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Understanding Modifiers and Misplacements

This document discusses misplaced modifiers and provides examples to illustrate dangling modifiers, squinting modifiers, and other issues that can result from modifiers being placed incorrectly in relation to the words they modify. Dangling modifiers occur when the subject of the main clause is not clearly the doer of the action in the introductory phrase or clause. Squinting modifiers modify a word that is unclear from the context. The document provides exercises for the reader to practice identifying and correcting issues with misplaced modifiers.

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Understanding Modifiers and Misplacements

This document discusses misplaced modifiers and provides examples to illustrate dangling modifiers, squinting modifiers, and other issues that can result from modifiers being placed incorrectly in relation to the words they modify. Dangling modifiers occur when the subject of the main clause is not clearly the doer of the action in the introductory phrase or clause. Squinting modifiers modify a word that is unclear from the context. The document provides exercises for the reader to practice identifying and correcting issues with misplaced modifiers.

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Modifiers: Misplaced Words and Phrases

In English, the order of words is essential to understanding. An adjective or adverb


modifies a word by appearing next to it in a sentence. If you separate the modifying
word from the word it modifies, some confusing and unintended meanings may result.
(Purdue University website)

DANGLING MODIFIERS

Consider this sentence:

Having finished her assignment, Mary turned on the TV.

“Having finished” states an action but does not name the doer of that action. In English
sentences, the doer must be the subject of the main clause that follows. In this sentence it
is Mary. She seems logically to be the one doing the action (“having finished”), and this
sentence, therefore, does not have a dangling modifier.

Now consider this sentence:

Having finished her assignment, the TV was turned on.

Having finished is a participle expressing action, but the doer is not the TV set (the
subject of the main clause): TV sets don’t finish assignments. Since the doer of the action
expressed in the participle has not clearly been stated, the participial phrase is said to be a
dangling modifier.

Example of Dangling Modifier

After reading the original study, the article remained unconvincing.


(The article – the subject of the main clause- did not read the original study.)

Revision

After reading the original study, I find the article unconvincing.

Practice

1. A woman passed by, leading a Springer spaniel in a long black dress.

2. After trying the combination several times, the lock finally opened.

3. Disappointed that vacation would soon end, September came all too quickly.

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4. He went to the library wearing a leather jacket.

5. After reading the paper, the telephone rang.

6. Working all afternoon, the foundation was completed.

7. Running from New York to Florida, people ride the Silver Star.

8. Laughing loudly, the joke pleased the audience.

9. Forgetting to buy gas, the car wouldn’t start.

10. Typing slowly, the paper seemed endless.

Characteristics of Dangling Modifiers

They most frequently appear at the beginning of sentences (often as introductory phrases
or clauses) but can also appear at the end.

The experiment was a failure, not having studied the lab manual.

Possible Revision

They failed the experiment, not having studied the lab manual.

SQUINTING MODIFIERS

Related to dangling modifiers, squinting modifiers occur when the word modified is not
clear or could be more than one word. These problems can usually be solved by
rearranging the elements already present in the sentence.

Squinting modifier

The mystery has been solved after ten years of the missing portrait.

Revision

After ten years, the mystery of the portrait has been solved.

Lesson Exercise

Correct these sentences by shifting a modifier in each, or, if necessary, by rewriting.

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1. Your salesman told me that there was no provision for replacing damaged
merchandise in the contract.

2. Jennifer sat waiting for her boyfriend to park the car, in a slinky red dress with a
plunging neckline.

3. Diane Arbus took pictures of subjects other photographers would not consider
with her camera.

4. The counter clerk at the soda fountain brought the sundae to the eager young boy
covered in chocolate sauce.

5. I jumped from bed and watched the car rip through the large picture window in
my underwear.

MISPLACED MODIFIERS

1. The officer left to fight with his troops.

2. I waited for my parents to sit down and eat my breakfast.

3. Pat is in love with Kelly along with Jamie.

4. I saw a shark snorkeling.

5. She could not explain why she wanted to get married to her mother.

6. After letting out a bang, I had to fix the ignition on my car.

7. He begged her not to speak sincerely.

Be especially careful with the words only and not.

1. She only likes me.

2. All of us are not honest.

3. I drink skim milk only because I am on a diet.

4. Defining your terms clearly strengthens your argument.

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5. I told my son when the game was over I would play with him.

To + verb
SPLIT INFINITIVES

Relocate words that come between to and the infinitive form of a verb.

1. I tried to quietly exit.

2. He vowed to never leave her.

3. Financial analysts expected the stock prices to after a period of share decline.

4. Try to, if you can get it, see her latest DVD.

5. He wanted to quietly wait it out after the results were announced..

To test your mastery of modifiers, try this final exercise.

1. While still in kindergarten, my parents moved me to Red Deer

2. After finishing high school, college seemed like a good idea.

3. Having been over fertilized, my sister thinks the cactus will not survive.

4. Being over inflated, Roderick thinks the inner tube will burst.

5. A person who blacks out while drinking nine times out of ten is an alcoholic.

6. Hiking out into the wilderness, the weather grew ominous.

7. Elmo asked Dee Dee to marry him during the evening.

8. If caged, you can bring your Wolfhound on the flight.

9. Weighing at least 80kg. Bertha couldn’t move the baggage.

10. One morning I shot an elephant in my pajamas. How he got in my pajamas, I


don’t know. Then we tried to remove the tusks but they were embedded so firmly
that we couldn’t budge them. Of course, in Alabama the Tuscaloosa. But that’s
entirely irrelephant…[Groucho Marx].

