1.
CHOOSE ONE OF VIET NAM’S WORLD HERITAGE SITES AND
WRITE A PARAGRAPH (150-180 WORDS) TO INTRODUCE IT.
Ha Long Bay is one of the most stunning destinations in Viet Nam and is
also a World Heritage site. It is a tourist attraction because of picturesque
islands and breath-taking views. Tourists can take part in many activities
which are outdoor and water sports like swimming, kayaking, hiking,
camping and ziplining. Especially, people also take a boat trip to get around
these caves and they can take some photos to memory beautiful
anniversaries. Although the stunning beauty of the natural scenery attracts
visitors, it is the area’s unforgettable biodiversity that appeals to nature
lovers. The bay is home to a diverse range of flora and fauna, including rare
species like the Cat Ba Langur. You might also spot cute monkeys swinging
from the trees or dolphins playing in the water. Besides, when tourists come
to the area, they have many opportunities to try local food and sea food.
They are affordable, very clean, fresh and safe to eat. Therefore, Ha Long
Bay is an ideal place for everyone to visit.
Sửa chi tiết:
- "Tourists can take part in many activities which are outdoor and water
sports..." → "Visitors can participate in many outdoor and water
activities..." (Từ "take part in" vẫn đúng nhưng "participate in" tự nhiên
hơn trong ngữ cảnh này).
- "People also take a boat trip to get around these caves and they can take
some photos to memory beautiful anniversaries." → "Tourists can take a
boat trip to explore the caves and capture beautiful moments with their
cameras."
- → "to memory beautiful anniversaries" không tự nhiên, có thể sửa thành
"capture beautiful moments."
- "breath-taking" → "breathtaking" (Viết liền là cách đúng).
- "sea food" → "seafood" (Viết liền là đúng chính tả).
- "Besides, when tourists come to the area, they have many opportunities
to try local food and sea food."→ "Moreover, when visiting Ha Long
Bay, tourists have the opportunity to enjoy a variety of fresh and
affordable local seafood."
2. QUALITIES OF A RESPONSIBLE ADOLESCENT:
Learning to be responsible is important for our future. Now, we are going to
discuss some qualities of a responsible adolescent. First, an accountable adolescent
always take responsibility for their actions whether they are good or bad. For
example, if they make a mistake by accident or miss out a deadline, they will own
up to it instead of blaming other people. Second, to become responsible, people
should showcase good time management skills which help them prioritize
important tasks, and balance school, extra-curricular activities and personal life
effectively. Third, being responsible means being able to make informed decisions.
They take time to think twice and consider potential consequences. For instance,
when trying something new, they ask themselves whether it aligns with their goals
and values. The qualities above are useful for teenagers to grow up as a responsible
individual and prepare them for adulthood. In short, becoming an accountable
adolescent is not easy. It takes time and practice, so teenagers must take on new
challenges to develop and achieve their goals.
Sửa chi tiết:
- "An accountable adolescent always take responsibility..." → "A
responsible adolescent always takes accountability..."
→ "Adolescent" là số ít, nên động từ "take" phải chia thành "takes."
- "miss out a deadline" → "miss a deadline" (Không cần "out").
- "showcase good time management skills" → "requires strong time
management skills" (Tự nhiên hơn).
- "balance school, extra-curricular activities and personal life" → "balance
school, extracurricular activities, and personal life" (Sửa "extra-
curricular" thành "extracurricular").
- "think twice" → "think carefully" (Trong văn viết học thuật, "think
carefully" trang trọng hơn).
- "a responsible individual" → "responsible individuals" (Phù hợp với chủ
ngữ số nhiều "teenagers").
- "The qualities above are useful for teenagers to grow up as a responsible
individual..." → "The qualities mentioned above help teenagers grow into
responsible individuals..."
→ "Grow into" tự nhiên hơn trong ngữ cảnh này.