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Writing Short Communicative Messages

The document provides a mini writing module to help students practice short communicative messages during the school holiday period. It includes two sample questions requiring an 80-word response to give advice on celebrating a sister's birthday and suggesting a hobby to a classmate. Students are prompted to include greetings, address the reader, use cohesive devices and simple connectors, and provide explanations and examples as needed in their responses. A self-check rubric is also provided to help students reflect on the content, organization, language and communicative achievement of their answers.

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Writing Short Communicative Messages

The document provides a mini writing module to help students practice short communicative messages during the school holiday period. It includes two sample questions requiring an 80-word response to give advice on celebrating a sister's birthday and suggesting a hobby to a classmate. Students are prompted to include greetings, address the reader, use cohesive devices and simple connectors, and provide explanations and examples as needed in their responses. A self-check rubric is also provided to help students reflect on the content, organization, language and communicative achievement of their answers.

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  • Part 1: Short Communicative Messages
  • Writing Exercises and Self-Reflection

#StayAtHome Mini Writing Module for SPM Prepared by Madam Adlina (helloadlina.

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Part 1: Short Communicative Messages


• Write in about 80 words.
• Do not write too short or too long! Be concise!
• Target Performance Level: A2

Sample Question
You received an e-mail from your friend, Eliza who is looking for some advice.

Hi,

How are you doing? I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to ask if you have
some suggestions on what I can do to celebrate my sister’s birthday. I’ve
thought about some ideas, but I couldn’t seem to make a decision.

Her birthday is in two weeks. What do you think I should do?

Write back soon.

Eliza.

Sample Answer
How to Answer:
To : eliza@[Link] • Say hi to your
From : rania@[Link] reader.
• Make comments
about the email
Hi Eliza, you received.
• Use cohesive
I’m doing fine. I hope you’ve been well too. You seem very excited about devices and simple
connectors.
your sister’s birthday. I think two weeks is enough time for you to prepare
• Give example/
for the celebration, so don’t worry. explanation if
needed.
To begin with, you could enlist the help of your family members to surprise • Write a simple and
your sister. Maybe you could cook her favourite food or bake her a cake friendly closing
and then surprise her at midnight. If your sister doesn’t like surprises, you sentence.
• Sign off with your
could simply buy her something she likes and congratulate her.
name.

I hope that helps.

Rania.

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Question 1
You received an e-mail from your classmate, Shakir who is thinking about picking up a hobby.

Hello,

How is the school holiday treating you so far? I am bored out of my mind! I’m thinking of picking
up some hobbies, but I don’t know where to start. I would love to do something more exciting
than watching movies or TV shows.

I’ve tried reading, but I think it’s not for me. I keep falling asleep 10 minutes into any book I
tried to read. Do you have any idea on what I should do?

Shakir.

Your Answer
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Use the Post-Writing Self-Check on page 4 to reflect on your answer to this question. Then,
consult your teacher.

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Question 2
You received an e-mail from your best friend, Ruby who is inviting you to an outing.

Hi,

How have you been? I’m so excited that the school holiday is just around the corner. Remember
our plan for an outing that was cancelled last year because I had to move away? Guess what?
I’m coming back next week!

What do you say to an outing? We can hang out and catch up with each other. Let me know
where you think would be the best place to meet and what you think we should do.

Write back soon!

Ruby

Your Answer
To: From:
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Use the Post-Writing Self-Check on page 4 to reflect on your answer to this question. Then,
consult your teacher.

