SOP (278 words --> need to reduce to 250)
Very rightly said by Christopher Columbus “you can never cross the ocean until you have the courage
to lose sight of the shore”. The above quote gives me the motivation to reach my full potential,
boosting my career and holding high positions in management. Commented [m1]: Clichéd...give an original idea...say this is
who I am...stop using quotes of others
After graduating as a [Link] in 2017, I have been working with Oracle India as a software engineer Commented [m2]: Very awkward. Simply state. I am a
with Product Quality & Service team where the only thing that separated me from others was my graduage engineer working as this.
diligence and conceptual application. My work involved developing scripts to automate various Commented [m3]: Negative way of saying something. Phrase in
positive sense.
testing and release operations. I am solely responsible for managing the automation projects within And how do u know this? Don’t compare yourself with others.
my team and have been promoted to Engineer II considering my performance. Interacting with the Seems snooty thing to do
senior management and knowing the kind of efforts involved in strategizing the complete end to end
product release and sale activities, I found myself inclined more towards the business and marketing
side of the product as compared to the development side. To get a better insight into marketing and Commented [m4]: Nothing unique. Every engineer has same
management activities I want to pursue a full-time MBA from top B-Schools like FMS. Studying with realisation
FMS will not only acquaint me with different sectors of the business world and also expose me to Commented [m5]: Incorrect grammar
real-world problems through case studies, project works, and interactions with top-notch industries.
FMS's association with the top B-Schools of the world like INSEAD, ESADE and others will give me the
opportunity to compete at the global level. Guidance from highly intellectual and experienced
faculty of FMS, interaction with peers from divergent educational and professional backgrounds and
the FMS culture would indeed provide me a great learning experience and strengthen me for higher
positions of responsibility. Commented [m6]: All about FMS can be condensed here.
Give your unique reason for MBA
Provide some insight into your special quality in a positive way and
Career Objective co-relate with one pertinent example of how are right for MBA
education. Something u have done that stands for such education.
Working with the Product Release & Quality Service team I came across various aspects related to
product development and release. My next career objective is to delve into the marketing and sales Commented [m7]: Next not needed
of the product to get an end to end understanding of the product cycle. I, therefore, wish to deepen
my understanding of the same by pursuing MBA in Marketing and Sales. A few years down the line I
see my self as a Brand Manager or Product Manager and my long-term goal is to become head of
marketing with some reputed and global organization. Commented [m8]: Clichéd
Nothing unique
Why FMS
An institute like FMS which has a rich alumni base, students from diverse backgrounds so as to
encourage a mix of different cultures, world-class infrastructure, experienced faculty, its prime
location and best return on investment, makes it a dream business school. Participating in activities Commented [m9]: Shorten this a little.
of societies like MarkSoc would not only give me industrial exposure but, also help share views with Use the fact about MarkSoc first.
Talk about some Academic feature of FMS (research from seniors)
ingenious peers and foster my personal growth. I am sure that pursuing an MBA from FMS would Present it in this order:
not only fetch me an indisputable advantage but also let me relish its experience for life. One opening line
One academic feature that inspires you
One Marksoc example (it is a very small thing actually)
Then talk about Past pedigree and rich alumni network
Then wrap up with positive description