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Mother-Daughter Struggles and Crisis

The document summarizes the story of a daughter named Zia who attempts suicide by drowning herself in the bathtub after years of neglect and abuse from her alcoholic mother. When her mother realizes what has happened, she calls for an ambulance and Zia is rushed to the hospital. Unable to pay the bills, the mother borrows money from her boss, Bella, and promises to repay it within a week. After being discharged, Zia's mother acts kindly towards her but it is revealed that the amount owed was actually 50,000 pesos, not what was needed for the hospital bills, indicating the mother's financial troubles and putting Zia at risk.

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Mother-Daughter Struggles and Crisis

The document summarizes the story of a daughter named Zia who attempts suicide by drowning herself in the bathtub after years of neglect and abuse from her alcoholic mother. When her mother realizes what has happened, she calls for an ambulance and Zia is rushed to the hospital. Unable to pay the bills, the mother borrows money from her boss, Bella, and promises to repay it within a week. After being discharged, Zia's mother acts kindly towards her but it is revealed that the amount owed was actually 50,000 pesos, not what was needed for the hospital bills, indicating the mother's financial troubles and putting Zia at risk.

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[FX: door opening and closing]

Zia: (comes home from school) Mom, I’m home.

[FX: footstep sounds, bag being put down]

Kyla(mother): I don’t care. Make yourself useful and buy me some beer.
Zia: okay… (sighs exhaustingly and leaves)

[FX: door opening, footsteps]

Zia: Here you go, mom.


Kyla: Now, go. I don’t want to see your face.
Zia: But mom I-
Kyla: I SAID GO
[breaks the beer bottle, insert bottle shattering sound]
Mom: Don’t make me repeat what I said! All you did was cling onto me and disturb every single
time!
Daughter: y-yes mom… [ walks away while crying, insert foot step sounds]
Daughter: (talking to herself) [still crying] Why is my mom acting like that? I don't even know
why anymore. I love her so much but… I hate it, it hurts. She wasn’t even like this before. She’s
been neglecting me for so long that I’ve started thinking about killing myself. Everything is just
too much. Maybe I should stop thinking about it and just… do it.

[enters her room and runs to her bathroom, fills the bathtub with water]

Daughter: (hops in the bathtub and started crying again)


Daughter: Why does it have to be me? Why should I be the one to live this kind of life!? All I did
was make her proud with all my achievements but this is all I get. Why?! [crying again] Maybe
it’s time to end all of this. Maybe I should just forget everything and… disappear from this
world.

[FX: Distant sound of rushing water from upstairs]

Mom: It’s been going on for half an hour now. This child is really getting on my nerves. Zia! Zia!
Turn off the freaking water for God’s sake!!

[ Water still rushing, nobody’s answering.]


Mom: Oh, God. I swear. ZIA! ZIA! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! TURN OFF THE FREAKING WATER!
(still did not get an answer so she stood up and went upstairs to know what’s happening)

[FX: FOOTSTEPS AND DOOR OPENING SOUND]

(Looks around the room and sees Zia lying unconsciously on the bathtub.)

Mom: (panicked and scared) Oh my...

[FX: running footsteps]

Mom: (runs towards Zia on the bathroom and pulls her out of the bathtub.)

Mom: (starts to get frustrated) Zia! Zia! Oh my God! Please open your eyes! Please please!
(reaches for her phone and calls the paramedics.)

[FX: Phone number typing, ringing, and another voice on the line sound effect.]

911 call dispatcher: 911, how may I help you?


Mom: Please help me! My daughter tried to commit suicide by drowning herself. Please send help on
Eastwood Subdivision on 104th Cornelia St. right now!
911 call dispatcher: Alright, we’re going to send in an ambulance.

(15 minutes after)

[FX: SIREN OF AMBULANCE]

(At the hospital)


Doctor: She’s fine and conscious right now but you need to pay the hospital bills for now so you can take
her home.
Mother: Okay, Doc. Thank you for taking care of her. (The doctor walks away.)

[FX: Phone number typing, ringing, and another voice on the line sound effect.]
Bella: What do you need right now, Elena?
Elena: Boss Bella, can I borrow 50,000 Pesos from you because I need to pay for Leigh’s bills and we’re at
the hospital right now. I swear, I’ll return it to you next week.
Bella: Hmm, okay. I’ll transfer it to your account now. Just return it immediately to me next week or
else…
Elena: Or else what? (call ended) Boss? Boss Bella!
(runs to the counter cashier)
Elena: Good evening, I’ll pay for the bills of my daughter, her name is Leigh Valencia.
Cashier: Please wait a minute ma’am.
Elena: Okay.
[FX: sound of keyboard typing]
Cashier: The amount that you need to pay ma’am is 20,328 Pesos.
Elena: Here you go.

[FX: FOOTSTEPS AND DOOR OPENING SOUND]


(Saw the nurse checking up her child.)
Elena: Hi, when can I take her home?
Nurse: She can be discharged when she wakes up. (Elena smiles and nods.)

(A week after Leigh got discharged.)

Mom: Leigh, don’t ever do that again, huh?


Leigh: Yes, Mom. Sorry for worrying you.
Mom: Okay, go to school now because I need to be ready for work.

[FX: footsteps and sounds of car engines]


Bella: Hey, are you Leigh?
Leigh: Yes, that’s me. Why? Who are you?
Bella: I’m your mother’s boss (smiles) can we talk later after your class? I’ll fetch you.
Leigh: Okay, my class ends at 5 PM.
Bella: Okay. See you!

(Leigh’s school just ended)


[FX: sound of car engine]
Bella: Hop in!
(Leigh hopped in and car door closed)
Leigh: What are we gonna talk about?
Bella: Do you know that your Mom owes me money?
Leigh: Money? From you?
Bella: 50,000 Pesos, she told me that she’ll return it a week after you discharged.
Leigh: What? I don’t know that, I just knew that may bills are just 20,000 something.

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