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  • Glossaire du système nerveux central
  • Translation Analysis

201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

School of Languages,
Cultures and Societies
Faculty of Arts, Humanities and Cultures

Standard Cover Sheet for Assessed Coursework

From January 2017 all assessed coursework in LCS must be accompanied by this coversheet (unless
you have a specific learning disability, in which case you should use instead the Marking Awareness
coversheet).

This coversheet should be included as the first page of your submission. Please copy and paste it
into the beginning of your assessment (Ctrl+A, then Ctrl+C to copy its entirety). The contents of the
coversheet do not count towards your submission word count.

Please complete each of the following sections: -

Student ID: 201615131


Module Code: FREN1070
Tutor’s Name: Dr Terry Bradford
Assessment description (eg essay 1): Portfolio
Word count 1939 (Glossary: 943, Reflection: 996)

Please note that by submitting this piece of work you are agreeing to the University’s Declaration of
Academic Integrity. You can read the Declaration here.

NB Please ensure that you name your file with your SID, the module code, tutor name (if required)
and a brief assessment description e.g. 200987654 MODL1234 Tutor Name (if required) Essay [Link]
201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

Glossaire du système nerveux central

Acheminement (l') / Transmission


Definition: The passage of a nerve impulse across an anatomic cleft by activation of a
specific chemical mediator that stimulates or inhibits the structure across the synapse.
Farlex Partner Medical Dictionary, Transmissions. Available at: [Link]-
[Link]/Transmissions (Accessed 7 December 2022)

Synonyms: Communication, transportation, conveyance

Bulbe rachidien (le) / Medulla oblongata


Definition: The lowest part of the brain and the lowest portion of the brainstem.
Encyclopaedia Britannica, ed. Kara Rogers, Pons. Available at:
[Link]/science/pons-anatomy (Accessed 7 December 2022)
Synonyms: Respiratory centre

Cervelet (le) / Cerebellum


Definition: The part of the brain concerned with the coordination of muscles and the
maintenance of bodily equilibrium.
Merriam-Webster Dictionary, Cerebellum. Available at:
[Link]/dictionary/cerebellum (Accessed 7 December 2022)
Synonyms: Cerebellar hemispheres, hindbrain

Clignement (le) / Blink


Definition: To close and open the eyes quickly, once or several times.
Cambridge Academic Content Dictionary, Blink, (Cambridge University Press). Available at:
[Link] (Accessed 9 December 2022)
Synonyms: Flicker, flutter [one’s eyelids]
201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

Colonne dorsale (la) / Thoracic spine


Definition: Comprised of twelve vertebral bodies that make up the mid-region of the spine.
Spine health, Veritas, Available at: [Link]/glossary/thoracic-spine
(Accessed 9 December 2022)
Synonyms: Mid-spinal column

Couche de la matière piaque (la) / Pia mater


Definition: The innermost of the three membranes that cover the brain and spinal cord.
Collins English Dictionary, Pia Mater (HarperCollins Publishers). Available at:
[Link]/dictionary/english/pia-mater (Accessed 9 December 2022)

Crâne (le) / Skull


Definition: The bone structure that surrounds and protects the brain.
Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary, Skull, (Oxford University Press). Available at:
[Link]/definition/english/skull (Accessed 9 December 2022)
Synonyms: Scalp, skullcap, cranium

Cycle diurne (le) / Circadian rhythm


Definition: Physical, mental, and behavioural changes that follow a twenty-four-hour cycle.
National Institute of General Medical Sciences, Circadian Rhythms, (National Institutes of
Health (US)). Available at: [Link]
[Link] (Accessed 9 December 2022)
Synonyms: Biological rhythm, body clock

Déchirures (les) / Tears


Definition: Drops of saline fluid secreted by the lacrimal gland.
Merriam-Webster Dictionary, Tear. Available at:
[Link]/dictionary/tear (Accessed 9 December 2022)
Synonyms: Teardrops, lacrimal secretions
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Écoulement du sang (l') / Blood flow


Definition: The movement of blood through a vessel, tissue, or organ.
Scopeheal, ed. Dr Cameron Troup, Blood flow. Available at: [Link]
flow (Accessed 13 December 2022)
Synonyms: Bloodstream, circulation

Éternuements (les) / Sneezing


Definition: To expel air forcibly from the mouth and nose in a spasmodic involuntary action.
Farlex Partner Medical Dictionary, Sneeze. Available at: [Link]/sneeze
(Accessed 13 December 2022)
Synonyms: Sternutation