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Common questions

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Detecting misplaced modifiers involves scrutinizing sentences for clarity and logical connections between phrases and the words they modify. A useful strategy is to isolate modifiers and identify their intended subjects, then rearrange sentence elements to align these logically, such as changing "I saw a shark snorkeling" to "While snorkeling, I saw a shark." Correction requires repositioning modifiers closer to their intended subjects and potentially rephrasing sentences to eliminate confusion, thereby enhancing overall comprehensibility in communication .

Split infinitives occur when an adverb or other word is placed between 'to' and the verb, potentially causing awkwardness or confusion. An example from the text is "I tried to quietly exit." While not always grammatically incorrect, some consider it better style to avoid splitting the infinitive by placing the adverb outside it: "I tried to exit quietly." This reordering aims to maintain sentence fluidity and clarity, adhering to traditional prescriptive grammar rules .

The placement of infinitive verbs affects sentence meaning by influencing how modifiers are interpreted in complex structures. Split infinitives, where additional words are inserted between 'to' and the verb, may disrupt the natural flow and clarity, as seen in "He vowed to never leave her." By placing 'never' before or after the infinitive, "He vowed never to leave her," clarity is improved without changing the meaning drastically. Effective placement emphasizes the desired focus while maintaining grammatical cohesion, reducing misinterpretation by aligning modifiers correctly with their respective verbs .

Dangling modifiers in English are most often characterized by introductory phrases that are not clearly connected to the subject of the main clause. These usually occur at the beginning of sentences but can also appear at the end. They manifest when the implied subject of the modifying phrase is absent or does not logically fit the actual subject in the main clause. For example, "Working all afternoon, the foundation was completed" presents a dangling modifier because the foundation cannot perform the work itself. Correcting such errors requires introducing the correct subject within the main clause, such as "Working all afternoon, the crew completed the foundation" .

Modifiers greatly impact the formality and style of writing by influencing clarity, precision, and tone. Correctly placed modifiers contribute to formal, polished writing, demonstrating careful language control. Misplaced or dangling modifiers can lend a casual tone or cause ambiguity, disrupting reader engagement and lowering the writing's perceived quality. For example, eliminating constructions like split infinitives, e.g., "to quietly leave" becoming "to leave quietly," aligns with formal conventions and enhances readability. Thus, mastery of modifier placement reflects a writer's proficiency and stylistic refinement .

An example of a dangling modifier from the text is: "After reading the original study, the article remained unconvincing." Here, the introductory phrase "After reading the original study" does not clearly state who did the reading. The subject following the phrase, "the article," cannot logically perform the reading. This creates a lack of clarity about who read the study, making the sentence confusing. Correcting this by specifying the doer in the main clause, such as "I found the article unconvincing after reading the original study," resolves the ambiguity .

The practice exercises on misplaced modifiers allow individuals to engage directly with sentence structure by identifying errors and making corrections, fostering a deeper understanding of syntactic relationships. By correcting sentences like "He went to the library wearing a leather jacket," to "Wearing a leather jacket, he went to the library," learners develop skills in analyzing sentence elements and rearranging them for clarity and correct subject-verb-object alignment. This exercise enhances the ability to spot and rectify modifiers' misplacement, promoting more precise and effective communication .

Misunderstanding squinting modifiers can lead to ambiguity because it is unclear which part of the sentence a modifier is intended to affect, as in "She said eventually she would return." It is ambiguous whether 'eventually' modifies 'she said' or 'would return.' This confusion can be avoided by rearranging the sentence to clarify the modifier's relationship, such as "Eventually, she said she would return" or "She said she would eventually return," depending on the intended meaning. By learning to detect potential ambiguities and reorganizing sentences accordingly, clearer communication can be achieved .

Misplaced modifiers, such as the use of 'only,' can significantly alter the intended meaning of a sentence. For instance, in the sentence "She only likes me," the placement of 'only' suggests that her sole activity is liking, rather than conveying that out of all possible actions, she does only like the speaker. Correcting this involves placing 'only' directly before the word or phrase it accurately modifies, such as "She likes only me," to clarify that out of all possible likable people, the speaker is the only one she likes. This repositioning clarifies the intended emphasis and meaning of the sentence .

A dangling modifier is a phrase or word that is not clearly and logically related to the word it modifies, often because the doer is not specified in the sentence. For example, "Having finished her assignment, the TV was turned on," incorrectly suggests that the TV finished the assignment. In contrast, a squinting modifier is placed between two potential subjects or phrases, creating ambiguity as to which word it modifies, such as "The mystery has been solved after ten years of the missing portrait," where it is unclear if 'after ten years' modifies 'has been solved' or 'missing.' Correcting a dangling modifier usually involves clarifying who performs the action described by the modifier, whereas resolving a squinting modifier typically requires rearranging sentence elements to remove ambiguity .

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