parallelaisma
Phrases or clauses must be parallela in form when they are in a
series or when they are joined by a conjunction. i.e. If there is one
verb with –ing or with a who-clause, then all of the verbs must have
–ing or must be in the form of a [Link] there is a
comparison, use the comparison words as a hint for parallela
construction. Incorrect: The police came to arrest Jones, a devout
church-goer who also belongs to the fraternal order of the eagles.
Correct: The police came to arrest Jones, a devout church-goer and
a member of the fraternal order of the [Link] sentence
matches an appositive “a devout church-goer” with a “who”-clause.
Also maintain parallelaism with correlative conjunctions such as:
either/ or, neither/ nor and not only/ but also.
1.
Inaseriesoftwoormoreelements,whatyoudoon#2determineswhatyoud
oon3+.In other words, everything after #2 must match #2:
• I like to swim, to run, and to dance.
• I like to swim, run, and dance. are okay.
• I like to swim, run, and to dance.
• I like to swim, to run, and [Link] NOT okay.
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