CHAPTER II
REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
In this chapter, the researcher describes the meaning of writing, the purpose of
writing, definition of paragraph, three main parts of a paragraph, criteria of complete
paragraph, definition of argumentative essay, elements of argumentative essay, and
example of argumentative essay.
A. The Concept of Writing
1. Definition of writing
Writing seems to be differently defined the definition vary from different
people, needs and purposes. In the following, the researcher presents some definitions
about writing. Klein (2013:18) states that “writing is the ability to put pen and paper
to express ideas through symbols. It means that when we write, we produce meaning
with words. Moreover, Zinser cited in Ruddell confirmed that we need operate some
kind of mechanism-pencil, pen, typewriter, word processor- for getting our thought
on paper in writing. It urges us repeated efforts to go after those thoughts and to
organize them and present them clearly. In addition, Manchon (2011:17) states
“writing is central to our personal experiences, professional careers and social
identities, yet while we are often evaluated by our control of it; its multifaceted nature
constantly evades adequate description. Furthermore, Peter Elbow cited in Brown
(2001:336) states that writing is figuring out meaning and put it into language. As a
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result, writing is an activity of expressing the ideas through the signs or symbols in
written form.
B. The Process of writing
The writing process is a way of looking at writing instruction in which the
emphasis is shifted from students‟ finished products to what students think and do as
they write. Likewise, Boyle cited in Peregoy and Boyle (2008:231) argues “process
writing allows students to concentrate on one task at a time and to experience the
value of peer feedback in developing their ideas for effecting written
[Link](2008:282) has organized the following description of writing
process into the categories of before writing, during writing, and after writing. The
following the description of the categories:
a. Before Writing: Prewriting
Pre-writing is frequently the foundation for a variety of writing, reading,
thinking, and learning event. It might best described as mulling ideas over, whether
immediately before beginning to draft a written piece or while simply thinking about
what one knows about a given topic. As Tompkins states that “prewriting is the
getting ready to write stage; during the prewriting stage in which the activities
involving choosing a topic, considering, form, and audience, and generating and
organizing ideas for writing. Ruddell(2008:285) mentioned that “prewriting occurs in
journals, logs, lists, diaries, e-mails, chat rooms, and maps.
b. During Writing: Drafting
Drafting extends prewriting as students create a new text from what they have
read, seen, thought about, or examined. To be more specific, the drafting stage is the
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time to pour out ideas, with little concern about spelling, punctuation, and other
mechanical errors. The activities in this stage are writing a rough draft, writing lead
and emphasizing content, not mechanics, Tompkins (2008:15) states.
c. After Writing: Revising
Editing the word revision means „seeing again‟. This stage demands writers to
see their compositions again with their classmates and the teacher helping them.
Peregoy and Boyle (2008:233) concluded that “revising is reordering arguments or
reviewing scenes in a narrative; reordering supporting information; reviewing or
changing sentences. Editing is correcting spelling, grammar, punctuation, and
mechanics. Additionally, Tompkins stated that editing is putting the piece of writing
into its final form. The Elements of Writing Oshima and Hogue (1999:16) stated that
there are five elements in writing a paragraph. They are topic sentence, supporting
sentences, concluding sentence, unity, and coherence. The following the explanation
of those:
i. Topic Sentence
The topic sentence is a sentence which states the main idea of paragraph. It is
called the topic the paragraph and limits the topic that can be discussed completely in
the space of single paragraph (controlling idea).
ii. Supporting Sentences
The supporting sentences are sentences that develop the topic sentences by
giving reasons, examples, facts, statistic, quotation, comparison, definition, and
classifications.
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iii. Concluding Sentence
The concluding sentence is a sentence which signals the end of the paragraph
and leaves the reader with important points to remember.
iv. Unity
Unity means that there is only one main idea in the paragraph. The main idea is
stated in the topic sentence and then each and every supporting sentence develops.
v. Coherence
Coherence means that the paragraph is easy to read and understand because the
supporting sentences are in some kind of logical order, and the ideas are connected by
the use of an appropriate transition signals.
C. The Purpose of Writing
According to Kneffel, Don in his book Writing and Life: A Rhetoric for
Nonfiction with Readings (1986: 6-7) statez that writing is done in the course of daily
life is to fulfill one or more of general purpose, such as:
a. To Inform
The writer communicates information clearly, accurately, simply and directly.
This purpose is often found in report, like magazine, newspaper, and case
study.
b. To Analyze or To Explain
The writer uses languages to analyze or to explain the information that the
writer gets. It means that to discover the deep meaning form the information.
