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The document outlines a tutorial assignment for CHIN2357, focusing on translating sections of the multimedia platform 'Our China Story' for the Academy of Chinese Studies. It includes two specific texts: one discussing the saying 'Xi Shi is in the eyes of the beholder' and another about a letter from a Yuan Dynasty painter. Students are tasked with discussing the source text and the Google Translate output to create a final translation version collaboratively.

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CHIN2357 Bilingual Communication in Translation

2024/25 Semester 2

Tutorial Discussion & Assignment 2

Scenario: We have received a commission from the Academy of Chinese


Studies to help produce an English version of their multimedia online
platform, “Our China Story”, for the promotion of Chinese culture abroad.
Presently, we are assigned two sections, 每日一詞 and 暢遊故宮. The following are
samples from each of these sections.

Task: Discuss the ST and TT (generated by Google Translate) with your


team and produce a final version of the translation on your own upon
discussion.

ST

情人眼裏出西施
If can explain simply and shortly in the paragraph  no need footnotes
Don’t include that much footnotes
自宋代詩話(散文+小說) (literature collection)《(politics criticisim)》「色不迷人人自迷,情人眼裏有西
施」。就是說無論長相如何,在情人眼中都如西施一樣美麗。

不過,相傳這句話最初出自一個與愛情完全無關的故事。

相傳在春秋時期,當時一名居住在越國都城外的樵夫秦仁,機緣巧合地在路上遇到三名正在逃亡的女子。

三人當中有一人是四大美人之一西施,她因救下越國,惹得越王夫人嫉妒而遭到追殺。秦仁救下三人,一眼就猜出了哪一名女子是西施。

此事後來傳成一段佳話,變成「秦仁眼裏出西施」,隨着後世傳頌,漸漸變成「情人眼裏出西施」。

就是說,不是愛人本來美麗,而是因愛慕之情,才覺得對方如西施一樣美。

行書秋深帖(趙孟頫代筆)
此帖為元代女畫家管道昇給嬸嬸的家書,内容關於問安和饋贈,但實際上是由丈夫趙孟頫代筆。信末趙孟頫不慎簽署了自己的名字,現在仍可
見到塗改的痕迹。

釋文如下:
Chinese showing respect vs people using English
Extent (if too extreme mby let english readers think Chinese culture is
crazy)
「道昇跪覆(show respect only: humbly kneel before…)嬸嬸夫人妝前,道昇久不奉字,不勝馳想,秋深
漸寒,計惟淑履請安。

近尊堂太夫人與令侄吉師父在此一再相會,想嬸嬸亦已知之,茲有蜜果四盝,糖霜餅四包,郎君鯗廿尾,桕燭百條拜納,聊見微意,辱略物領,
誠感當何如。」
TT

Xi Shi is in the eyes of the beholder


Since the Song Dynasty poetry talk (Song Poetry)"Tiao Xi Yu Yin Cong Hua Hou Ji" (mby can
add footnotes to explain what this is) there is a line that goes "Beauty is not what seduces
people, people seduce themselves, Xi Shi is in the eyes of the beholder". That is to say, no
matter what you look like, you are as beautiful as Xi Shi in the eyes of your lover.

However, according to legend , this sentence originally came from a story that had nothing
to do with love.

According to legend, during the Spring and Autumn Period, a woodcutter named Qin Ren,
who lived outside the capital of the Yue State, met three fleeing women on the road by
chance.

One of the three was Xi Shi, one of the four great beauties. She was hunted down because
she saved the Kingdom of Yue and aroused the jealousy of the wife of the King of Yue. Qin
Ren rescued three people and guessed which woman was Xi Shi at a glance.

This incident later became a famous story, which became "Qin Ren sees beauty in his eyes".
As it was passed down through the generations, it gradually became "A lover's eyes see
beauty in his eyes".

That is to say, it is not that the lover is inherently beautiful, but because of admiration, you
feel that the other person is as beautiful as Xi Shi.

Running Script Autumn Deep Letter (Written by Zhao Mengfu)


This letter is a letter from Yuan Dynasty female painter Guan Daosheng to her aunt. The
content is about greetings and gifts, but it was actually written by her husband Zhao
Mengfu. At the end of the letter, Zhao Mengfu accidentally signed his own name, and traces
of erasure can still be seen.

The explanation is as follows:

"Daosheng kneels before my aunt and madam (mother). Daosheng has not written to me
for a long time and misses me. As autumn deepens and the weather gets colder, I would like
to pay my respects to you.
Recently, your madam and your nephew Master Ji have met here again and again. I think
your aunt also knows about it. Here are four bowls of honey fruit, four packs of sugar icing
cakes, twenty dried fish, and a hundred tung candles. I am honored to present you with a
small token of my appreciation. I will be grateful if you accept my humble gift."

