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WRITING TASK 1

1)​ Paraphrase

How someone + V + something


eg: the bar chart illustrates how the rate of men and women engaged in sport varied
across 6 age groups.

PARAPHRASE

Table → (line) graph, diagram


Show → give, demonstrate, illustrate, indicate, Compare
Data → Information
Percentage
➔​ Proportion of
➔​ rates of…/ …rates
➔​ levels of…/ …levels
CHART
➔​ the figures for
About → Regarding
Average → Typical
UNITS
A number of → various
the amount of → the volume of

different → various
the consumption of X
→ the amount/ the number of X consumed // X consumption
the production of X
→ the amount/ the number of X produced // X production
average spending on ….
→ average expenditure on …. // the amount (of money) spent on …. //
→ the expense on clothes

Years
➔​ over a period of … years starting from …
➔​ over a 10-year period // over the next … years // during the same period
➔​ from the year … onwards
➔​ In the first examined year,...
WHEN Every day/ month/ week/ year
➔​ Each / per + d/m/w/y
➔​ Daily / Monthly / Weekly / Yearly (Annually)
➔​ On + Daily / Monthly / Weekly / Yearly (Annual) + basis
during the period shown
during this time frame // during the given period

the 20-30 age group


➔​ 20-to-30-year-old people // 20-to-30-year-olds // the 20-30s
➔​ people who fell (falling) into the 20 to 30 age group
➔​ people (who were) between 20 and 30 years old
AGE
➔​ people (who were) aged 20 to 30
➔​ people (who were) in their twenties
➔​ people in the age range of 20 to 30
People aged 65 or more
→ the elderly // older people aged 65 or more
~ across [number] age groups

people driving to work


car users // people traveling by car // commute by car
forms of transport
DATA means/ modes of transport
unemployment
joblessness // people who were unemployed // people who were jobless - people
without work

Trends (Static Charts)

TREND VERB NOUN

★​ Increase ★​ to record an increase/


★​ Rise a rise/ a growth
★​ Grow steadily (v) tăng đều [ of ]
★​ go up
★​ Climb
★​ rocket
★​ ascend temporarily (v) tăng nhất ★​ a doubling
thời ★​ a trebling
[ in + n ]
[ to…/by…]
★​ witness an upward
★​ double: tăng gấp đôi trend
★​ treble/ triple: tăng gấp ba ★​ Reach a high of
★​ surge dramatically/quickly (v) ★​ a peak = a spike
tăng đột ngột
[ from…to… ]

★​ to peak at…
★​ Peak + … times.
★​ Outstrip [vượt xa]

★​ Decrease sizably/ substantially ★​ to undergo a decrease/


(v) giảm tương đối / đáng kể decline/ fall/ drop
★​ Decline insignificantly (v) giảm [ of ]
k đáng kể ★​ a reduction
★​ Fall ★​ a plummet
★​ Drop
★​ roughly / nearly halved to (v)
giảm phân nửa
★​ go down sharply/ slightly
giảm mạnh/nhe ★​ a (final) levelling off

[ to…/by…]
★​ Tail off (gradually decrease)
★​ Plummet remarkably (v) sụt
đáng kể
★​ Shrink consistently/ abruptly
(v) giảm liên tục / đột ngột
★​ to bottom at…
★​ hit a low of

Lưu ý: Thêm Unfortunately,.. đầu câu

★​ Fluctuate ★​ fluctuation

[ around ]
[ between…and… ]

★​ rebound briefly (v) vực dậy


nhanh chóng

S + fluctuate over the .. period


There are significant changes in ~
There are some slight shifts
S + vary consistently/continuously:
biến động liên tục
S + go up and down several times: lên
xuống vài lần

Ổn định Remain almost/ relatively Constant /


stabilize at

S + is nearly relatively flat


S + remain relatively/ almost stable
S + stay at
There was nearly / relatively no
change

So sanh S + is nearly / roughly equal to ~


(gần như bằng)
S + be close behind at: gần bằng

Mức độ (degree)

