Writing task 1
1 type (150words)
-line charts
-pie charts
-bar charts
-table
-process: quy trình
-map
-comparison
2 Assessment-đánh giá
Correspondence :phản hồi đề
Conerence & Conesion : bài phản có tính logic
Granmmer
Lexical Resoure
1 Intro : modify the request
2 owerview (tổng quan) _feature 1
_feature 2
3 body1 (feature 1)
4 body2 (feature 2)
The qraph below shows the number of cellphone
subscriber in a particular city, By gender
1 line chart -mô tả sự thay đổi theo thời gian
-mô tả sự so sánh tương quan giữa đối tượng
tham gia
2 key words
-đối tượng đo lường:the mumber of cellphone subsribers
- từ đồng nghĩa : subscriber
+subscriber(v):to do st -the phone network
-carrier
+play for subcription to st (gói thuê bao)
+subcribers=people who subcribed to the carrier
+show=illustrate/elucidate
Địa điểm marysville
Thời gian 1995-2015
+From 1995 to 2015
+between 1995 to 2015
+during 1995 to 2015 period
After 20 year
Show=illustrate/elucidate/demonstrate
=provide data on st
The graph below shows the number og cell phone subcribers in
particular city , by gender
Intro: this line chart is demonstrate the number op people
paing for subcrition in marysville by gender durring the 1995 to
2015
Braingstorming
-phải có 2 bodies
Statesy 1 :có đường nào mô tả đường đấy
+body 1 nam tăng(95,05) /stay(2010)/tăng
+body 2 nữ tăng(95,05)/giảm(2010)/stay
Hạn chế : không so sánh được giữa nam và nữa
Statesy 2
+body 1:trước năm(2005) nữ>nam (1995)
+body2: sau năm(2005) nữ < nam (2015)
Hạn chế :không thấy được sự thay đổi của từng loại
1.gốc
-body1: nam 1995(500) tang lên (2500)2015
-nam [thấp hơn nữ(530)] sau đó bằng nữ (2500)
Nam stay(2005-2010) 2500 trước khi tang 2800 (2015)cao
hơn nữ (2300)
-body2 nữ 1995(530) tăng lên 2015(2300)
Nữ giảm xuống còn 2300(2010)duy trì ở mức đó đến hết 2015
2.gốc
Body1:trước 2005
1995 nam(500) < nữ(530) sau đó nam tang và số nữ tăng cho
đến khi số nam bằng số nữ(2500) năm 2005
Body2: sau năm 2005
Nam giữ nguyên 2500 trong 5 năm trc khi tăng lên 2800 năm
2015
Trong khi đó nữ giảm xuống còn 2300 Vào năm 2010 và ở
nguyên mức đó đến hết thời khì
2 Overview
In general/overall,it is worh noticing that feature1
In addition/furthermore/more over: hơn nữa/on the ontray/in
contrast
Gốc 1: in general,it is worth nuoticing that the number of male
an female subcriver tendad to grow/increase/rise/goup/ascend
during the 1995 to 2005 period
Afterthat/afterward/since then, the former/for ther rest of the
period
After that, the former was likely to go up while the latter was
bound to go down
Writing 1 – intro
- Overview: đặc trưng của đồ thị
in general,it is worth noticing that the number of male and
females subscriber tended to grow doring 1995 2005 period
afterward the former was likely to go up while the latter was
boung to go down
afterward, the former experienced an upward trend while the
leter under went a downward one
c1: S+V+ADV+DATA
the number of male subscriber grew strongly(by2000)from 500
in 1995 to 2500 in 2005
C2: (S+V)adj+noun+data
Strong growth of 200
From 500 to 2500
There was strong growth in the number of male subscriber
from 500 to 2500 between 1995 and 2005
-the 1995-2005 period witnessed a remarkable increase in the
number of men subscribing to the network form 500 to 2500
The number of male subcribers inder went a surge from 500 to
2500
The number of male who paid for subscriptions ascended five
fold from 500 in 1995 to 2500 in 2005
Số đếm-fold(adv)
Câu 2 mô tả nữ
Similarly, the figure for women went up from
about/approximately/roughly 560 in 1995 to 2500 in 2005
Body1: Advenced
To be more specific,in 1995
*there were more women than men who paid for subscription ,
particularly about 560 and 500 respectively
Correspondingly
In that order
**the number of female subscriber was bigger/higher than that
of male ones,in particular about 560 and 500 respectively
-This stuation remained until 2005 when
+*each of these group had 2500 subscriber
+**each of these figures rose to 2500 people
Body2: 2005_2015
Since then,the number of male subscribing stayad at this level
for 5 year before ascending fairly to roughly 2750 in 2015
Từ nối:
+Meanwhile/in the mean time( cùng lúc đó)
+On the contrary/in contrast(ngược lại)
The figure for female descended to around 2250 in 2010 and
stayed/unchanged till the end of the period
Body1 nam 1995_2015
-To be more specific , commencing at 500 subscribers
-the number of male paying for subcriptions rose to 2500 in
2005 . consequently it stayed at this level for 5 year before
ascending fairly to roughly 2750 in 2015
Regaring female subscriber , it number also went up between
1995 and 2005 from about 500 to 2500 after that , it descended
to around 2250 in 2010 after 5 year of stability, it ended up
being lower than the figure for males(2750)
10/6 writing task 1_smokers
Intro:the line graph illustrates the number of males and
females smoking cigarettes in Australia from 1960 to 2000
->the line graph demonstrates how many male and female
smokers in Australia between 1960 and 2000
[Link] 1
Feature 1: men>women
*in general,it is worth noticing that
->the number of male smoker was higher than that of female
ones all the time
**… there were more men than women who smoked cigarettes
all the time
Featrure2 (adj+n)
** besides,there was a show drop in the number of males
during this period
*beside,ther were fewer and fewer nam smoking during the
period
Overview2: nam,nữ tăng(trc1975)nam,nữ giảm(sau1975)
Before 1975,the number of male smoker was likely to go down
while that of female ones was boung to go up for the rest of the
period,these figures experienced a downward trend
Body1:
Tobe more specific , before 1975 the number of men who
smoked decreased from 6 milion to 5 million between 1960 and
1975
->to be more specific , commencing at 6milion in 1960,the
number of men who smoked fell gradually to 5 milion in 1975
-on the contrary ,the figure for women ascended from 1 milion
and reached its peak of about 3.5 million
Body2 nam,nữ giảm
-since then,there was a considerable decrease to 2million in
2000 in the number of female smokers similarly ,the figure for
men dropped remarkably to roughly 2.75 million before going
up to 3 million at the end of the period
-since then the number of male and female smokers , went
down considerably, particularly to 3 million and 2 million
respectively at the end of the period