It didn't take me long to choose a topic I really wanted to explore for my extended essay.
Not only
have I been hearing my family discussing about the problems they faced because of the increase
consumption specially observed in the young generations but also about its impact on every
individual [Link] move driven by the government of India has captured the entire Indian
media's attention for [Link] a variety of perspectives on this step I want to investigate if it
was worthwhile for the government to take such big [Link] the talk with my supervisor,I felt
more confident that this topic has great potential to be studied so I will continue my research on
[Link] the same time I have to be sure to be consistent when applying strong economic theory to my
essay as it is economic based.I have changed my research question slightly with the help off my
supervisor suggestions to make sure the topic is less broad and so that I stay focused on one part
of the entire [Link] of now I feel ready to continue my research and write my essay as I have a
detailed plan of how I want to structure it.
We also got the opportunity to read through past Economics extended essays and identify their
strengths and [Link] meeting was really helpful to me as it helped me understand how
to carry my research and where I should keep my [Link] to collect primary data I have
been talking to some of the family members for the appropriate location. As of now my primary
goal is to collect more secondary data to investigate the effect of the negative sugar beverages
consumption.
After having finished my extended essay I am confident to state that I have learned a lot in the
process not only about the negative externality and tax but about conducting meaningful primary
and second [Link] I have been closing off my essay I have realized that the need which drove
me to take this topic for my research has been satisfied with an appropriate [Link] essay
planning has changed substantially throughout this entire experience but I am proud to have
highlighted the external consequence faced by.
The student effectively introduces the research question in the introduction, highlighting its significance for
investigation. To enhance the essay, it is recommended to ensure better alignment between the content
and the research question. Additionally, providing more detailed data analysis would strengthen the
argument. While acknowledging limitations, the student could benefit from offering more specific insights
during the research process.
A more comprehensive understanding and accurate application of economic theory, particularly regarding
negative externalities of consumption, would further enhance the essay's depth. Furthermore, addressing
any unresolved questions within the essay would contribute to a more thorough exploration of the topic.
Although the conclusion partially aligns with the research questions and argument, there is room for
improvement to ensure a more cohesive and well-structured essay overall.