ASSESSMENT OF THESIS AND ORAL EXAMINATION,
Kindly see below my comments for each of the assessible sections
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SN Area of Assessment
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Candidate's statement of the Problem and Justification for the Study
The research problem is well-defined, addressing the growing role of AI in optimizing supplier
selection and enhancing procurement success. The objectives align effectively with the research
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focus. The justification is strong, especially given the relevance of AI technologies in modern supply
chain operations. A further exploration of AI adoption challenges in Ghana’s manufacturing sector
would strengthen the justification.
Candidate's knowledge of pertinent literature and Theoretical and Conceptual
Frameworks/Modelling Techniques
The literature review is comprehensive, exploring supplier selection, AI algorithms, and procurement
2 ***
success. The theoretical framework, rooted in the Resource-Based View (RBV), is robust and
provides a solid basis for the study. Further analysis of the limitations of AI adoption in
resource-constrained environments would add depth.
Candidate's research design and methodology
The methodology is appropriate, employing a quantitative research approach with structured
3 questionnaires. The sample size and data collection methods are well-documented, and the use of ***
Structural Equation Modeling (SEM) is commendable. However, more detail on the data validation
process would improve clarity.
Appropriateness of data acquisition, validity of data, depth and presentation of results
Data analysis is rigorous, with SEM effectively employed to test hypotheses and evaluate mediation
4 ***
effects. The results are clearly presented, though additional visual aids such as graphs or flowcharts
would enhance comprehension.
Candidate's main Findings and Discussion
The findings demonstrate the significant influence of supplier selection on procurement success and
5 highlight the mediating role of AI algorithms. The discussion effectively links findings to existing ***
literature while emphasizing the practical implications for procurement professionals. More specific
recommendations tailored to the Ghanaian manufacturing context would improve applicability.
Candidate's Conclusions and Recommendations
The conclusion summarizes the findings concisely and offers practical recommendations, including
6 ***
the integration of AI into supplier evaluation frameworks and procurement processes. These
recommendations are actionable and relevant to both academics and practitioners.
Candidate's presentation, i.e. format, standard of presentation, citation and referencing,
sectioning, typing, grammar, etc
7 ***
The thesis is well-organized, with consistent formatting and minimal typographical errors. The
writing is clear and concise, making complex concepts accessible to readers.
Total ***
Generated on: Fri Jan 31 [Link] 2025
by: Ralph AMPONSAH-GYIMA (Graduate Student)