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The document provides examples of informal communication and their professional revisions for various scenarios, including rescheduling a meeting, asking for feedback, confirming attendance, and requesting a reference. Each example illustrates the difference in tone and formality between casual and professional language. The revisions emphasize politeness and clarity in professional settings.

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Unprofessional

The document provides examples of informal communication and their professional revisions for various scenarios, including rescheduling a meeting, asking for feedback, confirming attendance, and requesting a reference. Each example illustrates the difference in tone and formality between casual and professional language. The revisions emphasize politeness and clarity in professional settings.

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Jose Cabrera
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Rescheduling a Meeting

●​ Informal: "hey sry i’m running late. can we push the meet to 2? lmk if thats cool."
●​ Professional Revision: I apologize, but I am running a few minutes behind schedule.
Would it be possible to move our meeting to 2:00 PM? Please let me know if this works
for you.

2. Asking for Feedback

●​ Informal: "did u check my draft yet? idk if it's any good so tell me what u think."
●​ Professional Revision: Have you had an opportunity to review my initial draft? I would
appreciate any feedback or suggestions you may have to improve the quality of the
work.

3. Confirming Attendance

●​ Informal: "im coming to the workshop on fri. thx for the invite!"
●​ Professional Revision: I am writing to confirm my attendance at the workshop this Friday.
Thank you very much for the invitation; I look forward to participating.

4. Requesting a Reference

●​ Informal: "can u be a reference for me? i need it for a job app by tues."
●​ Professional Revision: Would you be willing to serve as a professional reference for me?
I am currently applying for a new position and am required to submit my references by
Tuesday.

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