Phần 1: Phân tích đề bài.
( Phần này copy y chang vs yêu cầu của đề
bài)
Type of paragraphs: Narrative paragraphs.
Readers: Potential employers who may want to see how well the writer can
overcome challenges and possibly examine the writer’s English writing skills.
Requirements of the task:
Introduction: Identify the challenge (whether it was a job challenge or
personal challenge);
Body: Describe the challenge in details and steps to overcome the challenge;
Conclusion: Draw some experience or lesson from the experience.
Language requirements:
Vocabulary: Vocabulary relevant to the topic (the challenge), vocabulary to
provide sensory and emotional details;
Grammar: Past simple and past continuous to describe past events and
simultaneous events
Phần 2: Dàn ý của đoạn văn.
Project outline
Topic sentence: The challenge that I found unforgettable in my career is
the lack of skills in my tutoring job.
Supporting details:
I took on the job of tutoring English for a 6th-grade boy.
I taught him English grammar and vocabulary combined with supplementary
exercises.
After a while, I noticed that my student seemed disinterested in his learning.
He appeared tired and demotivated, eagerly waiting for the class to end.
Recognizing the issue, I researched more effective teaching methods to
apply.
I discovered that incorporating activities and games in foreign language
teaching could make students, especially teenagers, more interested and
enthusiastic about learning.
Instead of passive learning, like students just copying vocabulary into their
notebooks and memorizing them, now they can play and learn
simultaneously.
This method will make learning a foreign language more enjoyable for
students.
Concluding sentence: The results have shown that my student has
changed his learning attitude, becoming more energetic and enjoying the
learning process. Academic performance has also [Link] conclusion,
accepting challenges is not a hassle; it helps us draw lessons, gain
experience, and thereby self-correct and improve.
Phần 3: Danh mục từ vựng.
Tutor (noun): Dạy gia sư
Supplementary (adj): Bổ trợ, bổ sung
Disinterest (adj): Không hứng thú
Appear (verb): xuất hiện
Demotivate (verb): thiếu động lực, chán nản
Eagerly (adverb): Háo hức, mong chờ
Research (verb): Nghiên cứu
Effective (adj): Hiệu quả
Method (noun): Phương pháp
Discover (verb): Phát hiện
Incorporate (verb): Lồng ghép
Enthusiastic (adj): nhiệt tình
Simultaneously (adverb): Đồng thời
Attitude (noun): thái độ
Energetic (adj): Năng lượng
Phần 4: Đoạn văn viết lần 1
The challenge that I found unforgettable in my career is the lack of skills in
my tutoring job. With a background as a student majoring in English
language, I took on the job of tutoring English for a 6th-grade boy. I taught
him English grammar and vocabulary combined with supplementary
exercises. After a while, I noticed that my student seemed disinterested in
his learning. He appeared tired and demotivated, eagerly waiting for the
class to end. Since I tutored in the evening and the class lasted 1 hour and
30 minutes, I often extended it to 2 hours to complete the lesson.
Recognizing the issue, I researched more effective teaching methods to
apply. I discovered that incorporating activities and games in foreign
language teaching could make students, especially teenagers, more
interested and enthusiastic about learning. Instead of passive learning like
students just copying vocabulary into their notebooks and memorizing them,
now they can play and learn simultaneously. This method will make learning
a foreign language more enjoyable for students. Additionally, when students
achieve good results, they will receive cute rewards like candies, cookies,
etc. The results have shown that my student has changed his learning
attitude, becoming more energetic and enjoying the learning process.
Academic performance has also improved. In conclusion, accepting
challenges is not a hassle; it helps us draw lessons, gain experience, and
thereby self-correct and improve.
Phần 5: Đoạn văn được chỉnh sửa
The challenge that I found unforgettable in my career is the lack of skills in
my tutoring job. I took on the job of tutoring English for a 6th-grade boy. I
taught him English grammar and vocabulary combined with supplementary
exercises. After a while, I noticed that my student seemed disinterested in
his learning. He appeared tired and demotivated, eagerly waiting for the
class to end. Recognizing the issue, I researched more effective teaching
methods to apply. I discovered that incorporating activities and games in
foreign language teaching could make students, especially teenagers, more
interested and enthusiastic about learning. Instead of passive learning like
students just copying vocabulary into their notebooks and memorizing them,
now they can play and learn simultaneously. This method will make learning
a foreign language more enjoyable for students. The results have shown
that my student has changed his learning attitude, becoming more energetic
and enjoying the learning process. Academic performance has also
improved. In conclusion, accepting challenges is not a hassle; it helps us
draw lessons, gain experience, and thereby self-correct and improve.
Phần 6: Đoạn văn hoàn chỉnh
The challenge that I found unforgettable in my career is the lack of skills in
my tutoring job. With a background as a student majoring in English
language, I took on the job of tutoring English for a 6th-grade boy. I taught
him English grammar and vocabulary combined with supplementary
exercises. After a while, I noticed that my student seemed disinterested in
his learning. He appeared tired and demotivated, eagerly waiting for the
class to end. Recognizing the issue, I researched more effective teaching
methods to apply. I discovered that incorporating activities and games in
foreign language teaching could make students, especially teenagers, more
interested and enthusiastic about learning. Instead of passive learning like
students just copying vocabulary into their notebooks and memorizing them,
now they can play and learn simultaneously. This method will make learning
a foreign language more enjoyable for students. The results have shown
that my student has changed his learning attitude, becoming more energetic
and enjoying the learning process. Academic performance has also
improved. In conclusion, accepting challenges is not a hassle; it helps us
draw lessons, gain experience, and thereby self-correct and improve.