1st Performance Task in 2nd Quarter
The Importance of Time Management for Students
Speech Content Erroneous Principle Of Corrected Remarks
Statement/s Editing/Revising Statement/s
Applied
Good morning Good morning Conciseness / Good morning Avoid
everyone, today everyone, Clarity everyone, today repetition and
I will talk abouttoday I will I will talk about make it clear.
many things talk about how students
about how many things manage time
students about how and why it is
manage time very important
students
and why it is in school and
very important
manage time daily life.
and crucial in and why it is
our school life very important
and in our daily and crucial in
lives too. our school life
and in our
daily lives too.
Time Time Formality / Time Use precise
management is management is Word Choice management academic
a thing that a thing that helps students language.
helps students helps students organize
organize organize themselves and
themselves and themselves and avoid confusion
not get with
not get
confused and homework,
lost with many
confused and projects, and
things in school lost with many daily activities.
like homework, things in
projects, and school like
other activities homework,
that we do projects, and
every day. other activities
that we do
every day.
Students Students Tone Students Maintain
sometimes sometimes Appropriateness sometimes objective tone.
procrastinate a procrastinate a procrastinate
lot because lot because because they
they don’t have they don’t have don’t have a
a schedule or a schedule or schedule, which
maybe they just can lead to poor
maybe they
don’t care and performance in
this is a very
just don’t care school.
big problem and this is a
that can make very big
them fail in problem that
school. can make them
fail in school.
So, like if you So, like if you Conciseness / If you make a Avoid fillers
make a make a Formality timetable and and vague
timetable and timetable and follow it, you terms.
you follow it you follow it will accomplish
always, you will always, you more and be
be able to do will be able to successful.
many things
do many things
and you will be
very successful.
and you will be
very
successful.
Also, Also, Conciseness Some students Avoid
sometimes sometimes cannot manage unnecessary
students cannot students cannot time because repetition.
manage time manage time they spend too
because they because they much on social
waste time on waste time on media or
social media or mobile phones,
social media or
on mobile which leads to
phones and
on mobile poor grades.
sometimes they phones and
don’t study at sometimes they
all and then don’t study at
they get bad all and then
grades. they get bad
grades.
Time Time Word Choice / Time Replace vague
management is management is Conciseness management is words with
like also very like also very very helpful for precise ones.
helpful for helpful for students
students students because
because if you because if you managing time
can manage leads to better
can manage
your time, you control of life
can also
your time, you and a brighter
manage your can also future.
life and your manage your
future will be life and your
very bright and future will be
good. very bright and
good.
Sometimes Sometimes Formality Sometimes Use formal and
students are students are students neutral
like busy with like busy with become too language.
many things busy with other
and they forget many things tasks and forget
about studying and they forget to study for
for exams and about studying exams, which
this is bad for exams and may cause
because they this is bad failure.
will fail. because they
will fail.
Another thing is Another thing Conciseness Students should Avoid
that students is that students make a daily redundancy.
should make a should make a task list and
list of their list of their complete it on
tasks every day tasks every day time to stay
and they should and they organized.
do everything
should do
that is in their
list so that they
everything that
can finish is in their list
everything at so that they can
the right time. finish
everything at
the right time.
If you do not If you do not Formality Without time Use
manage time, manage time, management, professional
you will always you will you may be wording.
be late, you will always be late, late, stressed,
always be you will and unable to
stressed, and always be complete tasks
you cannot do effectively.
stressed, and
everything and
life will be hard.
you cannot do
everything and
life will be
hard.
Also, parents Also, parents Sentence Parents and Break into
and teachers and teachers Structure teachers clear, balanced
always tell us always tell us remind us that ideas.
that time is that time is time is
very important very important important and
and we should and we should should be used
use it wisely wisely, but
use it wisely
but sometimes students
we don’t listen
but sometimes sometimes fail
to them. we don’t listen to listen.
to them.
In conclusion, In conclusion, Conciseness In conclusion, Avoid
time time time unnecessary
management is management is management is repetition.
really very really very essential for
essential and essential and students
important for because it helps
students and it important for them perform
is a very good students and it better in school.
skill to have so is a very good
that we can be skill to have so
better in school. that we can be
better in
school.
So, thank you So, thank you Word Choice Thank you for Use formal
very much for very much for listening. I hope closing.
listening and I listening and I you manage
hope that you hope that you your time
will manage will manage wisely to
your time very your time very achieve a better
well and don’t life.
well and don’t
waste it and
make your life
waste it and
good. make your life
good.