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c. To Convince
The writers the opinion to make the reader does an action after reading it. It is
usually found in newspaper, argumentative essay, and critical reviews.
d. To Express
The writers use the language to express his/her feeling but the writer does not
expect the reader does an action. It can found in narrative writing.
D. Definition of Paragraph
Many experts define a paragraph in many ways. One of them, Peter (1991:145)
stated that a paragraph is a short piece of writing on a very limited topic, and although
some paragraph can stand alone, most are parts of a larger piece of writing, such as an
essay. According to William (1985:25) a paragraph is a conventional form which
writers find useful to help their readers follow a sequence of ideas or thoughts.
Oshima and Hogue (1983:3) stated that a paragraph is a basic unit of
organization in writing in which a group of related sentences develops one main idea.
A paragraph can be as short as one sentence or as long as ten sentences. The number
of sentences is unimportant: however, the paragraph should be long enough to
develop the main idea clearly. They also tell that a paragraph is made up of three
kinds of sentences that develop the writer‟s main idea, opinion or felling about the
subject. These sentences are topic sentence, supporting sentences, and concluding
sentence.
A paragraph contains of topic sentence and sentences that the support it. Saraka
(1988:26) stated that a paragraph can be subdivided into two main types. The first is
physical paragraph: and the second is conceptual paragraph. A physical paragraph is a
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paragraph which is marked by spacing or indentation during the course of writing to
show that new idea will come. A conceptual paragraph is one in which a writer
constructs limits to one single idea, one topic sentence plus supporting details.
E. Three Main Parts of a Paragraph
In paragraph writing, the clarity and completeness of information contain will
indicate that a paragraph is good paragraph. According to Oshima (1983) a good
paragraph has three main parts, namely: topic sentence, supporting sentence, and
concluding sentence. Below, there is the description of each of these parts.
a. Topic Sentence
Topic sentence is used to state the main idea in a paragraph. As Saraka
(1988:30) tells topic sentence states the main idea of the paragraph. It does not only
name the topic of the paragraph but also limit the topic to one or two areas that can be
discussed completely in the space of a single paragraph. The specific area is called
the controlling idea. According to Bram (1995:16) stated that a topic sentence must
have a subject and an attitude. In other words, it consists of a topic or subject matter
and a restricting statement.
Tyner (1987:52) stated that there are some important things to know about topic
sentence: 1) a topic sentence expresses the main idea of the paragraph, 2) a topic
sentence usually states a definite opinion or attitude, 3) a topic sentence provides the
reader with a clear understanding of what a paragraph is about, 4) a topic sentence
gives direction to a paragraph that both the writer and reader can follow, 5) a topic
sentence often begins a paragraph or is found near the beginning of a paragraph, 6)
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other sentences within a paragraph relate to the topic sentence, 7) the final “wrap-up”
sentence in a paragraph often reinforces the topic sentence.
Topic sentence is the most general sentence in a paragraph. Reid (1994:36)
suggests the topic sentence is the most general and the most important sentence in the
paragraph that introduces that reader to the topic. It states the main idea and focuses
the paragraph. Therefore, it is the most general statement in the paragraph. It does not
give any specific details.
There are three ways to state ways to state the topic sentence. They are:
1. Using a statement of opinion.
2. Using a statement of intent.
3. Using statement of opinion and intent.
b. Supporting Sentences
Supporting sentence is sentences that develop the topic sentence. Saraka
(1988:30) tells that supporting sentences that develop the topic sentence by giving
definitions, reasons, examples, facts, incident, comparison, analogy, cause and effect,
statistics and quotations. Development means supporting the main idea or
generalization with specifics.
Dietsch (1998:78) stated that support sentences explain the main idea of
thetopic sentence. They supply evidence to convince the reader of the soundness of
the claim, assertion, or opinion. You might regard the topic sentence as an argument
(view) to be proven. The support sentences supply evidence in the form facts,
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definitions, reasons, examples, or illustrations to back up the claim in the topic
sentence.
c. Concluding Sentence
Concluding sentence is the last sentence that concludes the points of the
paragraph. Oshima and Hogue (1983:12) state concluding sentence is a sentence that
summarizes the main points of the paragraph. It signals the end of the paragraph and
leaves the reader with important ideas to think about. It can be written as the same as
topic sentence vut in the different words. According to Dietsch (1998:78) stated
thatbesides the two basic parts just discussed the topic sentence and support
sentences,some paragraphs have a third part: a concluding sentence. This final
sentence may be summary of the points made in the support sentence. For concluding
sentences, Reid (1994:42) tells that there are five techniques can be used in a
paragraph. They are:
1. Summarizes the material in the paragraph.
2. Offers a solution to the problem stated in the paragraph.
3. Predict a situation that will result or occur from the statement made in the
paragraph.
