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Department of Education

SCHOOLS DIVISION OF CITY OF MALOLOS


City of Malolos
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Quarter 4-Week 2
Formulate evaluative statements about a text read:
b. counterclaims in response to claims made in a
text read
(EN11/12RWS-IVac-9;
EN11/12RWS-IVac-9.2)
LESSON 1 – FORMULATING EVALUATIVE STATEMENTS

LET US KNOW

Every day, each of us are able to evaluate the things around us,
especially if they matter to us, personally. The problem, however, is that we
don’t listen enough to be able to respond accordingly. Most of the time, we
are focused on what we have to say, that we do not know how to evaluate
what has been said towards us or an issue.
The same can be said for reading and writing. We have to evaluate
counterclaims so that we can give justice to what has been given to us.

LET US REVIEW

You have learned about different types of assertions. Now, you must
determine whether what type of assertion is defined in the following
statements:

1. A simple and straightforward statement for expressing feelings,


opinions, and beliefs.
2. A statement that can be proven objectively by direct experience,
testimonies of witnesses, verified observations, or the results of research
3. Based on facts, but is difficult to objectively verify because of the
uncertainty of producing satisfactory proofs of soundness
4. Based on personal choice; therefore, they are subjective and cannot be
objectively proven or logically attacked.
5. Depend on historical precedent, laws, rules, usage, and customs
LET US STUDY

While there are assertions, there are also what we call “responses”
to those assertions. Reading and writing has always been responsive in
nature because in the very sense of these acts, they are just another means
of communication with a different background and context. These
responses are what we call counterclaims.

Remember, whatever you write is arguing to get the reader to


accept your claim. An effective written work addresses what the other side
might say and explains why that point of view is wrong. This is the function
of the counterclaim.

According to Kenneth Middle School, a counterclaim is the


argument (or one of the arguments) opposing your thesis statement. In
your paragraphs, you make it clear to the reader exactly what you plan on
proving and how you plan to go about proving it. This paragraph is where
you show the reader that you have considered the opposing side's
viewpoint and find it to be weak or invalid. A counterclaim and rebuttal
paragraph, if done well, gives you a chance to respond to the reader's
potential arguments before they are done reading. It also shows that you
have considered both sides of the debate, which strengthens your position.

Here is an example of a simplified counterclaim and rebuttal paragraph's


topic sentence:

X = your argument or claim


Y = the claim of the opposing side of your argument

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Skeptics of X _____ claim Y _____; however, these arguments are weak
because X_____.

Those who oppose X ______ say that Y _____, yet they are incorrect because
X _____.

The point of this paragraph is to expose the counterclaim to the reader


and then promptly explain why it is weaker than yours or why it is just
completely incorrect or invalid.

Kenneth Middle School States that there are two possible strategies that
you can use to refute the counter-argument:

1.) Point out any obvious flaw in the counterclaim

Example:
Many people argue that bullying is a natural part of our humanity and that
preventative measures are ineffective against this element of the human
condition; however, they fail to understand that bullying is a cycle that has
been perpetuated for centuries and that all cycles can be broken.

2.) Agree with the counterclaim, but provide new evidence that perhaps
contradicts or weakens their argument

Example:
Advocates of the use of E-cigarettes claim that these electronic cigarettes
are not toxic to others in the smoker's vicinity because it is just water vapor
that is expelled into the air; they emphasize that there is no tobacco or
carbon monoxide released. While this is true, what these proponents fail
to mention are the other harmful elements that are in the released vapor.
After this, you can then provide evidence and reasons in support of the
counterclaim, but you MUST STRONGLY REFUTE IT! Your rebuttal can't just be
a sentence saying: "This is weak evidence." You must clearly SHOW how their
evidence is weak with strong analysis.

