Translation Challenges: Word Non-Equivalence
Translation Challenges: Word Non-Equivalence
If you consider a word such as rebuild , you will note that there are two
distinct elements of meaning in it: re and build – that is ‘to build again’.
The same applies to disbelieve, which may be paraphrased as ‘not to
believe’. Elements of meaning which are represented by several
orthographic words in one language, say English, maybe represented by
one orthographic word in another and vice versa. For instance, Black
board is written as one word in Arabic, as one word. This suggests that
there is no one-to-one correspondence between orthographic words and
elements of meaning within or across languages.
LEXICAL MEANING
The lexical meaning of a word or lexical unit may be thought of as the
specific value it has in a particular linguistic system and the ‘personality’
it acquires through usage within that system. It is rarely possible to
analyze a word, pattern or structure into distinct components of meaning;
the way in which language works is much too complex to allow that.
According to Cruse, we can distinguish four main types of meaning in
words and utterances (utterances being stretches of written or spoken
text): propositional meaning , expressive meaning , presupposed
meaning and evoked
meaning .
Propositional versus expressive meaning
Presupposed meaning
3- Evoked meaning
Evoked meaning arises from dialect and register variation. A dialect is a
variety of language which has currency within a specific community or
group of speakers. It may be classified on one of the following bases:
1. Geographical (e.g., a Scottish dialect or American as opposed to
British English: cf. the difference between lift and elevator ) .
2. Temporal (e.g., words and structures used by members of different age
groups within a community or words used at different periods in the
history of a language: cf. verily and really ) .
Based on this discussion, we can now begin to outline some of the more
common types of non-equivalence which often pose difficulties for the
translator and some attested strategies for dealing with them. First, a word
of warning: The choice of a suitable equivalent in a given context
depends on a wide variety of factors. Some of these factors may be
strictly linguistic (for instance, collocations and idioms.)
c-Differences in form
Methods of Translation
1- Word-for-Word translation
This type of translation keeps the SL word order; words are translated out of
context according to their most common meaning. Such kind of translation
can be used as a preliminary translation step but it is not applied in real
translation tasks. The following lines are from The Secret Sharer by Joseph
Conrad with their translation into Arabic following the word-for-word
method.
They were new patients to me, all I had was the name, Olson. Please come down
as soon as you can, my daughter is very sick. When I arrived I was met by the
mother, a big startled looking woman, very clean and apologetic who merely said,
Is this the doctor? and let me in. In the back, she added. You must excuse us,
doctor, we have her in the kitchen where it is warm. It is very damp here
sometimes. The child was fully dressed and sitting on her father’s lap near the
kitchen table. He tried to get up, but I motioned for him not to bother, took off my
overcoat and started to look things over. I could see that they were all very
nervous, eyeing me up and down distrustfully. As often, in such cases, they
weren’t telling me more than they had to, it was up to me to tell them; that’s why
they were spending three dollars on me. The child was fairly eating me up with her
cold, steady eyes, and no expression to her face whatever.
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2013)Arabic translation
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Study the following Arabic word-for-word translation carefully and identify
its problematic aspects. John had not much affection for his mother and sisters,
and an antipathy to me. He bullied and punished me, not two or three times in the
week, nor once or twice in the day, but continually; every nerve I had feared him
and every morsel of flesh on my bones shrank when he comes near. There were
moments when I was bewildered by the terror he [Link] Eyre, Emily
هو عذب وعاقب أنا ليس اثنان أو.جون كان ال كثيرا حب له أمه وأخواته وعداء لي
كل عصب أنا، لكن باستمرار، ليسمرة أو اثنتين في اليوم،ثالث مرات في األسبوع
كانت.لي خاف هو وكل جزء من اللحم على لي عظم ارتجف عندماهو جاء قريب
هناك لحظات عندما أنا كنت سيطرت بالرعب هو أوحى
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Study the following English word-for-word translation carefully, identify its
.problematic aspects and then provide an appropriate English translation
فقرر ان يترك.حزن الصياد كثيرا النه كان يذهب للصيد كل يوم دون ان يأتي بشيء
المدينة ويهاجر الى مكان اخر لعل الحظ يبتسم له هذه المرة
.Sad the hunter much because was he go for hunting everyday without bringing
anything. So decided he to leave city and migrate to place another may be luck
smiles to him this time
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2-Literal translation
This type of translation preserves the grammatical structures of the SL
where they are translated into their nearest TL equivalents. It takes place
when the SL and TL share parallel structures. Words are translated out of
context paying no attention to their con-notative meanings. The following
example illustrates this point. To throw dust in the eyes. يلقي التراب في
العيونThe word ‘dust’ is translated literally as الترابwhile the equivalent
expression in Arabic is الرماد في العيوّن يذرwhere ‘dust’ is translated into
الرماد, ashes. This choice could be justified by the cultural as well as
ecological contexts that are different for both languages.
