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Argument Essay Revision Process

The document summarizes revisions made to an argumentative essay. The author tidied up the introductory paragraph by altering sentences and making them logical. They also fixed the wording, thesis, and transitions. Topic sentences were written to flow between body paragraphs. A separate paragraph was added for the second supporting detail. Different viewpoints were included to show how both sides benefit from added criteria. A short counterargument and conclusion recapping the thesis were also added.

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Argument Essay Revision Process

The document summarizes revisions made to an argumentative essay. The author tidied up the introductory paragraph by altering sentences and making them logical. They also fixed the wording, thesis, and transitions. Topic sentences were written to flow between body paragraphs. A separate paragraph was added for the second supporting detail. Different viewpoints were included to show how both sides benefit from added criteria. A short counterargument and conclusion recapping the thesis were also added.

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Mustakim Choudhury

2nd Hour
5/19/19
Argument #4 Revisions

During the first part of my revision process of this essay. I first tidied up my introductory

paragraph by altering the sentences and making them logical. I fixed up the wording of my

sentences. I fixed my thesis and transition as well. I wrote the topic sentences of the body

paragraphs because they were a continuation from one paragraph to another. I wrote a separate

paragraph for my second supporting detail to support my argument. I also wrote about different

viewpoints for my details to show how both sides can benefit from my added criteria. Also, I

wrote a small counter argument as well. For the conclusion paragraph, I gave a short recap and

restated my thesis.

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