LET US PRACTICE

Write a counterclaim for the following claims:

1. The death penalty can also help provide closure for the victim's family
and friends, who will no longer have to fear the return of this criminal
into society. They will not have to worry about parole or the chance
of escape, and will thus be able to achieve a greater degree of
closure. Mary Heidcamp, a Chicago woman whose mother's killer
faced the death penalty before the State Governor commuted the
sentences to life in prison, stated 'we were looking forward to the
death penalty. I'm just so disappointed in the system. Other victims'
families deemed the decision a 'mockery', that 'justice is not done.
2. The death penalty is the only way to ensure that criminals do not
escape back into society or commit further crimes while in prison.
While in prison, it is not uncommon for those receiving life in jail
sentences to commit homicide, suicide, or other crimes while in jail,
since there is no worse punishment they can receive. Putting
dangerous murderers in prison endangers other prisoners and the
guards who must watch them. The other advantage of execution is
that it prevents the possibly of an escape from prison. Even the
highest security detention facilities can have escapees. Thus, the only
way to be absolutely certain that a convicted murder can no longer
hurt others is to execute them.

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Arguments taken from: [Link]

LET US REMEMBER

A counterclaim is a response to an opposing claim. To write a proper


rebuttal to a counterclaim, point out the flaw in the argument. Another way to
do this is to accept the counterclaim but deny that the analysis or evidence are
correct.

LET US APPRECIATE

Each of the following rebuttals are supported and explained to a certain


extent. Tell whether the rebuttals were supported properly and explain why
they were or they weren’t.

1. Setting homework does little to develop good study skills. It is hard to


check whether the homework students produce is really their own. Some
students have always copied off others or got their parents to help them.
But today there is so much material available on the internet that
teachers can never be sure. It would be better to have a mixture of
activities in the classroom which help students to develop a whole range
of skills, including independent learning. Furthermore, if teachers want
to develop independence in their students, students should be given a
choice in the matter of homework. Otherwise, they’re not using their
judgement and therefore they aren’t being independent at all.

2. Homework is not an essential part of information. If what was to be


learnt from homework was that essential, it would not be left to the child
to learn on their own and away from school. In fact, many teachers admit
to simply setting homework because they are expected to set it, not
because they think it will be helpful. The best environment for learning
is in a classroom, where the student is able to ask for assistance if stuck
and the teacher is available to help.

Arguments taken from [Link]

LET US PRACTICE MORE

Form a rebuttal for the counterclaims in the “LET US APPRECIATE”


section. Make sure that you provide proper support and evidence for your
rebuttals.

EVALUATION

Form your own rebuttals about the following arguments. The quality of
your arguments will be measured based on showing the clarity of your
understanding of the opposing argument, the direct response to the
argument, and the support you have provided for your rebuttals.

1. Newspapers are a thing of the past because people no longer consume media in a
linear way and prefer to pick and choose what news they consume. With the
development of Digital Video Recorders (DVRs) and more generally the internet
people have come to no longer simply consume media in a linear fashion, they take
a more fragmented approach. In news consumption people no longer want to
simply have one newspaper with a vast array of topics inside. They want to pick and
choose which stories and columns they consume; people now prefer to pull the

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content they want rather than have it pushed on them. In a digital world the news
consumer can become their own editor and no longer need to rely entirely on old
hierarchical structures.
2. Newspapers are obsolete because in the internet age immediacy is everything,
newspapers can often contain out of date information by the time they hit the
shelves. In an interconnected global world whereby, technology allows us within
seconds to communicate across the globe in a variety of forms the newspaper
medium becomes obsolete. In the time it takes to write, edit, print and distribute a
newspaper the events being covered may very well have changed, when we have
the technology to overcome this problem it seems unlikely that newspapers will
continue to exist because who wants to read old news? An example of newspapers
not being able to adapt to changing events can be seen with the killing of Osama
Bin Laden on 2nd May 2011, the story broke too late for the morning newspapers in
the UK to be able to change their pages to include the story, it was then
subsequently reported a day late on the 3rd May.

Arguments taken from [Link]

Prepared by

JOHN LESTER A. ZAMORA


Teacher II
Marcelo H. Del Pilar National High School

Common questions

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Digital technology has dramatically influenced consumer preferences by enabling fragmented news consumption. The instantaneous access to a vast array of information on the internet allows consumers to curate their media intake, selecting only the topics and articles that interest them. This contrasts with the traditional newspaper model, where consumers receive a broad spectrum of content in a fixed format. Technologies like DVRs have further empowered users to control their viewing experiences, leading to a preference for non-linear, personalized consumption of media. These advancements highlight the shift away from static news platforms like newspapers, reinforcing the demand for targeted and tailored content .