DEGREE ADJ

dramatic / huge / broad / enormous /


Very extensive change
tremendous

substantial /considerable / significant /


Extensive change remarkable
notable
DEGREE ADJ

dramatic / huge / broad / enormous /


Very extensive change
tremendous

noticeable
Average change marked
moderate + [fluctuation]

slight small /minimal


Small change
marginal

Speed

SPEED ADJ

rapid - quick - sharp - swift -


Quick change
steep

Slow change steady - gradual - slow

Unexpected change sudden - unexpected - abrupt

Rounding (làm tròn)


For trends:
-​ relatively / rather / almost
For value:
-​ roughly / almost / about / approximately / around / just about
-​ just below (above)
-​ A little / slightly more (less) than

Cách diễn đạt


Số liệu (Vs)
-​ Reach / Stood at / accounted for / comprise + [data]

STRUCTURE

1 CHỦ THỂ 2 THỜI GIAN


1)​ S + V + ADV + [data] + (time)
-​ Music stream grew significantly from 5% in 2011 to 10% in 2020.
-​ The figure for music streams has shown a significant rise from 5% in 2011 to 10% in 2020.
2)​ There be + a/an ADJ N + [data] + in S + (time)
-​ There is a significant growth to 10% in music streams between 2011 and 2020.
3)​ S + witnessed/ experienced/ saw + a/an ADJ N + (time)
-​ Music streams witnessed significant growth in 2018.

1 CHỦ THỂ 3 THỜI GIAN


1)​ After + a/an ADJ N + (time), S + V + (time), before + V + a/an N + (time)
-​ After a slight drop in 2020, the whale population rebounded briefly in 2021 before undergoing a
notable decline in 2022.

2 CHỦ THỂ 1 THỜI GIAN


1)​ S1 + Vs [data], số lần + as much as that of S2
-​ The percentage of students with very good qualifications stood at 75%, three times as
much as that of those with excellent qualifications.
2)​ S1 + Vs [data] + as opposed to/ whereas/ compared to + [data] + S2
-​ The percentage of students with very good qualifications stood at 75% as opposed to/ in
comparison with/ compared to only 22% of students with excellent qualifications.
3)​ There be + [data] + spent on + S1, while + the figure for S2 + Vs [data]
-​ There was around 4,000 Dollars spent on cars in the US, while the figure for Spain stood
at 2,000 Dollars.
4)​ At [data], S + be + số lần + higher than that of + S2
-​ At 75%, the figure for students with very good qualifications was about three times higher
than that of those with good qualifications.
5)​ S1 + Vs [data], which be + [difference] + higher than S2
-​ The percentage of students with very good qualifications stood at 75%, which was 53%
higher than that of those with excellent qualifications.
6)​ With a figure of [data], S1 exceeded/ surpassed S2 by [difference]
-​ With a figure of 75%, the percentage of students with very good qualifications exceeded
that of those with excellent qualifications.
7)​ S1 + witness + a/an N + to [data], surpassing S2 + by [difference]

with: theo sau đó ★​ Then,... // Next,...// Afterwards,...// Following


this/that,... // After this/that…
★​ This is followed by…
★​ (which is) followed by
→ There is a peak of 700 at midday, followed by an
afternoon decline to a low of 230 at 4 pm.
★​ …, after which it + V
→ It stood at 20 in 1983 and doubled over the next 10
years to level off at 40, after which it remained constant
until 2003.

be accompanied by be matched by: được gắn với


→ The 8 am passenger surge is matched by a high price of
29$.
in line with: cùng với
→ Ticket prices increase broadly in line with passenger
traffic.

by contrast + Clause
→ .., by contrast it produced the most fruit in the season.

PREDICTING THE FUTURE

Set 1 Predictions show [ that ] it will + V.


Expectations reveal
Anticipations indicate
Forecasts
Estimates
Evaluation
Calculation

Set 2 It is predicted that S will V.


expected
anticipated
forecast
estimated
evaluated
calculated
likely to be ADJ

Set 3 S is/are // to V.

ADJ
subsequent: sau đó (later)
→ The number reaches 800$ in prices, with a subsequent rise to 1000$ at 4 am.

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