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Writing Notes 2 (One-sided Argumentative Essays)

Article
Title (䰤氂)

ྦྷ苽1

Introduction + Express your view (ꖤวՕ奧 + 蔭螈缏䁰)

Body (獉෈)
ྦྷ苽 2

̛ 䰤氂‫ ݙ‬+ 抷讨Ӟ + 婦奾‫ݙ‬

ྦྷ苽 3

̛ 䰤氂‫ ݙ‬+ 抷讨ԫ + 婦奾‫ݙ‬

ྦྷ苽 4

̛ 䰤氂‫ ݙ‬+ 抷讨ӣ + 婦奾‫ݙ‬

ྦྷ苽 5

̛ 洌抷

ྦྷ苽6

Conclusion (婦奾 + 䌘๚㬵ጱ๗磭)

Letter to the Editor

Dear Sir/Madam,

ྦྷ苽1
Introduction + Express your view (ꖤวՕ奧 + 蔭螈缏䁰)

Body (獉෈)
ྦྷ苽 2

̛ 䰤氂‫ ݙ‬+ 抷讨Ӟ + 婦奾‫ݙ‬

ྦྷ苽 3

̛ 䰤氂‫ ݙ‬+ 抷讨ԫ + 婦奾‫ݙ‬

ྦྷ苽 4

̛ 䰤氂‫ ݙ‬+ 抷讨ӣ + 婦奾‫ݙ‬

ྦྷ苽 5

̛ 洌抷

ྦྷ苽6

Conclusion (婦奾 + 䌘๚㬵ጱ๗磭)

Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
Chris Wong

A. 稲䌵手氂
氂ፓ ᘍ໐᯿讨

1 HKDSE English Practice Paper Q6 (Letter to the government) a. Write a letter to the
Secretary of Education
Learning English through Sports Communication
b. Expressing your views
There is talk of certain schools removing PE lessons from the curriculum so
students can concentrate more on academic subjects. Write a letter to the
Secretary of Education expressing your views on the proposal.

2 HKDSE English 2012 Q2 a. Virtual sports vs real sports

Learning English through Sports Communication (forum post) b. Write your view on the
online forum.
You have been following an online debate in Health and Fitness eMag about the
value of doing virtual sports (such as those played on a Wii) versus real sports.
 Write your view on the topic and post it on the online forum.

3 HKDSE English 2012 Q3 a. Learning cannot take place

through drama
Learning English through Drama (forum reply)
b. Writing your response on an
You have been surfing a website on the use of drama techniques in education. online forum
You have seen the following topic on an online forum and are now writing
your response. c. What is your opinion?

Many teachers incorporate drama into their lessons as they feel it has d. Share your experience
various educational benefits. However some parents are against this as
they feel that learning cannot take place through drama. What is your
opinion? Please share your experience of learning through drama with
us!

​4 HKDSE English 2014 Q4 a. Filming movies in the city

centre
Learning English through Social Issues (Letter to the Editor)
b. Write a letter to the editor
Some people believe that filming movies in the city centre should not be
allowed. Others support it. Write a letter to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily c. Giving your opinions
giving your opinions. Provide three reasons to support your point of view.

5 HKDSE English 2014 Q5 a. A small number of

students in your school
Learning English through Debating (Letter to the principal) have access to school
lockers
Learning English through debating Currently, only a small number of students
in your school have access to school lockers. As the chairperson of the Student b. Write a letter to your school
Union of your school, you have collected the views of students from different Principal
classes on this issue. Write a letter to Ms Lee, your school Principal, to
persuade her to change the policy on lockers. c. Persuade her to change the
policy on lockers

6 HKDSE English 2015 Q5 1. Write to the editor of the

Hong Kong Daily
Learning English through Debating (Letter to the editor)
2. Stating your opinion on
Many parts of Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped. Some suggest whether undeveloped areas
using these areas for housing and commercial use, while others argue that such in the harbour front should
areas should be left as open space for public use. Write to the editor of the Hong be used for housing and
Kong Daily stating your opinion either for or against leaving these areas open commercial purposes or
for public use. Justify your point of view with three reasons. left open for public use

3. Provide three reasons

B. ໛ຝ
Article

䰤氂

Paragraph 1 1. 癲‫ڊ‬氂ፓ

(Օ奧) 2. Օ奧ྋ‫ݍ‬薪讨

3. Ⴔ༩蔭ก֦ጱ缏䁰

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬

(抷讨Ӟ) 2. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬

(抷讨ԫ) 2. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏괚硁牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Paragraph 4 1. ‫ݍ‬ො薪讨

(洌抷) 2. 虏ྍ牧瞚藨䌘ොጱ薪讨ํӞਧጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔

3. ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬

4. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏괚硁牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

5. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁

(婦奾) 2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭

Letter to the Editor

 Dear Sir/Madam,

Paragraph 1 1. 癲‫ڊ‬氂ፓ

(Օ奧) 2. Օ奧ྋ‫ݍ‬薪讨

3. Ⴔ༩蔭ก֦ጱ缏䁰

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬

(抷讨Ӟ) 2. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬

(抷讨ԫ) 2. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏괚硁牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Paragraph 4 1. ‫ݍ‬ො薪讨

(洌抷) 2. 虏ྍ牧瞚藨䌘ොጱ薪讨ํӞਧጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔

3. ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬

4. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏괚硁牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

5. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁

(婦奾) 2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭

Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
Chris Wong

C. 塅ֺ
䰤氂 Total smoking ban is essential

Paragraph 1 1. 癲‫ڊ‬氂ፓ

(Օ奧) Example: In recent years, the issue of total smoking ban has caused controversy in our society.

2. Օ奧ྋ‫ݍ‬薪讨
 Example: As for the business sector and investors, they believe that a territory-wide smoking
ban in all entertainment venues is detrimental to their business. However, others think that if
entertainment venues such as mahjong parlours are exempted, public health will be jeopardized.

3. Ⴔ༩蔭ก֦ጱ缏䁰

Example: In my opinion, it is urgent for the government to implement total smoking ban in
Hong Kong. In the following, I will explain my arguments.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬

(抷讨Ӟ) Example: To start with, we should note that the importance of health outweighs the economic
impact of imposing a total ban on smoking.

2. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

Example: It is apparent that smoking is harmful to our health. As we all know, smoking could
result in a few nasty side-effects, such as bad skin as well as poor breath and fitness. If we are
smokers, we will frequently pant after doing intense exercise. More importantly, smoking can
cause lung cancer and heart disease, which lead to death. According to scientific research in
recent years, second-hand smoke is even more toxic and fatal than first-hand smoke.

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Example: Therefore, preventing smokers from killing themselves and others, including both
customers and staff, is an urgent public health issue.

