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Madalyn Fording

Jason Marr

Acting: Beginning Scene Study

May 12. 2025

Journal Guide II
1) Circumstances-
Esther and Amy are sitting facing each other on a bench in their school locker room. They
are both on the swim team. They have already drank quite a bit of vodka and they are
starting to get drunk. Both girls have their own shot glass. Amy is pregnant and she is
trying everything she can to get rid of it without having a medical abortion or letting too
many people know. Esther is with her to help her get rid of the fetus by doing what she
asks. Amy has been trying to get rid of the fetus for weeks now and nothing seems to be
working. Esther wants to help her because she feels bad and she want to in some way get
closer with Amy, she is scared of her but curious. Amy is also scared but in a different
way, she is scared of people getting to know her, this causes her to put up a wall.
2) Beats-
The beats in the show consist of:
- Page 26: “oranges?” [beat] “I have another joke”. This occurs after both girls have
been sharing facts about themselves and it comes to an awkward point where Amy
changes the subject to avoid sharing more facts about herself to Esther
- Page 28: “What a dick” [beat] “I used to hang out a lot at the rock shop…” The
dialogue leading up to this was playful and quickly turned into an uncomfortable
moment when an inappropriate joke is made and neither character is sure how to
carry on the conversation.
- Page 28: “so you know what I did” [beat] “oh no. What did you do” I have to be
honest I do not know the purpose of this beat. Both characters are in the middle of a
conversation but for the first time in the scene it seems healthy. Both characters are
getting what they want. Amy is able to share one of her stories without fear of being
judged and she is even being encouraged to in a healthy way, like the person she is
speaking to wants to hear more and is interested. Esther is getting Amy to finally open
up and she is learning more about her that is unlike everything she has heard before.
- Page 28: “…just more rock” [beat] “that’s crazy…” In this instance, the beat doesn’t
seem to be placed here to give explanation to an awkward or uncomfortable moment
but instead to give the characters a chance to bond and perhaps laugh with one
another before calming down and continuing dialogue.
- Page 29: “…it’s disgusting” [beat] “you don’t think it will just come out deformed?”
Here we see a complete shift in tone. The girls have just gone from sharing funny
stories to now back on the elephant in the room, Amy is pregnant.
- Page 30: “okay” [beat] “but can you not say it” Here we see a shift between the
characters themselves rather than a complete shift in the tone or feel of the scene.
Amy has asked Esther to punch her in order to get rid of “it” and Esther has expressed
her discomfort in referring to the fetus in this scene thus changing the dynamic of the
two characters from what it just was.
- Page 31: “sit down and take a fucking shot” [beat] “the guy postponed…” Here we
finally see Esther start to stand up for herself but it is because she wants to both help
Amy but also she is a little fearful of her. She agrees to punch her, does so, and in
thinking she hurt her she backs up out of guilt and changes the subject.
- Page 33: “really” [beat] “cool” Amy has just shared to Esther that she wishes to be a
writer in the future, something that is very unrealistic from her character and it takes
Esther by surprise at first but then she sinks into the idea and accepts it.
- Page 34: “yeah okay” [beat] “hey Amy” Here we can see Esther finally mustering up
what she has wanted to know this entire time, if she and Amy are friends. She asks
and is met with laughter which leads into another delicate moment between the two
- Page 34: “no” [beat] “why would you think- ” At this point the girls have gotten very
comfortable with one another and are starting to show their true personalities. Esther
has been asked about the rumors she has heard about Amy and she is trying to lie and
say that they aren’t that bad to spare her feelings.
- Page 35: “ I said that’s cool” [beat] “No Esther…” Esther is seen trying to relate to or
make Amy’s situation seem better than it is and Amy reverts back to her defensive
tone.
- Page 36: “punch me” [beat] “I don’t think I want to” At the very end of the scene, the
pressure and the anger has gotten to Amy and she almost snaps back into the
circumstance that she is in fact pregnant and wants to get rid of this fetus any way
possible. She snaps at Esther to punch her to which she refuses out of fear of the state
Amy is in, this puts the entire scene to a halt and both characters end up backing
down before the lights go down.

