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Prevent Athlete's Foot with Footwear Tips

Here is a revised version of the essay with some suggested vocabulary: Combat sports such as boxing and martial arts have always been a popular pastime. While some argue that these sports inspire violence, others believe they promote self-restraint and discipline. This essay will discuss how, although combat sports can be associated with aggression, they ultimately reduce violent behavior through teaching greater self-control. To some extent, combat sports may attract individuals with tendencies towards aggression. However, the sports provide an opportunity to grapple with issues of violence in a constructive manner. For example, boxing coaches often teach boxers that maintaining a cool head is more beneficial than acting angrily. Thus, even people inclined towards aggression can learn self-discipline and lessen their

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Prevent Athlete's Foot with Footwear Tips

Here is a revised version of the essay with some suggested vocabulary: Combat sports such as boxing and martial arts have always been a popular pastime. While some argue that these sports inspire violence, others believe they promote self-restraint and discipline. This essay will discuss how, although combat sports can be associated with aggression, they ultimately reduce violent behavior through teaching greater self-control. To some extent, combat sports may attract individuals with tendencies towards aggression. However, the sports provide an opportunity to grapple with issues of violence in a constructive manner. For example, boxing coaches often teach boxers that maintaining a cool head is more beneficial than acting angrily. Thus, even people inclined towards aggression can learn self-discipline and lessen their

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Keep your feet dry.

Fungus/ thrives in warm moist areas.


Wear flip flops.

SYMNONYMS:
Keep your legs dry.
Bacteria lives in enough hot and humid region.
Wear sandal.

We should wear sandal to keep the feet dry and avoid to contact the warm moist areas where Fungus
thrives.
We should keep the feet dry by wearing flip flop and avoid to move around warm moist areas where
fungus thrives.

Answer:
Fungus, which thrives in warm, moist areas, can be avoided by wearing flip flop.
Sandal, which can keep your feet dry, is a good option to help avoid fungus that thrives in warm, moist
areas.

Passage:
athlete's foot
precautions

wear shower shoes or flip flops,


fungus on the floor

keep feet dry


fungus thrives in warm, sweat areas.

Wash feet and dry them after washing

wear socks, dry quickly and wick moisture from the skin.

Alternate what shoes you wear each day


Don't share towels, lines and shoes

scrap:

Doctors recommend the next precautions to protect your feet not to catch athlete's feet that is
infected by fungus such as always wear shoes - protecting supporters, make distance from sweat
areas, change shoes each day and don't use towels of person who catched athlete's foot.

Footwear = shoes protecting supporters


SELF-CORRECTION

This significantly effect to their grammar and spelling ability.


This significantly affects their grammar and spelling ability.

1. Subject – verb agreement


2. Single/plural nouns
3. Articles
4. Verb tenses
5. Prepositions
6. Incomplete sentence
7. Wrong word/tone/vocabulary
8. Word form
9. Collocations
10. Missing words
11. Too many words
12. Word order
13. Punctuation
14. Spelling

PROMPT:

Combat sports such as boxing are popular. People believe that they encourage the violence while
others believe they promote self-restraint and discipline. Choose which side you agree with and
discuss why you choose that position. Support your point of view with details by your experience,
observation or reading.

USEFUL VOCABULARY:
Think of another way to say:
such as → like, for examples
encourage → promt/support
self-restrain → self-control, self-discipline

Think of vocabulary related to topic:


grapple with
to be associated with
to show restraint
to thwart

maintaining a cool head


substaintailly
adherents
paradoxically
ESSAY VOCABULARY:
to some extend
thus
a significant difference between x and y
rather than

Compat sports have always been a popular hobby. While some people believe that combat
sports inspire violence, other believe that they reduce violence through greater self-discipline and
restraint. This essay will dicscuss how combat sports can be associated with violence, but how overall
they decrease violent behavior.

To some extend people with a tendency to violence may be attracted to combat sports.
However, the sports can provide opportunity to grapple with issues of agression. For example, boxing
coaches often teach their boxers that being angry is a waste of energy and the focus should be on
maintaining a cool head. Thus even people who may have an inclination to violence are able to learn
self-discipline and reduce agressive tendencies.

Combat sports teach people to protect themselves from violent people, but not to be violent
themselves. For examples, judo like many combat sports has an emphasis on self-defence. Its
adherents practise skills relating to defence rather then attack. There is a significant difference
between committing an act of violence and protecting oneself from someone who is being violent and
thus combat sport paradoxically thwart violence rather than promote it.

This essay discussed the ways in which combat sports decrease the violence by focusing on self-
defence and self-discipline. In my opinion, combat sports do not encourage violence, but decrease
substaintially decrease it.

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