about the application or the job itself.
Matthew Eaton
Directions: Respond to the email as if you are J. Moore. In your email, ask TWO questions
(about the working place and
hours, .............................., ........................................., ..................................).
To : Matthew Eaton
Subject: Re: Opening for overseas tour guide
Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
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LESSON 11: RESPONDING TO INQUIRIES
II. PRACTICE
2.1. Practice 1
I have investigated the situation and found that your specifications are exactly the same as
the design of a proprietary camera battery manufactured by a large Japanese electronics
company.
We regret that it would not be in our interests to supply this type of battery.
However, I would like to thank you for considering our company as your supplier.
2.2. Practice 2
Directions: Respond to the email as if you are a sales representative for Telfo Wire Company. In
your email, give ONE time you are free and make TWO requests for new equipment.
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To : Hill Thommson, Manager, Telfo Wire Company
Subject: Re: New computers
Self-Evaluation
Evaluation Criteria Yes No
Does your reply meet the requirements outlined in the
directions?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence variety?
Does your reply demonstrate good sentence structures?
Does your reply demonstrate good overall organization?
Does your reply use correct and appropriate vocabulary?
2.3. Practice 3
Sincerely,
Lou Herr
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Directions: Respond to the email as if you work in Human Resources Department of JJ
Corporation. In your email, make TWO pieces of information and ask ONE question.
To : Lou Herr
Thank you for your interest in working with JJ Corporation. At the moment, we do not have any
entry-level positions available, but we will keep your information on file. Our recruitment
process usually begins in April and September, and successful candidates are contacted by email.
Could you please let us know which department you are most interested in working for? This
will help us keep your application in the correct file.
Sincerely,
Dai
Human Resources Dept.
Self-Evaluation
Put the sentences in each of the following sets in the correct order to form a good introductory
paragraph for the intended essay.
Read the four introductory paragraphs that follow the essay question. Check (√) the features of a
good introduction that they have (Remember: they must have all four to be a good introduction).
Essay question: Which, in your opinion, is more important in making someone’s life happy: a
good environment or good genes?
1. Some people have a happy life and some people don’t. My friend Tony has a miserable life.
He just got divorced, and now his wife won’t let him see his children. To live a happy life, a
good environment is more important than good genes.
V It is relevant to the topic of the essay.
V It contains at least three sentences.
X It doesn't give details that belong to the body of the essay.
V It ends with the thesis statement.
2. First, a good environment can make you healthier, which can make you happy. Second, if you
live in a good environment, you probably have many friends who can help you when you need
it. Friends are important for emotional health as well. People with friends are happier than
people without friends. Also, a good environment is probably safer, so you don’t have to be
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afraid to walk down the street. Being safe makes everyone happy. To live a happy life, a good
environment is more important than good genes.
V It is relevant to the topic of the essay.
V It contains at least three sentences.
X It doesn’t give details that belong to the body of the essay.
V it ends with the thesis statement.
3. It is said that your mother and father make you what you are. You get your genes from them,
and they may have great genes. However, if they don't raise you in a safe, loving environment,
you may never be happy. To live a happy life, a good environment is more important than
good genes.
V It is relevant to the topic of the essay.
V It contains at least three sentences.
V It doesn’t give details that belong to the body of the essay.
V It ends with the thesis statement.
4. Before the nineteenth century, most people lived in dirty, smelly, unhealthy environments.
To live a happy life, a good environment is more important than good genes.
V It is relevant to the topic of the essay.
X It contains at least three sentences.
V It doesn’t give details that belong to the body of the essay.
V It ends with the thesis statement.
5. Environment is much more important that genes when you are growing up. A good
example of this is the millions of people in the world who were born with physical challenges.
If people are raised in a good environment, they can be successful and live a happy life.
V It is relevant to the topic of the essay.
V It contains at least three sentences.
X It doesn’t give details that belong to the body of the essay.
X It ends with the thesis statement.
2.3. Task 3
Read each essay question. Then choose the more general introductory sentence of the two that
follow. This sentence would appear just before the thesis statement, which states your opinion.
Compare your answer with that of a partner. Say why the other sentence is not appropriate.
1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Consulting with a group of
people is the best way to make an important decision.
a. Making an important decision is not an easy thing to do, and there are different ways to
do it. V
b. If you want to make an important decision, you should definitely always do it by
yourself. X
Thesis statement: Many people believe that getting the opinion of other is the best way to
make an important decision; however, I disagree with this approach.
2. When travelling medium distances, some people prefer to fly. Others prefer to take
express trains. Which do you prefer?
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a. Trains and airplanes have both advantages and disadvantages. V
b. I don’t really like flying because it is very expensive and I often get airsick. X
Thesis statement: Although some people prefer to fly, I’d rather take the train.