(Generated by Google Translate)

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The accidental signing of Zhao Mengfu's name at the end of Guan Daosheng's letter is significant because it highlights the role of gender and agency in historical written communication. During that era, it was common for men to write letters on behalf of women, reflecting gender roles and expectations. This incident, which also exhibits physical evidence of erasure, emphasizes the informal collaboration and complex interpersonal dynamics, like the husband's involvement in personal communications that were socially expected to be independently from women .

The story of Xi Shi and Qin Ren reflects broader themes in Chinese literature concerning the subjective nature of beauty and perception. The evolution of '秦仁眼裏出西施' into '情人眼裏出西施' highlights a recurring motif where beauty is a reflection of the observer's inner feelings, a theme prevalent in classical Chinese stories and poetry. This mirrors the philosophical discussions from the Confucian and Daoist traditions, emphasizing intangible qualities like virtue and emotional admiration over physical appearance, thus ingraining the notion that perception is shaped more significantly by emotional and personal connections than by external realities .

Preserving historical context in translating culturally rich texts is crucial because these contexts provide essential insights into the period's social norms, values, and interpersonal dynamics. With 'Our China Story,' translating without this context risks losing the depth and intent of cultural expressions, as seen in references to literary stories or historical figures. Understanding these backgrounds allows translators to accurately convey not just the language but the significance of events and sentiments, offering readers a more holistic understanding of Chinese culture, fostering genuine intercultural appreciation and preservation of heritage .

Guan Daosheng's letter contains cultural nuances such as her expression of humility and respect, seen in her phrase '跪覆', which literally means to kneel and return, symbolizing deep respect. This is part of traditional Chinese hierarchy and politeness which might be lost in translation. To retain these nuances, translators need to explain the cultural background of terms used, or choose equivalent expressions that convey respect and hierarchy in English without altering the intent. Additionally, maintaining the formal tone and subtle expressions of gratitude, as seen in gift-giving and the notion of 'small tokens of appreciation,' are essential for conveying the original tone and meaning .

The translation of 'Running Script Autumn Deep Letter' poses challenges in maintaining fidelity to stylistic elements such as tone, formality, and cultural context. The original contains expressions of formality and hierarchical respect, typical of the sender's social standing and historical norms. Moreover, nuanced terms reflecting intimate familial relationships and humble presentation through humility phrases are difficult to convey with exact English equivalents. Achieving a balance between literal translation and cultural adaptation while retaining the integrity and intention of the stylistic elements and historical formality presents significant challenges for translators .

The aphorism '情人眼裏出西施' originated from the story of a woodcutter named Qin Ren encountering Xi Shi during the Spring and Autumn Period. Xi Shi, one of the four great beauties, was fleeing due to jealousy from the wife of the King of Yue. Qin Ren's ability to identify Xi Shi among the women he encountered leads to the phrase ‘秦仁眼裏出西施,’ which suggests seeing beauty through personal perception. Over time, this evolved into ‘情人眼裏出西施,’ conveying that a lover sees their beloved as beautiful as Xi Shi, not because of inherent beauty, but due to admiration and affection .

The 'Our China Story' multimedia platform exemplifies intercultural dialogue by bridging cultural narratives for both Chinese and Western audiences. This collaboration involves translating and adapting content like '每日一詞' and '暢遊故宮' into culturally resonant versions for English-speaking audiences while maintaining the authenticity of Chinese culture. It requires translators to consider cultural sensitivities, clarify cultural references, and convey meanings effectively without resorting to oversimplification. The effort creates a shared understanding, promoting cultural appreciation and knowledge exchange, fostering deeper connections between the two audiences .

The implications regarding the reliability of Google Translate as demonstrated in the letters encompass the potential for missing cultural and contextual depth that is crucial in historical documents. While Google Translate provides a basic translation, it often lacks the ability to account for nuanced cultural meanings or historical context, leading to translations that may be technically accurate but devoid of interpretative depth. This limitation signifies the need for human intervention in translation to ensure cultural appreciation and textual fidelity are properly maintained, highlighting the complementarity rather than the replacement of human translators .

Translation projects like those commissioned by the Academy of Chinese Studies significantly contribute to global understanding of Chinese culture by making diverse cultural narratives accessible to non-Chinese speaking audiences. They enable the dissemination of historical, philosophical, and artistic knowledge typical in Chinese cultural artifacts, fostering cross-cultural dialogue and empathy. By carefully adapting content with context-specific explanations and maintaining cultural integrity, these projects help bridge cultural gaps, debunk misconceptions, and promote cultural respect and learning, fostering a more interconnected global community .

The story of Qin Ren reflects relationship dynamics during the Spring and Autumn Period in Chinese history by illustrating societal values such as recognition of beauty not solely by physical appearance. Qin Ren's intuitive recognition of Xi Shi embodies the ideal that a person's worth and beauty are perceived through an inner understanding, aligning with Confucian philosophies of personal virtues and the significance of perception over outward appearance. Furthermore, the story's evolution into a widely-used aphorism underscores how these values were integrated into the moral fabric of society .

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