Things to Include:-
1. Add at least 5 topics or subtopics explaining the need and urgency of the paper. The data
should be supporting these topics and not a sub topic in itself.
2. Before starting with the analysis of data directly, add some relevant theory as to why and
how this data came into picture.
3. The data should appear to be inclusive of paper and not the paper itself.
4. Statement of research problem is incorrect. Rephrase it or remove it.
5. Explain in detail what legal awareness is. What is high level awareness, moderate level
awareness and low level awareness? (with suitable examples)
6. Explain in detail the effect of all these awareness on legal system. (With suitable examples).
7. Impact of all the legal awareness in the courtroom and how it has messed up the legal
system.
8. Reasons of low level or moderate level of awareness. How it can be corrected?
9. After Methodology and procedure and before the induction of Table 1.1, give it some topic
it, introduce the topic, state the need and urgency of including the table and then make
observations.
10. Don’t write discussion in bold. Just write- this table discusses this thing and so on.
11. Explain in much detail table 1.1 and 1.2. Seems like total math. Make it like a law student
paper.
12. Table 1.3 is very technical. One can hardly understand. Either scrap it or explain in much
detail.
13. The two lines of abstract and introduction are matching. Add new.
14. In 2 page bibliography, I don’t find most names in the paper. So, either add names in the
paper of removes unused author names.
15. Do some comparative study if possible. Like for example- how things could be different if
there is high level of awareness among advocates.
16. Give suggestions.
17. Give detailed conclusion.
18. Remove the designation of authors from first page. Write it in footnotes.