Analytical paragraph writing is NOT a description/ summarisation of the cues, but
analysis and rationalisation of the inputs , towards a response, using critical thinking
ANALYTICAL PARAGRAPH (SAMPLE)
Your school’s teacher coordinator for co-curricular activities has asked you, as the Head girl,
to review the quotes and description letters of two flower vendors for the decoration of the
Annual Day celebrations. She has requested you to share your recommendation, based on
analytical inputs. Write an analytical paragraph in about 120 words, by selecting details to
support your analysis.
Vendor A Vendor B
Dear Madam Co-ordinator Dear Madam Co-ordinator
Our team at Blossom Delight is dedicated to At Petal Perfect, we take pride in creating
delivering beautiful and vibrant floral unique and personalised floral arrangements
arrangements that will enhance the aesthetic that reflect the essence of your school. Our
appeal of your event. We offer a variety of packages include a diverse range of floral
packages to suit your needs, including designs, from classic bouquets to intricate
elegant bouquets, table centre-pieces, and installations. We understand the importance
decorative installations. Our experienced of customisation and will tailor our creations
team will work closely with you to to align seamlessly with the theme and spirit
understand the theme and colour scheme of of your event. Price Estimate for Basic
the event, ensuring that our floral designs Package:
complement the overall atmosphere. • Bouquets: ₹ 310 per piece for two-flower
setting (standard or customised)
Price Estimate for Basic Package: • Table Centre-pieces: ₹150 each
• Standard two-flower bouquets: ₹ 290 per • Decorative Installations: ₹ 575 per area
piece. (Customised -Extra charges) (One ceremonial flower rangoli FREE.)
• Table Centre-pieces: ₹ 150 each
• Decorative Installations: ₹550 per area As part of our commitment to sustainability,
we use locally sourced and eco-friendly
We look forward to the opportunity to materials in our arrangements. We look
contribute to the success of your annual day forward to the prospect of contributing to the
celebrations. annual day celebrations.
Yours sincerely Warm regards
[Vendor A] [Vendor B]
Suggested response:
A thorough analysis reveals that Vendor B, Petal Perfect, emerges as the superior choice for the
Annual Day celebrations' decorations when compared to Vendor A, Blossom Delight. One key
aspect is Vendor B's emphasis on customisation of floral arrangements to align with the school's
unique theme and spirit. In contrast, Vendor A, while offering beautiful arrangements, does not
highlight the same level of personalised service. Moreover, the pricing structures of the two
vendors play a crucial role in the decision-making process. Vendor B not only provides
competitive rates for bouquets but goes a step further by offering a ceremonial flower rangoli
for free with their decorative installations. This added value enhances the overall appeal of
Vendor B's proposal. On the other hand, Vendor A's pricing, while reasonable, lacks the extra
incentives that Vendor B provides. Additionally, Vendor B's commitment to sustainability,
utilising locally sourced and eco-friendly materials, aligns with contemporary values and adds
a socially responsible dimension to their services. This factor is not explicitly addressed in
Vendor A's proposal. Therefore, Vendor B outshines Vendor A and makes it the preferred choice
for the Annual Day celebrations' decorations.
Practice Question: Analytical paragraph (MT 2 2023-24)
As an aspiring candidate, you are seeking admission into one of the renowned engineering
colleges in the city. You have minimal technological skills and exposure. You have the required
cut-off percentage and you are looking for a complete or partial scholarship programme.
You have referred to your elder sister’s notes (who is in the same college), to decide whether
you want to take admission into the same college or not.
ADVANTAGES DISADVANTAGES
• Strong Curriculum • Lack of diversity
• Quality faculty • Students’ behavioural problems
• Close proximity to residential areas • No hostel facility
• Scholarship programme • Underutilisation of IT Services
OPPORTUNITIES DRAWBACK
• Practice-based research • Lack of publicity in areas of excellence
• Partnership with professional organisations
• Strong alumni
• Acclaimed Student Exchange Programme
• Job placements for students
Analyse your sister’s notes to decide whether to take admission in the college or not, while
taking your requirement into consideration as well. Write an analytical paragraph in about
120 words, by selecting features that support your analysis.
You may begin like this: A thorough analysis of the notes made by my sister reveals that
admission in this college may/ may not be considered…
You may end like this: Therefore, this college is/is not ideal for me. Admission into this
college will be/will not be the right decision for my future.