NGUYEN H.
HUY 1
In this modern age, there is an ongoing debate on whether
computers and the Internet are advantageous to students in
terms of acquiring knowledge or whether they would be better
off studying with teachers available in classrooms. In your
opinion, which is the most appropriate?
Task Breakdown:
Identify Keywords:
Computers and the Internet
Useful instruments for students in education
Education with the presence of teachers in classrooms is more
effective
Debate on both sides
You have to state your own opinion
What You Need to Do:
State both viewpoints:
Merits of computer and Internet-assisted learning.
Merits of education with a teacher in classroom settings.
State your opinion backed up by examples.
Generating Ideas
Viewpoint 1: Computers and the Internet in Teaching and Learning
Advantages:
Information Access: There is a vast amount of information available
to students on the Internet.
Learning at Their Own Pace: They can learn whenever, wherever, and
in any way they wish.
Learning by Doing: Education through games and educational videos
is also fun.
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Basic Knowledge: It is essential for students to understand
technology and its role.
Viewpoint 2: Learners Working with Teachers
Advantages:
Individual Attention: Teachers ensure that students comprehend the
lessons.
Interaction with Peers: Making friends and learning through
collaboration.
Organized Learning Environment: The presence of structured
environments within a classroom facilitates learner engagement.
Rapid Feedback: When students make mistakes, a teacher is present
to correct them immediately.
Your Opinion:
Decide whether to support one side or acknowledge that both factors
are important.
In this case, we assume that both computers and teachers are
important.
Useful Vocabulary
Computer-Assisted Education: Use of computers to present
educational material, utilizing different channels of education.
Traditional Education: Learning without the use of computers, real
interaction and learning with people.
Useful Phrases:
"One opinion is that..."
"On one hand..."
"On the other hand..."
"Personally..."
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"For instance..."
"Because of this..."
"From this viewpoint..."
Grammar Focus
Use of Simple and Compound Sentences
Simple Sentence: Contains only one thought.
“Learning becomes easier for students with computers.”
Compound Sentence: Joins two or more ideas with conjunctions such
as ‘and,’ ‘but,’ or ‘so.’
“Computers are a great way to help people learn, and they are also a
lot of fun.”
Use of Linking Words
To Add Information: "Also," "in addition," "furthermore"
To Contrast Information: "However," "but," "on the other hand"
Examples:
“People learn better with computers. However, many of them do not
even own one.”
Organizing the Structure of the Essay
Introduction:
Restate the Question: Rephrase the question using your own words.
State What You Will Do: Explain how you will proceed with the
discussion, presenting both sides and your own opinion.
Body Paragraph 1: Computers and the Internet
Topic Sentence: Describe the topic positively in relation to computers
and Internet technologies.
Supporting Points: Justify with examples.
Body Paragraph 2: Learning with Teachers
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Topic Sentence: Emphasize the importance of teachers in schools.
Supporting Points: Justify with examples.
Body Paragraph 3: Your Opinion
Topic Sentence: Offer your own opinion.
Supporting Points: Explain why you think both positions are
important.
Conclusion:
Summarize Main Points: Briefly state the main ideas.
Restate Your Opinion: Finish with your opinion.
Drafting the Essay
Introduction
"In today's modern age, there is an ongoing debate about whether
computers and the Internet are advantageous for students in acquiring
knowledge or whether learning with teachers in classrooms is more
effective. In this essay, I will discuss both arguments and provide my
personal view."
Body Paragraph 1: Computers and the Internet
"On one hand, computers and the Internet are very helpful when
learning is concerned. Students can understand several topics because
there is plenty of data available on the web. For example, they can watch
math or science videos that teach them various concepts. Besides, they can
study at their own pace because they are able to choose what they want to
learn and when. Learning becomes more engaging through interactive
games and educational software, which can enhance their understanding."
Body Paragraph 2: Learning with Teachers
"On the other hand, learning with teachers in the classroom remains
of great importance. Having a teacher is highly advantageous to students
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because they can seek answers to any confusing questions that arise. In the
classroom, students are able to interact with their fellow classmates, which
contributes to their socialization. For instance, group tasks enable them to
learn how to collaborate and combine efforts. The structured environment
of a classroom also helps students focus and stay disciplined."
Body Paragraph 3: Your Opinion
"Personally, I believe that education cannot rely solely on one of these
methods because both computers and teachers are essential. The use of
computers is commendable, providing a vast array of information and
flexibility in learning. However, there is a level of guidance and support that
can only be offered by a teacher, which cannot be provided through a
computer. Teachers can tailor their instruction to meet individual student
needs and foster critical thinking. Therefore, integrating both technology
and traditional teaching will prove to be the most effective way of learning
for students."
Conclusion
"In conclusion, there are several advantages to using computers and
the Internet, as well as important roles that teachers play in the learning
process. I feel that it would be more productive for learners to accomplish
their studies by combining technology with traditional teaching methods.
This integrated approach can enhance the educational experience and
better prepare students for the future."