Assertions are statements that express feelings, opinions, or beliefs, which can be simple and straightforward, based on facts, or subjective personal choices. They serve as the initial claims made in an argument. Counterclaims, on the other hand, are arguments opposing the initial assertions or claims. They are formulated as responses to those assertions, aiming to provide an alternative viewpoint. This structural difference ensures that counterclaims challenge the validity of the original assertion, thereby prompting a deeper evaluation of the topic at hand .

Not adequately addressing counterclaims in an argumentative essay can significantly weaken the credibility and persuasiveness of the argument. Ignoring or superficially acknowledging counterclaims may expose the writer to criticisms of bias or incomplete analysis, suggesting that they have not fully considered opposing views. This oversight might result in an unbalanced argument, reducing its effectiveness in persuading a discerning audience. Furthermore, failing to counter alternative perspectives could lead to a superficial essay that lacks depth and fails to engage critically with the complexities of the topic .

The concept of 'linear media consumption' is central to the argument about the obsolescence of newspapers as it highlights the shift in how audiences engage with media. In the past, media consumption was more linear; consumers would engage with a whole newspaper, receiving information in a pre-arranged sequence. However, with the advent of digital technology, people prefer non-linear, fragmented media consumption, selecting specific content that interests them directly. This change undercuts the traditional structure and relevance of newspapers, suggesting that they are outdated in fulfilling modern consumer preferences .

The effectiveness of homework as a tool for developing study skills is debated, with significant counterclaims highlighting weaknesses in its ability to foster independent learning. Critiques argue that the ability to verify the authenticity of a student's work is compromised, as students may often copy or receive external help. Instead, classroom activities that cater to a range of skills and prioritize student choice are suggested to better cultivate independence. These counterclaims question whether homework truly teaches independent learning, as the prescribed nature of assignments may deter students from exercising their judgment, thus making it an inefficient tool for skill development .

Counterclaims enhance the strength of an argumentative essay by demonstrating the writer’s thorough consideration of opposing viewpoints, which adds credibility to their position. By presenting a counterclaim and effectively rebutting it, the writer shows that they have anticipated and critically engaged with alternative perspectives. This leads to a more nuanced argument and persuades the reader of the validity of the original claim, as it illustrates the author’s comprehensive understanding of the topic and commitment to a balanced analysis .

Two primary strategies for effectively refuting counterclaims are: pointing out any obvious flaws in the counterclaim and agreeing with the counterclaim while providing evidence that contradicts or weakens it. The first strategy involves direct critical analysis to expose weaknesses or inaccuracies in the opposing argument. The second strategy takes a more nuanced approach, acknowledging the counterclaim’s validity but offering compelling evidence or insight that diminishes its impact. Both strategies require strong analytical skills and evidence-backed arguments to convincingly assert the superiority of the original claim .

The concept of 'unverified homework' challenges traditional educational practices by questioning the authenticity and educational value of homework assignments. Critics argue that the inability to confirm whether homework is genuinely a student’s own work undermines its role in fostering independent learning skills. It exposes reliance on external help, including copying from others or using readily available internet resources, which can lead to questionable educational outcomes. This concept challenges the effectiveness of homework in producing independent, critical thinkers and promotes a re-evaluation of assignments' purpose and methods to ensure they genuinely contribute to learning, potentially leading to pedagogical shifts towards more integrative in-class activities .

The development of e-cigarettes provides a practical example in counterclaim rebuttals by illustrating how to acknowledge a counterclaim's validity while presenting evidence that undermines it. Proponents of e-cigarettes claim they are safe as they primarily emit water vapor. The rebuttal strategy acknowledges this assertion but introduces evidence of harmful elements in the vapor, like toxins, that are overlooked by advocates. This approach not only accepts part of the opponent's argument but also shows that this evidence doesn't sufficiently support their position, thereby strengthening the original argument .

Evaluating counterclaims is crucial in reading and writing because it fosters critical thinking and ensures comprehensive understanding and argument development. In reading, evaluating counterclaims helps identify biases, assumptions, and the robustness of the arguments presented. When writing, incorporating and critically addressing counterclaims demonstrates an awareness of different perspectives and strengthens the overall argument by preemptively addressing potential criticisms. This approach encourages readers to consider all sides of an issue and bolsters the author's credibility. Overall, it is an essential practice for achieving depth and balance in scholarly discourse .

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