→ Environmental problems are becoming increasingly serious in many

countries. What are the main environmental problems, and what can

individuals and governments do to solve them?

BÀI TỰ VIẾT 01 – Chưa chỉnh sửa

Nowadays, with the rapid development of the society, urbanization, the environment is facing with
a wide range of issues - they are dangerous and contaminated our life. Therefore, protecting the
environment environment is crucial and it needs our action intermediately.
Recently, some problems such as air pollution, water pollution and deforestation are becoming more
popular in many countries. They not only make an impact on nature, but also have an effect on
people's well-being and the quality of our life. With air pollution - we can see the overuse of
chemical fertilizer by farmers not only can harm beneficial microorganisms [...], make the soil
infertile over time but also affect to the air condition of the environment strongly. Besides, water
pollution is a problem whichbe dumped many toxic oil into the sea. Furthermore, today,
deforestation is also urgent problem, people logged excessively without replanting trees lead to
severe deforestation which causes soil erosion in mountainous region.
There are several simple actions that each individual can take to reduce these [...] issues, at the that
time, in order to cope with these problem also need the cooperation of government. For example,
we should reduce our carbon footprint by eating more vegetable, living more green, in order to
solve the problem called air pollution, we should release our waste in the right bin, encourage our
family to use public transportation frequently,... With water pollution, every residents must have
awareness about protecting our water by not releasing toxic chemicals that can be contaminated
underground water supplies, the governments should impose stricter fines on ships that illegally
dump unhealthy oil, polluted water into the sea. Besides, with the deforestation, we should plan to
afforest, the schools can also organize environmental campaigns to encourages students to protect
nature such asplanting tree.
In conclusion, I believed that by making eco-friendly choices every day, we can help protect our
planet for the next generations, make our Earth more green and beautifully.
→ SAI NHIỀU BAND 4.5 – 5.0
 BÀI TỰ VIẾT 02 – Đã chỉnh sửa một số lỗi căn bản

Nowadays, with the rapid development of society and urbanization, the environment is facing a
wide range of issues. These issues are dangerous and can contaminate our lives. Therefore,
protecting the environment is crucial, and it requires immediate action.

Recently, some problems such as air pollution, water pollution and deforestation have become
increasingly serious in many countries. They not only have an impact on nature, but also affect
people's well-being and quality of life. Regarding air pollution, we can see that the overuse of
chemical fertilizers by farmers can harm beneficial microorganisms, make the soil infertile over
time, and strongly affect the air quality. Besides, water pollution is a problem caused by dumping
large amounts of toxic oil into the sea. Furthermore, deforestation is also an urgent problem. People
log trees excessively without replanting them, leading to severe deforestation and soil erosion in
mountainous regions.

There are several simple actions that each individual can take to reduce these issues. At the same
time, coping with these problems also requires cooperation from governments. For example, we
should reduce our carbon footprint by eating more vegetables and living more sustainably. In order
to solve the problem of air pollution, we should dispose of our waste in the appropriate bins and
encourage our families to use public transportation more frequently. Regarding water pollution,
every resident must be aware of the importance of protecting our water sources by not releasing
toxic chemicals that can contaminate underground water supplies. Governments should impose
stricter fines on ships that illegally dump oil and polluted water into the sea. Besides, regarding
deforestation, we should plan reforestation programmes. Schools can also organize environmental
campaigns to encourage students to protect nature, such as planting trees.

In conclusion, I believe that by making eco-friendly choices every day, we can help protect our
planet for future generations and make our Earth greener and more beautiful.

🔎 Những lỗi cơ bản bạn cần đặc biệt nhớ

1. ❌ the society → ✅ society

Khi nói chung về xã hội:
rapid development of society

Không phải lúc nào cũng dùng the.

2. ❌ environment environment
Đây là lỗi đánh máy, nhưng khi thi phải cực kỳ chú ý.
❌ protecting the environment environment
✅ protecting the environment

👉 Proofreading 5 phút cuối rất quan trọng.

3. ❌ are becoming more popular

Bạn đang dùng popular theo nghĩa “phổ biến”, nhưng với environmental problems, cách tự nhiên
hơn là:
✅ have become increasingly serious

Hãy nhớ cụm:

an increasingly serious problem

4. ❌ make an impact on nature

Không sai hoàn toàn về ngữ pháp, nhưng không tự nhiên trong ngữ cảnh này.
Bạn có thể dùng:
have an impact on the environment

hoặc:
damage the natural environment

5. ❌ affect to
Đây là lỗi bạn cần ghi vào Error Log.
❌ affect to the air
✅ affect the air

affect + object
Không có to.
So sánh:
Pollution affects people's health.
Pollution has an effect on people's health.
6. ❌ chemical fertilizer
Nếu nói chung về phân bón hóa học:
✅ chemical fertilizers

Vì đây là danh từ đếm được số nhiều khi nói chung.

7. ❌ an urgent problem
Bạn viết:
❌ deforestation is also urgent problem

Phải có article:
✅ deforestation is also an urgent problem

Đây là lỗi Article mà bạn cần luyện rất nhiều.

8. ❌ people logged ... lead

Bạn đang trộn cấu trúc.
❌ People logged excessively ... lead to...

Sửa đơn giản:

✅ People log trees excessively without replanting them, leading to soil erosion.

Hoặc:
✅ People log trees excessively without replanting them, which leads to soil erosion.

9. ❌ these problem
❌ these problem
✅ these problems

these → danh từ số nhiều.

