#1
• The number of the coast visitors reach reached a peak of about 75 thousand people in
2007.
• The number of vistitors to the coast reached the peak in 2007, with at approximately 75
thousand people.
• The number of coast's coast visitors reached its peak at around 75 thousands in 2007,
which remained the highest in comparison with other areas.
• Different countries' visitors chose visiting to visit the coastal area the most, which itin
which the number reached the peak in 2007 with at about three-quarters.
• The number of abroad foreign visitors to the coast of the country reached its peak in
2007 with at roughly 75 thousands tourists.
#2
• The 1997-2007 period saw the mountains attracted attract tourists the least.
• mountains Mountains attracted the lowest number of tourists in the period, with at
about 10 thousand visitors in 1987.
• The mountains attracted the lowest number of visitors since 1992, at around 30
thousands, which was taken over by those of the lakes in the same year.
• In 2007, mountainous area attracted the lowest proportion in terms of visitors (at about
33%).
• Throughout the 20-year period, among the three areas, the mountains attracted the
lowest number of foreigners visiting among the three areas.
#3
• Before having dropped down to 50 thousand people in 2007, the figure for lakes
significantly soared from 40 to approximately 75 thousand people between 1997 and
2002.
• By 2007, lakes had had their popularity soared, as visited by over 35 thousand tourists .
• While the lakes’ popularity rocketed between 1987 and 2002, the number of passengers
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• There was a soaring soar in the popularity of area that involved lakes in a 10-year
period, which in the end was at 50%.
• From 1987 to 2000, the lakes' popularity soared, starting from 10 thousands and
peaking at 75 thousands visitors.
#4
• The figure for public was the top oftopped the chart, at 63%.
• Complaints relating to the public was on top of the chart, accounting for 63% of all
reasons.
• It is immediately apparent from the chart that the proportion of the public tops topped
the chart with at 63 percent, which is dramatically remarkably larger than other
categories.
• Nearly tTwo-thirds of the complaints is were about the public aspect, which it iswhose
position was on at the top of the chart.
• Complaints about the bank coming from the public topped the chart, which accounted
for almost two-thirds of the chart.
#5
• 8%Eight percent of the source of complaints coames from people filing about insurance
companies.
• The percentage of insurance companies' complaints filed was at 8 percent.
• The amount percentage of complaint files about insurance companies was at 8% in an
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• The insurance companies' complaints filed occupied for 8% out of all sources of
comments about the bank.
#6
• The length of time it took to from investigating data to implementing final action were
was the same among the years except 2001.
• The length of investigation time of all years was relatively similar (at 4 hours), except
2001 (at 6 hours). The use of parentheses is not forbidden, but you should not abuse
them either.
• The time length of time for processing complaints over the five yearsfive-year period
are is relatively similar except for 2001. DATA NEEDED.
• The average length of in the average time for the investigation of data and
implementation of final action finally was relatively stablesimilar, with the exception of
2001.
• The time length of time required to resolve the constructive criticism was similar from
2000 to 2004, except 2001.
#7
• China produced the most vegetables in 2012.
• No countries in the table produced vegetables as much as China did in 2012.
• It is apparent that China produced the largestlarger amount of vegetables in
comparison with 4 any others.
• Different kinds of vegetables were produced the least most in China, except for
cabbage.
• China appeared to produced the most vegetables in 2012 among 5 countries.
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#8
• Right after China, Russia is the second largest cabbage producer with 2765 Mt
harvested.
• Russia was the second largest producer in the cabbage category.
• Russia seemed to be the second largest producer of cabbage, at 2765 millons ofmillion
tones in 2012, only following Chinese production.
• The second largest producer for cabbage was Russia with at 2765 Mt.
• Regarding the cabbage production, Russia was the second largest producer in 2012 with
at 2765 million of tonnes.
#9
• While the Ireland produced inconsiderable amount of onions, at 4 Mt, there were no
onions that were produced harvested by Spain in 2012. à in-sentence repetition was
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• No onions was harvested in Spain, while Ireland collected an inconsiderable amount of
cabbage. Data needed.
• It is noticeably noticeable that no onion was harvested in Spain while the same figure
for Ireland was an inconsiderbale amount, at only 4 million of tones.
• The harvest of onions in Spain was absolute zeronone, while Ireland harvested those
ofthis produce in an inconsiderable amount.
• In 2012, no onion was harvested in Spain while Ireland produced an inconsiderable
amount of only 4 million of tonnes.