The line graph provides information about the numbers of tourists who went to a caribbean Island
and chose between two different acccommodation types over a period 7 years. Overall, the numbers
of visitors staying on a cruise ship or on island to this island had increased steadily over the time,
resulting in a massive leap in the number of tourists visiting this location.
In the first two years, around 750000 visitors stayed on the island during their trips. The number then
increased steadily to a peak of 1,5 milion in 2013 and stayed at this level until 2015. Althought, it fall
slightly in 2016, it surged back to the previous peak in 2017
The number of tourists to this island who settled on a cruise ship during their trips increased from
250000 to 500000 in the first two years before plunging back to the starting level in 2012. The
popularity of staying on cruise ship rocketed afterwards, as in 2017 around 2 milion passengers
chose this accommodation type , surpassing the number of individuals who stayed on the island.,
Thanks to the massive increase in the number of visitors chosing both types of accommodation, the
total number of passengers to this island had jumped impressively from only 1 milion in 2010 to 3,5
milion in 2017, constituting a more than 3- fold surge.
Introduction: Viết lại đề bài, tránh tối đa sai, nhầm lẫn thông tin
Overview: Main trends, main differences,main stages(diagram),
Bước 1: Pick up 1 con số để tả chính xác 1 điểm: 1987-UK- around 11 milion tonnes
Vd:
Cách 1: Sử dụng con số: Around 11 milion tonnes of Co2 emission were discharged by an average Uk
citizen.
Cách 2. Tên đồ thị: An average Uk citizen discharged more than 10 milion tones of CO2 emissions
Cách 3. The amout of Co2 emissions which were discharged by an average Uk citizen was around 11
milion tonnes
The line graph provides information about the amounts of Co2 esmission ( which were released) by
an average citizen living in four difference nations : The UK, Sweden, Italy and portugal in a a period
of more than 4 decades from 1967 to 2007
Overall, the amout of Co2 emissions were discharged by an average Uk citizen and Sweden citizen
had decreased, while the reverse was true for the amounts released by an average person living in
Italy and Portugal.
One of the most remarkable features in the chart is that An average Uk citizen always discharged the
largest amout of co2 emissions in the entire period. In 1967, A person in this country responsible for
11 milion tones of co2 emissions. Although, the amout had declined gradually throughout this four-
decade long period, it still reached a staggering level of about 8,5 milion tonnes in 2007.
Importantly, An average swedish released the 2nd largest amount of CO2 Emission in initial decades of
this period, a massive reduction in the released amount had been observed in the later years. After
increasing from just over 8 milion tonnes in 1967 to peak of roughly 11 million tonnes in 1977, it
declined steadily before reaching only about 5,5 milion tonnes in 2007
The amounts of Co2 emissions released by per person in Italy and Portugal had followed an upward
trajectory and been reminiscent(hình ảnh dạng khá giống nhau) of each other’s pattern. In 1967, An
average person living in these nations were responsible for the least amount of CO2 emissions., wiith
about 4,2 and 1,8 metric tonnes, respectively. The figures for these nations had increased cosistently
afterward, reaching just under 9 metric tonnes for Italy and about 5.5 metric tonnes for potugal
an upward trajectory: Xu hướng tăng
Reminiscent of : Lines tương tự nhau không phải giống nhau
Pattern: Mô hình
in initial decades of this period,
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