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Effective Writing Structures for Essays

The document outlines two structures for constructing sentences: one for stating actions needed to achieve a goal and another for discussing the pros and cons of a subject. It provides examples related to social media, smartphones, and exercise, illustrating how to transform sentences into more complex forms. The focus is on enhancing clarity and depth in writing by rephrasing simple statements into more nuanced expressions.

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Effective Writing Structures for Essays

The document outlines two structures for constructing sentences: one for stating actions needed to achieve a goal and another for discussing the pros and cons of a subject. It provides examples related to social media, smartphones, and exercise, illustrating how to transform sentences into more complex forms. The focus is on enhancing clarity and depth in writing by rephrasing simple statements into more nuanced expressions.

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DAY 1

1. Cấu trúc 1: để đạt mục tiêu A, cần làm…


- In order to A, ... should … (e.g. In order to tackle the problem of lack of focus of
students, schools should not allow them to use smartphone)
 Chuyển câu: chuyển cụm động từ thành một cụm danh từ (Takling the problem of
lack of focus of students may require a ban on the use of smartphones)
- Taking care of the health of the old could be achieved more effectively if
government enhances accessibility to health insurance.
 Improving the quality of healthcare for the senior would necessitate an
enhancement in accessibility to insurance.
2. Cấu trúc 2: A có cả lợi và hại
- Social media can help us make more friends. Howerver, they may make our
relationships more superficial.
 Social media, while helping people increase the size of their social circles, may
add a degree of superficiality to our relationships.
 Given the ability of social media platforms to help users communicate with
anyone across the globe, they can definitely enlarge our social circles and increase
the number of relationships, yet a degree of superficiality may be added to our
bonds as our mental attention dilutes.

- Smartphones may help us entertain effectively. However, they can lead to lack of
focus.
 Smartphone, while helping inprove our entertainment experiences, may
stimulatenously lead to a decrease in our attention span.
 Given the ability of smartphones to give access to a wealth of information
online, they can be ideal devices to provide entertainment features, yet their
attractiveness could keep our attention on trivial matters, distracting us from
important matters in our lives.

- Taking exercises could improve our fitness. However, it can also lead to injuries.
 Doing physical exercises, while helping improve our fitness, could
stimulatenously lead to injuries once over-exertion occurs.
 Given the fact that our physical capabilities are limited to an extent, doing
physical exercises, while helping improve our fitness, can lead to injuries if over-
exertion occurs.

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