10. ❌ every residents

Đây là lỗi rất quan trọng:
 ❌ every residents
✅ every resident

every + singular noun

Nhớ:
every student
every country
every resident

11. ❌ more vegetable

❌ eating more vegetable
✅ eating more vegetables

Khi nói chung về rau củ:

vegetables

12. ❌ living more green

green ở đây không dùng như vậy.
Bạn có thể viết đơn giản:
✅ living more sustainably

Đây là một collocation rất hữu ích cho IELTS:

live sustainably

13. ❌ release our waste in the right bin

Tự nhiên hơn:
✅ dispose of our waste in the appropriate bins

Học luôn cụm:

dispose of waste

Đừng chỉ học dispose = vứt bỏ.

14. ❌ to encourages
Sau to dùng động từ nguyên mẫu:
 ❌ to encourages
✅ to encourage

Ví dụ:
Schools can encourage students...

15. ❌ planting tree

❌ planting tree
✅ planting trees

Khi nói chung về việc trồng cây:

planting trees

16. ❌ more green and beautifully

Bạn đang trộn adjective và adverb.
❌ more green and beautifully
✅ greener and more beautiful

Vì:
green → adjective
beautiful → adjective
 BÀI THAM KHẢO 01 – Band 5.0

Nowadays, the environment is becoming more and more important because it provides people with
many necessary things such as clean air, water, food and natural resources. However, human
activities are causing many environmental problems in many parts of the world. This essay will
discuss some main problems and suggest several solutions.

There are several serious environmental problems today. The first one is air pollution, which is
mainly caused by factories, cars and other vehicles. It can make the air dirty and have a bad effect
on people's health. Another problem is water pollution. Many factories and people dump waste and
chemicals into rivers and seas, which makes water unsafe for humans and animals. In addition,
deforestation is also a serious problem because people cut down too many trees for agriculture and
construction. This can destroy wildlife habitats and cause soil erosion.

There are several things that individuals and governments can do to protect the environment. Firstly,
people should reduce, reuse and recycle waste instead of throwing everything away. They should
also use less single-use plastic and save water and electricity in their daily lives. Secondly, people
can use public transport or ride bicycles instead of using private cars. This can help reduce air
pollution. Governments also have an important role to play. They should introduce stricter laws to
control factories and punish companies that pollute the environment. Moreover, governments can
encourage people to plant more trees and protect forests.

In conclusion, air pollution, water pollution and deforestation are some major environmental
problems. Individuals can change their daily habits, while governments should introduce effective
laws and policies to protect the environment.
 BÀI THAM KHẢO 02 – Band 6.0

Nowadays, environmental problems are becoming increasingly serious in many countries. The
environment provides human beings with essential resources, including clean air, water, food and
materials for everyday life. However, rapid industrialisation and irresponsible human activities have
caused considerable damage to the natural environment. This essay will discuss the main
environmental problems and some possible solutions.

One of the most serious problems is air pollution. A large amount of pollution is produced by
factories and private vehicles, especially in densely populated cities. Poor air quality can cause
health problems and reduce people's quality of life. Water pollution is another major concern.
Industrial waste, plastic and chemicals are often discharged into rivers and seas, threatening aquatic
life and making water unsafe. Furthermore, deforestation has become a significant problem in many
areas. Forests are cut down for agriculture, construction and other purposes, resulting in the
destruction of wildlife habitats and increasing the risk of soil erosion.

Both individuals and governments can take action to address these problems. At an individual level,
people should follow the principles of reducing, reusing and recycling waste. They can also avoid
single-use plastics, save electricity and water, and use public transportation or bicycles more
frequently. These changes can reduce the amount of waste and carbon emissions produced by
individuals. At the government level, stricter environmental regulations should be introduced. For
example, companies that illegally discharge waste into rivers should receive heavy fines.
Governments should also invest in public transportation and encourage reforestation in areas where
forests have been destroyed.

In conclusion, pollution and deforestation are among the most serious environmental problems
facing modern society. Although individual actions are important, governments also need to
implement effective regulations and support environmentally friendly practices.
 BÀI THAM KHẢO 03 – Band 7.0

The natural environment is fundamental to human well-being, providing clean air and water as well
as food and other essential resources. Nevertheless, population growth, industrialisation and
unsustainable consumption have placed increasing pressure on ecosystems. Among the most
pressing concerns are air and water pollution and the destruction of forests, all of which require
action from both individuals and governments.

Air pollution is particularly severe in heavily industrialised and urbanised areas, where factories and
road traffic release large quantities of harmful emissions. Prolonged exposure to polluted air can
increase the risk of respiratory diseases and significantly reduce quality of life. Water pollution
presents a similarly serious threat. Industrial chemicals, untreated waste and plastic are frequently
discharged into rivers and oceans, damaging aquatic ecosystems and potentially contaminating
sources of drinking water. At the same time, large-scale deforestation for agriculture and
construction destroys natural habitats and accelerates soil erosion, while also reducing the capacity
of forests to absorb carbon dioxide.

Addressing these problems requires both behavioural changes and effective government
intervention. Individuals can reduce their environmental impact by limiting their use of single-use
plastics, recycling household waste and conserving water and electricity. Choosing public transport
or cycling instead of travelling by private car can also help reduce carbon emissions. However,
individual efforts alone are unlikely to be sufficient. Governments should therefore enforce strict
regulations on industrial waste and impose substantial penalties on businesses that violate
environmental standards. In addition, investment in reliable public transport and large-scale
reforestation programmes could make sustainable choices more accessible and help restore
damaged ecosystems.

In conclusion, pollution and deforestation are major threats to both human health and the natural
world. While individuals can make a meaningful contribution through responsible daily choices,
governments have a crucial role in regulating businesses and creating the infrastructure necessary
for long-term environmental protection.