Week 2
July 4 to July 10
This week was quit different from the first one.
On Monday I went to the school to took take the exam that assesses my level Commented [SP1]: "To take”. Recuerda que ya habias
oflevels my English, I dodid it and in a couple of minutes they gave me the results, declarado el tiempo cuando dijiste “On Monday I went to
the school”. Cuando usas pasado con el verbo, el
but they told me I have to start on July 13, but I can not because I have booked a complemento se mantiene sin cambiar.
summer course called a history of museum in Britain, at The Courtauld Institue
Commented [SP2]: Remember you are talking of
which is located at the Somerset house, so they told me if I start this past week I will something that already happened, so you must use past
not have a bad mark on assistance because I should start on july 13, and the agency tense.
didn’t told them I would have to start on july 20, anyways I started and I realized the Commented [SP3]: You repeat But again shortly after,
school is full of Colombian people, because it receives funds from the government make sure you don’t repeat that much, look for
and for that reason is the only school to gives us, the students, the opportunity to synonyms. In this case you can just erase but, you don’t
need it. With the “coma (,)” is enough.
work 10 hours per [Link] Monday afternoon I went to Camden Town, I love that
place, too many different styles and no body cares about the other, everyone was Commented [SP4]: Only add the S when using third
person.
doing their own thingk, I went to a coffee shop and the guy was really kind and gaive
Commented [SP5]: Too is only used when something is
me a card to havefor a free cappuccino, on Tuesday I went to school and I realized it
over the top, on exaggeration, you can use “so many”.
will tooktake me a lot of time to get from Kingsbury, where is located the place of
Marta Trujillo to Hammersmith where is located the school, so I started thinking Commented [SP6]: No need for this.
about moving to an other place. Commented [SP7]: “WHERE THE SCHOOL IS
Wednesday was a great day, I went to school. In the afternoon we went to Kew LOCATED”.
Gardens, it’s like a royal botanical garden, I enjoyed a lot, we went to a place called
The conservatory of the princess of wales, inside that structure you feel like in
Colombia, because of the plants and the humidity in the air but we had to leave early
because there was a tube strike, they are fighting because some lines are going to be
24 hours. On Thursday the tube wasn’t working, so the school givegave us the day
free, I went to oxford circus, but it takestook me 3 hours in bus, so I decided to sleep
in Catalina Blair house, we went out with cata’s friends for dinner in a delicious but
spicy Indian restaurant and I woke up early on Friday, we had breakfast at gregs and
then we went to our schools, after classes I went to have lunch in hammersmith and Commented [SP8]: You can also say “I had lunch at
Lula told if I wanted to pass by and say Hello, I went there and we had some beers, Hammersmith”
and dinner and then a cocktail and then another one and I finished dancing salsa Commented [SP9]: En este caso se usan idioms, por
with the people who lived in the house, I slept there and on Saturday morning I took ejemplo “I ended up dancing salsa”
the jubilee line, had an English breakfast, buybought some food in Aldi, which is a
really really cheap super market and after that I came home to do some work, I went
to primark and muji and then I was walking and my father givegave me the address
where he used to live here with my mom and I pass infront of the house, it feels
really nostalgic and amazing been there 37 years later. Commented [SP10]: Check here. No punctuation, make
sure you breath when you write. Don’t rush. Always re-
read after writing.