Many people suggest imposing a total smoking ban in our city. Write an article to express your view.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬

(抷讨ԫ) Example: In addition, total smoking ban can improve the safety in entertainment venues.

2. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏괚硁牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

Example: In Hong Kong, it is common to find these venues in the old buildings in old districts like
Sham Shui Po and Yau Ma Tei. As everyone knows, abandoned cigarettes often lead to fire. In case
of a fire, smoke can spread to different areas rapidly. To make the matters worse, the evacuation
routes of old buildings are sometimes blocked by rubbish. If a serious fire breaks out, customers of
entertainment venues will not be able to escape from the scene and heavy casualties will result.

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Example: Hence, it is essential for the government to adopt total smoking ban.

Paragraph 4 1. ‫ݍ‬ො薪讨

(洌抷) Example: Despite the arguments above, many people still emphasize that territory-wide smoking ban
will significantly reduce the number of customers in entertainment venues and exacerbate the
unemployment problem.

2. 虏ྍ牧瞚藨䌘ොጱ薪讨ํӞਧጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔

Example: Undeniably, the ban will adversely affect the business of these venues.

3. ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬

Example: Nevertheless, we should remember that the health cost of smoking is tremendous.
 4. 托奞薹朰 (ฦꗳఘ丆牏괚硁牏㮆獨ֺৼ牏穉斃)

Example: According to a research done by Hong Kong University, the annual cost of treating the
diseases related to smoking is over 5 billion dollars. As aforementioned, smoking is a culprit of
chronic diseases like lung cancer and heart disease. Since most people in Hong Kong consume public
medical services, the cost of treating smokers will pose a huge financial burden to our government.

5. 婦奾‫ݙ‬

Example: Considering the cost and benefits, territory-wide smoking ban should definitely be
implemented for the sake of the welfare of our whole society.

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁

(婦奾) Example: In conclusion, the government should implement total smoking ban as it can safeguard
the health of the general public and prevent fire disasters. While it will engender short-term economic
pain, the colossal long-term cost of smoking will be minimized.

2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭

Example: Therefore, the government should not hesitate anymore. It should adopt the measure as
soon as possible.

HKDSE English 2014 Q4 (One-sided argumentative essay)

Learning English through Social Issues

Some people believe that filming movies in the city centre should not be allowed. Others support it. Write a letter
to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily giving your opinions. Provide three reasons to support your point of view.

Ӥྃ Dear Editor

Paragraph 1 1. 䌃‫מ‬ፓጱ

樄䁰ጮ I am writing to express my views on movie filming in the city centre.

2. 禊蝄ፘ‫ݍ‬薪讨

In view of the recent hot debates on this controversial issue, I understand that there are still
many concerns and worries about it.

1. ก嘦蔭ก薪讨
However, after considering the interests of citizens, our city’s development and the need of
promoting our local culture, I believe it is advisable for the government to give the green light
to the idea.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
To commence with, many Hong Kongers are movie fanatics and they would like movies to be
抷讨1 filmed in the city centre, which is symbolic and meaningful to them.
 2. 托奞薹朰
Apparently, watching a story taking place in a location familiar to them is a fascinating idea.
Sad to say, the local cinemas are dominated by foreign movies like Hollywood films and
Korean films. The reason why local movies are lagging behind is that the sites where their
filming is carried out are not realistic and attractive enough to draw attention of the local
audience.

To enable local movies to capture the hearts and minds of Hong Kong people, allowing
movies to be filmed in the city centre is necessary without a shadow of doubt. When films are
shot at distinctive local landmarks, like the IFC Tower in Central and the Clock Tower in
Tsim Sha Tsui, local residents will be more eager to watch them.

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Having a strong sense of belonging to the city, many Hong Kongers will proudly tell the
foreigners that our city has our own films too!

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
It is also worth noting that allowing filming in the city centre can boost the movie industry and
抷讨2 consolidate the sustainable development of the Hong Kong economy.

2. 托奞薹朰
As everyone knows, Hong Kong is a cosmopolitan city recognized as a significant international
financial centre. Other than the financial industry, however, Hong Kong’s development in other
industries leaves a lot to be desired. Arguably, the overemphasis on finance is detrimental to
the sustainable development of Hong Kong.

For the sake of diversifying the local economy, it is essential for the cultural industry to be
promoted. While the government may find it difficult to conserve the cultural heritage owing to
limited land supply, it should do its utmost to facilitate the growth of the film industry.
Through promoting Hollywood movies can the USA earn billions of dollars every year. In the
same vein, the Hong Kong government should accelerate the development of the local movie
industry by allowing filming to take place in the city centre.

4. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
In the long run, the Hong Kong economy will benefit immensely from the blossoming movie
industry.

Paragraph 4 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Furthermore, local movies filmed in the city centre can attract the attention of foreigners and
抷讨3 promote the development of tourism.

2. 托奞薹朰
Through watching our movies, foreign people will be able to capture the breathtaking
scenery of our city centre, ranging from the magnificent night view of the Victoria Harbour to
the dazzling street culture of Mong Kok. Besides, they can have a glimpse of the lifestyle of
Hong Kong people. When local movies featuring the beautiful places of Hong Kong are
circulated overseas, more and more foreigners will be galvanized to visit Hong Kong so that
they can understand more about our city, stimulating our tourist industry and bringing enormous
economic benefits to us.
 3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Through allowing movies to be filmed in the city centre, not only will Hong Kong enjoy
sustainable economic growth, our local culture and custom will also be promoted.

Paragraph 5 1. 瞚矑Ӥ෈
As aforementioned, filming movies in the city centre can stimulate the development of tourism and
洌抷 sustain local economic growth.

2. ፘ‫ݍ‬薪讨
Some people may put forward the idea that filming movies in the city centre would create
disturbance for citizens, affecting the normal operation of our city.

3. 虏ྍ
Undeniably, this may be true in some cases.

4. ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬
Nonetheless, we should recognize that the effects are temporary.

5. 托奞薹朰
It is worth remembering that the shooting of local movies are often carried out for short duration,
for example, for one to two weeks. More importantly, as a responsible government and citizens
who truly love Hong Kong and safeguard the interests of Hong Kong, they should place the
city’s long-term prosperity at the top of the priority list. If filming is allowed in the city centre,
the movie industry and hence the tourist industry will become the pillars of the Hong Kong
economy, sustaining our economic development in the long run.

6. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Surely, the tremendous economic benefits brought by filming in the city centre will significantly
outweigh the short-term pain suffered from by local citizens.

Paragraph 6 1. 婦奾抷讨
Judging from the above aspects, it is crystal clear that allowing filming in the city centre does
奾抷 more good than harm to Hong Kong.