3) An Action
4) Action II
5) The Obstacle:
6) Action and Obstacle in Balance:
We see clear tension throughout the scene with the girls but we see the peak right when
Amy tells Esther to punch her for the first time. Here we see the action and obstacle
working against each other. The obstacle so far has been Amy shutting down and being
defensive when Esther is trying to get her open up which is the action, Amy sharing with
Esther. In this specific moment, the obstacle is Amy blowing up at Esther for not wanting
to think about punching a fetus. Esthers goal, or action, is to get her to calm down and
stay in the locker room so she can help her.
7) Tactics:
8) Transitions:
9) Backstory:
Esther is an 18 year old girl in high school in Florida. She is originally from Tampa but
moved away a year ago. Her childhood was pretty normal, she grew up in a nice
neighborhood, she went to private school until she was 12 which is when her parents
divorced and she moved in with her mom. Her mom could not afford public school by
herself and so she transferred to a public middle school. She grew up with two older
brothers but they were significantly older than her so she never really knew them. The
middle child, Jake, was 13 when she was 6 and her oldest brother, Ethan, was 16 at the
time. Her brothers were always very close with one another but they never really
included her in their lives. She remembers when they both got girlfriends and how they
treated them, this has affected her view on men to this day. She doesn’t hate men by any
means but she is very cautious. She had a lot of energy as a child and whenever her
family went on vacations, she always wanted to go to the beach or somewhere with a
pool. Her parents could never get her out of the water. Due to this, her parents decided to
put her in swimming so she would have an outlet and she fell in love with it. Whenever
she had meets, her whole family would be together and everyone seemed to get along.
After the meets were over, Ethan would usually drive to meet his friends, Jake would go
back home with everyone and disappear to his room, her father would go into his office
to work, and her mom would be stuck making her a sandwich and cleaning up. Once her
parents divorced everything simultaneously fell apart but also started to make sense and
she threw herself into her swimming career. She was always at the pool and her coach
took advantage of her dedication and feelings and pushed her too far until she got injured.
This is when her mother decided that she needed to get her daughter away and she moved
to Tampa. At this point, Ethan has graduated college and Jake is in his sophomore year at
UCLA. It is just Esther and her mother. Now she is in middle school trying her best to
keep to herself because she’s afraid that if someone asks her about herself, she will tell
them everything and she doesn’t want to be that vulnerable. She ends up becoming
friends with a girl named Abby but they could not be more different. They get along just
fine but they are friends with one another because neither of them want to be alone. Once
she gets to high school, she and Abby never speak again but they have no bad blood.
Here in high school she joins the swim team and by this point she has accepted her
parents divorce and is ready to open up. She swam throughout middle school but not as
much and now she is able to reignite her love for her sport, this time with girls her age
who share the same passion. She is still pretty shy but she wants to show people that she
is a genuine person and when Amy asks her for help, she sees this as her chance to prove
that she can help others. A main reason she wants to be able to help others so badly is
because no one was there for her when she was going through her hardest time.
10) Personalization:
I see a lot of myself in Esther. I am a lot different from her today but I can still see
similarities. When I was a child I played a bunch of different sports, one of those
including swimming. I remember wanting to be good at it but it not being my favorite.
Instead of swimming being my passion, mine became theater (hence why I am here right
now). My parents also got divorced when I was a child but I was much younger and I did
not have any siblings so I had no one to talk to. I figured out how to be very independent
like she is. While she is shy and she stuck to herself so she wouldn’t embarrass herself, I
found stuff that would make people like me, a lot of which was not true. I was a different
version of myself in elementary, middle, and high school just like Esther. Also when I got
to high school I found my outlet with other people my age which was my theater class. I
am also a people pleaser and do what I can to help others even if it does make me
uncomfortable and it takes a second for me to speak up for myself.

11) Inner Monologue


12) Subtext
Artwork:
Song:

American Teenager by Ethen Cain

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The progression of beats in the scene reveals an evolving relationship between Esther and Amy, characterized by vulnerability, openness, and tension. Initially, the beats such as those on page 26 where Amy deflects deeper questions, showcase Amy's reluctance to reveal personal information. As the scene progresses, the beats reveal a shift towards mutual understanding, especially when Amy shares her aspirations to be a writer, which surprises Esther and deepens their bond . However, the dynamics take a tense turn when Amy's pregnancy comes to the forefront again, showing their fluctuating emotional states . The final beats, where Amy demands Esther to punch her, and Esther resists, reveal both Esther's emerging assertiveness and the heavy emotional burden both characters bear, reflecting their conflicting desires for help and autonomy .

The personal histories of Esther and Amy significantly affect the present dynamics in the scene by shaping their responses to each other's actions and creating a complex web of dependency and resistance. Esther's past, which includes her parents' divorce and her struggle with loneliness and acceptance, drives her to be empathetic and supportive towards Amy, seeking to form a meaningful connection . Amy, on the other hand, is defensive and cautious due to her fear of vulnerability and social judgement. Her struggle with the unwanted pregnancy adds layers to her defensiveness, influencing her volatile interactions with Esther. These histories cause Esther to approach Amy with patience and care, while Amy oscillates between opening up to Esther and retreating into herself . The interplay of these backgrounds creates tension and emotional depth in their relationship, underscoring the struggle between personal insecurities and the desire for connection.

Peer influence manifests in the characters' behavior through their interactions and the pressure they exert on one another. Esther is driven by a need for acceptance and to help Amy, influenced by her past experiences of feeling unsupported during difficult times. This desire translates into her actions, where she pushes herself to be more assertive and helpful, even when uncomfortable, in order to assist Amy . Amy, on the other hand, shows signs of influence from the expectations and judgments of others, which is evident in her defensive demeanor and fear of rumors. Her reliance on Esther to keep her secret and her extreme request for physical harm reflect the significant weight peer perception holds over her decisions . The scene's progression reveals how both characters navigate these influences, with Esther seeking validation through helping Amy and Amy balancing her need for privacy against the consequences of peer exposure .