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2.3 Provide a literal translation for the following excerpt.
As doctors often do I took a trial shot at it as a point of departure. Has she had a
sore throat? Both parents answered me together, No . . . No, she says her throat
don’t hurt her. Does your throat hurt you? Added the mother to the child. But the
little girl’s expression didn’t change nor did she move her eyes from my face.
Have you looked? I tried to, said the mother, but I couldn’t see
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Provide back translation for 2.3 and try to judge how accurate your literal
translation was.
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3- faithful translation
This method maintains a balance between the literal meaning of the SL
word and the TL syntactic structures. It sounds more reasonable as it takes
the context into consid-eration, aiming at producing more precise meaning
of the SL texts. Study the following quote by Shaw’s Back to Methuselah
(1921), Part 1, Act 1:‘You see things; and you say, “Why?” But I dream things
that never were; and I say, “Why not?”’It can be faithfully translated as
:أنت ترى األشياء وتقول لماذا؟ ولكني أحلم بأشياء لم توجد أبدا وأقول لم ال؟
3.1 Provide a faithful translation of the following quotes.1. For if the proper
study of mankind is man, it is evidently more sensible to occupy yourself with the
coherent, substantial and significant creatures of fiction than with the irrational
and shadowy figures of real life.W. Somerset Maugham (1874–1965), British
novelist and playwright[Link]
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Read the Arabic translation below of the following poem and comment on
the strategy used for translation. Requiem By Robert Louis Stevenson
Under the wide and starry sky,
Arabic translation
تحت سماء رحبة مرصعة بالنجوم
4-Communicative translation
This type of translation attempts to render the exact contextual meaning of
the original text in such a way that both content and language are readily
acceptable and compre-hensible to the reader. It is particularly suitable when
translating conventional formu-lae or proverbs and it involves some levels
of cultural approximation.
Study the following example:
Diamonds cut diamonds.ال يفل الحديد إال الحديد.
Notice here that ‘diamonds’ is rendered by حديدwhich is equivalent to iron
in English. Literal translation would not convey the message here. In Arabic
‘diamond’ has posi-tive associations related to beauty and noble
characteristics while iron is associated with strength and physical power.
Translate the following English proverbs using communicative
translation.
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[Link]’t count your chickens before they’re hatched
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[Link] bygones be bygones
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[Link] is a lottery
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5-Free translation
This strategy preserves the meaning of the original but uses natural
forms of the TL, including normal word order and syntax, so that the
translation can be naturally under-stood. It preserves the content at the
expense of the form, and it provides a longer para-phrase of the
original. It is a form of idiomatic translation that favours colloquialisms
and idioms which do not exist in the SL. The following is a part of
Cinderella and its translation into Arabic:
Cinderella had a wonderful time at the ball until she heard the first stroke of
midnight! She remembered what the fairy had said, and without a word of
goodbye she slipped from the Prince’s arms and ran down the steps. As she
ran she lost one of her slippers, but not for a moment did she dream of
stopping to pick it up! If the last stroke of midnight were to sound ... oh ...
what a disaster that would be! Out she fled and vanished into the night
. أمضت سندريال وقتا في غاية المتعة في حفلة الرقص حتى سمعت دقات
الساعة تعلن حلول منتصف الليل فتذكرت ما قالته الجنية فانسلت من غير
وبينما.بخاطركم وال مع السالمة بخلسة من بين يدي األمير ونزلت الدرج بسرعة
كانت تركض سقطت منها إحدى فردتي الحذاء لكنها لم تتوقف ولم تحدث نفسها
حتى بالتوقف ألنها إن فعلت ذلك فيا ويلها ويا سواد ليلها فركضت مسرعة
واختفت في الظالم. Notice that we have longer expressions in the TL. For
example, ‘a wonderful time’ is translated into في غاية المتعةinstead of
ممتعا. Colloquial expressions are also used as illustrated in the following
examples.