2. 抳薹૱࿆綡;眾
While I understand that the government has to strike a balance between development and
citizens’ interests, everyone can rest assured that promoting our filming industry will benefit
citizens in the long run. It is definitely going to be a blessing for all.

3. 䌘๚㬵ጱ๗ፚ
So why still hesitate? Let’s take swift action now to allow filming movies in the city centre. I
am looking forward to seeing the blossoming of the local movie industry and watching local
movies that can showcase the beauty of Hong Kong to the world.

ӥྃ Yours faithfully,

Chris Wong
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Language 7/7 6/7

Organization 6/7 6/7

Total 20/21 18/21

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HKDSE English 2014 Q4 (One-sided argumentative essay)

Learning English through Social Issues

Some people believe that filming movies in the city centre should not be allowed. Others support it. Write a letter
to the editor of the Hong Kong Daily giving your opinions. Provide three reasons to support your point of view.

Ӥྃ Dear Editor

Paragraph 1 1. 䌃‫מ‬ፓጱ

樄䁰ጮ I am writing in support of filming movies in Hong Kong.

2. 禊蝄ፘ‫ݍ‬薪讨

Recently, there has been news about the local citizens having conflicts with people filming
movies in Central. They claim filming movies causes disturbance to their lives, and thus they
believe that filming movies in the city centre should be prohibited.

3. ก嘦蔭ก薪讨
Yet, after considering both the merits and demerits of filming movies in Hong Kong in the
long run, it is my conviction that it should be allowed.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
To commence with, filming movies in the city centre can attract more tourists to come to Hong
抷讨1 Kong.
2. 托奞薹朰
This is simply because during the filming process, the environment of the city centre will be
utilized as the background of the films, which will then be circulated in different countries
worldwide, including Britain, Australia, the USA and Japan thanks to globalization. Not only do
people in these countries gain a better understanding of Hong Kong, they may also flock to
Hong Kong owing to the dazzling local culture. A forceful illustration is that if the movies
 filmed spot the local food culture such as stinky tofu, egg puffs and fake shark fin soup in
Mong Kok, they may find the food appealing and would like to visit Hong Kong. Apparently,
filming movies in the city centre is conducive to promoting Hong Kong’s local culture to people
from all over the globe. As a consequence, more tourists would swarm to Hong Kong, boosting
its tourism by leaps and bounds.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
With the ripple effect on all walks of life, local economic development can be stimulated and
the quality of life of Hong Kong people can be improved.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Another point to be noted is that allowing movies to be filmed in the city centre is beneficial to
抷讨2 enhancing Hong Kong’s reputation and image internationally.
2. 托奞薹朰
Echoes of the Rainbow, which is a movie filmed in Wing Lee Street, was awarded an
honourable prize at the 2010 Berlin Film Festival. After that different media groups such
as New York Times, BBC and Yahoo News reported the news worldwide. As a result, Hong
Kong has gained popularity internationally. With this in mind, it doesn’t take much to realize
that if the movies filmed in the city centre are awarded prizes, Hong Kong can grab the
world’s attention as it once did.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
This, without doubt, can promote Hong Kong as a cosmopolitan city, enhancing its image and
reputation.

Paragraph 4 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Alongside boosting Hong Kong’s prestige, in no way should we overlook another benefit –
抷讨3 local citizens can broaden their horizons about movies.
2. 托奞薹朰
As we all know, local citizens rarely have chances to watch movie filming in Hong Kong.
Movies, be it the local ones or the international ones, are usually filmed overseas. Nevertheless,
if there is an once-in-a-lifetime opportunity that movies can be filmed in the beautiful city
centre, Hong Kong indisputably should grasp this precious chance. Consequently, Hong
Kong’s citizens can gain an insight about how movies are filmed. What is more worth noticing
is that they can witness the breathtaking scenes of the movies through their eyes instead of the
eyes of the camera and they can witness renowned movie stars including Angelina Jolie,
Emma Watson and Jay Chou!
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Under this line of thinking, it is an incontestable truth that allowing movies in the city centre
enables local citizens to broaden their horizons and widen their perspective.

Paragraph 5 1. ፘ‫ݍ‬薪讨
Those opposing my stance may claim that filming movies in the city centre causes severe
洌抷 disturbance to the local people, such as traffic jams and the closure of shops.

2. 虏ྍ + ‫ݍ‬洌
However reasonable this argument seems to be, we should think about the following questions: Is
the inconvenience temporary or permanent? Do people enjoy watching famous stars acting?
Do the opportunities that movies are filmed in the city centre always exist? What I believe is
that the long-term benefits significantly outweigh the short-term pain of filming movies for one
 to weeks.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
For the sake of Hong Kong’s long term development and citizens’ interests, filming movies in the
city centre should definitely be allowed.

Paragraph 6 1. 婦奾抷讨
All in all, taking all aspects into consideration, it is my firm conviction that filming movies in the
奾抷 city centre should be allowed. We should bear in mind: It is the movies filmed in the city centre
that can attract tourists to flock to Hong Kong and benefit the economy; it is the movies filmed in
the city centre that can boost Hong Kong’s reputation and image internationally; it is the movies
filmed in the city centre that can enable local citizens to broaden their horizons.
2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ๗ፚ
After all, this is a precious opportunity that cannot be missed by Hong Kong.

ӥྃ Yours faithfully,

Chris Wong

Content 7/7 7/7

Language 6/7 7/7

Organization 6/7 7/7

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HKDSE English 2014 Q5 (Letter to the principal)

Learning English through debating Currently, only a small number of students in your school have access to school
lockers. As the chairperson of the Student Union of your school, you have collected the views of students from
different classes on this issue. Write a letter to Ms Lee, your school Principal, to persuade her to change the policy
on lockers.

Ӥྃ Dear Ms Lee,

Paragraph 1 1. 䌃‫מ‬ፓጱ + դ蔭秚䯤

Օ奧 I am writing to venture my opinion on the policy on lockers on behalf of the Student Union.

2. 禊蝄㺔氂
 Recently, we have collected the views of schoolmates of different classes on the issue of allowing
only few schoolmates to have access to school lockers. After analyzing the views collected, it can
be concluded that most schoolmates are opposed to such a policy.

3. 蔭螈๗磭
We hope that the school can change the policy on lockers owing to convenience and fairness.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
To commence with, changing the policy on lockers can bring convenience to all schoolmates.
ቘ硁1
2. 托奞薹朰
Every day, all schoolmates need to carry a large pile of textbooks, the weight of which is too
heavy even for an adult, let alone a teenager with underdeveloped muscles. Regarding junior
form students, they have multiple Physical Education lessons and Home Economics lessons
every week. The tools, the materials and the uniform involved result in schoolmates carrying
two to three handbags, in addition to their schoolbags. Other than the great inconvenience
caused to junior form schoolmates, their senior form counterparts also suffer. With a view to
preparing for the HKDSE, many senior form students have to attend supplementary lessons at
school and extra lessons at tutorial centres. We can imagine how clumsy it is for a teenager to
carry a heavy school bag and two environmentally-friendly handbags packed with teaching
materials and rush to the MTR station nearby after school. Apparently, the burden that
schoolmates shoulder is unbearable.