Évanouissement (l') / Fainting


Definition: A sudden and temporary loss of consciousness.
[Link], ed. Dr. Heidi Moawad, What is fainting, and what causes it?
Available at: [Link]/articles/182524 (Accessed 13 December 2022)
Synonyms: Collapsing, syncope, passing out

Éveil (l') / Wakefulness


Definition: The state of being unable to sleep.
Farlex Partner Medical Dictionary, Wakefulness. Available at:
[Link]/wakefulness (Accessed 13 December 2022)
Synonyms: Insomnia, sleeplessness

Fente (la) / Cleft


Definition: An indented formation between ridges or protuberances.
[Link] Dictionary, Cleft. Available at:
[Link]/dictionary/cleft (Accessed 20 December 2022)
Synonyms: Aperture, fissure, schism
201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

Glucides (les) / Carbohydrates


Definition: Substances such as sugar or starch that provide the body with energy.
Cambridge Dictionary, Carbohydrate (Cambridge University Press). Available at:
[Link] (Accessed 20 December
2022)
Synonyms: Saccharides, complex sugars

Hypophyse (l') / Pituitary gland


Definition: An endocrine gland situated beneath the base of the brain.
The Pituitary Society, Pituitary gland function. Available at:
[Link]/pituitary-gland-function (Accessed 20 December 2022)
Synonyms: Ductless gland

Moelle épinière (la) / Spinal cord


Definition: A tightly packed column of nerve tissue, extending downwards from the
brainstem through the central column of the spine.
Queensland Brain Institute, Spinal cord, University of Queensland. Available at:
[Link] (Accessed 20 December 2022)
Synonyms: Vertebral column

Motricité fine (la) / Fine motor skills


Definition: The movements and coordination of the small muscles of the body.
Rodil, J, Fine Motor Skills Defined by an Occupational Therapist. Available at:
[Link] (Accessed 20 December 2022)
Synonyms: Motor coordination, movement capability

Mésencéphale (le) / Midbrain


Definition: Region of the developing vertebrate brain, composed of the tectum and
tegmentum.
Encyclopaedia Britannica, ed. Adam Augustyn, Midbrain. Available at:
[Link]/science/midbrain (Accessed 20 December 2022)
201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

Synonyms: Neural structure, mesencephalon


Noyaux gris centraux (les) / Basal ganglia
Definition: A group of brain structures linked together, handling complex processes that
affect the entire body.
Cleveland Clinic, Basal Ganglia. Available at:
[Link] (Accessed 20 December
2022)

Ouïe (l') / Hearing


Definition: The process by which sound vibrations are transformed into nerve impulses
interpreted as sounds by the brain.
Encyclopaedia Britannica, Cochlear nerve and central auditory pathways. Available at:
[Link]/science/ear/Cochlear-nerve-and-central-auditory-pathways
(Accessed 23 December 2022)
Synonyms: Audition, listening, auditory perception

Paupière (la) / Eyelid


Definition: A movable fold of skin and muscle that can be closed over the eyeball.
MedicineNet, ed. Dr. Charles Patrick Davis, Eyelid, Available at:
[Link]/eyelid/[Link] (Accessed 23 December 2022)
Synonyms: Palpebra, blepharon

Seuil membranaire (le) / Membrane threshold


Definition: The difference between the electric potential in the intracellular and extracellular
matrices of the cell.
Vaskovic, Dr Jana, ed. Salvador, Francesca, Membrane potential. Available at:
[Link]/en/library/anatomy/membrane-potential (Accessed 23 December 2022)
Synonyms: Membrane potential/voltage, transmembrane/threshold potential

Toxicomanie (la) / Substance addiction


Definition: A physical dependence on a chemical substance.
Harvard Health Publishing, Substance addiction, (Harvard Medical School). Available at:
[Link]/addiction/substance-addiction (Accessed 23 December 2022)
201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

Synonyms: Dependence, obsession


Tronc cérébral (le) / Brainstem
Definition: The area at the base of the brain that serves a critical role in regulating certain
involuntary actions of the body.
Encyclopaedia Britannica, Central nervous system (ed. Kara Rogers), Available at:
[Link]/science/central-nervous-system (Accessed 23 December 2022)
Synonyms: Reticular formation

Vaine (la) / Blood vessel


Definition: The tubes through which blood is carried, including arteries, arterioles,
capillaries, venules, and veins.
Gupta, Dr Jessica and Shea, Dr Michael, MSD Manual (Consumer Version) (University of
Michigan). Available at:
[Link]/home/heart-and-blood-vessel-disorders/biology-of-the-heart-and-
blood-vessels/biology-of-the-blood-vessels (Accessed 23 December 2022)
Synonyms: Venation
201615131 FREN1070 Portfolio

