Writing task 1
DYNAMIC GRAPH
The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply
in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
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Before you write, answer these questions?
1. What is the graph about?
2. What are the items?
3. When were the datas?
4. What was the time period?
Related Vocabulary
VERB: rise / increase / go up / uplift / rocket(ed) / climb / upsurge / soar/ shot up/
improve/ jump/ leap/ move upward/ skyrocket
NOUN: a rise / an increase / an upward trend / a growth / a leap / a jump / an
improvement/ a climb.
VERB: fall / decrease / decline / drop / reduce / collapse / dip / dive / go down //
slum / slide / go into free-fall.
NOUN: a fall / a decrease / a reduction / a downward trend /a downward tendency /
a decline/ a drop / a slide / a collapse / a downfall.
VERB: Stay unchanged / level out / remain constant / remain steady / plateau /
remain the same / remain stable / remain static
NOUN: a steadiness/ a plateau / a stability/ a static
ADVERB: slightly / slowly / mildly / tediously
ADJECTIVE: slight / slow / mild / tedious
ADVERB: moderately / gradually / progressively / sequentially
ADJECTIVE: moderate / gradual / progressive / sequential
ADVERB: dramatically / rapidly / sharply / quickly / hurriedly / speedily / swiftly /
significantly/ considerably / substantially / noticeably.
ADJECTIVE: dramatic / rapid / sharp / quick / hurried / speedy / swift / significant /
considerable / substantial / noticeable.
How to describe a dynamic graph
• Introduction: Paraphrase
The line / bar chart (s)
+ show(s) / exhibit(s) / illustrate(s) / demonstrate (s) / give(s) information about
+ how many ___ (the number of) / how much ___ (the amount of) / the percentage
of______ / the proportion of __________
+ over a __-year period between ___ and ___ / between ___ and ___ / over ___ years /
over the course of ___ years starting in ___.
• Overall: General and most significant information
Overall,
Major trend:
+ there (be) an upward/increase trend in ____ / ____ see(s)/saw an
upward/increase trend
+ there (be) a downward/decrease trend in ____/ ____ see(s)/saw a
downward/decrease trend
+ there (be) a fluctuant trend in ____ / ____ illustrate(s) a wave-like movement
Outstanding features:
Highest/lowest:
* _____ (be) the most/least popular /
* _____ experience(s/d) the highest/lowest figure.
Body:
• Body 1:
➢ As (it is) shown in the illustration…
➢ As can be seen in the…
➢ As the diagrams suggest…
➢ According to the…
➢ Categorically speaking…
➢ Getting back to the details…
➢ Now, turning to the details…
➢ The table data clearly shows that…
➢ The diagram reveals that…
➢ The data suggest that…
➢ The graph gives the figure…
➢ It is interesting to note that…
➢ It is apparently seen that…
➢ It is conspicuous that…
➢ It is explicitly observed that…
➢ It is obvious…
A similar/contrastive trend (be) On the other hand/Besides, _____
recorded in _____ during the period, begin(s/began) at ____ in (year),
which goes(went) up / down by ___ after that it rise(s/rose) /
from the (year) figure of ___. reduce(s/d) noticeably/slightly in
(year) at ____.
(e.g. A similar trend was recorded in (e.g. On the other hand, LaGuardia
the number of tourists in Canada began at 35m in 1995, after that it
during the period, which went up by rose remarkably for the next three
5% from the 2005 figure of 15%.) years, at 46m.)
In (year), ____ hit(s) the
____ was the number/proportion of
peak/highest point / reach(es/ed) a
____ in (year).
bottom at ___.
• Body 2:
Sentence 1
The ___ year period witness(es/ed) a ___ climb/fall in the ___, which is(was) ___ in
(year 1) and ___ in (year 2).
If we look at ____, it start(s/ed) at ____ in the first year.
Sentence 2
In (year), the figure peak(s/ed) at ____.
After this point, the trend jump(s/ed) / go(went) down to ____ in (year).
Sentence 3 (if any)
In the last ___ years, the trend remained stable at ____.
In the last ___ years, there (be) a wild/mild fluctuation in ___, with the highest and
lowest ratio/number shown in (year) at ____ and (year) at ____ respectively.
Sample Answer:
The given bar chart presents data about the percentages of renewable energy with
regards to the total energy production in four different countries (Australia,
Sweden, Iceland and Turkey) in three years; 1997, 2000 and 2010.
Overall, Sweden and Iceland witnessed an upward trend in the use of renewable
energy sources in the three examined years. It can also be seen that among the four
countries, Iceland was the country with the most usage of this energy.
In 1997, almost half of the total energy produced in Iceland came from renewable
resources. This figure continued to rise steadily to 60% in 2000 and more than
70% in 2010. Meanwhile, in 1997, only approximately 5% of the entire amount of
energy produced in Sweden was generated from natural resources, which was a
similar trend to that of Iceland in regards to proportion of renewable energy
produced.
Regarding Australia, nearly 10% of the energy supply was from renewable
resources in 1997, and this figure decreased slightly to around 5% in 2010.
Similarly, the percentage of renewable energy used in Turkey experienced a
decline over the years from approximately 37% in 1997 down to just under 35% in
2010.
Homework:
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