What a disaster would that be! يا ويلها ويا سواد ليلها
Translation of Economic texts
Features of economic discourse
Though economics is related to everyday language, it has its own
linguistic features:
sometimes the jargon of a specialist group seeps into the common
language of the wider community. This is particularly likely to
happen where the activities of that sub-group are fashionable or
impinge directly on the life of the wider community. (Katamba 2004:
168) Economic texts often present visual information linguistically,
making use of mathematical systems to represent economic facts.
For instance, they may use mathematical symbols, segmental
diagrams and tabular information, and other visual data (statistical
tables, maps and graphs). The language of economics in particular
relies on grammatical structures (e.g. conditionals, passive
structures, relative clauses and logical connectives) and rhetorical
functions (e.g. assumption, hypothesis, prediction, explanation and
generalisation).
Economic discourse is a global discourse. This globalisation has led
to the emergence
of many loan words. In English economic discourse, these loan
words are mainly
taken from French, Italian, German, Japanese, Greek and Spanish.
Neologism
Neologism is considered one of the most common challenges for
translators of economic
texts. It is defined as ‘newly coined lexical units or existing lexical units
that
acquire new sense’ (Newmark 1988a: 140). New terms are continuously
being created
and translators often cannot find available translations for them so they
have to come
up with their own
Metaphors
Another problem in economic discourse is related to the use of figures of
speech, puns
and polysemes. Economic discourse makes use of metaphors. Metaphors
used in economic
texts are classified into three types.
Terminology: marketing
Terminology is a challenging issue especially for the non-professional
translator. A
number of terms have specific meanings in economics but are vague and
general in
everyday language.
. Specific terms are identified and translated using specialised dictionaries
before the translator starts the actual translation process.
Marketing terminology is mainly found in the translation of brochures,
catalogues,
offers, advertisements, web pages, marketing and business reports,
marketing
news and business articles, and business correspondence in general.
15.1 Translate the following marketing extract into English. Then specify a list of
the
marketing terminologies used.
هو،التسويق التي التسويق الشبكي وتعرف أيضا بالتجارة الشبكية أو البيع المباشر
المصطلح الذي يصف هيكل تستخدمها بعض الشركات كجزء من استراتيجيتها
هيكل مصمم إلنشاء قوة في التسويق والمبيعات عن طريق.الشاملة للتسويق
ليس فقط من خالل،إمكانية الربح للمروجين لمنتجات الشركة من خالل ترويجهم
ولكن أيضا بالنسبة للمبيعات من المروجين اآلخرين،المبيعات الشخصية المباشرة
وخلق شبكة من الموزعين والتسلسل الشبكي،الذين التحقوا بالعمل عن طريقهم
للمستويات المتعددة للربح في شكل شبكي
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Terminology: investment
Investment discourse is used for companies with regard to benefits
returned from
various purchases. It covers various business documents such as
contracts, agreements
and documents related to insurance (health insurance, life insurance, car
insurance,
insurance of machinery and electronic sales, etc.). Investment written
discourse is
highly formal and is usually characterised by the use of passive, short
sentences, use
of directives and legal terminology. Accuracy is a very important issue
that should be
taken into consideration because any mistake in translation might have
serious legal
consequences.
Terminology: banking
Banking discourse involves the translation of annual reports,
prospectuses, bank statements,
investment marketing translation, macroeconomic survey translation,
equity
research translation, shareholder information, profit and loss reports,
insurance policy
translation, as well as banking, finance, and insurance websites. What
distinguishes
banking discourse from other economic discourse types is its heavy
reliance on figures
and statistics. Making use of TL-relevant templates facilitates the
translation process
by giving the translator more time to concentrate on the linguistic
message to be conveyed
rather than wasting time looking for a suitable presentation method.