In translation, it is important to develop a full understanding of the source texts, through


both reading and wider research, before embarking upon translating them. In terms of a
glossary, the main purpose of each of the various source texts from which information is
obtained is to be empirical and informative1. Therefore, the translation of these medical
terms in the glossary has to be a literal one; there is little room for divergence from the
approach taken by the source texts, except to provide clarity. To take an example from my
glossary; although ‘basal ganglia’ is not a commonly used term in English, even in medical
texts, it was the only direct translation available for ‘les noyaux gris centraux’, hence the
inclusion of this entry without synonyms. The limitations of subject matter and purpose
complicate the process of translation.

The nature and purpose of a glossary is to provide scientifically recognised factual


information to an audience less familiar with this subject-specific vocabulary. As translation
professor James Araki stated following a panel of Problems of Translation, “a translation
cannot be perfectly literal, or word for word, unless the two languages are structurally
identical”2. While the meaning is largely maintained here, it would be unreasonable to
categorise it as a ‘perfect’ translation. This concurs with Jacques Derrida’s somewhat ironic
statement on the difficulties of translation; “nothing is translatable, nothing is
untranslatable”3. Translators must strive for perfection, while not letting this affect their
ability to produce functional documents that fulfil the intended purpose.

According to Hervey and Higgins, “Translation loss is inevitable”4. This can be seen by the
incredibly specific French term ‘couche de la matière piaque’ being translated to the Latin
term ‘pia mater’ for English use. In this case, it can be observed that the Francophone
medical world has devised their own term for this membrane, whereas the Anglophone
sphere continues to use the Latin term, as there is no obvious English equivalent. The direct
English translation of the French term would be ‘layer of piaic matter’, but the adjective
‘piaic’ is used extremely infrequently in English, to such an extent that there is no definition

1
Hervey and Higgins Thinking Translation p.139
2
Araki, J. 1964. ‘A Note on Literal Translation’. The Journal-Newsletter of the Association of Teachers of
Japanese. Vol. 2, No. ½, pp.28/29. (p. 28)
3
Derrida, J., Venuti, L. 2001. ‘What is a “Relevant” Translation?’ Critical Inquiry. (University of Chicago Press).
Vol. 27, No. 2, pp. 174-200. (p. 179)
4
Hervey and Higgins Thinking Translation p. 25
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available from an online medical dictionary or journal. As a result of this, the term is
denominalised, resulting in the equivalent being ‘pia mater’.

The idea set out by Hervey and Higgins is to “reduce [translation loss] by deciding which of
the relevant features in the ST it is most important to preserve”5. Alternative interpretations
have been posited, including language philosopher Dorit Bar-On’s conclusion that the best
available translations preserve syntax “at the expense of so-called lexical meaning” 6. In the
case of this glossary, however, the ideas of Hervey and Higgins were adhered to, as the
factor of greatest importance when creating a glossary is the preservation of a term that can
be widely understood by those seeking medical knowledge, rather than a more idiomatic
translation, even if this may have greater lexical clarity.

In the field of translation, it is common for translation agencies to research subject-specific


terminology before the translator begins working on a source text 7. In this case, no explicit
list of vocabulary was provided, so extensive research had to be carried out on medical
terminology in order for the glossary to be of use. Examples of such subject-specific
terminology in the glossary include ‘thoracic spine’, ‘basal ganglia’, and ‘membrane
threshold’. The latter term proved particularly difficult to research, largely as a result of the
sheer number of synonyms available to describe the same concept. The use of ‘threshold’ is
more suitable here than that of ‘potential’ as it is used to describe a specific value (although
this value differs between each individual cell) and can therefore be more precisely defined.
Another contributing factor in this choice was that using one of the less lexically complex
methods of describing the same term facilitated the search for a suitable English-language
definition using online translation software and French/English dictionaries, a key
consideration in the modern approach to translation8.