4. Makes a recommendation concerning materials presented in the paragraph.
5. States a conclusion to information given in the paragraph.
From the quotation above, the researcher can summarize that a concluding
sentence is an ended sentence that leaves the reader with the important ideas on the
topic of the paragraph. While, some techniques in the concluding sentence are
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summarize the information, offers a solution(s), states conclusion, makes
recommendation, or predict a situation.
F. Criteria of the Complete Paragraph
A good paragraph must have a sense of completeness. Baker and
OliuSaraka(1988:73) state that completeness in a paragraph means that the
controlling ideas thoroughly develop by the use of particular (specific) information.
They also state paragraph is complete when it leaves no confusion in the reader‟s
mind about what is intended, about how the reader is supposed to respond and about
why such response is both necessary and appropriate.
G. Definition of Argumentative Essay
Generally, argumentative essay is a form of writing in which the writer argue
for a certain idea and try to persuade readers to adopt the writer‟s point of view.
Harvey (2003) also says that argumentative essay is the act of forming reasons,
making orientations, drawing conclusions and applying them to the case in argument;
the process of understanding propositions not known or admitted as true, from facts
or principles known, admitted or proved true.
The argumentative essay is a genre of writing that requires the student to
investigate a topic; collect, generate, and evaluate evidence; and establish a position
on the topic in a concise manner In Senior High School, one of the skills that should
be mastered by students is writing an argumentative essay. The curriculum requires
the students to master it. In addition, they need to prepare their skill in writing to face
national examination and competence examination. When the students do not have
enough skill in writing include writing, they will face some difficulties to compete in
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the global era. Besides, the students should be ready to work with many types of
challenges included skills in writing.
Additionally, argumentative essays present one side of an issue using evidence
to convince the readers to draw the same conclusions as the writer. In short,
argumentative essay has been defined as a well-structured and well-supported point
of view on a topic that supported by reasons. Similar to the other essay,
argumentative essay also has three essential parts. The introductory paragraph that
function as attention getter for the readers then body paragraph where the writer
actually proves the assertion at the end of the introduction and finally the concluding
paragraph. It is in line with Jordan (1990) and Ozagac (2004) claim an academic
essay, like argumentative essay, has three essential parts. The first paragraph of an
essay is an introductory paragraph. It consists of general to specific statements and a
thesis statement. The following paragraph is called body paragraph. It contains as
many as paragraph as necessary to explain the controlling idea in the thesis statement
in a logical sequence. The last paragraph of the essay is concluding paragraph which
give the readers the conclusion or the summary of the essay and the writer‟s final
comments.
Macmillan (1988) says that an argument is an ordered presentation of support
for an opinion that you want others to accept. An argument is made up of your
opening statement of opinion, any background information that your readers may
need in order to follow you, the evidence that you will use to support your opinion,
and concluding statement.
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There have been some ideas of argumentative essay proposed by some experts.
Harmer (2004) stated that argumentative essay is one type of the essays with the
purpose to convince readers by appealing readers‟ logic and emotions. Convincing
needs proves and arguments (Coffin, et al., 2003) to prove a particular point,
demonstrate understanding, and show a perspective, a position or stance on
something. Without strong proves and arguments, argumentative essay cannot meet
its purpose, that is, to convince.
Arguments used to convince need students‟ deep understanding and analysis on
one particular topic. Therefore, this essay, according to Coffin et al., (2003) is the
most common labeled type of the essays in higher education for four reasons. The
first one is that it expects students‟ interpretation about a topic. The second one is that
it requires students to seek for evidence for their arguments. The third one is that to
arrive at an argument, students need to think across disciplines. The last one is that it
should be persuasive. It is clear that the students‟ interpretation, evidence for
arguments, ideas synthesized from across disciplines, and persuasion are highly
demanded at university level as university students need to actualize their
understanding of subjects‟ studies.
Displaying ideas in argumentative essays is organized in one of three ways.
First, exposition, with the purpose to put forward a point of view, uses arguments and
evidence to support the writer‟s position. Second, discussion, with the purpose to
argue the case for two or more points of view, starts with a controversial issue. The
two or more perspectives forms of the issue are explored by reaching a position stated
in the concluding paragraph. Last, challenge, with the purpose to argue against a
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point of view or argument, contains a series of rebuttal arguments and supporting
evidence before putting forward the writer‟s overall arguments (Coffin et al., 2003).