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وأضاف أن مناقشة موضوع التجارة والتنمية يكتسي أهمية خاصة على ضوء احداث اخيرة
وبخاصة ازمة المالية الدولية التي أبرزت ألصت بين جميع مجات،على الصعيد العالمي
و سيما بين التمويل والتجارة واستثمار،الحياة اقتصادية.
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Modules on the subject of trade and competition policy will continue to feature in the
secretariat's trade policy courses and regional trade policy courses.
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Personnel Education and Training: During the Academic years 2003-2004 and 2004-
2005 the Police Academy has included into their syllabus, in all education levels as
well as departments of advanced training and education of police staff) the subject of
trade in human beings.
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وبالنظر الى اهمية التي تعلقها الدول اطراف على موضوع التجارة في سياق التنمية
، سيتولى المجلس نفسه معالجة هذا الموضوع)أ(؛ أما المواضيع اخرى،المستدامة
وهي نفسها منظمة على نسق قطاعي،فتعالجها هيئات المجلس الفرعية المختلفة
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أو قد يعني بموضوع التجارة أو، يعرف القانون "المنتج" ليعني أي مادة،وعلى نطاق واسع
وذلك فيما يتعلق بالمنتجات الغذائية أو غير الغذائية،التبادل التجاري.
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The crisis itself has a number of dimensions but three in particular are crucial. The
first
is the build-up of debt, both corporate and household debt, but especially
household
debt. Linked with this is the likelihood of a return to international monetary
instability
and of the refusal of the rest of the world to fund US (and UK) trade deficits. The
third
factor is the effect of the ecological crisis on the world economy, which brings
with it the
prospect of an end to two decades of low commodity prices. However, these
should be
seen as medium-term developments, determining the underlying tensions within
which
more immediate changes take place.
A Marxist analysis of the crisis needs to be based on an analysis which can grasp
these
underlying structural factors, see how these play themselves out in surface
phenomena
and also understand the competing strategies of capital as it attempts to manage
the
crisis.
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2011)
Terminologies
Allocate :) تخصيص (مبلغ معين/ تحديد/تقسيم
A stagnant market :سوق راكدة
Cut jobs :تخفيض العمالة
Pay freeze :تجميد األجور
Rebound :)ينهض (من عثرة أو إخفاق
Hike interest rate :) يزيد (بصورة مفاجئة/يرفع
International Monetery Fund IMF :صندوق النقد الدولي
Merge to :تندمج مع
Over 16 years : سنة16 على مدى
Economics :علم االقتصاد
Economy :اقتصاد
Bases (always plural :أساس
Run counter to, Juxtapose to :يتعارض مع
Crisis :أزمة
Crises :أزمات
Equilibrium :توازن
Increasing, augmentation, rise, step up :زيادة
Payments :مدفوعات
Permanent, durable :دائم
Exchange rate :سعر الصرف
Inflation rate has increased by 2% :%2 ارتفع معدل التضخم بنسبة
كان األسلوب الوحيد المتبع في األمم المتحدة هو أسلوب التقليدي الذي،١٩٨١ وقبل عام- ١١
يتمثل في ترجمة النصوص األصلية بصورة أولية على أيدي موظفي لغات مبتدئين
. ثم مراجعتها بواسطة موظفين أقدم وأكثر خبرة)مراجعين(في دوائر اللغات،(نسبيا)مترجمين
وأن توضع في اعتبار بصفة خاصة،)أ(استخدام وسائل لجمع النصوص غير إصدار مذكرة شفوية
اعباء التي يمكن أن تقع على عاتق الدول التي ليست لغاتها من لغات العمل في امم المتحدة
أو التي ليست لديها أية نصوص مترجمة إلى تلك اللغات؛
Before 1981, the traditional method of having original texts translated initially by relatively
junior language staff, the translators, and then revised by more senior and more
experienced members of the translation services, the revisers, was the only method used at
the United Nations. a) Exploitation of methods to collect the texts other than the issuance of
notes verbales, especially taking into account potential burdens imposed on those States
whose languages are not working languages of the United Nations or which do not have any
texts translated into such languages.