The line graph illustrates how many visitors had visited an island during over seven years--> a seven-year
period. (2010-2017)
Overall, both line graphs experienced a significant increase over seven years, so as a whole the total
number of visitors grew . Although the difference between the two graphs in the first and last years
were almost the same, in the first year, the number of tourists who stayed on cruise ships was lower
than those who stayed on the island. However, by the final year, their positions had reversed.
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As for / in terms of / as far as sth is concerned
The number of Visitors staying on the island was more than those who stayed on cruise ships between
2010 and 2015., with The total number of tourists who visited the island showed showing a sharp
increase between 2010 and [Link] this period. In 2010, there were just under 1 million tourists in
total. This number rose significantly, reaching approximately 2.5 million by 2015. Visitors staying on the
island were more than those who staying on cruise ships during this period. As for the number of ……, In
2010, around 0.7 million tourists stayed on the island, while only 0.3 million chose cruise ships. Both
graphs then showed a growth, with island visitors reached at reaching around 1.5 million in 2013 and
remaining stable until 2015. While, the number of cruise ship visitors stood at about 0.25 million at first
yearin the initial year, it then then had showedbecame erratic beteent …. and …. until 2013 after that
skyrocketed.--> before skyrockting to …in …
A and B …. (9 and 4 respectively)
Totally as for the rest of the period, we witness stability in the total number of visitors from 2015 to
2016. then soaredsored until 2017--> it then had soared to … by … . as far as ……. is concerned, After
2015, the trend changed, with an increased in visitors who stayed on cruise ships this graphthe graph of
cruise ship visitors over took the graph which shows the changes of visitors who preferred to stay at on
island in 2015. At the end of this period both of them had the highest numbers of visitor 1.5 million for
those who stayed on the island and 2 million for visitors who stayed on cruise ships, all together
totally made 3.5 million tourists.
Even though the number of … island was much higher until 2015, this figure was overtaken by ….. .
Despite the slight decrease from … in 2015 50 … in 2016, the figure then recovered although the growth
was not as sharp as that of cruise ship