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INTRODUCTIONS

All great works of writing must begin somewhere. Novels begin with an engaging first scene,
speeches begin with an exciting opening line, and essays—similarly—begin with what we call an
introduction.

An introduction is a single paragraph at the start of an essay that has three goals:

1. Grab the reader’s attention.


2. Explain the topic briefly.
3. State your purpose.

PART 1: THE HOOK

Starting with our first goal, we need to grab the reader’s attention. In the essay-writing world, we
do this by beginning the introduction with what is called a hook.

Hook: a 1-3 sentence attention-grabber.

There are several ways to write a strong hook, but the most common and effective strategies are:

1. Surprising fact: An extraordinary/little-known fact that may shock the audience.


a. EXAMPLE: Despite the terror movies like Jaws and The Meg may strike into a
viewer’s heart, the truth is that vending machines kill more people annually than
sharks.
b. NOTE: Does not begin with “did you know?” You want to avoid questions in
academic writing. Essays are not speeches. The audience cannot respond to
your question, so asking it detracts from the essay.
2. Short anecdote: A quick, vivid story illustrating the issue you intend to discuss.
a. EXAMPLE: Allen Smith had been dreaming of his favorite snack all afternoon.
Then, the vending machine ate his dollar, and anger consumed him rather than
him consuming his coveted Takis. Allen banged on the machine and it toppled,
leaving him a blood smear on his office building’s floor.
b. These anecdotes can be fictional, but you must disclose when they’re fake. For
example, we could follow up Allen’s story with “While Allen’s story may be
fictional, two people every year suffer the same gruesome fate.”
3. Quote: Impactful words from a significant figure intended to stir emotion in the audience.
a. You must introduce the source of the material first. Do not begin the hook
immediately with the quote.
i. EX: In the words of Chief Brody in Jaws, “We’re going to need a bigger
boat.”
ii. In this example, the introduction to the source (also called a “lead-in
phrase” comes before the quote itself).
b. After the quote, you must follow it up with a sentence that connects the quote to
the topic. Do not just plop in the quote and move on.
c. The person you’re quoting must be relevant to the topic. Do not quote a random
person.

PART 2: CONTEXT

The next goal of an introduction is to briefly explain your topic. We do this using context.

Context: The circumstances that form the setting for an event, statement, or idea, and in terms
which can be fully understood. In essay-writing, context is 3-5 sentences that provide your
reader without background information on your topic.

Context usually includes…

• Important terms
• Briefly introduces figures significant to your essay
• Concisely sums up the history of your topic

Questions to consider when writing context:

• What is the current significance of this topic/issue?


• Why is this topic important?
• What occurred to initiate this discussion?
• What conversation am I joining?

For example, if we were writing an essay about the Watergate scandal, it would be important to
briefly explain who Richard Nixon was, the key figures involved in the scandal, and the
circumstances leading up to the scandal.

While context is usually 3-5 sentences, more complex topics may call for more information.

Audience is crucial when determining context. Some audiences may be more aware than
others. For example, adults will have more knowledge than small children and won’t require the
same amount of information.

Things to consider:

• Age group - are they children or adults?


• Prior knowledge - are they familiar with your topic?
• Already held beliefs (religion, culture, etc.) - do they have any core values you must
consider before engaging?
• Status/Position - are they your superior or subordinate?
• Their stance on the issue - do they agree already?
• What is important/unimportant to them? - do they value health, human rights, personal
entertainment, etc.?
• What do you have to say that might surprise your audience? - do you know something
they might not?
• What do you want the audience to think or learn? - what is your goal in engaging this
particular person/group?

PART 3: THESIS STATEMENT

For our third goal—state your purpose—we use what we call a thesis statement.

Thesis statement: A single (1) concise sentence that acts as the governing proposition of your
essay.

Thesis statements should…

• State your topic clearly.


• Present the stance/side you’ll be arguing for (if writing an argument)
• Present your reasoning in the most general terms

Example thesis statements:

1. People who eat meat should consider becoming vegan because it has a positive impact on
the environment, has health benefits, and saves animals.
a. In this example, it’s clear what side the author is arguing for and why.
2. Learning to frost a cupcake is as easy as making buttercream, loading a piping bag, and
squeezing a nozzle.
a. This example, though not an argument, makes it clear what we’re going to read
about and what each paragraph will discuss.

NOTE: Effective, college-level essays do not include phrases such as…

• “In this essay I will…”


• “This essay explores…”
• “I will be discussing…”
• “The purpose of this essay is…”

Do not use these phrases. They are more characteristic of scientific writing, and that is not what
we are learning in this class. We’re learning to write essays aimed at general audiences and/or
humanities courses.

A strong thesis will also project the organization of the essay. Using the first example above,
the first paragraph after the introduction will discussing environmental benefits of veganism,
the second will discuss health benefits, and the third will discuss saving animals. Straying from
the organization laid out in the thesis will lead to a disorganized experience for the reader.

THESIS FORMULA: Using this simple formula, you can draft effective thesis statements for
most writing situations.

While (benefit of opposing view), (your view) because (reason 1), (reason 2), and (reason 3).
While cats are great pets for apartment living, dogs are better companions because their breeds
are more diverse, they can act as service animals, and they are more trainable.