Dialogue beats play a critical role in shaping the emotional landscape of the scene by marking shifts in tone, tension, and character dynamics. These beats, such as the awkward silence following an inappropriate joke or the pause after Esther acknowledges Amy's outlandish writer ambition, create layers of emotional complexity . They allow moments of introspection, humor, and discomfort to surface, giving the characters a chance to subtly convey their internal states without explicit exposition. As the scene progresses, the beats highlight the oscillating emotional tension between the characters, capturing their fears and desires . Particularly, the beats during pivotal moments, like Amy's request for Esther to hit her, spotlight the escalation of conflict and the intensity of vulnerability present. These pauses emphasize the characters' inner conflicts and motivations, rendering the dialogue more impactful and resonant .

The narrative explores concepts of vulnerability and self-defense through the interplay between Amy's protective walls and Esther's empathic tendencies. Amy's strategic shifts in conversation and her reluctance to appear vulnerable by deflecting serious topics with humor and jokes highlight her self-defensive stance . Her fear of being judged contributes to her constructed walls. Conversely, Esther's character is driven by a need to foster vulnerability in their relationship as a way to offer support. Despite her initial hesitance and fear of stepping beyond her comfort zone, Esther's actions illustrate a progression towards assertiveness by pushing Amy to open up and face her reality . The scene captures the tension between Amy's need to protect her emotional core and Esther’s determination to be supportive, thereby revealing the complexity involved in navigating personal insecurities and fostering trust.

The tension between action and obstacle in Esther and Amy's scene serves as a central driving force that enhances the narrative by highlighting the internal and external conflicts faced by the characters. The primary action is Esther's attempt to support and comfort Amy, striving for open communication and emotional relief. Opposing this action is the obstacle of Amy's defensiveness and emotional trauma over her pregnancy, which leads her to react with aggression and withdrawal . This tension is punctuated by moments of intense vulnerability and humor that reveal the depth of their friendship and individual struggles. The push-pull dynamic between Esther's supportive actions and Amy's walls showcases their complex relationship and adds emotional depth to the narrative. It also symbolizes a broader theme of human empathy confronting emotional barriers .

Esther embodies the theme of empathy and support through her willingness to help Amy despite the moral and emotional discomfort it causes her. Her backstory highlights how she was always trying to be involved and helpful, driven by past experiences of feeling alone after her parents' divorce . This drives her need to prove herself as supportive. Esther's actions throughout the scene, such as trying to comfort Amy and even agreeing to extreme measures, are driven by empathy for Amy's situation and a desire to build a deeper bond through shared vulnerability and mutual reliance, mirroring how she sought companionship through swimming . Thus, her motivations stem from both the desire to assist others and to confirm her own self-worth as a supportive friend.

The setting of the school locker room plays a crucial role in influencing the characters' interactions and the scene's progression. It serves as a private yet somewhat oppressive space, which mirrors the intimate yet tense nature of Esther and Amy’s conversation. Being part of the swim team, the locker room is a place of familiarity, comfort, and routine for both characters, adding a layer of safety that allows them to be more open and honest with each other . However, the claustrophobic aspects of the space reflect the emotional pressure they both face, particularly Amy, who is trapped by her secret and her desire to escape her predicament. The enclosed setting also sets the stage for assertive actions, like the moment Amy asks Esther to punch her, an act made more confrontational due to the physical closeness and lack of an escape route . Overall, the setting amplifies the emotional stakes while facilitating moments of genuine connection and heightened tension.

Amy struggles with opening up to Esther, despite their shared experience on the swim team, due to her fear of people getting to know her true self. Her use of humor and topic shifts in conversations, like the deflection seen in the exchange about oranges, is a defensive mechanism to avoid vulnerability . This fear results in a metaphorical wall between her and others, impeding deeper connections. The pressure of hiding her pregnancy adds another layer of fear and isolation, making her reluctant to trust even someone like Esther, with whom she shares a common activity. Furthermore, Esther's curiosity coupled with her apprehensions keeps the relationship delicately balanced, with both knowing they have the potential to become closer but held back by Amy's fears .

Esther's backstory, including her parents' divorce and her move to Tampa with her mother, contributes significantly to her actions in the scene with Amy. Her upbringing in a nice neighborhood and experience of her family disintegrating instilled in her a strong desire for connection and stability. The lack of close familial bonds, illustrated by her brothers’ detachment, makes her eager to form friendships and afraid of loneliness, which is why she is keen to help Amy. Esther's dedication to swimming as a means of escape from her personal troubles shows her tendency to invest deeply in activities or relationships that provide her a sense of purpose, which aligns with her efforts to support Amy . Her past experiences and desire to prove herself useful to others reflect her motivations to assist Amy, despite the discomfort it causes her .

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