Rough Draft
by Syed Hasnain
Submission date: 26-Sep-2020 04:17PM (UTC-0500)
Submission ID: 1397416634
File name: Rough_Draft.docx (18.24K)
Word count: 723
Character count: 3408
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Review Essay Word Count
PFI3
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thesis in
ts
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page number
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ts
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cs5 frag5 fused5 ss5 sv5
wce
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PFI3
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Rough Draft
ORIGINALITY REPORT
4 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
4%
INTERNET SOURCES
0%
PUBLICATIONS
3%
STUDENT PAPERS
PRIMARY SOURCES
1
[Link]
Internet Source 3%
2
[Link]
Internet Source 1%
Exclude quotes Off Exclude matches Off
Exclude bibliography Off
Rough Draft
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS
/100 Instructor
PAGE 1
QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.
Comment 1
You MUST eliminate the plagiarism in your paper.
Comment 2
no quotations--You must have at least one quotation in your paper to demonstrate that you know
how to introduce a quote properly and to quote properly. Check the Quotations and Paraphrases
handout in the Research folder, which is in the Information & Books area of Blackboard.
QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.
QM file name
Please use the assigned naming format when you save your file.
QM Length b
This paper does not meet the minimum length requirement of the assignment.
QM Review Essay Word Count
Your word count:
Minimum required: 850
Maximum: 1200
Additional Comment
699
QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment
This assignment is an academic essay. You MUST write in third person. Eliminate all forms of “I,”
“we,” and “you” from your essay.
Comment 3
Use the due date.
QM 3
Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.
Comment 4
You must follow the instructions on the yellow cards.
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
Additional Comment
Make sure that you provide a parenthetical citation for every quotation, paraphrase, and summary in
your essay. If you fail to do so, you are plagiarizing.
QM thesis in
inadequate thesis
Additional Comment
You must follow the instructions on the yellow cards.
QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment
You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 1.
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
Comment 5
You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 1.
PAGE 2
QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.
QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment
You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 2.
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment
You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 3.
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
Comment 6
You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 3.
PAGE 3
QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.
Comment 7
You must follow the instructions on the green cards.
Comment 8
I have not marked grammar and sentence structure errors. Make sure to eliminate the errors listed
below: (Look for other errors as well; all errors count against you in the final draft.
QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard
QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard
QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)
QM fused5
fused sentence, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard
QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard
PAGE 4
QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.
QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.
QM wcp
Your works cited page is not in the correct format.
QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment
From the assignment page: “You must use two or three of the following sources for your paper [see
list on assignment paqge], and the sources must be documented through correctly formatted MLA
parenthetical citations and works cited entries.”
QM not cited in paper
You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.
QM not cited in paper
You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.