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Essay Revision and Editing Guide

The document provides a comprehensive checklist for revision and editing to enhance writing clarity and conciseness. It outlines two stages: revision focusing on content and structure, and editing addressing grammar, punctuation, and style. Additionally, it offers helpful tips for effective writing practices and resources available at the Academic Success Centre.

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Essay Revision and Editing Guide

The document provides a comprehensive checklist for revision and editing to enhance writing clarity and conciseness. It outlines two stages: revision focusing on content and structure, and editing addressing grammar, punctuation, and style. Additionally, it offers helpful tips for effective writing practices and resources available at the Academic Success Centre.

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Revision & Editing Checklist

Revision and editing are essential steps for clear and concise writing. It is recommended that you
review your writing in two distinct stages: First, revision is devoted to content, meaning, and
structure—the “big picture.” Second, editing is concerned with word choice, grammar,
punctuation, citations, and other stylistic features. In order to edit your writing effectively, you
need to learn basic rules of grammar, punctuation, and a preferred citation style. Refer to a
citation style guide and a writer’s handbook with clear explanations and practical examples, such
as The Little, Brown Handbook. The ASC provides a number of handouts that can help you during
various stages of the writing process. Remember, revision and editing takes time, and clear and
concise writing demands multiple drafts.

Revision
1. Purpose
 Does the essay conform to the assignment?
 Is the thesis clearly defined?
 Who is your audience?

2. Structure/Organization
 Does the introduction supply suitable background information?
 Does each paragraph have a topic sentence that states the main idea?
 Does each paragraph have a concluding sentence transitioning to the next paragraph?
 Is there a concluding paragraph that summarizes the main points of the paper?

3. Development
 Are the paragraphs well-arranged?
 Are there enough details, examples, and evidence to support each main point?
 Does each sentence and paragraph support the thesis?

4. Unity/Coherence/Flow
 Does the paper “flow” smoothly?
 Are transitional words and phrases used between sentences, and can any transitions be
improved?
 Have you incorporated appropriate quotations effectively?
 Do the sentences vary in length?
 Does the introduction engage the reader?
 Does the conclusion answer the question “So what”?
 Is the title appropriate and adequately informative?

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Editing
1. Grammar
 Sentence fragments: Does each sentence have a subject, a verb, and a complete
thought?
 Subject-verb agreement: Are singular verbs used with singular subjects and plural verbs
used with plural subjects?
 Tense: Is each sentence in the appropriate tense?
 Active and passive voice: Use active voice whenever possible (the subject performs the
verb’s action).

2. Punctuation
 Are commas used correctly?
 Are hyphens placed between compound adjectives (e.g. nine-page document)?
 Are semicolons used correctly to connect independent clauses?
 Are all periods and commas inside quotation marks and semicolons and colons placed
outside them?
 Have apostrophes been used correctly to indicate possession?

3. Spelling
 Have all contractions (e.g. don’t) been removed?
 Have you checked for any spelling errors that your spell-checker would not recognize
(including homophones, e.g. to, too, two)?

4. Style
 Has wordiness (unnecessary/redundant words) been eliminated?
 Is your diction/tone suitable for the intended audience?
 Have you avoided ambiguous references such as “this,” “these,” “it,” “they,” etc.?
 Are the pronouns gender neutral?

5. Documentation & Formatting


 Have you followed established conventions (e.g. APA, MLA, Chicago, CSE, etc.) including
those specified by your instructor?
 Are direct quotations duplicated accurately?
 Have you acknowledged all sources and ideas that are not your own to avoid
plagiarism?

Helpful Tips
 Carefully reading your paper aloud helps considerably. By beginning at the end of the
document you are better able to focus on one sentence at a time.
 Take a break between drafts to create some distance between you and your writing; a day
or so is ideal, at minimum an hour or two.
 Swap papers with a friend and practice peer editing.
 Many people find it easier to edit from a hard copy rather than on a computer screen.
 Learning from your instructor’s feedback is an effective way to improve your writing.
 Meet with a writing tutor for feedback at any stage of the writing process.

Common questions

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While editing, a writer should consider eliminating wordiness and redundancy, using diction and tone appropriate for the intended audience, avoiding ambiguous references, and ensuring gender-neutral pronouns. Additionally, conforming to the stylistic parameters of a chosen citation style or those specified by the instructor is necessary for maintaining a cohesive and professional piece .

Taking breaks between drafts is important because it creates some distance between the writer and their writing, helping them to review it with a fresh perspective. Ideally, these breaks should be about a day, but at minimum, an hour or two can be beneficial. This practice allows writers to better focus and potentially recognize previously overlooked errors or inconsistencies .

Reading a paper aloud during revision is beneficial because it helps the writer catch errors that they might miss when reading silently, enhances the writer's ability to sense the flow and timing of sentences, and increases the likelihood of identifying awkward phrasing or sentence fragments. This technique allows the writer to experience the writing from a reader's auditory perspective .

A writer can ensure their essay is free from plagiarism by accurately acknowledging all sources and ideas that are not their own, following the specific citation style requirements such as APA, MLA, etc., as specified by their instructor, and ensuring direct quotations are duplicated accurately. Consistent and thorough documentation and formatting of sources prevent unintentional plagiarism .

A writer can improve the flow and coherence of their paper by using transitional words and phrases between sentences and paragraphs, varying sentence length, ensuring that the introduction engages the reader, incorporating appropriate quotations effectively, and revising paragraphs to maintain unity. Practicing these techniques helps the paper to ‘flow’ smoothly, maintaining the reader's interest and comprehension .

Effective methods for improving punctuation usage in editing include ensuring that commas are used correctly for listing and separating clauses, semicolons are used to connect independent clauses, and that punctuation marks like periods and commas are placed inside quotation marks while semicolons and colons remain outside. Additionally, a careful review of style guides and grammars can reinforce proper usage .

The conclusion plays a crucial role in the overall structure of an essay by summarizing the main points, ensuring that all arguments have been wrapped up effectively, and addressing the question 'So what?' to emphasize the significance of the thesis and leave a lasting impression on the reader. It ties together the essay, providing a coherent end to the discussion .

The two main stages of reviewing a piece of writing are revision and editing. Revision focuses on content, meaning, and structure, addressing the 'big picture' aspects like the thesis, audience, and organization. Editing, on the other hand, deals with word choice, grammar, punctuation, citations, and stylistic features, requiring the knowledge of basic grammar rules and a preferred citation style .

To ensure that paragraphs in an essay effectively support the thesis, each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence that states the main idea, sufficient details, examples, and evidence to support this main idea, and a concluding sentence that transitions nicely to the next paragraph. Additionally, each paragraph should be well-arranged, coherent, and smoothly transitioning to ensure unity and flow throughout the essay, all while consistently supporting the thesis .

To check for sentence fragments during editing, ensure that each sentence includes a subject, a verb, and a complete thought. Reading the paper aloud can be a helpful technique as it allows you to hear where a sentence might be incomplete .

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