3. What would you consider the best type of job?
a. I don’t really like my current job much and would like to find a new one soon. X
b. Choosing the best type of job involves considering many factors. V
Thesis statement: I think the best type of job for me would be the one that involves both sales
and travel.
2.4. Task 4
Write ONE general introductory sentence that would appear just before the thesis
statement.
1. Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages, but many people find it stressful.
________________________________________________________________________
I’m totally opposed to living in the city.
2. Shopping has changed a lot in modern times, and people now have many options for buying
what they need.______________________________________________________________
In my opinion, the internet is the best place to buy things.
3. Jobs have many aspects that people may or may not like, and each worker values different
things.
There are several things about my current job, but I believe that the best aspect of my job is
the long vacations.
2.1. Task 1
Write two or more general sentences for each of the following thesis statement to make the
complete introductory paragraph for your intended essay.
1 Many people dream of living in the city because of job opportunities, shopping, and
entertainment. However, city life is often noisy, polluted, and stressful.
I’m totally opposed to living in the city.
2. The way people shop has changed greatly with modern technology. Instead of going to stores,
many now prefer buying things online.
→ Thesis: In my opinion, the internet is the best place to buy things.
In my opinion, the internet is the best place to buy things.
3. Jobs usually have both good and bad sides. Some people like high salaries, while others prefer
flexible working hours.
→ Thesis: The best aspect of my job is the long vacations.
There are several things about my current job, but I believe that the best aspect of my job is the
long vacations.
2.2. Task 2
For each of the following essay questions,
a. underline the key words,
b. write a thesis statement, that states your opinion,
c. and add two or more general sentences to the thesis statement to make
the complete introductory paragraph for your intended essay.
1. It is important for travelers and business people to understand the cultures they come into
contact with. What are the main advantages of doing so?
Understanding other cultures brings many advantages for travelers and business people because
it improves communication, prevents misunderstandings, and builds stronger relationships.
Your complete introductory paragraph:
In today’s globalized world, people are traveling and doing business across national borders
more than ever before. Cultural differences can create barriers that affect communication and
cooperation. By learning about other cultures, people can avoid conflicts, show respect, and
work more effectively. Therefore, understanding other cultures brings many advantages for
travelers and business people because it improves communication, prevents misunderstandings,
and builds stronger relationships.
2. Employers should pay young people the same salary as older colleagues doing the same job.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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I strongly agree that young people should be paid the same salary as older colleagues if they do
the same job equally well.
Your complete introductory paragraph:
The question of equal pay between younger and older workers has been debated for many years.
Some argue that older employees deserve higher salaries because of their experience, while
others believe that fairness requires equal pay for equal work. In a modern workplace,
performance and ability are often more important than age. For this reason, I strongly agree that
young people should be paid the same salary as older colleagues if they do the same job equally
well.
3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should make more links
with businesses.
1.2. Practice
1.2.1. Task 1
Complete conditional sentences 1-6 with the words and phrases a-f.
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6. Unless we change __________, our __________ will stay very high.
1. 2.2. Task 2
Complete sentences 1-3 with your own ideas. Compare your answers with your partner’s and see
if you agree with his or her idea.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
3. Unless the local governments restrict the number of cars coming into cities,
________________
____________________________________________________________________________
2.2. Practice
2.2.1 Task 1
Match beginning 1-5 to the ending a-e. Note the common phrases for introducing examples in
bold.
1. There are several disadvantages to working in a big city. Some examples include …
_____
2. Spending money on research can have a great impact. One clear example of this is …
_____
3. I think the most important factor is practical experience. By this I mean …
_____
4. We could save money by reducing costs. For example, . . ._____
5. One example of the problems we faced was high material costs. Another example was …
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_____
a. Zentex’s development of the first biochip in 2004.
b. a lack of understanding of the market.
c. we could stop giving free samples to all visitors.
d. expensive housing, heavy traffic, and a stressful lifestyle.
e. actual time spent working in the field.
2.2.2. Task 2
Look at each of the sentences in task 1 and match the phrases s in bold to the definition of how it
is used below.
2.2.3. Task 3
Use common phrases in task 1 to write examples for the statements in 1-3.
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
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LESSON 15: DEVELOPING KEY IDEAS BY GIVING REASONS
AND EXAMPLES
I. PRACTICE
2.1. Task 1
Choose one of the prompts below to express your own opinions, and then use ONE reason or
example to support each of your opinions.
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□ are doing a great job reporting the news.
□ are doing a poor job reporting the news.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
□ excellent.
□ getting better.
□ in need of major improvements.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
□ reduced and people should use their own money to take care of themselves. □
spent to help those on need.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
2.2. Task 2
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1. In general, people are living longer now. How will this change affect society? Use
specific details and examples to develop your essay.
2. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
3. Think of the most important class you have ever taken. Why did you enjoy this class so
much? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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