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Changing the policy on lockers will definitely making going to school more convenient for
schoolmates and alleviate the aforementioned problems.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
In addition to convenience, impartiality is essential, if not indispensable, concerning the locker
ቘ硁2 policy.

2. 托奞薹朰
Due to the fact that only the athletes representing the sports teams of the school can have access
to school lockers, they are considered superior in other schoolmates’ eyes. According to the
views collected, many schoolmates aired their grievances about the favouritism of teachers
towards the athletes regarding their exclusive right to use the school lockers. Not being equally
treated, many students have developed a sense of inferiority and hatred towards the elite
athletes. Not only will this phenomenon jeopardize normal schoolmates’ self-esteem, the
harmonious atmosphere of the school will be destroyed given the great discontent towards the
athletes.

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
In a bid to rectify the above problems, changing the policy on lockers to allow access by all
schoolmates is crucial as it can uphold the fairness and equality in our school.
Paragraph 4 1. ፘ‫ݍ‬薪讨
Some teachers may claim that changing the locker policy will lead to chaos when all students
洌抷 gather around lockers for taking out various textbooks and materials prior to the
commencement of lessons.

2. 虏ྍ
Undeniably, it may take our schoolmates some time to get their textbooks from the lockers.

3. ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬
Nevertheless, we should recognize that this will not necessarily lead to chaos as long as
students are disciplined.

4. 托奞薹朰
With the courteous attitude of all of our schoolmates, we believe they are self-disciplined
enough to line up in an orderly manner when getting their personal belongings from the
lockers. On condition that the lockers are designed systematically according to schoolmates’
class numbers and the location of their seats, the whole process will be smooth. It is also worth
remembering that there is a 10-minute interval between each lesson. Evidently, the adequate
time available for our students will prevent chaos.

5. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Therefore, changing the school policy on lockers will not disrupt the normal operation of our
school.

Paragraph 5 1. 婦奾ቘ硁
To conclude, equal access to lockers can provide our schoolmates with convenience and ensure
奾抷 that every student is treated impartially regardless of their capabilities.

2. ๗磭硬虋硰ᒽ
Hence, we sincerely hope that the school can address the concerns of schoolmates by changing
the policy on lockers and create a more favourable environment for all of us.

Yours sincerely,

Chris Wong
Chris Wong

Chairperson of the Student Union

Content 7/7 7/7

Language 7/7 6/7

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Learning English through Debating

Many parts of Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped. Some suggest using these areas for housing and
commercial use, while others argue that such areas should be left as open space for public use. Write to the editor
of the Hong Kong Daily stating your opinion either for or against leaving these areas open for public use. Justify
your point of view with three reasons.

Ӥྃ Dear Editor,

Paragraph 1 1. 檔蝄ྋ‫ݍ‬薪讨
Tung Chung, Kwun Tong, Central, Sai Kung, to name but a few – these places all bear a striking
Օ奧 resemblance of their undeveloped harbour front. Recently, a controversy has been stirred up on
whether the harbour front should be open for public use or used as commercial buildings or housing,
and some even contend that utilizing the harbour front for commercial and residential purposes is
more beneficial to Hong Kong.
2. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
After considering both the benefits and drawbacks, it is my firm conviction that leaving the harbour
front as public use is a more sensible choice in the long run.

Paragraph 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
2 To commence with, leaving the harbour front for public use can preserve the natural environment.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
抷讨Ӟ Nowadays, Hong Kong has long been stigmatized as a concrete jungle, suggesting that undue
emphasis has been laid on commercial development and housing provision in Hong Kong. On the
other hand, the fact that Hong Kong has a myriad of natural “hidden gems” in the havour front is not
recognized by most local people. By leaving the harbour front for public use, these precious elements
of the environment can be exposed to the public, adding spice to this metropolis. With the harbour
front left open, the mudskippers can continue to thrive in the mud of Ting Chung coast; with the
harbour front left open, the mangroves in Tai O can display their tenacity when they are facing
desiccation and flooding on the same day; and with the harbour front left open, the black-faced
spoonbill can escape from the destiny of extinction. It is leaving the harbour front for public use that
can preserve the biodiversity of Hong Kong. On the contrary, flattening the harbour front for
commercial and residential development could do nothing but demolish the habitat of the precious
organisms, causing some of them to become extinct.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Under this line of thinking, it is evident that leaving the harbour front for public use should prevail.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
It should also be noted that the harbour front can provide a channel for citizens to escape from the
抷讨ԫ hustle and bustle of life.

2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Treating work as the be all and end all of their lives, most Hong Kongers, if not all, are often drained
in their hectic lives. With the harbour front left open for public use, they can recharge their
batteries, thus effectively relieving their tremendous pressure. With the harbour front left open for
public use, people can be engrossed in the stunning view of sunrise when walking along the coast in
Sai Kung in the early morning; people can blow off some steam by swimming along the beach on
Lantau Island. With this in mind, it is clear that leaving the coastal area for public use can provide
relaxation for Hong Kongers. On the contrary, utilizing the harbour front for commercial and
residential purposes sacrifices the magnificent view in the coastal area, as only a minority of affluent
tycoons can enjoy the privilege of such absorbing view.

3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Isn’t it ludicrous that we have to limit our choice of relaxation to the rich, when there is desperate
demand for the harbour front ordinary people in society?

Paragraph 4 1. 檔蝄‫ݍ‬ො薪讨
Naysayers may criticize my stance, contending that there has long been a dearth of land in Hong
洌抷 Kong for commercial and residential buildings. Therefore, there is a pressing need for utilizing the
harbour front.

2. 瞚藨‫ݍ‬ො薪讨ጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔ + ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬
Though this argument is reasonable at the first glance, it is fundamentally flawed.
3. 托奞薹朰
In fact, there are many alternatives to come to grips with the shortage of land, reclamation and urban
renewal included. Is it a must that we have to sacrifice the precious harbour front to rectify the deep-
rooted problem? In addition to this, the destruction of the natural environment is beyond retrieval
and will provoke backlash from the public. The storm of controversy sparked by the construction of
an artificial beach in Long Mei is a case in point. Is it really worthwhile if we pay a much higher cost
of protecting the environment in the future if we opt for momentary benefit in the short run?

4. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Thus, it is apparently clear that the government should leave the harbour front for public use.