Throughout the production of the glossary, an attempt was made to move “away from
concentrating on ‘the word’” and develop “an automatic sense of ‘the idea’” 9. For instance,

5
Hervey and Higgins Thinking Translation p. 25
6
Bar-On, D. 1993. ‘Indeterminacy of Translation – Theory and Practice’. Philosophy and Phenomenological
Research. Vol. 53, No. 4, pp. 781-810. (p. 782)
7
D’Amours, M., Hamilton, P. 2013. ‘Becoming a Self-Employed Translator: The Structuring Influence of the
Clientele’. Revue française de sociologie (English Edition). (Sciences Po) Vol. 54, No. 2, pp. 261-293. (p. 282)
8
Nunes Vieira, L. 2022. ‘Translation’. Transnational Modern Languages: A Handbook. pp.297-304 (p. 300)
9
Straker, J. 2007. ‘On-line and Between the Lines: The Internet and Glossary Production for Public Service
Interpreters. The Critical Link 4: Professionalisation of interpreting in the community. Ed. Wadensjö, C.,
Dimitrova, B.E., Nilsson, A., pp.280-81.
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‘drug addiction was a given English translation for ‘la toxicomanie’ from multiple sources,
such as the Collins French-English Dictionary and WordReference1011. While this translation
is not incorrect, the English term ‘substance addiction’ is more idiomatic; often, it is used
euphemistically to avoid direct reference to the drug, or ‘substance’, that a specific person is
addicted to. As ‘la toxicomanie’ eschews mentioning drugs in an equivalent way, it can be
said that in this case ‘substance addiction’ is a more faithful translation.

In the process of compiling the glossary, it was important to ensure that every term, both in
French and English, had a pre-existing presence in medical literature. Creating a neologism
through the use of calque would have been inappropriate in this context12. This is evident
from the translation of ‘le cycle diurne’, directly translatable to ‘daytime/daily cycle’.
However, there is little sign of this term being used in a medical context, so the more
subject-specific (albeit less direct) translation ‘circadian rhythm’ is used. In a comparable
way, linguistic transposition had to be used for the translation of ‘l’évanouissement’ to
‘fainting’. Here, what is an abstract noun in French becomes an intransitive verb in English.
The most direct translation to an English noun would be ‘faint’, though this term is more
commonly used as an adjective, referring to weakness. To ensure the meaning of the term is
not fundamentally changed by the translation, transposition is necessary, which some
translators, such as Professor Brian James Baer, class as an entirely separate skill 13. These
issues in translation, along with the aforementioned restrictions posed by the empirical
nature and specific purpose of the source texts, make creating a glossary of terms in two
languages a challenging task, which can only be simplified through exhaustive research.

10
Collins French to English Dictionary, Toxicomanie. Available at: [Link]/dictionary/french-
english/toxicomanie (Accessed 17 January 2022)
11
WordReference, La Toxicomanie. Available at: [Link]/fren/la%20toxicomanie (Accessed
17 January 2022)
12
Heijdra, M.J. 2020. ‘Polyglot Translators: Chinese, Dutch, and Japanese in the Introduction of Western
Learning in Tokugawa Japan’. At the Shores of the Sky: Asian Studies for Albert Hoffstädt. pp. 62-75 (p. 68)
13
Baer, B.J. 2020. ‘From Cultural Translation to Untranslatability: Theorising Translation outside Translation
Studies’. Alif: Journal of Comparative Poetics. No. 40, Mapping New Directions in the Humanities, pp. 139-163
(p. 155)

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To minimize translation loss with specialized terminology, the document suggests prioritizing the preservation of critical features of the source text over a word-for-word translation. Hervey and Higgins recommend deciding which features are most important to maintain, focusing on terms that ensure the translation is widely understood within the medical community . The idea is to reduce complexity and clarify concepts by using terms familiar to the intended audience, such as choosing 'threshold' over 'potential' because of its precise nature . Translators conduct thorough research to align terminology with scientifically recognized standards .

Translators should approach translation loss by carefully selecting which aspects of the original text are most vital to preserve. In technical fields like medicine, maintaining terminological accuracy is paramount, as emphasized by Hervey and Higgins, who advise focusing on essential features over literal word-for-word translation . The document suggests translators prioritize terms that provide clear, scientifically recognized information to the audience, which might involve using established terms even if they are less literal translations of the original text . This strategic preservation of essential elements can mitigate translation loss while retaining the functional value of the text .

Translating scientific medical terms presents challenges due to differences in language structures and the specificity of terminology. One major challenge is preserving the accuracy and meaning of the original term while making it understandable in the target language. For example, the French term 'couche de la matière piaque' translates to 'pia mater' in English, since the direct translation 'layer of piaic matter' is not commonly used or recognized in English medical terminology . This necessitates decisions on preserving the term's relevance and understandability. Translators must often choose between idiomatic translations and maintaining the term's exact meaning, as discussed by Hervey and Higgins. Moreover, it may be necessary to conduct extensive research on subject-specific terminology before beginning translation work . These challenges can be addressed by balancing lexical fidelity with reader comprehension and using widely recognized scientific terms to optimize communication .

