WRITING PART 1:
Sample answer 1:
Hey! Thats great!
I’m doesn’t prefer Monday afternoon is doesn’t possible to me, because I have tennis classes
after school, and next. I am going with Laura houses, and Friday is perfect. For me, I don’t
have nothing, do you like this day?
My favorite types of the films is comedi and romantic film, and in the film club was another,
and you like, we can see, I don’t have any prolem to the film. Yes, is a very good idea, I am
buying some pop corn and a botle water or and sweets I don’t know, were you buy in
Kises
WRite me soon and see you soon
Clara!
Sample answer 2:
Good afternoon Mrs Rose
I just got your email and I think it’s really great idea becase I think lots of people like
watching films.
I personally would prefer Mondays because on Fridays I often have other plans with my
family.
I would really love to see some detective or some action films but I relly do’t mind watching
something different.
I think it’s good idea to have some food or drink during the film because lots of people are
used to it because in cinemas they always eat something so i think it would be great
Have a nice day
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WRITING PART 2 - ARTICLE
Sample answer 2:
I love to watch comedies a lot because it makes me laugh. The comedy I love the most is the
Chinese Running Man. I enjoy watching and laughing it with my family. In the show, famous
actors and actresses must overcome some challenging quests, such as trading a coffee bean
with someone else for something more expensive and racing in the mud to capture the flag.
The storylines are very interesting and they always tickles my funny bone. Laughing out loud
is great! Laughing can help us to release stress and make us feel better. It may also make us
more attractive too!
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WRITING PART 2 - STORY
Sample answer 1:
Jo looked at the map and decided to go left. He wanted to go to the Karpats on foot. Jo liked
to go to the rivers, forests and mountains on foot. He always took map with he. But one day
he lost! Jo was very worried and scared. He was in the forest one week. He was could at night,
he was very hot in the afternoon. He ate mushroomes and berries. But he found a way from
the forest. And from that day he never came to the forest on foot. He always go to the rivers,
forests and mountains on ships, by trains, by plantes. But he never go to the unknows places
on foot.
Sample answer 2:
Jo looked at the map and decided to go left. Jo were in car with he friend, Lucy and go from
city in car. Jo decide go in your car and nice day. They leave soon and take map but Jo looked
at map and decided to go left so went in bad way and Lucy cry. They don’t came in good way
and go to the your home. When they came house nobody home so they watch tv and see film
and enjoy
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