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁
All in all, in no way should we allow the harbour front to be developed with commercial
婦奾 buildings and residential buildings. It is leaving the harbour front for public use that can
preserve the environment. It is leaving the harbour front for public use that does not inflict
irreparable damage.
2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭
It is to be hoped that our invaluable harbour front can be preserved in a way that is beneficial to
the environment as well as all of us.

ӥྃ Yours faithfully,

Chris Wong
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Learning English through Debating

Many parts of Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped. Some suggest using these areas for housing and
commercial use, while others argue that such areas should be left as open space for public use. Write to the editor
of the Hong Kong Daily stating your opinion either for or against leaving these areas open for public use. Justify
your point of view with three reasons.

Ӥྃ Dear Editor,

Paragraph 1 1. 檔蝄ྋ‫ݍ‬薪讨
HOS flats or an open plaza for relaxing gatherings? Lucrative skyscrapers or a great area for Tai
Օ奧 chi and mass dance? Another IFC or a place for enjoying Hong Kong’s harbour front? Given that
many parts Hong Kong’s harbour front are still undeveloped, some suggest using these areas for
housing and commercial use. While some heap praise on the idea, believing that the increased
housing and office supply can drive down property prices and office rent, some oppose it for such
areas should be left as open space for public use.
2. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
After careful consideration of the issue as a whole, it is my firm conviction that developing these areas
into public open space is desirable, if not essential.

Paragraph 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
2 To commence with, leaving the harbour front as open space can slow down Hong Kongers’ living pace,
hence improving their health.
抷讨Ӟ 2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
In this city of hustle and bustle, people work from day till night in order to earn a living, causing them
to forget the importance of leisure and rest. Owing to the little public open space in the city, people are
buried in a community filled with flats and offices and have little chance to relax and exercise. With
public open space in the harbour front, people will find it more convenient to have a place for leisure.
Some of them, attracted by the mesmerizing harbour view, simply can pay a visit to the open space for
a chat with friends, which allows people to put down their work for a while and breathe in some fresh
air. Some of them may even participate in the various activities available in the open space, such as
mass dance and Tai Chi. Take mainland China as an example. It is easy for us to find people
dancing joyfully in some public open space along with music with catchy beats. This is known as
“Plaza Dance”, whose participants include children, off-work adults and the elderly. Therefore, it is
patent that some residents in Hong Kong will be able to enjoy themselves in these activities, allowing
them to exercise a bit and stretch their muscles. Conversely, leaving the harbour front for housing and
commercial use further highlights the city’s undue emphasis on money and work. Continuing to bury
their heads in piles of work, people will be in lack of leisure, rest and exercise, thus exacerbating their
health.
 4. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
As we can see, leaving the harbour front as open space allows Hong Kongers to enjoy better health by
providing them more opportunities of recharging their batteries.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
It should also be noted that the idea of having open space in the harbour front can maintain Hong
抷讨ԫ Kong’s competitiveness as an attractive tourist destination.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Hong Kong is famous for its stunning harbour view. Instead of purchasing products in high-end
shopping arcades, which are ubiquitous around the globe, it is the magnificent scenery of Victoria
Harbour that captures the heart and mind of millions of tourists. Through leaving the harbour front as
open space can visitors have the perfect spot for watching the fascinating harbour and the glistening
skyscrapers in Central and Tsim Sha Tsui. It is also worth noting that foreigners, who often place
strong emphasis on work-life balance, will definitely appreciate the city’s provision of open space for
playing sports and enjoying a family picnic. On the contrary, the construction of a high density of
residential and commercial buildings in the harbour front will disappoint the tourists, leaving them the
impression that Hong Kong is a hectic concrete jungle in lack of leisure and recreation. With a view to
pursuing spiritual relaxation, many tourists may opt for tourist destinations ranging from Phuket to
Maldives, which are renowned for their picturesque beaches and serenity. In the long run, Hong
Kong’s tourist industry will decline, leading to the loss of employment opportunities and economic
stagnation.
4. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Evidently, for the sake of the sustainable development of our tourism, leaving the harbour front as
open space should prevail over constructing residential and commercial buildings.

Paragraph 4 1. 檔蝄‫ݍ‬ො薪讨
Critics may counter my stance and pinpoint that utilizing the harbour front for housing and
洌抷 commercial development can boost the supply of flats and offices and pull down property prices and
rents, alleviating local citizens’ financial burden.

2. 瞚藨‫ݍ‬ො薪讨ጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔
At first glance, this argument seems to be valid. But in fact, it is divorced from reality.
3. ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬
It should be noted that the soaring property prices should not be attributed to the shortage of flats and
offices.
4. 托奞薹朰
According to newspaper reports, there is a large amount of vacant flats and offices in our city. The
truth is that local people and investors from the mainland are stockpiling property for speculation
proposes, driving up their prices. To lessen the financial burden of the public, the government should
penalize speculators by introducing “triple stamp duty” and reserve a significant portion of flats
for local people’s residential purposes similar to Singapore. In order to satisfy citizens’ housing
demand in the long run, the government can also develop land in Southern Yuen Long and Tuen
Mun, which are known for their large areas of idle flatland. In other words, there are many other
ways to mitigate the problem of skyrocketing property and office prices instead of developing
residential areas and commercial areas in the harbour front.
5. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
In light of the public demand for leisure and the sustainable development of the tourist industry, it is
of paramount importance for the government to leave the harbour front for public use.
Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁
To sum up, the idea of building more flats and offices pales in comparison with that of leaving
婦奾 the harbour front as public open space. It is the open space in the harbour front that can relax
citizens’ mind and it is the open space in the harbour front that can sustain the prosperity of our
tourism.
2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭
It is to be hoped that the government can take the long-term development of Hong Kong into
consideration and transform our beautiful harbour front into a paradise of tranquility and
recreation!

ӥྃ Yours faithfully,

Chris Wong

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Learning English through Workplace Communication
Many Hong Kong graduates complain about the lack of employment opportunities in the city. It has been
suggested that graduates who fail to find a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities in other cities in Asia.
Do you support this suggestion? Write an article for your school magazine expressing your views. Give three
reasons to support your views. Provide an appropriate title for your article.

