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Mastering Parallel Structure in Sentences

The document discusses parallel structure, which is the rule that words or phrases in a series should be in the same grammatical form. Correct parallel structure makes sentences easier to read and allows writing to flow smoothly. The document provides examples of sentences with errors in parallel structure and how to fix them. It also identifies types of sentences that require parallel structure, such as those using coordinating or correlative conjunctions and comparisons. Finally, it includes a practice section checking for parallel structure errors in sample sentences.

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Mastering Parallel Structure in Sentences

The document discusses parallel structure, which is the rule that words or phrases in a series should be in the same grammatical form. Correct parallel structure makes sentences easier to read and allows writing to flow smoothly. The document provides examples of sentences with errors in parallel structure and how to fix them. It also identifies types of sentences that require parallel structure, such as those using coordinating or correlative conjunctions and comparisons. Finally, it includes a practice section checking for parallel structure errors in sample sentences.

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PARALLEL STRUCTURE

Parallel structure or parallelism is the rule that words or phrases in a series should be in the
same from.

Katniss likes to run, hunt and hike.


Run, hunt and hike is the series.
The words run, hunt and hike are the words (or phrases in other cases) in the series.
For this sentence the form of the words is present tense verb. Run, hunt and hike area all in the
same form.

Correct parallel structure is important because it makes a sentence easier to read and
understand. Correct parallel structure allows for essays and paragraphs to flow more smoothly
for the reader.

To fix an error in parallel structure, the writer must put all the words or phrases in a series in
the same form. Here are some examples of errors in parallel structure and how these errors can
be fixed.

Incorrect: Marisa stopped at the grocery store, the bank and ran to the library
Correct: Marissa stopped at the grocery store, the bank and the library.

In this sentence, the words in the series are all nouns with the word the before the noun. For
this sentence to be correct, the last part ran to the library should be changed to the library.

Incorrect: This weekend I have to write an essay, do a book report and a lab.
Correct: This weekend I have to write an essay, do a book report and complete a
lab.

In this example, each noun in the series comes in a phrase with a verb before it. The last part of
the series a lab does not match because it lacks a verb. This can be fixed by adding a verb to
come before a lab. The verb complete has been added to make the phrase parallel to the
others.

Incorrect: Attaining a college degree is neither cheap nor will it be easy.


Correct: Attaining a college degree is neither cheap nor easy.

The series in this sentence contains two phrases cheap and will it be easy. To make the phrases
parallel, the writer can get rid of will it be.
Incorrect: Every night before bedtime, Ivy reads a book, singing a song and says a
prayer.
Correct: Every night before bedtime, Ivy reads a book, sings a song and says a
prayer.

The phrases in this series involve a verb and a noun. All the nouns are in present tense except
for singing which is in the present progressive or –ing form. In order for this sentence to be
correct, singing must be changed to sings to match the rest of the sentence.

Sometimes it can be unclear to a writer whether or not something in a sentence constitutes a


series. Here are some ways one can identify a series and make sure parallel structure is used
correctly.

1. Series exist in sentences that use coordinating conjunctions. Coordinating conjunctions are
words that connect words, phrases or clauses in sentences. The acronym FANBOYS can help
one remember the coordinating conjunctions. The coordinating conjunctions are for, and, or,
but, nor, yet, so. Here are some examples of sentences with coordinating conjunctions where
parallel structure is used correctly.

We need to buy peaches, strawberries, and melons from the farmer’s market

Sally’s cat is fat but he is feisty

I don’t know where he went or when he will be back.

I will not go to the store nor will I make you a pie.

2. Parallel structure must take place in sentence with correlative conjunctions. Correlative
conjunctions are like coordinating conjunctions because they link words, phrases and clauses in
a series. However, correlative conjunctions consist of two words paired together. Some
common correlative conjunctions are: not only… but also, neither/either… or, whether… or, as
many as. Here are some examples of sentences with correlative conjunctions where parallel
structure is used correctly.

Not only was she tired, but she was also sick to her stomach.

Neither snow nor rain can keep me from you.

I do not know whether the recipe calls for baking soda or baking powder.

There are as many desks as there are students.


3. When making comparisons, a sentence must be parallel. Here are some examples of
sentences with comparisons that have correct parallel structure.

I would rather take the train than take the bus.

Sam’s car is faster than Alex’s car.