The document reconciles the contradictions in translation philosophy by embracing the idea that while striving for a perfect translation, some loss is inevitable, as argued by Hervey and Higgins . Derrida's statement, "nothing is translatable, nothing is untranslatable," highlights the irony and challenges in achieving perfect translations . The document suggests focusing on the most important features to preserve, thus reducing translation loss . By acknowledging functional imperfection, the translation can become more accessible and useful, fulfilling its intended purpose despite not being perfectly literal or complete .

The document advises using the most widely recognized and scientifically accepted terms when direct equivalents are unavailable. For instance, 'couche de la matière piaque' was translated to 'pia mater' because 'layer of piaic matter' lacks recognition in English medical terminology . The translation choice depends on preserving the term's relevance and understandability for the target audience. This may require adopting terms from other languages (such as Latin) if they are more commonly recognized. Strategies also include using idiomatic expressions or conceptual adaptations that convey the intended meaning while avoiding confusion .

The document highlights that having substantial subject knowledge is crucial for translators working on medical texts as it informs their choices on terminology and translation strategies. Translators must understand the complexities and nuances of medical vocabulary to ensure precision and accuracy in translation. The document underscores the necessity for comprehensive research into subject-specific terminology, as seen in the development of the glossary, where established scientific terms were used to maintain accuracy and reliability . This knowledge allows translators to make informed decisions, ensuring that translated texts are scientifically valid and accessible to the intended audience .

The document describes the glossary's role in providing scientifically recognized factual information, facilitating understanding among readers less familiar with the subject-specific vocabulary. It emphasizes that translation should often be literal, especially with medical terms, due to their empirical and informative nature . The glossary should avoid creating neologisms and instead focus on using terms already established in medical literature. For example, it preferred translating 'le cycle diurne' as 'circadian rhythm,' acknowledging the term's established use in the context rather than its direct translation .

Researching medical terminology for a glossary involves challenges related to variation and specificity in terminology between languages. The document emphasizes the difficulty of finding suitable English equivalents for French terms that lack direct translation . This requires extensive research using dictionaries, medical literature, and subject-specific databases to ensure terms are accurate and recognizable. Issues such as differing terminology standards across languages and the absence of a standardized vocabulary list further complicate glossary compilation . The complexity of synonyms for the same concept, such as 'membrane threshold,' adds to the difficulty of establishing a glossary that is comprehensive yet precise .

The document implies that translation completeness does not always equate to functionality and effectiveness. While striving for completeness, translators must not compromise the document's functionality, which may involve accepting some degree of translation loss. The aim is to produce documents that fulfill their intended communicative purposes, even if they are not perfectly literal. This is reflected in the approach to translating specialized terms where functionality and recognition in the target language take precedence over complete fidelity to the source text . Jacques Derrida's commentary on translatability also suggests that translation must balance completeness with the practical need for understandability and relevance .

Linguistic transposition might be necessary when the grammatical structure of one language does not map directly onto another, necessitating changes in grammatical categories. The document illustrates this with the translation of 'l’évanouissement' (a noun in French) to 'fainting' (an intransitive verb in English). The most direct English noun equivalent, 'faint,' is not typically used in medical contexts, demonstrating transposition as a tool for maintaining meaning without altering the essence of the original term . This technique is considered a separate skill needed to ensure translation's effectiveness and naturalness .

201615131
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School of Languages,
Cultures and Societies
Faculty of Arts, Humanities and Cultures
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201615131
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Glossaire du système nerveux central
Acheminement (l') / Transmission
Definition: The passage of
201615131
FREN1070
Portfolio
Colonne dorsale (la) / Thoracic spine
Definition: Comprised of twelve vertebral bodies that make
201615131
FREN1070
Portfolio
Écoulement du sang (l') / Blood flow
Definition: The movement of blood through a vessel, tissue,
201615131
FREN1070
Portfolio
Glucides (les) / Carbohydrates
Definition: Substances such as sugar or starch that provide the b
201615131
FREN1070
Portfolio
Synonyms: Neural structure, mesencephalon
Noyaux gris centraux (les) / Basal ganglia
Definition:
201615131
FREN1070
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Synonyms: Dependence, obsession
Tronc cérébral (le) / Brainstem
Definition: The area at the base
201615131
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In translation, it is important to develop a full understanding of the source texts, through 
bo
201615131
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available from an online medical dictionary or journal. As a result of this, the term is 
denomi
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‘drug addiction was a given English translation for ‘la toxicomanie’ from multiple sources, 
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