In brief, an argumentative essay can be organized in one of the three ways;
exposition, discussion, or challenge to show students‟ interpretation on one subject or
an issue.
Those three types are organized into at least three paragraphs consisting of
introduction, body, and conclusion. Harmer (2004) identifies the introductory
paragraph, the body, and the concluding paragraph as the organization of the
argumentative essay. The introductory paragraph shows the object of analysis, the
background to the thesis statement, and the thesis statement. The body consists of
some arguments and evidence to support the arguments. The conclusion can be
arrived by retracing the steps, restating the thesis statement, and suggesting some
points to make the arguments stronger.
In conclusion, since an argumentative essay is the most widely used at
university level, understanding its organization and its process is necessary. The
argumentative essay organization includes the introductory paragraph with a thesis
statement, the body to support the thesis statement, and the concluding paragraph.
This argumentative essay organization is used as the indicators in framework
for argumentative essay test. The argumentative essay, which has three types, should
meet some criteria- introductory paragraph, supporting reasons and arguments,
evidence and examples, mechanic of writing, knowledge and understanding, and
concluding paragraph. The process of the argumentative essay consists of prewriting,
drafting with the revision of draft on development, organization, and elaboration of
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ideas, reflection, and editing on proofread. Within those processes, peer review is
done in drafting and in editing on proofreading. Briefly, understanding the
organization and the process of the argumentative essay aims at producing a good
argumentative essay.
H. Elements of Argumentative Essay
According Illinois Normal (1996) views that an argumentative essay contains
the following:
In the Introduction
Backgroundis appropriate. This may consist of a brief history of related past
events, a summary of others‟ opinions, or a review of the basic facts.
Athesis statement is required. This informs the reader of the writer‟s opinion
regarding the matter under discussion and previews his plan of development.
In the Body Paragraphs. The writer presents his points of discussion. Each point
is typicallygiven its own paragraph and is supported by evidence. Most often, the
writer begins with his weakest point and concludes with his stronger arguments. If all
the writer‟s points are equally strong, he builds a relationship with his audience by
discussing the most familiar, less controversial points first.
In the Conclusion. The writer restates, in general terms, the major arguments he
hasmarshaled in defense of his [Link] writer may summarize key points, restate
his thesis, reinforce theweakness of his opposition, underscore the logic of his
presentation, reemphasizewhy this debate is important, suggest a course of action, or
Challenge the reader to apply the paper‟s argument to his own life.
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I. Argument in Scientific Writing
From the current knowledge, the component of an argument consist at least
claim, support and warrant (Rotenberg, 1988), as well as in logic and philosophy
theory define several components of an argument for example claim and premise
(Toulmin,1958; Walton et al, 2008), several studies investigate argument in academic
discourse such as the relation between each component of argument (Kirschner,
2015), the relation between one argument to another argument (Cohen, 1987;
Henkemans, 2000; Stab and Gurevych, 2016). Consider that argument discourse in
academic writing are similar to formal logic and contribute the same base of claim
and evidence (Toulmin, 2003), The argument model which are widely used for
academic discourse to provide a structure of written argument is Toulmin argument
pattern. The arguments include a claim, data that support the claim, warrants that
provide a link between the data and the claim, backings that strengthen the warrants
and rebuttals that indicate the circumstances under which the claim would not be true.
Toulmin also considered qualifiers as showing the degree of reliance that can be
placed on conclusions arising from arguments. Toulmin`s theory (1958) is still
acceptable and valid to be used in analysing the argumentative text. it can be seen by
the commonly used of this theory by the researchers in analyzing written and spoken
argument despite this theory is not the newest theory. Further, Toulmi`s theory (1958)
can be used to provide a pattern for arguments.
A study by Rusfandi (2015) on Indonesian argumentative essay reveals that the
absence of refutation section which in this part aims to provide counter-argument, this
happens when they write an argumentative essay in English. The possible reason is
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that the students seem not aware of the important from this refutation section and the
lack of confidence in using English, this problem influence on students‟
argumentative essay in constructing credible and persuasive essays. Another study
also shows that the students most at level 2 of argumentation, they are able to make
claim and present support and warrant for their argument, but only a few of the
students provide rebuttal section in their argument, the statements which contradict
the data or warrant. This study reveals the similarities between Indonesian and
Australian students‟ argumentation Pattern present Toulmin argument pattern
(Widodo [Link], 2016).
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