Strawberries are just as tasty as blueberries.

The Harry Potter series is just as good as The Hunger Games series.

PRACTICE

Please review the following sentences for errors in parallel structure. Correct the sentence by
rewriting it. Not all sentences are incorrect. Answers may vary.

1. My dog is not only friendly but he is also playful.

2. We can go to the park or out dancing.

3. Jeremy likes to read historical, realistic and speculative fiction.

4. Tell Michael I said he can either do homework now or later.

5. Buying a car is not a decision to take lightly nor be careless about.

6. Tyler is for the legalization not criminalization of marijuana.

7. Sally needs a new stove, dishwasher and knives for her kitchen.

8. My first grade teacher taught me how to write, how to read and play tic-tac-toe.

9. She will not admit it nor will she be apologizing.

10. The whole wheat pasta is better than enriched wheat pasta.

11. Literature classes teach students to analyze texts, think critically, and have better writing

12. Beets are just as nutrient rich as rutabagas even though they are not in season.
ANSWER KEY
1. Correct. Friendly and playful are both adjectives

2. Incorrect. We can go to the park or to a dance.

3. Correct. Historical, speculative and realistic are all adjectives.

4. Correct. Now and later are both adjectives.

5. Incorrect. Buying a car is not a decision to take lightly or carelessly.

6. Correct.

7. Incorrect. Sally needs a new stove, dishwasher and set of knives for her kitchen.

8. Incorrect. My first grade teacher taught me how to read, how to write and how to play tic-
tac-toe.

9. Incorrect. She will not admit it nor will she apologize.

10. Correct.

11. Literature classes teach students to analyze texts, think critically, and improve writing skills.

12. Correct.

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Writers should ensure each list item maintains the same grammatical form. For example, 'My teacher taught me to write, read, and play' instead of 'My teacher taught me how to write, read, and playing tic-tac-toe.' Consistently applying verb phrases or nouns clarifies intent .

Correlative conjunctions link words, phrases, or clauses in pairs, ensuring that both elements of each pair are parallel in structure. This enhances the coherence of the sentence. Examples include 'Not only was she tired, but she was also sick to her stomach,' where both phrases following 'not only' and 'but also' are in parallel form .

Parallel structure in comparative sentences ensures clarity by making the compared elements easily recognizable and structurally similar, which avoids confusion. For instance, 'I would rather take the train than take the bus' uses parallel verbs, improving sentence coherence .

Misconceptions about parallel structure, such as not recognizing a series or misunderstanding coordination rules, lead to uneven sentence elements. An example is 'This weekend I have to write an essay, do a book report and a lab,' which improperly mixes verb phrases and nouns; making it 'and complete a lab' corrects the issue .

Writers can identify series by looking for coordinating or correlative conjunctions and ensure all elements are in parallel form. They should revise sentences for consistency in verb forms, noun forms, or other grammatically similar structures. For example, changing 'Every night Ivy reads a book, singing a song, and says a prayer' to 'reads a book, sings a song, and says a prayer' corrects the error .

Parallel structure is important in writing because it ensures that words or phrases in a series are in the same form, which makes sentences easier to read and understand. Correct parallel structure contributes to the smooth flow of essays and paragraphs, enhancing reader comprehension .

Starting with 'Every night before bedtime, Ivy reads a book, singing a song and says a prayer,' correction requires aligning verb forms: change 'singing' to 'sings.' The corrected sentence 'Ivy reads a book, sings a song, and says a prayer' achieves parallel structure by using all present tense verbs .

Inconsistencies in verb forms, mismatched descriptive adjectives or nouns, or differing structures following coordinating/correlative conjunctions can signal a lack of parallel structure. Phrases like 'either... or' should balance items grammatically, such as in 'She can either make dinner or will clean' needing correction to 'either make dinner or clean' .

This statement is incorrect as parallel structure is vital in all forms of writing, not just complex academic texts. It enhances the clarity and flow of any written content, such as in everyday communication or creative writing, by ensuring that connected ideas are presented consistently, which is crucial for reader understanding .

Coordinating conjunctions connect words, phrases, or clauses in sentences, helping to maintain parallel structure by ensuring consistency in the form of the connected elements. This structure aids readability and clarity. For example, in the sentence 'We need to buy peaches, strawberries, and melons from the farmer’s market,' the conjunction 'and' connects similar items in a list .

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