䰤氂 Don’t leave your hometown, youngsters

Paragraph 1 1. Իդꖤว
Hong Kong prides itself on being a prosperous and an affluent city, but to many young people, it is
Օ奧 actually a place where they cannot even find a job. As the number of unemployed graduates has
spiralled recently, it has been suggested that they could look for opportunities in other Asian cities.
2. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
Although the suggestion may sound palatable, personally I do not support it.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
To commence with, it is difficult for local young graduates to find suitable jobs in Asian cities.
抷讨Ӟ 2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
 True, to many fresh graduates, especially those not equipped with a university degree, it is such a
formidable task to look for a job in Hong Kong due to the cut-throat competition here. However, is
finding a decent, well-paid job in other Asian cities such a cushy task? Those who answer “yes”
should not hesitate to take a glimpse of the high youth unemployment rate in Japan and its economic
problems. Korea, another seemingly possible destination, is a country whose economy relies heavily
on the tourist industry. In Korea, teenagers may not be able to find a suitable job they want so
effortlessly.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
I am worried that going to Asian cities to instigate new opportunities may not bring young graduates a
rosy future, but instead create more uncertainties and hindrance to their long-term development.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Apart from the difficulty in getting a suitable job there, youngsters may not want to work in other
抷讨ԫ Asian cities as they are unfamiliar with them.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
To them, Hong Kong is their cozy home where they are raised and nurtured. It is natural and
understandable that some of them would like to develop their careers in the place which they know
well. It is undeniable that they might learn to be more independent and tough if they work alone in
other Asian cities. However, this may not be what they long for – some of them may not be willing to
leave their families and friends just for work. After all, work is an intrinsic part of our lives but it is
certainly not everything.

Paragraph 4 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Besides the aforementioned reasons, let’s look into the issue from another point of view: is it
抷讨ӣ conducive to Hong Kong’s long-term development if the jobless leave and join the labour force of
other Asian cities?
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
If the talented work in other countries, they cannot make contributions to the betterment of our
society. The qualities they possess – the savvy they acquire and the practical skills they learn in Hong
Kong – will become haven-sent gifts to other Asian cities. Then, how can Hong Kong compete with
Singapore and Shanghai, which are catching up in terms of economic development? How can Hong
Kong retain its position as a renowned business metropolis? How can we develop new ideas and
make improvement without the group of vibrant, creative and diligent adults?
Paragraph 5 1. 檔蝄‫ݍ‬ො薪讨
Some people believe that if unemployed youngsters could find opportunities in Asian cities and move
洌抷 to work there, there will be less discontent in our society.
2. 瞚藨‫ݍ‬ො薪讨ጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔ + ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬
This argument is seemingly valid, but in reality preposterous.
3. 托奞薹朰
If everyone is prepared to leave the city for work after graduation, I am worried that citizens’ sense of
belonging to Hong Kong will be greatly weakened. They may no longer regard Hong Kong as their
cozy home, but merely a town where they study temporarily. This surely poses a threat to us, with
our unity and bond being ruined. Then, how can we support each other and surmount every obstacle
together?

Paragraph 6 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁I
I believe that encouraging young people to look for chances in other Asian cities is not a panacea to
婦奾 the youth unemployment problem in Hong Kong. It is just putting the cart before the horse.
2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭
I hope local employers in Hong Kong will give youngsters more opportunities when possible, so that
 they will have a chance to make contributions to the place where they belong to.

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Learning English through Workplace Communication
Many Hong Kong graduates complain about the lack of employment opportunities in the city. It has been
suggested that graduates who fail to find a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities in other cities in Asia.
Do you support this suggestion? Write an article for your school magazine expressing your views. Give three
reasons to support your views. Provide an appropriate title for your article.

䰤氂 Why stay in Hong Kong when there are opportunities elsewhere?

By Chris Wong
Paragraph 1 1. Իդꖤว
Have you ever wondered where you will work once you graduate? It may not be a worry to you at all
Օ奧 at the moment, but it is certainly nothing new that many local graduates are complaining about the
lack of employment opportunities here.
2. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
I support the suggestion that those who fail to get a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities in
other cities in Asia, and I would like to justify my stance in terms of the current situation, the
attractiveness of other cities and feasibility.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Their claim, to commence with, is not groundless. It is true that the city lacks opportunities for young
抷讨Ӟ people, in particular fresh graduates.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Since the 1980s, Hong Kong has been transforming into a knowledge-based economy and an
international financial centre. So far, so good. The problem is, in spite of many commentators’
suggestions that the HKSAR government should take measures to diversify the economy, Hong Kong
at present is still reliant heavily on the “Four Pillars” and such industries as Information Technology
and biotechnology are either immature or neglected. What are the implications for local graduates?
Well, you should not have any difficulty in developing your career if you engage in those dominant
and prosperous industries, but if you do not excel in or are interested in being an i-banker or an
accountant, it is pretty sure you will face a hard time seeking a job alone. That is why despite the low
overall unemployment rate, many graduates are unable to land a job, not to mention a decent one. In
 addition, under globalization, Hong Kong faces fierce competition from cities and regions all over the
world. A company can simply hire a foreign graduate instead if it finds you relatively less competitive.
It may even move the whole production lines to other regions and render workers specializing in a
particular stage of production unemployed.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Thus, seeking jobs in other cities is probably a must for quite a number of graduates.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
In contrast, other cities in Asia offer more opportunities for our graduates.
抷讨ԫ 2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
For instance, unlike Hong Kong, Taipei is a hub of technology and IT talents or workers who
specialize in, say, the production of semiconductors, can easily secure a job there. Not only do
many Asian cities have a more diversified economy, but entrepreneurship is also valued there,
compared to Hong Kong. Take Singapore as an example. A vibrant start-up culture can be
observed in the Lion City. You need not be an employee provided that you have some innovative
ideas that may revolutionize our way of life. You may even be able to start your own business if an
investor deems your proposal sound and workable. In other words, you are creating opportunities for
yourself, so to speak. Some might argue that it is unnecessary and perhaps even counterproductive to
seek jobs in other Asian cities. If you can’t even get a job in your city, do you consider yourself to be
so competitive as to be hired by employers in other cities, not to mention the fact that you are put at
a disadvantage compared to the locals owing to cultural differences? I beg to differ. Admittedly, there
is no guarantee that you will land a job elsewhere, yet what our graduates is another opportunity. Why
not explore more possibilities if staying home isn’t going to do you any good? Perhaps your talent is
not recognized and appreciated in Hong Kong. Who knows? Try it, and at least you won’t regret.

Paragraph 4 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Apart from the comparison between Hong Kong and other Asian cities, feasibility is also a major
抷讨ӣ consideration.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Doubting if our graduates are capable of adapting to the lifestyles of other cities? I can assure you that
we should never underestimate the abilities and potential of local graduates. For a start, language skills
give our students an edge over other competitors. I have witnessed the language proficiency of
many of my classmates in English and Putonghua, which is, in my opinion, stunningly fantastic.
This can no doubt be attributed to the colonial rule of the British government and the handover in
1997. As an international city, Hong Kong has nurtured graduates with the so-called “global vision”.
Seldom have I heard of someone who knows nothing about international affairs, for example, the Paris
terrorist attack last year. Most local graduates have a certain, if not high awareness of the things taking
place all around the world. Having lived in a cosmopolitan metropolis since birth also endows us
with cultural tolerance among our graduates. Despite the news that some locals are dissatisfied with
the uncivilized behaviour of a few mainland tourists, most Hong Kong people, generally speaking, are
rational and open to other cultures, and seldom, if at all, discriminate against others based on race or
sexual orientation.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
That is why I believe our graduates are capable of adapting to the cultures and social norms of other
Asian cities pretty well, given their willingness to respect the local traditions and customs.