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COMMUNICATIVE
CONTENT ORGANISATION LANGUAGE
ACHIEVEMENT
q The content of my q I have included q I used at least ONE q I have used words
writing is relevant to additional simple connector to that are relevant to
the topic. I did not information relevant connect my ideas the topic.
go off-topic. to the topic (examples: and, but,
(examples: because) in my q Three words that I
q I have addressed the background writing. used in my writing
correct reader in my information, idioms, are:
writing. expressions). q I used at least ONE ________________
cohesive device to ________________
q I have answered all q I have included some connect my ________________
the questions and examples to explain paragraphs/
covered all the some of my ideas. sentences (examples: q I have checked my
points needed. to begin with, use of grammar to
furthermore, identify errors.
moreover, lastly, on
the whole)

Score: ____/ 5 Score: ____/ 5 Score: ____/ 5 Score: ____/ 5

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COMMUNICATIVE
CONTENT ORGANISATION LANGUAGE
ACHIEVEMENT
q The content of my q I have included q I used at least ONE q I have used words
writing is relevant to additional simple connector to that are relevant to
the topic. I did not information relevant connect my ideas the topic.
go off-topic. to the topic (examples: and, but,
(examples: because) in my q Three words that I
q I have addressed the background writing. used in my writing
correct reader in my information, idioms, are:
writing. expressions). q I used at least ONE ________________
cohesive device to ________________
q I have answered all q I have included some connect my ________________
the questions and examples to explain paragraphs/
covered all the some of my ideas. sentences (examples: q I have checked my
points needed. to begin with, use of grammar to
furthermore, identify errors.
moreover, lastly, on
the whole)

Score: ____/ 5 Score: ____/ 5 Score: ____/ 5 Score: ____/ 5

Common questions

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The document advises checking content relevance to the topic, ensuring correct reader address, answering all questions and covering all points, and including relevant additional information, such as idioms or expressions. It emphasizes the use of simple connectors and cohesive devices to connect ideas and paragraphs. Finally, it suggests verifying the vocabulary relevance to the topic and checking for grammatical errors .

The post-writing self-check helps ensure quality by prompting writers to verify content relevance, appropriateness for the reader, completeness of response, and the use of connecting words. It also emphasizes language accuracy and encourages reflection on the inclusion of examples to elaborate on ideas, leading to more thorough and reader-friendly writing .

The document encourages including idiomatic expressions where relevant to add color and personal touch to writing, potentially enhancing engagement by making the message feel more natural and relatable. Idioms can also convey familiarity and cultural context, appealing to the reader's sense of identity and understanding .

Expressing excitement and providing concrete examples can make responses more engaging and relatable, encouraging the reader’s investment in the ideas presented. Excitement conveys enthusiasm, fostering a positive tone, while examples clarify suggestions, making them more actionable and easier to understand .

The document advises against overly short or long responses, instead suggesting a concise yet comprehensive approach by addressing all points needed and using examples where necessary. This balance ensures the reader receives all essential information without extraneous details, achieved through cohesive discourse and structured paragraphs .

Connectors and cohesive devices enhance message effectiveness by linking ideas and paragraphs logically, ensuring the writing flows smoothly and is easy to follow. For example, using 'to begin with' or 'moreover' helps organize thoughts clearly, making it easier for the reader to understand and engage with the content .

The document emphasizes writing concisely, not too short or too long, targeting a performance level of A2. It suggests greeting the reader, commenting on the email received, using cohesive devices like 'to begin with', and giving examples when necessary. The document also advises closing with a friendly sentence and signing off with your name .

The document suggests a casual tone with friendly greetings and closing statements for friends, incorporating personal comments and informal language. In contrast, for a formal contact, a more structured format with a formal tone would be appropriate, likely requiring polite forms of address and professional language. This reflects differing expectations and levels of formality between personal and professional communications .

The document underscores addressing the correct reader in writing, ensuring the message is relevant to the receiver's needs and interests. By tailoring the tone and content to fit the recipient, such as a friend seeking advice or inviting to an outing, the writer can ensure the message is engaging and appropriate .

Both suggested responses begin with a friendly greeting and maintain a conversational tone. The response to Eliza emphasizes excitement about planning the birthday and offering specific ideas, like involving family or surprising at midnight. In contrast, the response to Shakir is more focused on offering suggestions for hobbies, proposing activities like sports or arts. Structurally, both responses use connectors to organize ideas but cater the content to the specific request of the email received .

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