In this example, we begin by presenting a benefit of the opposing view; this creates a bridge to
the audience members who may not agree with us and makes them feel respected. Then, we
follow up by presenting our own view and general reasoning.

When writing arguments, the thesis must be debatable. Meaning, there should not be an
agreed-upon consensus for the topic. There is no argument to be had about whether the sky is
blue or whether the ocean has salt.

BONUS GOAL: CREATE A STRONG FIRST IMPRESSION.

The last, more nebulous goal of an effective introduction is to create a strong first impression on
the audience.

In real life, we create a strong first impression by dressing nicely, practicing good hygiene, and
begin polite by way of following social cues.

In essay writing, we create a strong first impression by…

• Using proper grammar and spelling.


• Organizing our ideas thoughtfully and logically.
• Respecting the audience by using neutral, academic language.
• Being succinct.

Common questions

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A successful essay introduction consists of three components: the hook, context, and thesis statement. The hook grabs the reader’s attention by presenting a surprising fact, anecdote, or quote to engage the audience immediately . Context then provides brief background information with 3-5 sentences that explain important terms, introduce significant figures, and summarize the topic’s history . Lastly, the thesis statement clearly states the essay’s purpose and outlines the argument or stance the writer will take, ensuring clarity and direction in the essay's structure .

Using questions as a hook in essay writing can detract from the essay as they engage the audience in conversations that are not feasible in written form, creating dissonance because the audience cannot respond . Instead, attention can be effectively captured through techniques such as presenting a surprising fact, which shocks or intrigues the audience (e.g., vending machines killing more people annually than sharks), or sharing a vivid anecdote or impactful quote that is directly related to the topic . These methods are able to engage the reader’s interest immediately while setting the tone for the essay without relying on unanswered questions.

A strong thesis statement in an argumentative essay differentiates itself from a weak one by clearly stating the topic and the writer’s stance while also presenting concise, general reasoning for that stance. It must be debatable, enabling discussion and inviting analysis rather than simply stating a fact or consensus, which highlights its argument. Furthermore, a strong thesis projects the essay's structure, which organizes the argument coherently, as opposed to a weak thesis which may be vague or lack direction, thus leading to a disorganized essay and diminished persuasive power .

The audience can significantly influence the context provided in an essay introduction. Factors such as the audience's age, prior knowledge, cultural beliefs, status, stance on the issue, and their interests are crucial considerations. For example, adults might require less explanation of common concepts compared to children. Additionally, if the audience already holds beliefs relevant to the topic, the context must be carefully crafted to address these views respectfully . Understanding what is important to the audience and what might surprise them is also essential for creating engaging and relevant context that aligns with the audience's values and expectations .

A thesis statement plays a pivotal role in organizing an essay by stating the main topic and presenting the stance or argument. It serves as the essay’s governing proposition, which helps in shaping the structure by outlining the main points that will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs. For instance, a thesis statement about veganism might preview the environmental benefits, health benefits, and animal savings, dictating the organizational flow . This not only provides clarity and direction for both the writer and the reader but also ensures consistency and coherence in the argument, making it easier to follow and more persuasive .

To create a strong first impression in an essay introduction, writers should use proper grammar and spelling, organize ideas thoughtfully and logically, and employ neutral, academic language. Additionally, being succinct helps convey respect for the reader's time and interest. These strategies are effective because they demonstrate the writer’s competence and credibility, encouraging trust and engagement from the audience right from the beginning of the essay. A well-organized introduction reflects a clear argumentation path, making it easier for readers to follow and stay interested .

Context in an essay introduction aids reader comprehension by supplying necessary background information, which helps in understanding the topic fully. It typically includes important terms, brief introductions to significant figures, and a concise history of the topic. This effectively situates the reader within the subject, making complex topics accessible and preparing them for the thesis that follows . By doing so, it engages readers, making them more likely to continue reading to see how the essay will develop these ideas.

The thesis formula enhances the persuasiveness of an argumentative essay by structuring the thesis to acknowledge opposing viewpoints before presenting the writer’s perspective. This approach respects differing opinions, creating a bridge to those who might disagree, as seen in formulations like "While (benefit of opposing view), (your view) because (reason 1), (reason 2), and (reason 3)" . By first conceding a point of the opposition and then clearly outlining one's position along with concise reasons, the writer presents a comprehensive and balanced argument that appears more thoughtful and considerate, thereby increasing its persuasive power.

The alignment of a thesis statement with the essay's organizational structure contributes positively to the reader's experience by ensuring clarity and predictability in the argument’s progression. When a thesis clearly outlines the essay’s main points, it sets an expected path that the essay will follow, making it easier for readers to understand and follow the argument. This organization prevents confusion and allows readers to focus on the content and analysis rather than trying to decipher the structure. Deviating from this alignment leads to a disorganized experience that can frustrate readers .

It is important to avoid phrases like 'In this essay I will...' in essays aimed at general audiences because they are typical of scientific writing and do not project the intended tone or sophistication of humanities essays. Such phrases make the writing less engaging and sound mechanical or formulaic, detracting from the strong impression a well-structured thesis should convey . Instead, the thesis should inherently indicate the topics' structure and focus without redundant explanations, enhancing clarity and professionalism.

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