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁
To sum up, the suggestion is feasible and can effectively address the issue of a lack of employment
婦奾
 opportunities in Hong Kong.
2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭
If you are not able to get a job here, why stay in Hong Kong when there are a lot of opportunities
elsewhere?

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Learning English through Workplace Communication
Many Hong Kong graduates complain about the lack of employment opportunities in the city. It has been
suggested that graduates who fail to find a job in Hong Kong could look for opportunities in other cities in Asia.
Do you support this suggestion? Write an article for your school magazine expressing your views. Give three
reasons to support your views. Provide an appropriate title for your article.

䰤氂 Working in other Asian cities grants you success

Paragraph 1 1. Իդꖤว
Recent studies conducted by Ming Pao have suggested that the recent economic downturn has
Օ奧 made local graduates struggle to find jobs in Hong Kong. The same study also demonstrated
that the economic boom in certain places has spawned more job opportunities. Cities such as
Shanghai, Singapore, Bangkok and Kuala Lumpur are home to a myriad of job opportunities in
different fields, inclusive of the hotel business, retail business, finance business, you name it.
2. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
College graduates from Hong Kong, who specialize in these fields, should seize these valuable
opportunities as they are not only beneficial to their career, but also to their life.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
The capability of university graduates is why they are advised to find jobs in other Asian cities.
抷讨Ӟ 2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Developing countries in the region, including Malaysia and Indonesia, are longing for overseas
professionals to help them develop the countries in different aspects, be it logistics or finance. In Hong
Kong, the provision of degree or applied learning courses based on the aforementioned fields is
prominent, and hence Hong Kong graduates are highly competitive in this regard and are able to
thrive should they find jobs in those fields. Additionally, the proficiency of English and Mandarin
possessed by the majority of graduates also gives rise to their competitiveness. English language,
 which is incorporated into the New Senior Secondary curriculum, makes communication in
foreign cities like Singapore convenient, demolishing the communication barriers between the two
places. We have a lot to expect from the city whose English proficiency is high. The ability to speak
Mandarin also eases communication in mainland cities which are swiftly growing, like Beijing and
Guangzhou. Even these places are far superior to Hong Kong in terms of job opportunities, and if
graduates have the ability, they should consider these options.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Security of employment is another important factor that makes working in other Asian cities
抷讨ԫ attractive.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
The growing economy, the expanding market and the improving working environment enable other
cities in Southeast Asia to provide an insane number of job opportunities. In contrast, the market in
Hong Kong is so saturated that hardly could one find a job. The vast number of jobs in Asian cities
allows Hong Kong graduates to find a job easily. The growing wages in the region also appeal to local
graduates. With cities in Southeast Asia shifting their focus to high value-added industries instead
of the mass production industries, the pay in these countries is extremely rewarding and is bound to
increase. Who would not want to work stably while earning a lot?
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Working in other Asian cities is therefore recommended for Hong Kong graduates especially when
they have the abilities.

Paragraph 4 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Other than monetary incentives, working in other Asian cities can also expose local graduates to
抷讨ӣ foreign cultures.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Studying in Hong Kong, graduates rarely have time to experience other cultures besides those existing
in Hong Kong. Devoid of adequate opportunities, the development of Hong Kong graduates’ global
vision is likely to be hampered, Working in other Asian cities, they are almost limited to staying and
living in that specific city, and through this experience can they broaden their horizons. During
holidays, they can participate in various local festivals by which they can deepen their understanding
of the city’s culture. Living in a city where everyone speaks a different language from yours, say
Malay, Thai, Japanese and Korean, they are granted chances to learn and master foreign languages,
which makes them even more competitive and their stay more enjoyable. Enjoying local cuisines, they
could as well experience in person the huge differences between the lifestyles in Hong Kong and other
cities. Even places as close as Taiwan and Macau have cultures which are distinct from that in Hong
Kong.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
It could be seen that without a doubt, working in other Asian cities could be beneficial to the long-
term development of graduates.

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁
Unemployment is certainly the last thing we want to see after graduating from school or college.
婦奾 Having a multitude of advantages, working in other Asian cities seems to be the best bet if graduates
have difficulty finding jobs locally.
2. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭
I am sure that they will have their lives greatly enriched if they make the right choice!
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HKDSE 2016 Q4
Learning English through Debating
It has recently been reported that some parents in Asian countries are installing apps on their children’s mobile
phones that monitor their activities to ensure that they use these devices responsibly.

Write a letter to the Young Post stating whether you agree with these parents’ actions or not. Justify your position
with three reasons.

Ӥྃ Dear Editor,

Paragraph 1 1. Իդꖤว
The phenomenon that Asian parents are installing apps on their children’s smartphones to monitor
Օ奧 their activities in order to ensure these youngsters use these devices responsibly has aroused much
concern. Advocates proclaim that parents can in turn protect their children from using these gadgets
uncontrollably. Yet, skeptics insist this is detrimental to teenagers’ sense of empowerment and
harms their privacy.

2. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
While people’s view is divergent, I support the idea these parents’ actions are reasonable and
advisable. In this letter, I am writing to explain my viewpoint.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Of all the reasons why I agree to the Asian parents’ action, none are as significant as the fact that it
抷讨Ӟ prevents children from using their smart gadgets for an unreasonably long period.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
It is universally known that teenagers these days lack self-restraint. Given that the cyber world is full
of attractive information, adolescents are attached to their smart devices. Have you ever seen kids
around you sticking to their smartphones for the whole MTR trip without having a look of the
beautiful scenery outside the train? I am sure everyone has experienced it before. With this in
mind, it is the parents’ responsibility to help teenagers develop a proper usage of phones. By installing
these monitoring apps, parents can get information about the time their beloved sons and daughters
spend on the hand-sized gadgets. With the information, adults can have a meaningful chat with the
young generation and voice their concern. Perhaps the duos can set up rules together after that. It
 prevents teenagers from being mastered by the mobile phones – they should master them instead. As a
result, parents can adjust their children’s exposure to the phones and the young kids can develop an
ideal habit of using them. They can therefore spare more time for other essential elements, be it doing
sports, developing their artistic potential or volunteering.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Judging from this, it is reasonable for Asian parents to install these apps in their children’s phones.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Apart from preventing children being engulfed by the evil smart devices, never should we overlook
抷讨ԫ the fact that install apps can deter children from acting improperly on the Internet.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
In this technological era, the new generation loves using smartphones to visit social networking sites.
Unfortunately, they may do something improperly, such as cyberbullying. If parents don’t have the
power to monitor children’s usage of their phone, it is unlikely for them to figure out what their
children have done online. With the help of the apps on adolescents’ phones, parents will notice it
immediately once the adolescents begin their act. In this sense, youngsters may think twice before
acting inappropriately. This prevents them from going astray due to irrational thoughts, helping them
to develop their morality. Preventing the young generation acting improperly is also remunerative in
terms of their future career – an increasing number of international companies like Google check
the job seekers’ online comments. In other words, preventing youngsters from behaving poorly on
the Internet can safeguard their future career development.
4. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
So, why don’t we take these benefits into consideration and support the caring parents’ action?

