WRITING TASK 1
I. TIÊU CHÍ CHẤM WRITING TASK 1:
TA-TR = Task Achievement/Task CC = Coherence and LR = Lexical Resource GRA = Grammatical R
Response Cohesion. and Accuracy
Chọn lọc số liệu chính để miêu tả. Mạch lạc, có logic. Từ vựng đa dạng Đa dạng các loại câu ( đ
Báo cáo số liệu chính xác. Sử dụng các công cụ ( hợp với context) ghép, phức)
So sánh những thông tin liên liên kết hợp lý. Sử dụng paraphrase Độ chính xác ngữ pháp
quan ( xu hướng, số liệu nổi bật) hiệu quả Sử dụng dấu câu hợp lý
Sử dụng collocation
( TA/TR > CC >LR >GRA)
II. TỪ VỰNG MIÊU TẢ BIỂU ĐỒ
1. Miêu tả độ tăng, giảm
1. GM car sales increased significantly from $5,000 to $105,000 between 1960 and
2010
2. There was a significant increase of $100,000 in GM car sales, from $5,000 to
$105,000, between 1960 and 2010
3. GM car sales saw/witnessed/experienced/recorded/registered a significant growth
from $5,000 to $105,000, between 1960 and 2010.
4. GM car sales reached a peak at/of $105,000 in 2010
5. GM car sales had an enormous climb of $100,000 between 1960 and 2010
6. GM car sales registered + số
2. Giới từ
3. Đơn vị số liệu
a. The number of + Plural Countable Noun + Singular Verb Form
The number of people out of work fell by 99,000 to 2.39 million in the three months
to October.
b. The amount of + Singular Uncountable Noun + Singular Verb Form
The amount of rainfall doubles between May and June.
c. The figure(s) for Countable or Uncountable Nouns + Plural Verb Form
The figures for imprisonment fluctuated sharply over the period shown.
d. The proportion of + Countable or Uncountable Nouns + Singular Verb Form
The proportion of spending on furniture and equipment reached its peak in 2001, at
23%.
e. The percentage of + Countable or Uncountable Nouns + Singular Verb Form
The percentage of people using their phones to access the Internet jumped to 41% in
III. CẤU TRÚC CÂU MIÊU TẢ BIỂU ĐỒ.
CÔNG THỨC VÍ DỤ
Cấu trúc 1: In 2004, the number of lecturers in Hanoi University
Time, S + V + adv grew dramatically.
By the end of 2025, the number of public transportation
in Vietnam is expected to rocket.
Cấu trúc 2: There was a significant drop in the number of
CÂU There + be a/an adj N1 in N2 + time smartphones sold in 2005.
ĐƠN There was a moderate growth in the number of literate
citizens in Africa in 2007
The number of literated citizens in Africa experienced a
Cấu trúc 3: moderate growth in 2007.
The number/amount of N2 + The population of China witnessed a tremendous rise in
saw/witnessed/experienced + a/an adj the past 5 years.
N1 + time
A significant increase of 500 was witnessed in the
Cấu trúc 4: number of ZIM students in 2016.
A/an adj N1 was witnessed/seen in
N2 + time
Cấu trúc 5: The year 2007 witnessed a moderate growth in the
Time + witnessed/experienced/saw + number of literated citizens.
a/an adj N1 in N2 The 3 consecutive years from 2000 experienced a
tremendous rise in the population of China.
CÂU Cấu trúc 1: The number of students opting for learning English
PHỨC The number of X + change, which experienced a noticeable decrease, which stood at 300 in
stood at … 2012.
Cấu trúc 2: This number of closures fluctuated over the next four
X change + time, when there be a years until 2015, when there was a dramatic fall to
change to number roughly 700 shops.
Cấu trúc 3: While there was a significant rise in the amount of money
While/ Wherease N1 change, that for allocated for clothes in 2022 , that for facility registered a
N2 change differently remarkable plummet during the same period.
( tương phản )
Cấu trúc 4: The number of people playing games dropped
X change1, before/ after gradually significantly to 23% in 2003, before gradually rising to
rising/ dropping to… 50% in the next two years.
Cấu trúc 5: The number of questionares increased dramatically to 800
X change 1 + time, after which X in 2003, after which this number fell sharply to a half
change 2 + time after 3 months.
Cấu trúc 6: Starting at 50% in 2003, the amount of carbon emission
Starting at + data time, X + change declined remarakably to only 10% in the next three years.
Cấu trúc 7 : There was a decreasing fluctuation of the amount of acid
There was a/an + adj2 + N1, rain emission, followed by a steady decline of that.
followed by + a/an + adj2 + N2
Cấu trúc 8 There was a plateau at 1000 in the number of JOLO
S+ V, which was followed by students who got IELTS 7.0+ in 2013, which was
followed by an increase to 1500 in 2017.
NOTE:
Biểu đồ động ( nhiều mốc thời gian) list/change (trend)/compare
Biểu đồ tĩnh ( 1 mốc thời gian) list/compare
OUTLINE:
Introdution: Paraphrase lại đề bài
TÊN BIỂU ĐỒ + SHOWS/ILLUSTRATES + NỘI DUNG + MỐC TIME
Overview
Dynamic chart: Xu hướng, số liệu lớn nhất, số liệu nhỏ nhất
Static chart : Số liệu cao nhất và nhỏ nhất