From 5.5 -6.0 to 7.0-7.5 = it takes around a month to 2 months!
Without exact approaches, the most effective and easiest techniques,
structures – it may take more than 6 months to improve from 5.5 to 6.5-
7.0
Why you are trying but see no progress?
1. You don’t know any effective structure, approaches
99% teachers always say to students:
You must give one idea, explain it, give an example and conclude the
paragraph!
99% students do not understand how to write and get a lower score!
1% teachers explain how to structure the essay!
Mixed essay -2-3 MINUTDA YOZADI
Nowadays, parents are spending less time on their children. What are the
reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative
development?
REASON 1: increasing work demands
REASON 2: excessive screen time
Negative: weakened family relationships
There is a growing trend where [paraphrase the statement]. While this
can be largely attributed to a combination of [reason1] and [reason2], I
personally view it as mostly detrimental/ advantageous through the
lens of [idea]
Through the lens of = in terms of
These days, most students go abroad to study. What are the reasons for
this and is this positive or negative?
Reason 1: a higher quality of education
Reason 2: more career prospects
Positive: personal and professional growth
There is a growing trend where the interaction between parents and children has
diminished significantly in recent times [paraphrased]. While this can be largely
attributed to a combination of increasing work demands and excessive screen
addiction [reasons], I personally view it as mostly detrimental through the lens of
weakened family relationships [negative idea].
There is a growing trend where a majority of students apply to foreign universities
in the hope of academic aspirations [paraphrased]. While this can be largely
attributed to a combination of a pursuit of a higher quality of education and more
career prospects [reasons], I personally view it as mostly advantageous through the
lens of personal and professional growth [positive idea]
Darajasi past bolgani – vocab grammar yaxshi emasligi va idea
yoqlgidan vaqtini behuda sarflaydi essayda
Writing 6.5+ larda ham – language yaxhsiligi sabab – examiner ni
impress qilaman deb vocab, idea, grammar ga vaqt kop sarflaydi
Natijasi – time issue va not expected result!
EXAM = GAME PLAN!
Some schoolchildren dislike learning math.
What might be the reasons for this? How to encourage children to enjoy
learning math?
There is a growing trend where a majority of children at school find
math difficult to learn [paraphrased]. While this can be largely
attributed to perceived difficulty of the subject and inappropriate
teaching methods [reasons], this problem can be effectively addressed
by applying interactive approaches in the classroom and engaging
students in group discussions [solutions]
Reason and effect approach!
One compelling reason why schoolchildren hate learning math is its
difficulty [idea]. With complex formulas, challenging theories, required
deep concentration and critical thinking ability [reasons], most children
do not engage in classroom discussions and show less curiosity to master
this subject [effect]
Effect: children
Some people believe that governments should invest in an effective
transport system but others think that there are other areas that need
funding. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
- Should governments spend money on transport system?
- What areas governments should allocate funds to ?
The question of (whether) …[actual topic] has long been a topic
debate, with some believing that [paraphrase 1-argument + one key
idea], while critics argue that [ paraphrase 2-argument]. I personally
support the former/latter viewpoint as +subject + verb [give key ideas
in body 2]
The question of what areas governments should allocate funds to has
long been a topic of debate, with some believing that investing in
efficient transport networks fosters urban development, while critics
argue that other crucial sectors – education and healthcare – ought to be
equally prioritized [paraphrased + key idea]. I personally support the
latter viewpoint as these fields play a fundamental role in a nation’s
sustainable progress [my position + body 2 idea].
investing in efficient transport networks fosters urban development
BODY 1 –
When structure!
Proponents of transportation investment often highlight its fundamental role in
urban development [idea] When governments allocate a significant portion of
their investment to transportation systems [paraphrase], they enhance public
transport services, reduce traffic congestion while improving a flow of traffic, and
minimizing air pollution in urban areas [benefits].
Reason and effect approach!
One compelling reason why schoolchildren hate learning math is its difficulty
[idea]. With complex formulas, challenging theories, required deep concentration
and critical thinking ability [reasons], most children do not engage in classroom
discussions and show less curiosity to master this subject [effect]
There is a growing trend where the interaction between parents and children has
diminished significantly in recent times [paraphrased]. While this can be largely
attributed to a combination of increasing work demands and excessive screen
addiction [reasons], I personally view it as mostly detrimental through the lens of
weakened family relationships [negative idea].
Reason + effect approach! With + Subject + V ing ….
One compelling reason for decreased time between parents and children
is overworking [idea]. With many parents working in multiple
organizations to earn money, companies expecting workers to work long
hours to meet deadlines, and most of them prioritizing professional
commitments and career promotion over family responsibilities
[reasons], parents have little to no time to communicate with their
family member and children at home. [effect]
Effect: parents spend less time on children
When [paraphrase the argument], subject + verb [ count a list of
benefits], thereby not only V ing [result 1] but also V ing [result 2]. This
is exemplified by ….