Paragraph 4 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
On top of keeping children away from acting inappropriately on the Internet, installing apps on their
抷讨ӣ mobile phones is also crucial to protecting them from unhealthy information, which is readily
available on the Internet.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
In this day and age, people can upload any information to the Internet freely. By browsing the web,
teenagers are likely to be exposed to stuffs that may distort their value judgment. Take the game
apps as an example. Recently, some app-designing companies have introduced a game requiring
players to decide the way to help a girl to carry out plastic surgery. In the game, the main
character has tried to have a plastic surgery to improve her appearance. Teenagers may be led
to believe that physical appearance is the only way to define the beauty of a person and ignore
the inner beauty. Judging a book from its cover is not advisable. If we allow them to immerse in a
virtual environment which is filled with these distorted values, what will they become? How will our
future be? It is also omnipresent to see phone apps containing sex scenes. Parents should definitely
install apps to monitor their children’s usage of phones.
5. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
In an attempt to protect them from the dangerous cyber world, it is both conducive to the teenagers
themselves and the future of our society.

Paragraph 5 1. ᯿ኩ缏䁰牧稳羳ಅํ抷硁
For the reasons above, encouraging parents to install apps on their children’s phones for monitoring
婦奾 their activities is vital for preventing them from being addicted to it and hurting others on the Internet.
 This can also separate the vulnerable youngsters from the dangerous virtual world.
3. 䌘๚㬵ጱ疻磭
It is hoped that the young generation can be wise mobile phone users and make full use of the benefits
they can derive from these smart devices so that they can carry these advantages over to their careers
in their life.
ӥྃ Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong

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Learning English through Debating
It has recently been reported that some parents in Asian countries are installing apps on their children’s mobile
phones that monitor their activities to ensure that they use these devices responsibly.

Write a letter to the Young Post stating whether you agree with these parents’ actions or not. Justify your position
with three reasons.

Ӥྃ Dear Editor,

Paragraph 1 1. 䌃֢ፓጱ
I am writing to express my opinion about some parents’ installation of monitoring apps on their
Օ奧 children’s mobile phones.
2. Իդꖤว
“Tiger moms”, “wolf dads”, “helicopter parents” – to name but just a few – these are all terms
describing Asian parents who make every endeavour to monitor or control the behaviour of their
children. Recently, it has been reported that some parents in Asian countries are installing apps on
their children’s mobile phones that monitor their activities to ensure their responsible use of these
devices. While some deem it reasonable and sensible, some see it unreasonable and absurd.
3. ก嘦蔭螈缏䁰
After meticulous consideration, it is my conviction that such an act is by no means beneficial to the
children and the family.

Paragraph 2 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
抷讨Ӟ To commence with, the installation of monitoring apps will hamper children’s development of self-
discipline.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Living in this technological era, it is public knowledge that self-discipline is of crucial significance for
there are much more temptations in society than before. Knowing how to distinguish between right
and wrong is thereby indispensable, especially for easily swayed young minds. Admittedly, through
installing the apps and paying heed to every act of teens on their electronic gadgets can parents
produce a deterrent effect in the short term, protecting them from falling victim to online frauds or
having minds perverted by inappropriate content. Yet, such effects are by no means sustainable.
Youngsters behave themselves only to avoid punishment from parents, rather than understanding the
importance of using devices responsibly. Consequently, many of them will fail to avoid temptations in
real life, where parents can no longer monitor them.

Paragraph 3 1. 䰤氂‫ݙ‬
Apart from impeding children’s development of self-discipline, under no circumstances should we
抷讨ԫ overlook the negative impact of installing monitoring apps poses to the relationship between parents
and children.
2. 托奞薹朰抷讨
Due to long working hours, many parents lack time to communicate with their children, thus having
distant relationship with the latter. Further to this, under the influence of traditional Chinese parenting
as well as the grade-fixated education system in Asian countries, many parents tend to lay emphasis
on children’s academic achievement rather than expressing their love and care when they are with
their children after work. As a result, misunderstanding and conflicts crop up more easily. In light of
this, the act of installing apps to monitor children’s use of electronic devices will exacerbate the
current problems. Teenagers, who already hardly feel the love of their parents, will deem such an act a
lack of trust. They may then be more unwilling to open up to their parents, or even intentionally act
against their parents’ will to express their discontent, doing irreparable harm to their relationship
with parents.
3. 婦奾‫ݙ‬
Under this line of thinking, isn’t it farcical to install monitoring apps given it may wreak havoc on
the most precious parent-child relationship?

Paragraph 4 1. 檔蝄‫ݍ‬ො薪讨
Supporters of the act may counter my stance, holding the view that it can ensure children use their
洌抷 phones properly, lowering their chance of being submerged in the virtual world and thus have better
time management.
2. 瞚藨‫ݍ‬ො薪讨ጱ‫ݳ‬ቘ௔ + ‫ݍ‬洌‫ݙ‬
While this argument is reasonable at first glance, it is in fact fundamentally flawed when closely
examined. Undeniably, such an act can prevent children from getting addicted to the use of mobile
phones in the beginning. However, does it necessarily mean that children will allocate their time to
studies or other meaningful use? With children’s immature mind, they may be obsessed with playing
online games and browsing the Internet on computers; With children’s immature mind, they may still
be hooked on watching television programmes; With children’s immature mind, they may be
vulnerable to the distractions and temptations in the real world.
3. 托奞薹朰
In other words, it is simply difficult, if not impossible, to control teenagers’ responsible use of time.
Paragraph 5 1. 稳羳獊෈抷讨
After the aforementioned analysis, it is manifest that the parents’ installation of monitoring apps on
奾抷 their children’s phones is in no way reasonable. We have to understand that this will deter children
from developing self-discipline and shatter the mutual trust between parents and children while
 having minimal impact on controlling children’s use of time.
2. ๗磭֢奾
Thus, it is earnestly hoped that Asian parents can stop this futile act in no time. After all, parental
education is about love and care, rather than rules and supervision.
ӥྃ Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong

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